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Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 8 - One day in your life...

That darn Tatiana...always fuckin' shit up (excuse my French) lol. Anyway, it's good that she got to meet Liz, Diana & some of Mike's family. Seems like Liz approves of her even though she isn't aware of Mike & Ari's "hook up" yet. 



Author's Response:

Tatiana is always trouble. But she is not as strong as Arianna. Or as troublesome as.....I'm just going to let you keep reading, don't want to give it away XD

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 7 - This is it....

Aww they're a couple now. The best part is that they're so alike so its only right that they went ahead & hooked up. I wonder how this is going to work out with him being on tour & going back to Cali though...



Author's Response:

That was the point I wanted someone who would understand him, someone like him but yet so independent and different. Thx for reading, hun...means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 135 - Temptation is everywhere but only YOU have me until the break of dawn....

Lmao awww how sweet!!!! It's good to see Mike and Ari happy, not letting anything ruin what they have!!



Author's Response:

they have come a long way, haven't they? :) thx hun

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Blame it on the boogie...

Ohh goodness...Renee is already building walls & she hasn't even met Mike yet. I have a feeling that she's gonna be like how Priscilla was with Michael & Lisa Marie. I hope that's not the case though.



Author's Response:

As you continue reading you will fall in love with Renee, she's amazing :)

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5 - You give me butterflies...

I hope Arianna's mom doesn't get too upset with her...that is if Ari tells the truth. Mike wasn't playing any games. He was pressed on getting to see Ari again. Love it, hun!



Author's Response:

Mike don't play. When he wants something he goes for it.

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Meeting...

They're making motions :-) Arianna is a bold one lol I know Mike likes that.



Author's Response:

Arianna speaks her mind. She's amazing and yes, Michael does love that. You should see her now XD

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 135 - Temptation is everywhere but only YOU have me until the break of dawn....

I KNEW Clive was gonna try something, but I'm glad he backed off. Michael and Arianna are a really happy couple, they don't need any more shit like this happening. And another baby sounds like a good idea. Lol I want them to have so many pretty babies. LOL! She's all homesick, that's sweet. :) I love that they have something magical like that. I had a feeling that night might inspire "Break of Dawn" Lol! I love that song so much, it's one of my favorites actually, because its so soothing and pretty. :) Great work girl! :D I loved this chapter, hopefully Clive will continue to back off. I'm also glad Kristina's pregnant! :D I can't wait to meet her baby!!! :D

P.S. I lol'd at your response to that sex scene in the last chapter and how you went about typing it! It is a bit... interesting... to picture, huh? I'm sure Michael forgives you. :)



Author's Response:

Yes, he did but Clive is a family man, and a good man. Arianna let him down gently and classy. And agreed, Arianna and Michael are a great couple, so much has happened. I can't let nothing happen to them :) I want them to have another baby but Arianna seems a litttle resistant, lol...wonder why? haha...yes LOL Break of dawn had some "Romanian" inspiration, that's true! XD.....Yes, Kris is pregnant, the group has grown up and had babies of their own.

P.S. LOL I'm glad Michael forgives me XD

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Who's BAD??? ....

Yes! He recognized her! Mike sounds so stalkerish keeping up with her over the years (18 years to be exact) like that. lol He has pure determination. Great chapter honey <3



Author's Response:

LMAO You are too funny, I guess Michael was a bit stalkerish in a sweet want to meet some legends kind of way, you will see that he's a huge fan of her mom as you continue reading. Thx hun :) <33

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 2 - And it begins...

I'm digging this. Uh ohhh...Mike is in for a treat if he gets to meet Miss Arianna tonight. *squeals*



Author's Response:

YAY! I'm glad!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...

Great start. I like how Mike is planning early to meet this "Arianna" before she's even able to walk yet lol.



Author's Response:

LMAO IKR he plans ahead

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 134 - Everything you do seduces me / A Mother's Love....

Awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Susan :)

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 135 - Temptation is everywhere but only YOU have me until the break of dawn....

I love me some Mj & Ari. but they're so lucky they wasn't throwing no balloons at me. I would of found both of their behinds...:D

Dang I dont even remember Kristina getting married. I have to go back...congrats on the family Kristina, you have always been a wonderful friend.

Author's Response:

LMAO me too. I would have chased them all the way to the hotel.

Yes, hun Kristina is married. They even attended the wedding and yes, she has been an amazing friend. :)

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 135 - Temptation is everywhere but only YOU have me until the break of dawn....

Lol I read Chris Tucker part in his voice.

Break od Dawn is my jam. Im convinced my baby came frm that song. ( that or R.Kelly)

Clive better back off. jeeze he's already going in for the kill.

Michael is still insecure i can tell. He thinks just because theyre married no one else will make a move. I know how Michael gets when hes jealous I hope this trip stays good.

Author's Response:

LOL I wrote Chris Tucker's part in his voice XD

Agreed, I love that song. Michael sounds so sensual and damn, your baby was conceived from Break of dawn (or R Kelly) those songs are powerful XD Thx hun

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 135 - Temptation is everywhere but only YOU have me until the break of dawn....

Omfg, my bad about the sad faces! This damn dyslexia -_-

I could've sworn I typed the smiley faces, but sometimes all the symbols look the same *blushes*

Ahhh, of course you know I loved this chapter and story regardless XP

:) :) :) :) :) xoxoxoxoxo 

♥♥



Author's Response:

hahaha don't worry I saw it as happy faces XD

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2012 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 135 - Temptation is everywhere but only YOU have me until the break of dawn....

:-)  ♥♥ Aww, you updated ^_^ Omg, I love this. I think it's totally sweet what Michael did for Arianna's birthday. He's definitely the romantic and gave her a great night out. and I love that they had a wild night haha, they deserve that. But Michael was more than wrong for making her tell him all that stuff about him being the best lmao. If he ever did that to me we would've sat in that car for hours because I couldn't bring myself to say it. Think it, of course, but not say it XD

): And Arianna's fan/bell boy was adorable the one that answered the door. 

And ahh, I love me some Break of Dawn, it's one of my favorites (and is written about me, the whole album was lmao jk) XD I need to stop

But omg Kristina with her pregnancy! ^_^ Ahh, how exciting!!! :-D

And she definitely called it, the director did have a thing for Ari. Her judgment was still on point though, she wouldnt ever betray Michael. And their conversation at the end was adorable, very sweet

And wow, I like her look XP

Me and the baby sibs love it as usual! xoxoxoxo

Peace, Love, Glitter Glove! ):



Author's Response:

Michael is very romantic. Agreed. Her birthday is a very special date because is when she was born, obviously DUH! XD and because it's the day they met. :)

And IKR, he was so wrong but he got his way. And yes, Kristina is pregnant, they are all having little babies :)

She looks cute with curly hair, funny thing is we are in 2000-2001 in the story and this was really her look then XD

thx hun xoxo

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