[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2011 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 97 - We are broken like shattered glass...
Well what can say, life does go on, I'm still mad at Michael but clearly he is suffering all on his own and as much as I dislike Lisa(it's not hard either, can't stand her for real). She is really in love with Michael and it's unfair for him to be thinking about Arianna while fucking her.(of course my opinion will change if Lisa's past of interfering with Mike and Ari comes to light). As much as I hate to say this he needs to let Arianna go for now he has done way to much damage.
As for you Ari sorry love but you are not going to forget Michael. She handled herself so well a real class act (like Mrs. Adriana). I know if it was me I would of atleast thrown a vase at Michael behind. This Eric guy is interesting I don't have a real opinion on him yet. I'm probably the only one that went aww at Arianna watching Michael until he got into his car and left. She's still protecting him and she doesn't even know she's doing it.
My little Jimbo( I used to love Jimmy Neutron and his dad called him Jimbo lol) He is such a lil character. Things must be so awkward for him but he's a real good kid.
Sidenotes: I always figured Omar will be Jimmy in future chapters and I know your making this as real as possible hell it is real because I be at working thinking like "Hmm can't wait to go home and see what Arianna and Michael are up too"
Also Lisa always say oh she just wanted to be Michael's wife so she stopped the music thing I always get the impression that Michael didn't really want to do a track with her. I heard Scream was supposedly Mikes and Lisa song until Michael brought Janet and nixed Lisa.
Your making me fall in love with Adriana Lima, I didn't know she does all this and she really does seem like a sweetheart. I really like her and that's her husband? He is hott!
Sorry for the extra long review...I love this story.
Author's Response:
MJ and Ari have a lot to deal with. Mj is confused and Ari is suffering but slowly she is letting her heart heal.
Jimbo...aww I love it. I forgot that Jimmy Neutron's father called him Jimbo, that's so cute! and yes, he is a little character. And honestly, when I first started writing Jimmy I never thought of Omer Bhatti until these last few chapters when it just started making sense that Omer should be Jimmy, it works and there are hundreds of pics of them together.
I didn't know that. Really? I'm glad LMP didn't do scream because that would just be a different song. Janet and Michael are epic in that song and video.
Aww, I know isn't she adorable? I love her. She is a sweetheart. She tweets all the time when she is having family time with her husband and daughter and yes that's her husband, he's a basketball player.
No worries, love your extra review :)....and thx hun :) xoxo
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2011 11:33 am Title: Chapter 97 - We are broken like shattered glass...
Hey girl :) that was one long chapter! Loved it!!! And I’m so happy that the story is not even close to an end!!! But I understand that you get busy with work, so I can’t demand a new chapter every day lol
It was interesting to find out those things from Michael’s and Arianna’s (oops Adriana) real life. I hope I didn’t offend you in my previous review. Maybe I didn’t phrase my thoughts the right way. I totally understand that this story has both, fiction and real life details. And I love it soooo much, I love it the way it is, and wouldn’t want it to be written any other way!!!! It’s just I became obsessed with the thought of Arianna getting pregnant, as that is one of the reason why Michael married Lisa. Right? …..Also, I don’t know if you will go with the whole Debbie marriage thing or not, but if you will, I probably come back to read in February when he’s going to be through with those marriages lol…..just kidding :D ….. Again, I really hope Arianna will become a mother one day, it doesn’t even matter if the child will be Michael’s or some other man. But do what you got to do, it will be great anyway :) You know that I love stories that make my brains spin lol, it’s like you know what’s going to happen, but something happens the last minute that changes the whole direction :)
This was the first love scene that made me cringe just imagining it LOL Poor Michael, his soul and thoughts belong to Arianna, but body to another woman. The meaningless sex, that what that was!!! … I almost cried when Michael and Arianna talked. Just wonder if Michael realizes that he broke his promise to Rene not to break her daughter’s heart, and protect her? Looks like he’s still very stubborn!!! Great chapter girl! Always waiting for more :) <3 ya!
Author's Response:
I don't mind your demands LOL, I love them, so cute!
And OMG!! Honey, no I didn't take what you said in any negative way. Not at all. I made that comment not towards you, actually is something I've bee wanted to say for a while and you reminded me of it. I wanted to explain to everyone my idea and where I was heading with this story (Of course, without giving too much away)
And Ahh Debbie? Will I bring her in? You just have to wait and see ;) and LOL nooooo don't leave me...ok fine NO DEBBIE LMAO j/k....let's see how it goes. Well, I know what's going to happen so you'll see how it goes LOL
This was the first love scene that made me cringe just imagining it LOL I don't even like thinking about him sleeping with her. LMP is one lucky b***ch
Date: Dec 16, 2011 06:19 am Title: Chapter 97 - We are broken like shattered glass...
GOOD CHAPTER, BUT I'M STILL SAD... THEY ARE SO GOOD TOGETHER AND NOW THIS.. IT IS SO F. UP.. I REALLY HATE READING AND KNOWING THAT THEY AREN'T TOGETHER.. HOPEFULLY IT WILL ONLY BE A COUPLE OF CHAPTERS.. AND THEN MJ WILL FIND OUT ABOUT LISA, AND ARIANNA WILL KNOW THE TRUTH, EVERYTHING THAT MICHAEL DID TO PROTECT HER, BTW ARE YOU GONNA PUT THAT LISA IS USING BIRTH CONTROL BEHIND HIS BACK?? AND SHE WILL START DATING ERIC, AND MJ FINDS OUT ABOUT THIS.. PAYBACK IS A BITCH..
WELL GIRL, TRY NOT TO KEEP THEM APART FOR TOO LONG.
Author's Response:
Ahh...LMP's birth control...what a bitch to do that to Michael, will I use that in the story?. The answer is in the new chapter, up now. And Eric....what can I say? I'll say one word Karma...
Ari and MJ are not going nowhere, don't worry :) and I'll try
Date: Dec 16, 2011 01:23 am Title: Chapter 97 - We are broken like shattered glass...
this is an awsome story.
Author's Response:
thank you again. You are so sweet :)
Date: Dec 15, 2011 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 97 - We are broken like shattered glass...
i luv this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2011 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
It’s me again :D
Something just came to my mind. A few chapters back from now, Arianna asked Michael if he saw Lisa Marie to be attractive woman. For which he answered “..she’s not my type”. So I wonder, what Arianna’s POV will be? Will she think that he lied to her back then, and that he was unfaithful since long time ago?
p.s. You see what you did to your readers? I just can’t stop thinking about this story lol
You better give us two chapters at a time lol, the second one like a bonus for the waiting time lmao …. But take your time dear, we’ll wait :) <33
Author's Response:
Hey don't I know you from somewhere? HAHA j/k
hmmm...another good question and it seems that you and Arianna might be thinking alike...she asks him that in the next chapter but where would it go? Let's see
LOL I love that you are into this story. It keeps me going, it keeps me writing.
Thx hun as always for your support :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2011 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
DAMMIT! MICHAEL, YOU BEAUTIFUL, WONDERFUL, AMAZING, IDIOT!!!! How the fuck does letting Arianna go and getting involved no, MARRIED, to Lisa make ANY FUCKING SENSE! I'd like to know what exactly is going through HIS head. -_- Don't listen to your wise mother and go through with this rash act of clear stupidity. Man, I love him, but I am SO pissed with him at this point. What a shock to come back to after missing 3 chapters. Just wow. Push the woman you TRULY love away to marry some, pretty much, rebound catch. Goodness, what has gotten into this man! Anyways, loved how she ran into Jon again and finally got to work with him, I'm happy about that. I hope things work themselves out and return to what they are supposed to be like. He's way too afraid, he really is. And it's ALL the Chandlers' fault!!!! I had PRAYED you'd just skim over this portion of his life and put Arianna in Lisa's place. UGH! This story seems to only get better and better and I'm extremely curious to see what will happen with this couple. I sincerely hope they work things out and get together and then STAY together, you know what they say, the third time's the charm. ;) Gosh Michael, you are so infuriating sometimes, too damn stubborn! Fucking Chandlers, they really ruined everything now. -_- I had this crazy thought of Arianna having an affair with Jon. Lol, that'd be hilarious! I'm not saying do it but I had to share that with you. Lol Something good needs to happen or maybe someone just needs to clunk Michael on the head really hard with something, his common sense seems to be missing here and maybe that clunk will bring it back. Katherine's right, he needs to FORGET Lisa and marry Arianna. They need to be together, they really do. I do not understand you Michael!!! Some of these decisions you're making are too much to handle. Anyways, can't wait for the next update and I'm sorry I fell so far behind, I got too busy. :/ Great work girl, keep it up! You know I love yea! :D xoxo
Author's Response:
DAMMIT! MICHAEL, YOU BEAUTIFUL, WONDERFUL, AMAZING, IDIOT!!!! <---What a nice lovely compliment / insult LOL love it! and yes, Michael messed up bad. And he is going to have to fight hard if he ever wanted Arianna back. But that's what happens when you don't listen to your heart and your mama and listen to lawyers and everyone else. You can't protect or control everything, sometimes you just have to let it be and let others make their own decision and that's what Michael is going to learn the hard way.
As much as I wanted to put Arianna in LMP's place, I hate to say this but LMP is a good ingredient in this story so that's why she is here but Arianna is not going anywhere. And you are right and as they say third time is charm :D so who knows, right? ;)
LOL you are not the only one who have thought about Ari and Jon having an affair but that girl's brain shuts down when he is in front of her, how would that work? LOL
Michael explains his decisions and choices in the next xhapter, enjoy, is a long one, longest one I have ever written, over 9000 words, let's hope it was worth it and that you guys like it.
I love ya more xoxo
Date: Dec 12, 2011 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
More~~~~~
Author's Response:
Ask and you shall receive....next chapter is up now :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2011 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
Hey, and this is me again :) …. Looks like me and joy2thaworld are the most impatient ones haha...
I just stopped here in hopes that maybe you updated, since you have been writing a lot lately lol
I am still mad at Michael as hell, and this story was not leaving my mind the whole day!
P.S. BTW, CONGRATULATIONS on 500’s Reviews girl :) YEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn’t resist a temptation to be a 500 hundred reviewer LOL But you deserved them girl!!! You are very talented writer!!! AMAZING!!!!! I just never want this story to end :)
I hope you give us the next chapter soon :) Love ya!!!
Author's Response:
LOL it's ok but I love that you two are so interested in the story, is very flattering :D
Thank you so much and YAY!!!! 500 reviews...I should throw a party. I feel very honored by the love of my readers. You are very sweet, hun and thank you for your sweet comments. You are amazing and your comments keep me going. I wanted to reply back right away when I saw it but I couldn't reply back from my phone but they definitely put a smile on my long stressful days.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2011 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
It's me again...lol
After reading the chapter again and desperately trying to understand Michael's irrational desicions lately I came to the conclusion that my baby Michael is just frustrated with his life. I bet he feels that he and Arianna suffered so much and he never wanted that for her.
So he looks at Lisa and see her as a fresh start, a last hope for having happiness again.
He will regret it though.
Lol at me analyzing :D
Author's Response:
LOL Hi again :D
Thank you for seeing Michael's way. Yes, that is one of the things he was thinking about. He explains his reasons in the following chapter up now. And you are right, he will regret it. You can't give your future to a woman when your heart belongs to another one.
LOL I love your analyzing :D
Date: Dec 11, 2011 12:04 am Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
And Miss! I'm so sorry I was typing so fast and I see I made numerous mistakes and typos.
This chapter is such a turning point for this story! Michael fucked up.
Author's Response:
I do that too. So no worries. I didn't even notice haha and yes, you are right, huge turning point :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2011 12:00 am Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
Excuse my language bt what in the actual fuck Michael? I need to know what is he really thinking because his logical is so off? He can be with Lisa but he can't be with Arianna because he loves her? And wait for this...he thinks he can actually love Lisa back. Ok? Michael No!
Michael says Lisa was he friend and he needed a friend Michael wtf was Arianna then to you supporting you, and never turning her back on you. On Christmas your love making out with her and in less than 5 months your married!
And Lisa what a slick bitch, slipping in just in the right time. I haven't forgotten about your past desperate attempt to get Michael and I'm sure one day it will come to light.
If I was Ari I won't be one that I'm not talking to him mess..I would leave Jimmy with the grandparents and give Michael a piece of my mind and let him know that this isn't right! Better yet it will be funny if Bradley showed up again and tell Michael off.
To bad Bon Jovi is married:p I had some plans for him in my head.
Yay a new baby is here, lol Arianna couldn't take it just like her dad that was cute.
Sooo mad at Michael! Ugh..Poor Arianna:(
Author's Response:
I know Michael messed up bad and he has to earn some huge points if he ever wants Arianna back. Arianna was his friend and he knows it but he couldn't risk calling her without the lawyers having a problemw ith it so he played it safe maybe too safe and messed up his only chance of true love and happiness.
Yes, Lisa is one smart cookie and knew how to play her cards. And Yes, the truth will always find you. That's why they say it's not good to lie. So she needs to pray that no one tells Michael about Sandra and Lisa's Plan.
They will talk again, but she is too hurt at the moment. By not running to him, she probably saved his life LOL....oohh Bradley, now there's a name that hasn't popped up in a while. Who knows? MAybe :)
IKR! I had plans for Bon Jovi but he didn't fit the story timeline...oh well, next time :D...and how could that work anyway? Everytime Ari sees him she gets tongue tied LOL
YAY!! New Baby, looks like Ari is not the only child any more. She has a huge family now. And LOL yeah she couldn't take all that blood. Cute moment Thx hun
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2011 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
It’s me again lol.
When Lisa asked him, if he could ever lover her back, Michael answered “I think I can”. So what’s the difference between having a family and marriage rather with Lisa then Arianna? If his logic is right, will Lisa be safe around him?
Author's Response:
LOL Hi again :)
hmmm...good question....he answers it in the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2011 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
I knew this was going to happen!!! Now we have to wait when everything will go downhill with that marriage! But WOW Michael!!! From all the people, being the honest one, and trustworthy, he betrays her so bad!!! … His marriage to Lisa is one thing. But why didn’t he tell Arianna anything? Why did he do that behind her back? Does he realize how bad had he hurt her?... Because, if I’m not mistaken, he promised her to wait for the better times, and give her the dream wedding! And how about that passionate kiss on Christmas??? This was worse than a cheating!!! If he had let her go, and said everything to her face, she wouldn’t be so hurt!
So, why this marriage? Is it because he wants his own kids, and Arianna can’t give it to him? Because I don’t buy his explanation of doing that for her happiness!
I’m a little confused with the things how they are going in this story :) This story line is your imagination, and your own creation. And we all know that Arianna didn’t exist like a singer and songwriter back then in a real life. Then, that interview with Oprah, and the kiss Arianna gave him on stage (which never happened). And now you stick to the real things that happened in Michael’s life……. This also makes me think that Michael will try to win Arianna back again. But since she can’t have kids he will be searching another ways of fulfilling his dream….. You drive me crazy with those two lol My brain will explode from over thinking of all the possible scenarios lol … Still great job girl, I actually had to reread this chapter again, because it was so intense, and when I read it the first time, I just wanted to find out how it ends as soon as possible lmao
In my opinion he really lost Arianna! But she should stub his heart too. I really don’t know if “not speaking to him” thing is a great idea. She should let him know what he did to her heart!!! Just anything to make him realize!!!..... Maybe she should pray for a miracle, and get pregnant with another man’s child?.... I just became obsessed with that whole Arianna pregnancy thing. It doesn’t even matter anymore if the baby could be Michael’s or somebody else’s, as long as she gets pregnant again. But then he would think he did good, and that he gave her a normal life!! Or maybe she can try to commit a suicide, and someone just saves her? Don’t get me wrong, I never supported suicidal people. But if that happened, his stubborn ass would understand what “good future” he gave her.
Girl, what did you do to me tonight? lol….You better sit down, take two days off of work and write couple of chapters lol…. I won’t be able to fall asleep!!! lol…..just kidding :) but please hurry up! Because it’s a torture, and I know that the next chapter will not be any better for those two!
p.s But honestly, if I were Arianna I would never take him back!.....You are doing great girl!!! I would have never guessed that he would do something like this behind her back! Love this story so much, even if it drives me crazy lol Can’t wait for more :) <3 ya! xoxo
looks like you made me talk too much tonight lol ;)
Author's Response:
First of all, hey girl!!
Now why dis he marry LMP? He explains in the next chapter, up now :)
LMAO, I love your overthinking, it means you are into it and you pay attention to details. There are so many things that could happen with these two. Like I said, this story is far from over and so many surprises is coming up.
Don't worry about the not speaking heart, remember they have a son so they are bound to see each other again and when they do, what will they say? How will she act? Trust me, Arianna has closed her heart On michael but did Michael close his heart on her? and would he realize his mistake and try to win her back? LOL I'm going to stop messing with your head but you will soon find out all the surprises that lie ahead.
The next chapter is very long, the longest I have ever written, over 9000 words and I'm already writing chapter 98. I don't know how I'm doing it because I've been so busy at work but I found a good balance for now :)
Date: Dec 10, 2011 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
WHAT.THE.HELL! AWWW MAN! lol
Author's Response:
LOL is messed up, huh?