[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 28 - That's the way love goes...
I know that she enjoyed her seduction. Big breasts, hungry, vomitting? Oh yeah, she's def pregnant w/a little Mikey or Ari XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Nothing is going to stop us now...
Poor Julie. I feel so bad for her. It must really suck loving somebody that doesn't love you. I like Renee. She's strong and she doesn't take crap form anybody XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Heaven can wait....
Ok he should not have taken that pill. I would be scared too. I'm glad that he's alright XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Can't let her get away....
Lmao! Mike has turned Ari into a nympho lol. And it was so romantical how he announced to the world that he was w/Ari XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Have you ever?...
W/e duh! of course its not gonna be easy esp after the way he treated her. He'd better be glad that she's not cussing him out or hitting him or throwing things at him. But they still need to talk, so they can work things out XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Heartbreaker....
Oh, man he should have listened to her. This is all of Bradley's fault. Michael better hope and pray that she forgives him. And yeah they are meant to be. They just need to talk. That's all. Of course it may lead to some angry sex lol XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 22 - The trap....
Oh 'cmon! He was gonna propose to Ari? Omg this is so fuckedup.dotcom! I wanted to come in this story and knock some heads together startin w/Bradley. As for Ari's father, he is a waste of sperm. And that goes to men that act just like him.
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 20 - All I need....
Wow...Tatiana is one delusional bitch. But she is not the only one. Bradly just needs to stop lol. Lol Ari screamed when she saw Bubbles. I would too lol. But Bubbles is cute. O_O Mike asked her to marry him. Talk about your whirlwind romance lol. And Mike letting people know that he makes his own decisons was a great touch too. If Frank knows what's good for him, he won't cross Mike again lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Keep the faith....
That was the sweetest thing that any man has ever done. I cried when I read this chapter. Sorry, I'm just so emotional lately. lol I agree w/her. Michael is truly an angel from above. And no you should not continue. Sike! lol XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2012 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Only hope...
He should have told her. I know that he was tryin to surprise her. And she should calm down. She is always jumpin to conclusions lol I like Kristina. She is really a great friend to Ari. But Julie...well you can already guess what I think about her and its not nice either XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2012 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 141 - Scandalous / 2000 Watts....
HOLY CRAP! Okay so, I fell behind because I got busy!!! I AM SO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING YOUR LAST CHAPTER!!!! SO, SO SORRY! It was great!! :D But THIS CHAPTER had me DYING of laughter at first!! I enjoyed every part of that conversation with Chris!!! Lol So THAT'S why Michael bought porn. I knew there was a reason. Pfft. XD The ending though. HOLY SHIZ! I was like "Daaaaaaaayuuuuuuuuummmm!!!!!!!!!!!!" Been far too long for those two, that's for sure!! I LOVED KRISTINA'S BABY!!! He seemed so freakin cute!! :D This whole chapter was amazing!! WOW! And now Michael has to leeeeave!!! NO!!! D: Imma miss them together. I couldn't help but catch A NUMBER of Michael Jackson song references in this chapter. References that are all from the same album. Which just so happens to be the same one he's currently working on... :D Hmmmmmm.... gee I wonder if that's just a weird coincidence. ;P
"I made sure she would never forget this evening and you know what? I knew where the G-Spot was the whole time." <---I died here. I too pictured him winking as he said that. That was freakin perfect!! :D I CANNOT wait for the next chapter!! :D Amazing work girl, I loved every moment of that!!! :D Keep it up!! Gosh, I ADORE this story so, so much!! More then I can even begin to express in words. I got so excited to see this updated, like seriously!! :D
Author's Response:
No problem hun. I'm just glad you came back to review on this one :) and lol I'm glad you had a good laugh in that part with Chris and Mike. I love writing them together. These two are just so funny. Is fun.
"So THAT'S why Michael bought porn. I knew there was a reason. Pfft. XD " <----LMAO!!! Now you know!!
Kristina's baby is adorable. And Mike and Arianna, you know they've been thru worse they were bound to get be ok again. They love each other and a marriage with that sex life and that husband she'll be stupid to walk away lol
And did you catch the song references? That's good. No one else mentioned it which means you were paying extra attention. XD I was listening to the invincible album while writing this chapter so that's why they showed up at the end :)
""I made sure she would never forget this evening and you know what? I knew where the G-Spot was the whole time." <---I died here." I too pictured him winking as he said that. That was freakin perfect!! " <---- LOL I love that line. I couldn't stop picturing him without winking. i just felt that was something he would do lol
"Gosh, I ADORE this story so, so much!! More then I can even begin to express in words. I got so excited to see this updated, like seriously!! :D" <--- Awww your sweet words really do mean a lot to me. Thank you so much!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2012 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 17 - She drives me wild...
lol! Somebody is insatiable for Mikey XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2012 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Baby, be mine....
Hot and pervy you know that I loved it lol. And her dress was so pretty. But his suit *le swoon* XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2012 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Another part of me....
I think that their plan will work for a little while and the mosquitos will leave them alone. As for Bardley, he can forget it cuz she doesn't want him XD
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2012 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 14 - One more chance.....
Lol! You don't like silent readers either, huh? Ok you asked for it. He finally made her say that she loved him. And he told her that he loved her. It's amazing when you're arguin that your real feelings come out? Yesss they are finally a couple XD