Reviews For a moment in life
Reviewer: Butterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2011 01:06 pm Title: the way you make me feel
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Date: Apr 21, 2011 01:06 pm Title: the way you make me feel
Hey nice story! Just to give you feedback on your french(I couldn't resist!!):
how are you today: comment vas-tu aujourd'hui?
I'm fine/I'm great: je vais bien/ ça va super!
Keep it up!;)
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thanks !!!
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thanks !!!
Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous 
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Date: Apr 19, 2011 05:42 pm Title: the way you make me feel
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[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2011 05:42 pm Title: the way you make me feel
you are doing pretty good so far, good job!!1 10 stars all the way!!!
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thanks so much for you response
Reviewer: sarah and mj 4ever Anonymous 
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Date: Apr 09, 2011 02:51 pm Title: The girl is mine
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 02:51 pm Title: The girl is mine
This story is great !
Reviewer: sarah and mj 4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2011 02:46 pm Title: lady in my life
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 02:46 pm Title: lady in my life
I lover this story , It is really reat and i am adding it to my favorites right now !!!!
Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2011 06:38 pm Title: prologue
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2011 06:38 pm Title: prologue
Interesting. I am off to read the rest.
Reviewer: MJCOMETOGETHER142 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2011 10:59 pm Title: prologue
Date: Mar 15, 2011 10:59 pm Title: prologue
i am a new writer on here i hope you like my story and i hope you keep reading