[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2012 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 105 - I'm in the middle of a chain reaction...
Tell Michael! Tell Michael!
p.s. Michael in only a pair of pajama bottoms. Cooking
u r trying to kill us.
Author's Response:
I wonder what she will do however I have faith in her....
and yes, great view to imagine right? haha I wish I would have been there to see it LOL
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2012 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 105 - I'm in the middle of a chain reaction...
I just don't like that Diana sat on my husband's lap smh. I just don't like that Arianna is pregnant with my husband's child smh. I just don't like that she's going to marry my husband smh. Silly Michael, you can't get married to her, you're with me :p
Kidding...
...maybe.
XD
Anyway, for my real review lol, I can't wait to read what happens next! Aww at Ariana getting jealous. I don't blame her, I'm possessive too. And lol, her pregnancy is gonna drive her crazy, I can just tell. She'll love it though.
And hmm, I don't know what to think of Grace entering the story. I don't know how much I'd like that. She best not try anything with Arianna's (my) man...
And Ari definitely needs to tell MJ about LaToya....I feel like she shouldn't but at the same time she should, idk.
And omj, (really quick story) me and my siblings legit hated 'They Don't Care About Us'...as a little Jewish girl the word 'kike' was highly offensive and I couldnt understand why Michael would use such a word...but after re-listening and understanding the song, I didn't take offense.
Loooved the update, dear heart ♥
Author's Response:
HAHAHA....I think Michael married all of us.
I'm not really jealous or possesive but with Michael, I probably would have been worse than Arianna LOL and her pregnancy is going to take her to different places but she will love it indeed.
I don't know what Grace would do either ;)
Thanks for telling me that...honestly, when the song came out I was 10 years old and I didn't really understand the word or what he meant in the song so I didn;t pay mind to it to significance. I understood more as I got older and when I heard him explain that he was talking about him being the victim and people labeling him all kind of things I understood what he meant. Either way, the song rocks and I'm sure he didn't mean to hurt anyone. He was a bit innocent in certain things and didn't think ahead of the consequences of how others will see certain things but a lot times people liked to pick on him.
Thx hun :)
Date: Jan 13, 2012 06:44 am Title: Chapter 105 - I'm in the middle of a chain reaction...
Ariana should tell Michael about La Toya, do not go find her alone, Jack is dangerous and can hurt her and the baby.
Great update!
Author's Response:
Thanks Sandra. I have faith in Arianna :) she is smart and she knows what to do.
Date: Jan 12, 2012 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 105 - I'm in the middle of a chain reaction...
uh oh ari needs to tell mike
Author's Response:
I have faith in ari to do the right thing :)
Date: Jan 12, 2012 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 105 - I'm in the middle of a chain reaction...
Your story is definately one of my favorites. I get excited when i see it updated. :) Quick question, Can you please tell me how to insert a video. No matter what i do, i cant get it, and everybody on here 'seems' like they dont know. PUL-LEASE i really need to know.
xoxo
-Marialovesmj
Author's Response:
Thank you so much xoxo
Here's how you insert a video. Open youtube on a different tab, hit the SHARE button underneath the video. Next to a link, you will see something that says EMBED, click on it. Then, uncheck where it says Show suggested videos when the video finishes and check the the box next to use old embed code. You will see the link that you need to copy on the box above the selections change, copy that link and paste into your story tab, preview it before updating so the video appears and when it does, click update and you are done. I hope that helps. Have fun posting!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2012 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 105 - I'm in the middle of a chain reaction...
GOOD CHAPTER GIRL, I WOULD HAVE BEEN JUST AS JEALOUS AS ARIANNA, I PROBABLY WOULD HAVE PULLED HER HAIR AND SLAPPED HER, HAHAHA GOOD THING SHE CONTROLLED HERSELF!! AND PLEASE LATOYA, WITH HER TROUBLES, OH HELL NO!!! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS GIRL, I HOPE NOTHING HAPPENS TO HER!!
Author's Response:
oh yes, the first time I saw that on TV I was like OH No, hell no...get off my man while my mother screamed at me to stop screaming at the TV LOL....I have a faith in Arianna to do the right thing re: LaToya :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2012 07:07 am Title: Chapter 104 - Love will never do without you...
"Turkey sandwich with Swiss cheese, lettuce, mayo and tomatoes." Oh my God. I'm in love with them lol ^^
Author's Response:
LOL my fave part and it seems like it was everyone's fave part too. Love it and thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2012 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 104 - Love will never do without you...
:) Lol, I'm back. Now that I've recovered, me and my siblings read the chapter again haha. It was sooo cute. I love them together. Getting married AND having a baby. I loved this chapter. And *dies* the picture of them is too cute. Much L.O.V.E. dear heart <3
Author's Response:
YAy!!! You are back!!!! I'm glad you all enjoyed it. Thank you. And yes, I love that picture of them. I like to believe is real. I should do one of me and Mike ;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2012 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 104 - Love will never do without you...
“Michael?”
“Yes, baby?”
“You know what I want?”
“What do you want, baby?”
“I want...” she moaned.
“Yes? Tell me...”
“I want...”
“Whatever you want I'll give it to you”
“Mmmmm......I am craving a turkey sandwich with Swiss cheese, lettuce, mayo and tomatoes”
I picked up my head and looked down at her.
“You have got to be kidding me?”
^^ FAVORITE PART EVER ! ^^
Hahaha I Can imagine The Way Michael Sounded When He Said "You Have Got To Be Kidding Me" LOL This Chapter Had Me Laughing Specially The Part Where Michael Explained To Jimmy About The Baby ! Sooo Cuteee ^______^
Don't Think That I Was A Silent Reader in The Beginning, i Was Just Sooo into The Whole Story (I Didn't Want To Miss ANYTHING) LOL That i Decided To Start Doing Reviews When I Catch Up Til The Last Update LOL. But Like I've Said Before & I'm Going To Keep Saying it, This Story is Amazing !!! I'm satisfied With The Outcome Of This Story, Cause I Saw That You Were Not Planning On Making it This Long ! GREAT JOB.
-Much Love; A Loyal Reader, Tania
P.S: OMJ I Forgot To Tell You, i Love How This Story Can Have Me Crying, Laughing, Gasping LOL I Love it ! (: Keep it Up ! & The Picture Of Michael & Arianna Kissing is So Cute <333333
Author's Response:
LOL it seems everyone loved that part...it's my fave part too and yes LOL at Michael and his weird explanations on how babies are born, wonder where he got that idea? Hmm....
Actually this story IS going to be a long one. It's not done yet. :)
Thank you so much Tania for reading and for being so loyal. L.O.V.E.
I'm glad to hear the story makes you feel all of these emotions. That's what I intended. I want you guys to believe that Michael had such a strong and true love in his life. If only she was real.... and yes, I love that pic of them kissing. They are adorable.
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2012 10:19 am Title: Chapter 104 - Love will never do without you...
*falloff*
I loved Jimmy's POV. Michael with Santa and the elves had me rollin'. But I was dyin' when I got to
“Mmmmm......I am craving a turkey sandwich with Swiss cheese, lettuce, mayo and tomatoes”
XD I seriously just died like there are tears in my eyes. Poor MJ thought he was gettin' some. Hell, I thought he was too XD.
I couldn't even finish this chapter cause I laughed too much and I couldn't concentrate. I left an imaginary bookmark and Im just gonna have to come back and finish before tonight. I can't do it now. Seriously, there are tears streaming out of my eyes and my face is red. I'm gonna be in a giggly mood for the rest of the day XD
Haha, Much L.O.V.E. dear heart <3
Author's Response:
LOL you are too funny....and the sandwich part was my fave part haha...that Arianna is so silly, poor Mike.
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2012 08:33 am Title: Chapter 104 - Love will never do without you...
Loved it love the part telling Jimmy about the baby so cute. Bedroom scene was great please more soon!
Author's Response:
LOL yes Michael and his weird explanations about how babies are born...thanks hun
Date: Jan 10, 2012 06:11 am Title: Chapter 104 - Love will never do without you...
I love it, much peace, much love and lots of humor in the telling of how to make a baby....
Thank You!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it made you laugh. :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2012 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 104 - Love will never do without you...
That was funny when Michael attempted to explain how Ariana became pregnant. Also when Michael thought he was about to get it she asks for a damn sandwich XD...all that freakin is what got them pregnant it the first place. lol great chapter!!
Author's Response:
LOL I'm glad that made you laugh. Which reminds me you must be craving some things huh?
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2012 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 103 - The Lady In My Life....
okay where the hell was I when you updated??? Lol And yay she is offically pregnant!!! =D And i'm more than happy that Debbie wasn't an issue, Mike and Ari don't need anymore issues. Great chapter love !!
Author's Response:
LOL it seems you weren't paying attention...and yay!! yes she is finally pregnant and no, there is no reason for people to be worry about Debbie. She's a good girl...so far...thank you hun. Love ya!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2012 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 104 - Love will never do without you...
OMG! :D That girl really knows how to get to him, doesn't she?! Lol, I laughed so much when I read that part. I was like "WOW!" Haha, they are so bad. Ari giving Michael that little show, oooooo. Lol! But awwwwww, big brother Jimmy!! :D How cute. I lol'd at Michael's story on how the baby got there. Pfft, Santa Claus, elves, magic, really Michael!? LOL! That's the best he could come up with!? LOL! Oh man, that was so great. Thank goodness Ari was there to explain better. Haha! Man I am so excited for this baby! Hehe, Michael is already driving Arianna crazy! LOL! It's only gonna get worse, Ari!! Lol By the way, the chapter picture is my favourite picture as well! And yes, they are very cute together indeed! :D I can't wait for more, keep it up! :D
Author's Response:
LOL she knows how to get under his skin...and yes, leave it to Michael to come out with such a crazy story about how babies are born. haha I'm excited for the baby too. I can't wait to meet him/her. Thanks hun and agreed, I love the pic. I love them together. xoxo