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Reviewer: the-dreams-i-would-dare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2012 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 146 - Jimmy's Chapter (Part 2) / Blue Gangsta (Invincible VMS Signing)

Yay im so happy Jimmy and Michael talked everything out :) Picturing Michael silently crying over Jimmy was so sad though...aw. Paris questioning Toni..."Do you find my dad sexy?" LOL i dieddd...that's too funny. Idk but i have a feeling Toni is gonna cause trouble, i could be wrong though. Michael and Arianna's interaction at the signing was cute too :) loved this chapter!

Author's Response: You know they had to clear the air, that's his dad :') and yes, Michael crying over his son did things to me too while writing it. He alwasys seemed like the best father :) and I know he was. and LMAO Paris is something else, they have a little diva in their hands. I can't with that child LOL, Poor Toni. We'll see about Toni ;) and Ari and MJ are just getting stronger, these two love to tease each other which makes me wonder where the kids got the teasing from haha. Thx hun for the review. Loving your story :)

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2012 06:49 am Title: Chapter 145 - Michael's Flashbacks / The New Assistant....

:-) Lol, the flashbacks. Michael was soo dead set on getting Ari! He was playing no sorts of games! It was like destiny lol. But seriously it was funny when Bill asked him if he had tabs on all those girls haha. And the part on their date....I always fangirl lol.

The flashback of 1994....there was so much sexual tension between the both of them lol. And the Christmas flashback was so great; and aww, the picture! I love that picture and thanks for the shout out :-)

And wow, interesting flashback with Jazmin and Jimmy. Lol, she was so head over heels for Jimmy haha. Whenever I read James Jackson, Jimmy seems so mature haha XD

And lmaaaaaaaaaaaooooooooo MJ did not just molest Antoinette/AMA!!! Ctfu! I can't even handle this! That is too funny lawd! "The nicest ass staring at him" XD Michaeeeeellll! That was great

And ooh, Michael and Ari will be furious when they learn about Jimmy!

Great update! Me and the Baby Sibs loved it as always! xoxoxo



Author's Response:

LOL yes Michael was on stalker mode in those flashbacks XD

yes the 1994 shout out you know Ari wanted to give in to MJ and the picture I love!! it went well with the chapter thank YOU for sending it to me

Jazmin wanted Jimmy that was always the intention, she's a key character and you'll see why :) and me too LOL when I write James I'm like "Where did my 3 yr old go?" :'(

CTFU!! yes he did he molested nice XD I had to write that...it was too funny to pass up XD

thx Lavie love ya!! xoxo

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2012 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 145 - Michael's Flashbacks / The New Assistant....

Awww thanks so much for dedicating this Chapter to me I feel so special :-) You truly are a good friend and I appreciate this so much you have no idea *sniff sniff* okay lemme stop getting emotional :((

Girl I'm loving these flashbacks so much XD

FB Number One: Lmao at Michael he sounds so stalkerish but in a cute way LOL but no seriously Michael couldn't have chose a better woman Arianna is his perfect match ^_^ (the picture you used of 18 year old AL is so gorgeous)

FB Number Two: Michael and Arianna's date was so cute they clicked right away and pretty much had the same childhood

"She was the light to my darkness"

Awww that was so sweet =)

FB Number Three: I'm glad Michael lied to that guy lol Jimmy was meant to be with MJ and Ari point blank period :-)

FB Number Four: smdh at Michael ugh I hated that he was married to that skank LMP in 1994 -___- but yea that was the past, and if Jimmy didn't open the damn door MJ and Ari would've got freaky up in that dressing room hahaha!! They knew they wanted each other ;)

FB Number Five: I Loved this one OMG their Christmas with Renee was so sweet and Jimmy is to much LOL He's just like any kid excited to open presents on Christmas morning ^_^

And the picture Lavie found of MJ and Renee akhfahfkahfhfjhfjfhff I fangirled so hard Lmao I Luv it!

Awwww poor Prince I bet he was so scared and worried about his brother Jimmy :(((

*screams* ahhhhhhhhh Omfggggg I cannot believe this I'm so excited Lawwdd I'm gonna be Arianna's assistant wooooo hooooo!!! Lol

"I'm a huge Michael Jackson fan" "I mean he's cool"

Ctfu! This had me Rolling! Thats something I'd say Lmfaooooooooo

Jesus Christmas! I got sexually harassed on the first day of work *cries* WTF Michael Lmao it was an honest mistake thou but awkward AF for us both LOL

What a hot mess screamin' and falling down smdh and the part where I banged my head on the refrigerator that shit really did happen to me before ouch :/ Lmao

Girl this was hilarious I was dyin' XD

Oh Crap I cannot wait for the next update I hope Jimmy is alright :(

This was such a sweet surprise thanks so much honey Much Love and big hugs!!!

-Your Official Waiting For You Promoter-

xoxoxoxo

AMA

Author's Response: What's up, Antoinette Longoria? XD I really hoped you enjoyed your surprise. I had to make your first meeting with MJ a funny one. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And omg you actually hit your head on the fridge lol too funny. I loved writing the flashbacks. MJ was a bit stalkerish then but it was fun lol and he had to lie to that guy Jimmy was meant to be theirs as for the history era flashback you know damn well if they had been alone Arianna was going to be moaning against that door lol. The Christmas video was perfect, it fit perfectly with the story line and it gave me a chance to bring Renee back. I Miss her :( thx hun love ya!!!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2012 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 145 - Michael's Flashbacks / The New Assistant....

Awww you gave the gang shoutouts!! I love ya! Flashbackssssss!!

lol my reaction-->

Girl you don't understand! lol the whole time that I read the part about Mike being stalkerish and determined to get Ari I was just like that man is something else lol. He was not playing any games!

“You know if you and I get together, you'll be in big trouble” I said softly as I watched her. She looked at me confused and asked “How so?”

“Because I'll make sure that you'll fall in love with me so hard that you will never want to let me go...we could make each other happy...all you have to do is give in to me” <---CREEPER!!!!!

lol He had no shame when he said it neither lol. I can't with him. Ari knows that she wanted to give him that kiss when they were in her dressing room. She knew that if Jimmy didn't burst through that door it would have been on and poppin'. You included the video!!! woot!! That was just too adorable with MIke calling Prince's name and Omer holding Paris with her chubby cheeks lol. I hope that Jimmy is ok. Oh how I fear for Jazmin when Mike finds out. Lawwwwd have mercy. Toni is the assistant. *snickers* AMA no hitting on MJ...lol he's Ari's...lol I wonder if she's gonna see this review. That was a MAJOR fail on Mike lol he was blinded by the ass to even think about whether it was his wife's or not. He should know her booty by now lol. Anyway, this was a great chapter, Drea!!! 

P.S. I can't believe that I forgot about "Do You Know Where Your Children Are!" *slaps my own face* lol ok I think I'm done...bye!!! <3 <3 <3 



Author's Response: Yes I did!!! Lol y'all are my girls (hugs) and lmao omg shy you and these gifs be making ctfu!! And yes I enjoyed writing this flashbacks lol and yes MJ was a bit of a creeper then he has no shame when he wants something he goes for it lol and of course I had to use that video it was perfect for the story line and lol AMA had no idea about that but I thought it was funny lol I'm glad y'all enjoyed it and you forgot about DYWYCA bad shy!! Lol thx hun

Author's Response: Yes I did!!! Lol y'all are my girls (hugs) and lmao omg shy you and these gifs be making ctfu!! And yes I enjoyed writing this flashbacks lol and yes MJ was a bit of a creeper then he has no shame when he wants something he goes for it lol and of course I had to use that video it was perfect for the story line and lol AMA had no idea about that but I thought it was funny lol I'm glad y'all enjoyed it and you forgot about DYWYCA bad shy!! Lol thx hun

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2012 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 145 - Michael's Flashbacks / The New Assistant....

OMG GIRL, I LOVE FLASHBACKS..  BTW I LMAO WHEN MJ HUGGED THE ASSISTANT THINKING SHE WAS "A"..  AND WHEN "A" SAID, YOU SEXUALLY HARASSED HER.. HAHAH GIRL,.

P.D: MUCH LOVE 2 YOU 2 GIRL!!! LOVE YA



Author's Response: Lmao I'm glad you enjoyed that part I thought it was funny. Love ya more

Author's Response: Lmao I'm glad you enjoyed that part I thought it was funny. Love ya more

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2012 10:17 am Title: Chapter 145 - Michael's Flashbacks / The New Assistant....

Omg! MJ and Ari are gon go crazy. I cant believe Mike violated the new assistant.



Author's Response: You got that right and lol Mike is crazy thx hun

Author's Response: You got that right and lol Mike is crazy thx hun

Author's Response: You got that right and lol Mike is crazy thx hun

Reviewer: soldieroflove Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2012 01:28 am Title: Chapter 104 - Love will never do without you...

That was probably the worst explanation of how babies are made given by anyone ever,Michael is a trip



Author's Response: Lmao yes Michael is something else thx hun for the review

Author's Response: Lmao yes Michael is something else thx hun for the review

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2012 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 144 - Jimmy's Chapter....

HOLY CRAP! OH MY GOD!!

First off... that heated argument between Michael and Jimmy. O.O I was just like "No, no!" I can't believe Jimmy said those things to Michael. :/ I was so mad Jazmin managed to get into his head like that.

Secondly, shit just got real. O.O Jimmy's hurt... Arianna's gonna be a wreck, Michael's gonna be pissed. I sense those two having a heart to heart though. As long as he's okay. :/ Poor Jimmy and poor scared little Prince!! D: I'm glad he thought to ring that alarm though.

I must say, it was interesting reading things through Prince's point of view. Very different but also very interesting. Prince is a smart little cookie. :) And by the way, I LOVE "What More Can I Give?" :) It's a really good song and I love that he donated the money to the families from 9/11. Such a sweet man.

I wonder what you're planning with this scrapbook. I'm extremely curious and I look forward to finding out. (Maybe not the actual end of the story, because I love this story too much. Lol) But I'll keep it in mind. ;)

Great work girl. :) You never disappoint, I love this. Keep doing what you're doing because it's amazing. :)



Author's Response: I know nobody expected that. And Jazmin is a key character, you'll see why. Jimmy is going thru a phase right now but Michael and Ari are great parents they know how to keep him in line however as for their reaction to Jimmy's accident you might be surprised. I enjoyed writing Prince's first pov he's growing up :') I still remember Jimmy's first pov. And yes, WMCIG was a beautiful song. Michael had such as great heart and oh, the scrap book? you'll see thx hun for continuing to read this story and for your lovely reviews :) more to come soon

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 144 - Jimmy's Chapter....

I need to catch up!!

Noooo not my Jimmy. hes so grown up. I still remember him playing with toys with Ari and loving all the traveling. I guess he anit my lil baby no more. Yep just like a damn girl! Do shit and now my Jimmy is hurt. Jazmin girl fix this.

Paris is a fierce queen diva! They better recongnize!

Lookey here Prince has his point if view. Thang this makes me feel old lol. I freaked out when I saw my bro get beat up

New York wasnt my home. But I visit then and now atleast 5 times a year. Its like a second home. Sept 11 hurted my soul. Terrorist tried to destroy our home. Im glad we are all together.

Ari is going to want to kick some ass when she finds out about Jimmy

Author's Response: Joy!! Where have you been? Haha I'm glad to see you back! And yes Jimmy has grown up so fast. Remember when he was a little boy running around with his hulk Hogan doll? Now he's dating. Jazmin is a key character and you'll see why. Yes Prince is getting older so he had to get a pov, I enjoyed writing it and lol Paris is a little diva. And you got that right about Ari thx hun :)

Author's Response: Joy!! Where have you been? Haha I'm glad to see you back! And yes Jimmy has grown up so fast. Remember when he was a little boy running around with his hulk Hogan doll? Now he's dating. Jazmin is a key character and you'll see why. Yes Prince is getting older so he had to get a pov, I enjoyed writing it and lol Paris is a little diva. And you got that right about Ari thx hun :)

Reviewer: Nahnah Sailee Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 144 - Jimmy's Chapter....

Noooo JIMMY! aww he's growing up, but he needs to understand how lucky he is to have such a perfect happy and fortunate family, which I think he's taking for granted. But I do understand his points as well, it must be hard having your parents as your only friends and constantly traveling, but he should NEVER pull the adoption card, they care about him way too much. He could have been way more civil about how he felt, I was so mad when Jazmin put that thought into his head and him actually listening to her.


I actually started crying when reading about 9/11, it brought back some memories of my own that I do not want to re-live. RIP to everyone who lost their lives/ lost loved ones on that day.


As for prince, yayyyyyy first POV! They've all grown up so fast. I feel like a proud parent myself, remembering me squealing when Jimmy had his first POV. Lol :D Well I can't wait to see what happens next, dear god Jimmy please be okay! And apologize to your father; he only does what he does because he cares about you! Stubborn teenagers.. heh I remember going experiencing all that stuff with my parents, going from “perfect child” to girl who’s always getting into some sort of trouble. But I turned out fine, and so will Jimmy :) I swear this story just won't get old! The first thing I do every time I get on my laptop is check to see if you updated, and then make sure to set aside a part of my day to read it if you have and use it as an incentive to get work done! 



Author's Response:

Hi hun. Thx for the review first of all. Now about Jimmy. Jimmy is going thru his changes but of course that doesn't excuse his behaviour. However, Ari and Mike know how to keep them in mind.

As for Jazmin, you will find out more about her soon :)

9/11 was a crazy day. Is a sensitive subject to some and myself which is why I tried to keep it as minimal as possible.

Yes, Prince has a pov! YAY!! Is funny I remember Jimmy's first POV, when he was describing himself playing with his basketball down the hallway during the dangerous era. I loved that part. I have soft place for Jimmy in my writing. But I enjoyed writing Prince. It was a different POV. The kids are growing up so fast :')

As for Ari and Mike's reactions, you will find out soon. It might surprise you ;) You will get to read that soon :)

thx hun xoxo

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 144 - Jimmy's Chapter....

Teenagers, they can make you want to murder them sometimes. Jimmy really hurt Michael when he told him that he wasn't his father. I'm glad that they made peace w/each other again. O_O  oh no! I can't beleive that they jumped him!  And its all of Jazmin's fault!  I hate her! lol I wonder what will happen when Mike and Ari find out what happened to Jimmy. Poor Prince!  He must be so scared :(  Loved the pic. Feening for more like a  crack addict lol XD



Author's Response: Lol like a crack addict?----- damn smokey, layoff off the weed.....Ari and Mike's reaction is going to surprise you and as for Jazmin, she is a key character, you'll see why. Working on the upcoming chapters, I hope not to keep you waiting too long. Thx hun

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 11:11 am Title: Chapter 144 - Jimmy's Chapter....

Whoa...I don't know where to start! This was one of those "it just got real" chapters. I mean from Jazmin influencing Jimmy to Jimmy going off on Mike to the silent treatments to Jimmy getting jumped...I just don't know how to react! I can't believe that Jimmy said such a thing to Michael. Even though he was speaking out of hurt and anger, that was a low blow. That hurt my little feelings. I was thinking oh Michael, he didn't mean it...please don't go off. But of course Michael handled it the way that any mature adult would handle it. I love when he shows his fatherly capabilities...and Ari too. They are really great parents. I really wish that Ari would listen to Mike when he speaks about Jazmin. That girl is trouble. I just wish that she would see what Michael sees. He's only looking out for his son. But I do have to agree with Ari when she said that Jimmy needs to make his own mistakes.

Moving on from that, I always cry every time I hear the song or watch the video to What More Can I Give. Michael cared so much about this world. He was so selfless. I just wish that more people could really see the "man" and not just the "entertainer."

The part about the KFC has me smiling so hard. Their family bonding is so cute. I'm glad that Mike and Jimmy sort of broke that ice between each other. Hopefully Jimmy will actually apologize to Michael for what he said. I know that Mike forgave him but it would be even greater if Jimmy admitted and asked for forgiveness his wrongdoing.

Now for this school incident, I had a feeling that something was going to happen. At first I thought that Jimmy was going to catch Jazmin with another guy but what happened was even worse lol. Michael is going to be too upset when if finds out...that is, if he ever finds out. I wonder how those guys knew that Jimmy and Jazmin were dating. It kind of makes me wonder if she was creeping on Jimmy while he was in Californina because she did seem like she was having doubts about their relationship when they were on the phone. I feel so sorry for Prince having to watch his brother get attacked like that. I know that if he was older, he most definitely would have jumped in. I hope someone got those boys for doing that to Jimmy. They can't get mad because his daddy is famous. It wasn't his fault that Mike and Ari chose to adobt him. smh...people can be so cruel. Anyway, I have a feeling that Michael feelings about Jazmin are going to grow even stronger after this...hopefully that won't happen but I guess I'll have to wait to find out. *sigh* Ok I'm done lol

Great chaper, Drea!

Oh and another thing...I loved hearing more from Jimmy's POV and also being introduced to Prince's POV *_*



Author's Response: Shy!!! Jimmy is going thru a moment, he's growing up but Michael knew how to keep him in line. Regardless of what Jimmy said and he knows he was wrong, Jimmy loves Michael and Michael loves Jimmy. When it comes to Ari and Michael's reaction you might be surprised at it, you'll find out more about Jazmin, she's a key character and you'll see why. What more can I give its a beautiful song and I enjoyed writing more from Jimmy's pov I still remember his first and I had to introduce Prince's pov he's growing up thx hun

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 07:12 am Title: Chapter 144 - Jimmy's Chapter....

♥♥ REVIEW 1200 ♥♥


Author's Response:

awww THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 07:10 am Title: Chapter 144 - Jimmy's Chapter....

:-) ♥♥ Omfg!! Little ole' me gets a special chapter?! iabgagvagbhabga *_*

*clears throat* Thank you so much, Academy! I would like to thank-

*record scratch* jk :-))

Awww, thank you soo much dear heart! Awww such lovely things you say about me *cries* haha love ya more ^_^

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Lawd Arianna, I feel the pain girl. My city lawwdddd. And omg I thought I was the only one who did that back then; going up on the roof of one of the towers I thought one of my friends was gonna push me off lmaaaoo :-(((

Me and my best friends actually ate up there that morning at Windows on the World but we left like an hour or so before the attacks happened thank God.

Awww, they put everything into wonderful perspective; the simple things in life are what we don't appreciate. And omfggg the scrapbook pictures!! They are so cute!!! *_* My favorite picture of this story so far is the one you put at the bottom right, idk why lol I love it :-))

Wow, Jazmin had some nerve to tell Jimmy that they can't 'control' him b/c they aren't his blood parents. They've always loved him more than that and they care so much, is like he is their own :-/

And awwww Michael :-((( Temper, temper. Tsk, tsk. Lol jk. No, i most definitely will let his anger slide. He has the right to be upset. He (and Arianna) love Jimmy with everything and is not fair for him to let Jazmin's influence on him say such things to Michael. He should be appreciative and think about everything MJ said while MJ tries to de-Joseph hisself or something lol.

I'm glad Jimmy realized his life would be much different and probably much harder had it not been for Michael and Arianna. And ctfu at Paris with her diva moment XD

“Well, obviously they all want to see me” Paris said while putting her hand over her heart like a little diva making Arianna laugh.

“They didn't come to see you. They don't even know you” Prince said. <------ Hollering.

"You are all wrong. They all came to see me" Lmfaaaaaoooooo MMMMMJJJJJJJ

OMFG PRINCE'S POV?! abguigabifviuabgba

Awww :/ That must've been horrible for him. I mean, Im the oldest child so I dont have anyone to look up to so I can't even imagine how hard it is for him to see someone he looks up to get hurt like that.

But he was kinda calm in the situation. being little he was obviously scared and worried for Jimmy but he was just the cutest thing pulling the fire alarm.

Oh snap I can't wait for next chapter.....like....what are Arianna and Michael gonna think?

Me and the Baby Sibs just have this feeling that Michael is definitely gonna put it all on Jazmin (can you believe we actually agree? XD). Something's just fishy. That guy was all like Jazmin is his girl so maybe she was two timing Jimmy? All I know is, Arianna and Michael are not gonna be happy.

Great update!

And thanks again for this chapter, made me feel special lmao.

Lol Idk what you're doing to me Boogie Down, but my reviews are getting longer and longer

xoxoxoxo ♥♥



Author's Response:

LOL Lavie!! Such a diva moment there. I had to. You know you are my girl. It was the least I could do for your bday, even though is not much :)

No, you were not the only one, it was scary as hell being there but somehow peaceful O_o..you are very lucky to not have stayed around. You were meant to stay for a reason :)

I love that picture of them too in the scrapbook XD

Jimmy is going thru his man/boy changes but Ari and Mike know how to keep him in line as for Jazmin, you will get to find out more about her soon

haha I love that part of the kids fighting, is what kids do. And yes, Prince has his first pov They are growing up so fast :')

As for Ari and Mike's reactions, you will find out soon. It might surprise you ;)

thx hun :) xoxo

 

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 144 - Jimmy's Chapter....

I hate bullies. Prince defiantly did the right thing. I just know Michael and Ariana are gonna be heart broken and I feel like Michael might put the blame on Jasmine. He's gonna think its all her fault. Or maybe Ariana for letting Jimmy date.



Author's Response:

I hate bullies too. Prince was strong and so smart to think of that. As for Michael and Arianna's actions....you'll find out soon, it might surprise you. Thx hun :)

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