[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2012 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 102 - Lay Your Love On Me...
I'm back!! Omg amazing beautiful chapter. I'm so happy omg and guess what I have something in common with Arianna as well (what did I make love to Michael Jackson?) Nah. Only in my dreams but I did just get engaged!!! Yay Me!!
But oh my soo much to say. How romantic is Michael? And I can just picture the happiness on Ari's face so cute. They make me happy.
I tear'd up on Michael's conversation with Jimmy. You know why. I don't wanna say it.
As soon as I read that Ranee told Arianna she was eating a lot I was like "omg she's pregnant!!"And I can't wait to see, I can't wait..
Author's Response:
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! I wish you the best in your engagement and your future with your hubby to be. I knew he was the right guy when he picked Adriana Lima over Miranda Kerr haha. I'm really happy for you hun.
It's ok, you don't need to say it. I know eactly which part made you tear up in Jimmy's and Michael's conversation. I hate even bringing it up myself.
Arianna pregnant? Well, it would be about time, right? :D
Date: Dec 31, 2011 02:44 am Title: Chapter 102 - Lay Your Love On Me...
oh my FUDGING GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dis ws indeed d sexiest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fudge man i cud run all d way t NEVERLAND RITE NOW!!
(wt m i sayin????)
anyways. (back to normal) U R SOOOO GOOD! :)
<3 U!
Author's Response:
LOL Did you make it to Neverland? LOL
Thanks hun :) <333 u more
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2011 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 102 - Lay Your Love On Me...
OH MY GOD! I CAN SEE WHY THIS IS YOUR FAVOURITE CHAPTER SO FAR!!!!!!!!!!! I loved that ENTIRE chapter!! Can Michael BE more sweeter!?!?!? The way he asked her! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! That was amazing! AND NOW POSSIBLY A BABY!?!?! A baby! A baby! A BABY!!! *Squeals in happiness* Oh I hope the doctor confirms it! I can't wait to read Michael's reaction! :D This was simply perfect! And as for your weaknesses when it comes to Michael....I couldn't agree more. He IS my weakness! Lol I hope you had a very Merry Christmas and a great New Years! I love this story so much, I am so glad everything is how it should be! I can't wait for the next chapter! I am SO on the edge of my seat right now!! The wait is killing me! Lol Keep up the amazing work! :D
P.S. That vid of Michael performing at the Brit Awards! Man that's insane, it really is! People are unbelievable, he's standing there, singing this really serious, really powerful song and some ignorant guy has to be stupid and try to ruin Michael's performance. Un-freaking-believable! I bet he truly was angry! But the end of that performance though, when he says those facts and you hear the pain in his voice. It's so heartbreaking. :(
Author's Response:
HAHA Thanks hun. I loved writing it. I kept picturing every scene and i wished it was real.
LOL Yes a baby...Michael's reaction...Oh my he is going to drive Arianna crazy LOL
Yes, Michael is weakness all on its own. He just needs to stand there and I melt.
I had a great Merry Xmas and a great New Year. I hope you did too. I'm ready for the new year, lots of changes in my life.
Thx hun and love ya, girl. You are definitely one of my fave reviewers. You are loyal and I have fun reading your reviews :)
P.S. I know isn't that guy insane? He was so jealous and Michael even said that. That guy is still talking crap about Michael. He is not worth it. But Michael did a great job.
Date: Dec 30, 2011 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 102 - Lay Your Love On Me...
I hope that they have a baby. Jimmy would love being a big brother and I have a feeling that he will take the role seriously.
Author's Response:
you know I have that feeling too. I think Jimmy is ready to be a big brother :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2011 10:26 am Title: Chapter 102 - Lay Your Love On Me...
This is the best chapter ever! Please don't leave us please more soon!
Author's Response:
awww thank you so much. I'm not going anywhere :)
Date: Dec 30, 2011 06:52 am Title: Chapter 102 - Lay Your Love On Me...
Wow!
Finally they are happy together again! I hope that Ariana is really pregnant, it would be complete happiness for them.
Michael recorded the video here in Rio de Janeiro in Morro de Santa Marta and the Pelourinho in Bahia, two beautiful Brazilian cities
I am Brazilian, I'm happy when Brazil is mentioned in these stories!
Thank You, Your story is very beautiful, I love.
Sandra
Author's Response:
I know! Finally!!
I hope so too. I am dying to meet their baby ;)
Oh so you are from Brazil, that's amazing. Then you must know that Adriana Lima (Arianna) is originally from Brazil as well. I actually visited Brazil when I was young with my grandma but honestly I don't remember it that much. I would love to go back.
Thank you so much for your review and compliment. xoxo
Andrea
Date: Dec 29, 2011 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 102 - Lay Your Love On Me...
Oh I hope they did! I can just picture their reactions! Glad they are back together!
Author's Response:
I'm glad they are back together too :) and I can't wait for the baby ;) Thx hun
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2011 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 102 - Lay Your Love On Me...
I loved it !!!!!!!!!! im so happy that they are back together!! It was so cute and romantic the way he proposed to her<3. They are so wonderful together!! And are w possibly getting a mini Mike or Arianna? =D lol CAnt wait for the next chapter love, excellent job!!!
Author's Response:
mini Mike or mini Arianna...LOL...so cute...possibly :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2011 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 102 - Lay Your Love On Me...
:) I lol'ed at "Michael is so clueless". he really is, lol, but its too cute. And ah, they make me so happy being together. and Jimmy is too cute. I love They Dont Care About Us especially the extended version. And ah, their engagement was so cute and perfect.
And omj, I remember Earth Song at the Brit awards I was like O_O. my mom was like "Lavierre who the fuck is that on MJ's stage?"...lol I was 12 or 13 so I definitely didnt know. And then Michael took off his black raggy looking clothes and Ma was like "He's stripping now...oh yes" and I was like "MA, its EARTH SONG" smh smh smh
Anyway, this chapter was fabulous! And ooooohhh I hope they DO have a baby in their future! Theyre getting married! A baby just makes it extra perfect. like its already perfect....
.....But Ari + Mike + Jimmy + Baby + Marriage = Awesome. As. Hell.
Haha, me and the siblings loved it as usual dear heart <3
Author's Response:
LOL Michael is clueless but in such a cute way. I love THEY DON'T CARE ABOUT US...I rock to it all the time LOL
Yes, wasn't that guy crazy? Apparently he thought MJ was portraying to be Jesus and he didn't like it but let's be honest he was jealous. There was somewhere I read where MJ said he was angry and felt that crazy guy was jealous of his career. And LOL at your mom's comment.
HAHA a baby....that would make it awesome as hell.
xoxo thanks Delavie and siblings. Love ya :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2011 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 101 - You Are Not Alone...
:) I looove, love, love this chapter!
1) Arianna, Renee, my mother, Janet and now Vincent has called me an idiot. People really needed to stop calling me that. It was really starting to get to me. <-------------that cracked me up.
2) Lisa is definitely out the picture. the nerve of her going to the show.
3) haha i cracked up at Ari's story about her, MJ, and Egypt.
4) They're back together! They love each other too much not to be
5) This whole chapter me and my siblings were singing You Are Not Alone. I gotta say it, we harmonize well XD
Love it, love it dear heart <3
Author's Response:
LMAO You are too funny. I was giggling out loud as I read your review.
1)LMAO that part made ma laugh too. You could feel the frustration in Michael as people kept calling him an idiot LOL
2) Yep, Lisa is gone!!
3) It seems everyone liked the Egypt story. I kept laughing as I wrote it. I'm glad I wasn't the only who thought it was funny.
4) Of course, they are meant to be
5) I wish I could have heard that LOL...I'm sure you all did harmonize well. I'll take your word for it.
Thx hun as always <333
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2011 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 100 - You think you are in my head...you've been seriously misled!
GUESS WHO'S BACK?! ME, DEAR HEART, ME!!! Me and my siblings, loved, loved, loved the update!
1) I love, love, love the Scream video. I wish Michael and Janet (Miss Jackson if ya nasty) did more work together, or at *least* performed the song live.
2) Arianna and Michael definitely belong together. Eric was so sweet telling Ari that she and Michael are meant for each other. And seriously, MJ? She was talking about you slow ass! XD
3) Im not gonna lie, I got worried when I saw Debbie's POV but I trust you dear heart.
4) YESSSS! THAT TRICK LISA MARIE IS OUT THE PICTURE! How she gon lie to MJ and have the nerve to cry when he leaves her?? Lol, smh smh.
5) Adriana Lima has a beaaaaauuttttiifffffulll accent. Lol, and omg I heard she was like 5'11 (I know she's tall because she's a model XD) but 5'11? That means she's a foot or more taller than me. I'm like 4'9 or so, I seem to shrink like every year and I've never been taller than 4'11 :(
Love it, love it dear heart! <3
Author's Response:
LMAO!! YAY!!!! I'm glad you are all back!!! Is Russia colder than NY? Because right now it feels really cold. I was freezing as I walked down the street today.
1) I love SCREAM and yes, I agree. I would have loved to see them perform this song together
2) Eric is a good guy and LMAO "Slow Ass", Michael is so clueless LOL
3) Debbie is no threat. Thank you for trusting me
4) Yes, LMP is HISTORY!!! Bye, Bye Senorita
5) I know right? There is one video for a holiday commercial where she is talking about new year's resolutions and she says she wants to get rid of her accent and I was like NOOOO, you sound adorable, don't do it!! LOL. She's MJ's height. Yes, she is very tall. I'm 4"11 and when I met her, I had to look up LOL...is ok, don't be sad. I love my height, I didn't before. Short people are the sexiest :) LOL that's what I tell myself
love ya xoxo thanks hun
Date: Dec 27, 2011 05:47 am Title: Chapter 101 - You Are Not Alone...
finally!!
Author's Response:
haha yes finally!!
Happy new year!
Date: Dec 25, 2011 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7 - This is it....
where is that quote from???
Author's Response:
Michael says that in the tape recordings with Rabbi Schmuley. In the book, there is one long chapter where he talks about his ideal girl and how he suffered while he was married to Debbie and Lisa.
Date: Dec 25, 2011 11:24 am Title: Chapter 101 - You Are Not Alone...
Awesome job, girl! They r finally back together! :) Yes!!!
Author's Response:
hi hun...long time we don't chat. I hope you are well and I hope you had a great Christmas. And thank you hun, it means a lot coming from you. Just saw you have a new story so I will check it out. I'm glad you are back :)
Happy New Year!
Date: Dec 24, 2011 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 101 - You Are Not Alone...
Hey new reader! I read all the chapters of this wonderful story. I froze when Debbie offered to have their children ..... I was sad when he told Arianna that Debbie could have their children. Now I am happy that Michael say Ariana that love her, with children or without children. Finally together.
You're doing a great job. Congratulations you're a great writer.
Sandra
Author's Response:
Hi Sandra,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and for leaving the review. It means a lot to me and I'm glad you liked it.
HAHA I know Debbie is very straightforward huh? I guess she saw a chance and she took it, in the story and in real life....yes, Michael has his way with words and sometimes they don't come out right.
Michael and Arianna were meant to be and they have a long journey ahead of them...
Thank you so much, hun. I hope to see more of you. xoxo
I hope your holidays were good and Happy New Year!