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Date: Dec 09, 2016 12:02 am Title: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...

You won't show pix and I won't look it up!

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Date: Dec 08, 2016 02:42 am Title: Chapter 86 - Behind the mask....

Noooo!!!! Why did you bring them into the story?!?!?! Noo. Maybe I should skip the next few chapters?

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Date: Dec 07, 2016 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 80 - The Hurt, The Pain and The Truth....

I was so happy that they were getting back together and you were going to drag this out. But then you brought River back and I'm like >.

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Date: Dec 07, 2016 09:13 am Title: Chapter 76 - Now the tables have turned...Now I'm the villian!

OMG Micheal seriously why did you hesitate?!?!?

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Date: Nov 30, 2016 03:59 am Title: Chapter 176 - I can't live without you...

Well...
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Actually I'm speechless...

I've been reading Michael Jackson's for so long since the first time I know what fanfiction is, since the year we lost our precious Michael. Through fanfiction, I see it as a way, as a world that we still have him with us, laughing, crying, being sad and happy, living as if he had never gone. I've read so many good fanfictions about Michael on this page as well as other pages. So just let me say this in the most simple way: "Waiting For You" is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read.

And I just want to let you know that you are truly an amazing writer with great writing skills and awesome ideas. I laughed very hard when I read some jokes your characters threw at each other or some funny scenes (especially Michael and Toni, you know they are easy to bring laugh to readers through their clumsiness, corny jokes and personalities ;)). I was sad and angry when I have to see your characters had to be hurt and in pain. I even cried (just sometimes...I want you to know that I am not a crying baby...ok, I admit I cry a lot LOL, but it was YOU who brought so much drama :))). In short, I truly felt for your characters. Therefore, I think you know how amazing you are for capturing your readers emotion.

At first I didn't like Arianna because I think she was too easy to give up and always walked out when things were difficult. But then I realized that she was young, she was inexperienced. And now, I admire Arianna so much, she is such a strong woman. That shows your story is really realistic and each of your character grows up as time goes by. That's one of many things I look for whenever I read a story: the development of each character. And you show me what I want throughh "Waiting For You".

You keep amazing me through this great story of yours. I took notice at every simple detail and I were really impressed. Because "Waiting For You" not only includes drama, but it also has so many everyday life incidents which I think are not easy to write because they tend to be boring and plain that may make readers lost interest. However, I am honest to say that I enjoyed every minute of reading those simple stories.

I always have this thought in my mind which I wish it had came true: at least in Michael's hurful life, he had found a woman who truly loves him and does not give up on him easily likes Arianna (and me LOL I am also the perfect girl for Michael LOL). If that had happened, I believe there would have been a high chance that Michael is still with us today. But it all about "if" right? :'(. Anyway, this world was/is not ready for someone likes Michael and I doubt if it will ever be.

And one more thing I really like about this story is that you represent Michael as a normal man who makes a lot of mistakes, not some perfect angels so innocent. I think people should/must stop picturing him as a saint or a weirdo, they should stop calling him names and statrt to look at him as a human being.

I admire the Michael Jackson but I am in love with Michael, the man behind all the fame and madness, who had faults and flaw but also has a beautiful heart, who gave too much for this world and just wanted to recieve love back. Just so simple: a normal man who was very kind that can make any girls fall in love with (not to metion he is super handsome with sexy body and a voice "is like that ten thousand angels singing in harmony" LOL)

When I discovered "Waiting For You", I kept reading non stop till now so please don't mind me if I write such a long comment. I LOVE your story very much and I am so eager to read more. Thank you :).

Author's Response:

hello there

thank you so much for your comment/review. it is one of the nicest messages i've ever received.

i am so happy to hear that you have enjoyed this story so much, WAITING FOR YOU is really close to my heart, even those chapters I feel i could have done better.

i want to let you know that you are right about the every day life incidents, they are very hard to write...as a writer, my job is to entertain you and sometimes...well most of the time, every day stuff is just not that interesting...i am glad to hear that you have enjoyed them, it makes me feel like i've done my part.

all i try to do is to give you guys a story that you enjoy, even tho at times i know u might wanna scream, cry or come looking for me to slap me or kill me lol but it's more interesting that way. life is not perfect and neither was michael... i tried to make these characters as realistic as i could with a little zing without going too overboard. michael was human and i too belive if he had the right person in his life, he would probably still be here. i tried to picture him with this woman and i never thought his love affair would be roses and pedals but i knew it would be a great love story so i thought i would give it a chance and write it. never once did i think that anyone would enjoy the story or my writing, let alone be as popular as it became.

keep in mind that i started this story so long ago so i also grew up along with the characters and my way of thinking changed...that was hard to do while writing...trying to continue to stay in that level of each character but i think it made me more flexible and versatile with my writing.

anyway, i won't ramble on...everything you said here meant a lot to me. i know i have been lacking in posting the last chapter of this story but life and my work schedule is been a bit hectic. however i want you to know that i have been working hard to get the last chapter finished ( i am being a picky about the words tho i know at the end of the day i still won't be satisfied), my goal is to upload the last and final chapter before new year's so stay tuned and thanks again for your support and for being a loyal and wonderful reader.

xoxo

 

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Date: Nov 27, 2016 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 41 - We all fall down....like Toy Soldiers!

So painful to read 😢🙁😟

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Date: Nov 23, 2016 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 14 - One more chance.....

This chapter was intense