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Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2012 10:41 am Title: Chapter 130 - We are going to party like is 1999....

Great chapter girl and Michael's accident after he is healed I have a feeling Michael is going to be up the creek with Arianna please more soon hope you are good!



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Michael is unpredictable that who knows what he will do but Arianna could handle him, I think she's th eonly who can haha thx hun

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2012 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 130 - We are going to party like is 1999....

I love the new banner!! Of course Mike had to wear a different tux then anybody else!! He's so crazy. I just wish he wasn't so damn stubborn.!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I love the banner too. It looks so cute and it fits the approaching era :) and yes, we all know how stubborn Michael is smdh haha thx hun

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2012 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 129 - Ain't nothing but a gangsta party....

Loved it very hot and MJ the rapper was so sexy and the Velvet Rope was great can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

thx hun, michael could make a good rapper haha

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2012 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 126 - Case of the ex....

LMAO WOW that song Case of the Ex is a song I have ALWAYS realted to MJ and Lisa!! When i saw the name and then saw the song i was like OH SHIT!!! thats my jam!!



Author's Response:

LOL I love that song, that was my jam back in the day XD

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2012 12:14 am Title: Chapter 129 - Ain't nothing but a gangsta party....

OMG this chapter was Super funny i was LOL, i tried to look for a "Gangster" name for Michael and I got Teflon Mikey M Master LMFAO don't ask cuz idk xP

“Call me....” “Power MJ Pack or Jam Michael Sheets” had me thinking WTF hahaha “I'm not calling you that” Yea i Would't either lol I would burst out laughing too but my face part of all was "No, MC MJ, my man can't even figure out how to put it in”I swear if i was in Ari's place i would be cracking up during the whole thing. Kinda like she was. But MJ did enjoy role playing ;)

 

BTW you Should make a cameo appearance in this story, when you meet him in 2001...Maybe write it as what you wished happened or if you'd like just as it did..



Author's Response:

LMAO that is a crazy website and that name WTF, I don't even know how it comes up with those names XD

MJ enjoyed the role playing game too much while Arianna wanted to laugh except when he was quiet, then it was on and hot lol

when "JAM MICHAEL SHEETS" came on ont he website I was O_o does this website know I'm writing a sex scene LOL

OMG!! I didn't think about that, I have to think about how I would write myself in the story without stealing Michael away from Arianna LOL

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2012 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 129 - Ain't nothing but a gangsta party....

Damn! R rated indeed! Michael is always so sweet though, supporting his sister, aww. :) I too have had the pleasure of seeing Janet. I saw her for her Number Ones Up Close and Personal tour. Which was in 2011. :) She always puts on an amazing show! :D As for this.... daaaaamn. Roleplaying huh? Michael as a bad boy, I like it. He tortured her so bad there. Lol He's definitely no goodie-goodie. Hehe I love that Prince said his first word! :D Of COURSE Michael got jealous that it wasn't "dada" first. Lol. He cracks me up! XD I'm sure Paris will say "dada" first. She is a big daddy's girl...but then...so am I! LOL! I liked Arianna's comment “Paris, tell your father the truth. Tell him you only like him for his rapping” Haha, that killed me! Lol I love their relationship, it's amazing! :D Keep up the amazing work, I can't wait for more!! :D



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you got to see Janet Live because she truly is an amazing performer. I, sadly couldn't go and see her last year but I hope in the future I can. As for the Velvet Rope, she was in her prime then so I feel lucky to have seen her. She had so much energy. By the end of the show she had sweated like 20 pounds LOL...I've seen a few videos on youtube fromt eh up close ansd personal whic halways puts a smile on my face. I persoanlly loved that she included scream.

and yes haha MJ is no goodie two shoes, this chapter just makes me envy LMP who had him, smdh, and you now MJ was going to get jealous that Prince said mama first so Paris is going to become a mission for her to say dada lol he's silly like that and lol at Arianna's comment, she likes to tease Michael XD Thanks hun

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2012 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 129 - Ain't nothing but a gangsta party....

OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THIS WAS AWESOME GIRL.. GOD, THAT MAN.. I WANT MC MJ!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'll take Michael in the morning, MC MJ in the evenings XD Hell, I want both all day and all night lol

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2012 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 129 - Ain't nothing but a gangsta party....

;) HOOOOTTTTT!!

Omj I wanna be Arianna I wanna be Arianna I wanna be Arianna.

Heeeyyyyy that was such a gangsta ass hot ass party! *swoon/sigh*

“Power MJ Pack or Jam Michael Sheets” LMAO. Omj, that's a crazy website hehe.

I couldn't make out but it sounded like “Shit, you are my sex God”...Ok, she didn't say that but I could wish....it actually sounded like “Shit, you are going to make me cum” but still it was sexy as hell. <----- LMMFAO, Mj is soooo much extra lmao. He aint lyin though XD. Michael and Arianna went hard hehe. MJ would be the best rapper ever! He'd be up there with Heavy D, Tupac, Biggie, and LL Cool J!!! lmao

Lordy, Lordy, guess who's forty? XD Is sweet, he went to Jan's concert!! (:

Me and the Baby Sibs loved it, I mean LOVED it. My siblings don't play when it comes to the hot chapters lmao.

Hmm, we didn't have to wait long at all!

:D Haha, peace, love, glitter glove ♥♥



Author's Response:

I wanna be Arianna LOL

that is a crazy website. "Teflom Michael M" also came out which was funny

LMAO yeah MJ is silly, and oh yeah the best rapper ever he would be XD

I know right? he's swwet to support his sister on his bday. Adorable!

lol no you didn't have to wait long thanks hun xoxo

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2012 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 129 - Ain't nothing but a gangsta party....

That was hot!! I love the chemistry between these 2!! This is way they are my favorite couple on this site!! BTW in my last review I said I get my wisdom teeth removed in the same month I meant in a month or sorry if I confused you.



Author's Response:

they are great together and aww so sweet that they are your fave couple in this website, that means a lot. And haha I knew what you meant, no worries.

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2012 09:46 am Title: Chapter 128 - I got nothing but love for you, baby....

LOL! OMG! Michael was rapping!!! OMG! I died when trying to picture that!! LOL! I love how out of everything THAT was what calmed Paris down! Hehe. Ugh, I understand Vincent's feelings towards Michael but he needs to listen to Arianna and let it go. They love each other and that's what matters. I found the family day to be very interesting though. Michael wants to relax, that's understandable but Ari's right about how he is when it comes to family. I enjoyed Renee's question about baby number four. Lol Oh, that'll be soon Renee, give them a few more years! LOL! Nice work, I loved this chapter. :D I'm also glad Lisa's completely out of the picture now! ;) I can't wait for more! :D



Author's Response:

LMAO it seems everyone liked that part....I tried to picture it too and it's too much, I start laughing but it would be cute at the same time. I know right? Paris is a no joke baby but I read that in real life that's how she was. As soon as she was put down she would cry like crazy. Vincent has no choice to accept it even if he doesn't like it. Michael is not going anywhere. They are married and even if they divorce (they won't) he's stillt he baby daddy so he will always be around. I could undertand why Michael acted like that towards his family to an extent. He should have never pushed them as much as he did. LOL baby number four, give them a few years. Arianna can't take another baby LOL...Yes, LMP is out of the picture xoxo

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2012 08:48 am Title: Chapter 128 - I got nothing but love for you, baby....

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH GIRL, I LOVED IT. IT WAS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME.. THEY ARE SO GREAT TOGETHER!!!! GOD I HOPE THEY KEEP GOING STRONG.. AND NO ONE GETS BETWEEN THEM!!!



Author's Response:

haha I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2012 05:49 am Title: Chapter 128 - I got nothing but love for you, baby....

Loved it girl, Arianna's Dad and Michael were hysterical. Loved the rap song with Paris that was so cute. Can't wait for more thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Michael is something else haha thanks hun xoxo

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2012 03:41 am Title: Chapter 128 - I got nothing but love for you, baby....

I would have done anything to hear Michael rap!! Imaging him rapping is so funny to me!! I just hope Ari's father ad Michael can be on good terms agian. BTW I saw in a previous chapter that you had all of you wisdom teeth removed. How did it go.? I recently found out that in the same month I'm have to get mine removed aswell.



Author's Response:

you and me both. I'm sure he would have made a good rapper haha.

Are you getting all of them removed? It varies by person. I don't want to scare you because you truly won't feel a thing when they do it. Recuperating is a little tough but on the good side, you get to eat ice cream in bed. When my bf did it, he was swollen but no pain. I, on the other hand waited too long. I was 26 when I did it, they say when you wait longer is harder. Plus I had to go through some extra xrays becauuse my nerve ran underneath my bottom teeth and they needed to make sure they didn't touch it. Because it was a high risk surgery with my nerve being so close, they only did the top and bottom from my right side. I have to go back in one year to do the left side which sucks. I walked in, they put you to sleep. (some dentists give different kind of anesthetics depending how they have to go in to do surgery, I had to take propofol which was no joke but they might not give you that) in seconds you fall as leep and then you wake up and a little disoriented for the first day but after that, I had fun eating ice cream since I could only eat soft food. Is really ok, you will be fine. Let me know how it goes.

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2012 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 128 - I got nothing but love for you, baby....

:) ♥♥ LOVE the pictures and LOVE the video of course! Damn, I dont even know how young i was wayy back then!"Girl all I know is what's mine is mine, and what's his is mine"

Chris Tucker was a trip and a half! Still is!! "He talkin to yo girl, man" "That aint my girl" "That is yo girl" "No it aint" "THAT IS YO GIRL" "MAN I KNOW THAT AINT MINE"...."Put that 'way 'fore we get locked up again, man" "man I just got out" "Man I was whitchuuu" XD

You dont even hear music like that anymore *sigh*

XD Lmao, I get soo sidetracked smh.

XD My real review......

:) ♥♥ Awww, family day! This one was soo cute.

....I hope Vincent really does come around about Michael though. Oh Vincent, MJ's totally harmless and loves Arianna! And the babies, too!

And omj yes, no more LMP!!!

"Tito came running towards me in full speed that we both slammed into each other and fell on the floor" <---- Michael better make Tito slow down lmao. Slow down Tito...Slow down Tito, Daaaaaamn!!!!

But omj, Mike rappin to Paris was the CUTEST thing ever!! But when he said it aint nothin but a gangsta party i died lmao. Heeeeyyyyy he and Arianna bout to have a gangsta party ;)

:) ♥♥ OMJ! But I can't wait for the next one! Me and the Baby Sibs loved it!

We'll be Waiting for You! ♥♥



Author's Response:

your review had me dying. LMAO

yes, Chris Tucker is something else. He's hilarious!!!

Fathers...so overprotective. But Ari & MJ are married so he has no choice but to accept it.

finally no more LMP!! XD

"Michael better make Tito slow down lmao. Slow down Tito...Slow down Tito, Daaaaaamn!!!!" <-----LMAO I CANT!!!!!

I cracked up when I wrote the line ain't nothing but a gangta party because I kept picturing the dance Tupac does when he says that and then I pictured Michael doing it LOL

thanks hun xoxo and baby sibs

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2012 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 128 - I got nothing but love for you, baby....

Awww mike rapping was cute



Author's Response:

haha I thought so too

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