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Reviewer: skipper Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2012 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 120 - Love you from the inside....

Love this story. You do an awesome job. Cant wait for next update

Author's Response:

thx so much. I try  :)

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2012 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 120 - Love you from the inside....

I knew the name Dalaney sounded familiar!! Lisa was crazy for coming back and asking Michael for another chance. Everyone knows that he's crazy for Ariana!



Author's Response:

LOL yes Delaney would sound familiar. He's a good kid. I love delavielove and her fam. :)and yes, LMP is very unprediactable and possesive and you are right he is crazy for Arianna. thx hun xoxo

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2012 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 120 - Love you from the inside....

omgggggggggggggggggggggg.. i'm so happy he pushed lisa away.. hopefully she will stay away for good.... leave them alone... beat it bitch!!!

good chapter girl.



Author's Response:

thanks hun. I knew you would be :)

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2012 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 120 - Love you from the inside....

♥♥ Michael and Arianna are the best!!

I mean it's like a legit love and everything from like all the years before.

Lol Michael *definitely* showed Lisa Marie's ass. I don't blame him; she's crazy and he couldn't hurt Ari that way. LMP always has him in a tough spot and he just *couldn't* get in another one.

XD And ahh, Delaney and Dylan had me rollin'!! That was soo funny. If Dylan ever met Adrianna Lima, he would be acting just like that! Omj! ♥♥

:) You don't understand how hard it was for me to keep the cameo secret! The Baby Sibs read this one and were absolutely surprised at the cameo! Ahh, it was great! Dylan is definitely considering this one of his many birthday presents lol!

:) Ahh, Much L.O.V.E. dear heart! Definitely waiting on the next chapter! ♥♥

 



Author's Response:

LMP is unpredicatble just like in real life.

AND LOL I'm glad you and the siblings enjoyed Delaney's and Dylan's small parts in this chapter. I had fun writing it :) I hope Dylan had a great bday :)

thx hun xoxo

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2012 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 119 - You know You Got me....

Lisa looking desperate as usual.

Damn Grace, you just had to feel Ari's head up with stuff.

I kind of see Arianna's point abou her makeing all the first moves.

Happy Birthday Gurl!!! Have dun, be safe and remember to have a drink for me!

Author's Response:

when did lisa not like desperate even in real she looked desperate...I wonder what Michael thought about that, he was probably like you put through hell while we were married and now you want me back!! smdh

Grace...is a working progress

Arianna does have a point but she needs to find the confidence to find the truth but then again Michael hasn't really helped, is not like they spoke whent he got back together but I'll say this, when they do is going to be explosive ;)

thx hun for the bday wishes...I think I had too many and one of them was for you :D

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2012 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 119 - You know You Got me....

:) HAPPY, HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR HEART! I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT! ♥♥

Delavierre's Rxn: Ugh, Lisa Marie? Whhhhyy??

Delaney's Rxn: O__O LMP? WTF?

Danya/Dylan's Rxn (lmao): Ahh Hell, WTF she wanna pop up in the picture for? She best no try somethin stupid with MJ!! *random clapping with each syllable* Am I gon have to jump in and cut a bitch just to put her in her corner? She best not get in Ari's way...

XD You can totally see who of the Jackson 4 are the crazies lmao.

Oh...but at least Grace expressed decent feelings to Ari, she's not too bad. And I looooveee the songs. I can't wait, wait, wait for the next chapter!

Much L.O.V.E. Birthday Girl ♥♥



Author's Response:

thank you !!!!!!!!! I had an interesting night, I'll say that haha

LMAO at Danya and Dylan's reaction. They are too much. I could see who are the quieter one and the loudest ones but I have to watch you and Delaney because they always says the quietest ones are the trouble makers ;)

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2012 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 119 - You know You Got me....

What does she want.? Ugh I thought we weren't going to see her agian!! I hope she doesn't start trouble!



Author's Response:

Lisa is unpredictable...she could pop up at anytime, remember how she followed him in real life but at least in this story Michael has Arianna :) thx hun

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2012 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 119 - You know You Got me....

girllllllll, omfgggggggg,, what the hell is that bitch doing there??



Author's Response:

all I could say is Lisa is unpredictable :)

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2012 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 119 - You know You Got me....

First off, may I ask to whom do you believe Michael wrote that intimate letter to? And, that picture of Michael looking down at the little girl from a distance is soooooooo cute.



Author's Response:

I'm not sure who he wrote it for. Supposely, it was for someone he was involved with in the early 90s before LMP. But she refuses to show her identity. and IKR!! I love that pic. When Michael was around children, you saw the glow in his eyes. :) thx hun

Reviewer: Marianshi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2012 07:37 am Title: Chapter 118 - Blood on the dance floor (Final Part)....

She needs to know the truth ASAP.

p.s. I LOVE THEM! ^^



Author's Response:

I agree and thx hun so do I. I love them as a couple. xoxo

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2012 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 118 - Blood on the dance floor (Final Part)....

This is like a movie!! People always listen to the things they don't want to hear but they leave before that person says the thing they want to hear.!! Arianna should know that Michael loves her for her and not for her name.



Author's Response:

Girl, don't tempt me. I make a movie about Michael and Arianna. Waiting for you, the movie LOL....Arianna has the best timing smh, a relationship is never easy, is harder when you are Michael Jackson and Arianna Jackson :D thx hun

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2012 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 118 - Blood on the dance floor (Final Part)....

:) I Love Blood on the dancefloor! Them red pants? ohh yesss the red pants! And the braid? Oh yesss the braid! and rubbin all up on susie? ohhh yesss rubbin all up on susie. And the maracas? oh yess the maracas!! And Michael? ohh helll yesss michael!

^ I just had a moment right there lmao

And oh my gossh!!! JOHNNY DEPP!!! XD *bout to have another moment*

And ohhh snappp! Ohhhhh mmyyyy gooossshhh! It just got really really real...again

First of all, at least Melinda's not a serious threat anymore.

Second of all, Arianna, drinking away your problems is a no-no XD

And aww damn, she aint even tellin Mike what's wrong and he's thinking she's just drunk and discombobulated.

No, she's drunk, discombobulated, and hurt.

Poor girl, she only heard so much of the conversation though so I cant exactly blame her for feeling lied to.

A part of me thinks its about to get a little heavier, as a writer I just know it is. XD But the reader part of me hopes it wont.

And aww, the pics are great!

Me and the baby sibs loving it as always (:

*patiently waits the next chapter since im caught up now* XD



Author's Response:

LOL BOTDF is a tease video for all women. I go thru those moments with Michael all the time :)

LOL Yes Johnny Depp

and ah Arianna...she has the best timing, doesn't she? haha

thx hun

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2012 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 118 - Blood on the dance floor (Final Part)....

Hottest couple ever! Michael in red leather pants rubbing up Ari's thigh, sexiest video ever.

Damn Malinda. Fine time to clear up things..

Poor Ari, they been together for almost ten years though she should know how Michael feels.

JOHNNY DEPP

Author's Response:

LOL I love that video and can you imagine Arianna actually in the video??? sexy!!!

Yes, is tough being Michael and Arianna.

JOHNNY DEPP <33

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2012 11:50 am Title: Chapter 117 - Blood on the dance floor (Part 2)....

Whoa. No makeup. That's very different for Michael, he never needed all that makeup to look good. He would've looked fine without it, I just wish he knew that. Arianna's all shy and worried about how she looks, that's a shame. She has nothing to be shy of around him but I guess after having a baby, things change, it's understandable. I loved all the flashbacks at the beginning. They were very interesting to read. :) So Melinda fooled around with Michael a bit huh? I had a feeling that was the kind of HIStory they had, I'm just glad they've never slept together. Ugh. She's so....needy and all about that. Goodness, get to know the man first! Ah well, Michael went with Arianna and never gave Melinda the chance, sucks for her. Hehe. I love the videos at the end, he sounds so good live, he really does. :) I love watching his performances so much and Adriana is so shy, it's adorable. :) She's amazing, she really is. :) Great work girl, keep it up, I love these updates so much! :D



Author's Response:

Yes, agreed. Michael never needed make up. He was so beautiful...Arianna being shy, I think all women go thru that, is natural but he got her to let go. :)

LOL...Melinda and Michael fooled around, yes that is their HIStory...and LOL about her being needy, I think alot of women got very needy with Michael because they all seem to be afraid to lose him and I think that made Michael run the other way LOL

Thx love xoxo

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2012 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 117 - Blood on the dance floor (Part 2)....

"VS Top Model Karen Moulder was huge in the 90s and also was kind of rude to Adriana in this video, I have to say but oh well, because Adriana is one of the biggest top paid model now and Karen is no where to be found" <-----------LMMFAO I'm crying right now. That's so true, it's like bitch please you aint even as pretty as Adriana! XD

And ohhhh, we finally know who Melinda is!! Damn...she seemed genuine at first and then kinda began acting obsessive....

And aww, I love Michael and Ari's moments together!

Much L.O.V.E. dear heart ♥



Author's Response:

LMFAO is so true though..I can't stand women who hate...and Adriana was so quiet and nice in the video LOL she's laughing now....

Yes, that's Melinda....

I love ari and michael too, they are adorable

much love back to you hun xoxo

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