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Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2012 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 149 - Little Jimmy is all grown up now/ I'm Bound....

I KNEW THAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN! I so saw it coming. >.> Honestly, I really hoped he'd actually dump her. I do not trust her at all. I haven't liked her since she first appeared and I certainly don't now. However, I am curious as to just what Jimmy's big mistake will be in the next chapter. As for Michael and Bashir... I hate that man. He totally DESTROYED Michael. -_- I wish he'd decide to back out of the documentary instead. Sigh. I could NOT stop laughing when I read the conversation between Michael and Jimmy about the internet and the webcam. LOL! Michael just can't keep up with all of this new technology. :P Poor Michael. Lol. Great work, I can't wait for more. :)



Author's Response:

I guess you saw it coming as he and Jazmin got older, it was bound to happen. LOL I think everyone wanted them to break up but he's young, he's still learning. Ah! Jimmy's mistake, you'll see...he makes more than one, that is all I will say.

Bashir, ugh...I promise you won't have to read too much about him. I hate him, You are right he did destoryed Michael.

LOL Jimmy is such a joker, I think he got that from his daddy. He's forever going to be teasing Michael especially about his lack of knowledge of technology. I'm glad you had a nice laugh about it.

Thanks hun xoxo

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2012 06:20 am Title: Chapter 149 - Little Jimmy is all grown up now/ I'm Bound....

Oh no! Bashir!!!! I hate this part as well. Just dont go into the details ok. It hurts lke hell. :'( N I totally understand about writing the sex scene.  lol! Keep updating....  <3



Author's Response:

I know!! I promise not to make it too hard. You won't have to read too much about him :) and lol, Jimmy is like my son I was like I can't do it XD thanks hun xoxo

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 149 - Little Jimmy is all grown up now/ I'm Bound....

*falls on the floor dramatically and cries*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO not my lil Jimmy :/ I still picture him as that sweet lil boy, not as grown up Jimmy with a girlfriend doin' the nasty lol I just..... *sigh* he grew up to fast.

But on a good note he got excepted into Juilliard ^_^ I'm so proud of him.

Lmfao at Michael with his arms crossed mumbling to himself, he's to much lol

Awwwwww :-))) the People magazine cover and pictures are so freakin cute I loved them! and I agree with Toni I especially love the throwback pic of Mike & Ari ^_^

ohh crap Michael is about to do the dreaded Bullshit-Ass-Brashir interview ughhhh no bueno >.<

Double crap!! I'm over here like WTF is goin' on with Toni talkin' 'bout "My run was over. She found me." O___O Omgggg what did this girl do!!

I can't with Michael he's to cute getting all happy about his email account lol I hope his ass can figure out the webcam thingy because we know how Mike is with technology he's a lil slow Lmao!!

And as always Shy's gif's were on point XD Me likey very much ;) oops I can't drool over Jimmy thats just so wrong, whats wrong with me?! "Stop it AMA!!" LOL

Welp Mr-I'm-sixteen-Living-In-New-York-Sexin-Jazmin better hope he didn't get her pregnant 'cause that won't be good at all -____-

Great Chapter Drea it was wonderful as always and I can't wait to see what happens next :-)

Love ya xoxoxoxoxo AMA

Author's Response:

LMAO at everyone screaming for Jimmy not to lose his virginity...he's so loved :')

and LOL yes, I like that pic of them, especially the Throwback, that was my first photoshop pic of them :') aww memories lol

you know, Mj was no good with technology, he's so cute about it though lol

Shy is amazing with her gifs. I love her :') she saved the day and when I saw the video of Jimmy/Omer walking in the house and in the car I was like *double gasp* that's what I pictured him doing in my chapter. Youtube read my mind lol

"Welp Mr-I'm-sixteen-Living-In-New-York-Sexin-Jazmin" <---- LMAO!!

thx Toni/AMA

love ya xoxo

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 149 - Little Jimmy is all grown up now/ I'm Bound....

That part when Michael didn't want Jimmy to leave had me laughing lol Mike is soo cute when he's being stubborn.

Author's Response:

LOL I could just picture Mike doing that. He is stubborn but absolutetly adorable when he is doing it. Thx hun xoxo

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2012 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 149 - Little Jimmy is all grown up now/ I'm Bound....

*throws confetti and moonwalks* WOOHOOOO! LAVIE'S FIRST ON THIS CHAPTER!!! AYEEEE! :'))))

OH MY DAMN!!! JIMMMMMMYYYYYYY!!!! MAAAHHHH BAAAAYYYYBBBBEEEHHHHHH!!!

JIMMMMYYYY NNNNOOOO!!!!

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Lmaaaoo at Jazmin and Angie tho! Angie got that peek at Jimmy at the window XD *_* I LOVE SHY'S JIMMY GIFS!!! :')

And oh no!!! Michael's gonna meet Bashit - oops bashir *smirk*

And hmmmm I can't wait to read how Toni's convo with her mama went!

"I heard my mom pass the phone to my dad while Prince begged to speak to me and Paris yelled something about to watch out for the rats. I giggled as I remembered how she sang Ben the one time I took her by the subway and a rat ran by us. Paris has not been able to forget that" <----------- *screams* GIRL! A few months ago I was at the subway before going to Brooklyn and I saw a big ass rat! Instead of like having a fit and getting scared I was like "Beeennnn the twwwoooo of usss need look no moooooreeee" And then this homeless man started snapping and dancing along with me I coulda died! Lmaaaaaooooo!

And lmao at Michael being excited about making an email account and not knowing what text and webcam is XD That's great lol

This chapter was omfg! And I love the song you used, too :')

CANNOT WAIT FOR UPDATION! Me and the Baby Sibs loved it xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

YAY!! Party over here!! Lavie is #1!! XD LMAO!!

LMAO at the Will Smith gif. I swear girl, I do this all the time especially when my mama wants me to do something or tells me something I don't like. LOL. But yes, Jimmy tsk tsk..it was hard for me to do that but he was growing up, had no choice. *cries* I wish I could keep him little :')

And LOL at your subway/rat story. It would take another New Yorker to understand the joke of the rats in the subways. I'm serious!! those rats be running thru there like they own the shit smh LOL

and LOL Michael and his email, he is so goofy!!

I love this song too, is so nice :))

Thx Lavie

xoxo

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2012 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 148 - Happy Birthday, Blanket / Speechless....

So much happened in this chapter!

Lawd, in the beginning with Ari and the baby suffocating I was like "OMFGGGG". Lol, but I knew they'd both be alright!

And I really dislike the way Sony/Tommy Mottolla treated MJ. He deserved so much better than that.

"He has a big head and his bow legged" I joked. Lmaaaooo, very cute. Lol it was cute when MJ describes the baby to her, she's like "He is half Hispanic", like a reminder to him or something lol :'))

Lmaaaaaooo I love Toni so much! She's quite the character! She fits in perfectly and should just do her instead of worrying about Grace and her stank advice. she gets along so well with the family!

Lmaaaoooo that entire scene with the nurse and then pretending to be MJ's lover I just kamsoafvagbsrtzvevaivalanjf

"Ok, look.." I said, putting my bag on her desk. I opened it and began looking for my wallet. "I understand you are tired and you are probably under paid so how about this?...." I opened my wallet and took out all of my money. "If you let me in, I'll give you... " I counted my money and then sighed, embarrassed. "..twelve dollars".

Then I remembered I needed to pay for parking so I took back the ten dollar bill and changed my offer. "Wait. I'm gonna need ten for parking so how about two dollars?". LMAAOOOOOOOOOOO I HOLLEREDT. Omfggg *__*

And lol, diva Paris, wanting a sister. Michael just didn't think enough pink lmao. But awww, I'm glad they all are loving and enjoying the baby!

"Stay tuned because this is where the story takes a turn. Drama ahead. And something happens between Jazmin and Jimmy. What could it be? :)" OH NOOOO!

Great chapter as usual! Me and the Baby Sibs loved it! xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Lavie!!!

I'm glad you had a good laugh in this chapter. Yes, Toni is quite a character. Kinda like the real Toni, smh she's nuts but we love her XD

As for the drama, some you might see coming and some might hit you by surprise. I hope y'all are ready to read it :(

xoxo

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2012 11:30 am Title: Chapter 148 - Happy Birthday, Blanket / Speechless....

Okay... now I'm scared. Drama ahead and something happening? Oh boy. I can't wait to see. As for this chapter, I love Paris, it's too bad she didn't get a sister but at least Arianna was able to cheer her up. Such a cute moment. :) I also really love that Toni knows she's part of the family now. That's Michael for you though. ;) Blanket's so adorable!! I enjoyed Michael and Arianna's bickering over who the kids look like. Lol They're a good mixture of both of them. ;) I'd love to see them have another little girl though. Too many boys. Lol I still kind of wish Michael had been there with Arianna when Blanket was born. He just had to not check his phone. Sigh, darn it Michael. Anyways, great work girl. I love your chapters so much. Keep up the amazing work. ;)



Author's Response:

Yes :( drama is up ahead. I think some drama you guys could predict, others might come out as a surprise. I hope y'all are ready :/ Paris is a little diva lol she likes to get her way. She's the only girl she can't help it but she might get a sister in the future ;) and yes, Michael and Arianna are amazing to bring Toni in :') and LOL Arianna and MJ are something else, they are definitely a good mixture of something lol...thx hun as always xoxo

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2012 11:39 am Title: Chapter 148 - Happy Birthday, Blanket / Speechless....

I'm in love with this<3



Author's Response:

Thank you <3333 :')

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2012 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 148 - Happy Birthday, Blanket / Speechless....

*GIANT SIGH OF RELIEF* LOL I'm just glad Ari and Blanket are both okay :-)

To bad Michael missed the birth of their fourth child :/

Smdh at Sony and Tommy Mottola for not supporting Michael like they should have -____-

OMG Toni and the children and their non-stop teasing is hilarious AF Lmao they're really getting close to Toni its so cute :-)

But I have a feeling Grace is not going to be happy when she finds out that Toni took the kids all the way to San Diego to visit their new baby brother. *shrugs* oh well she'll have to just deal with it, because The Jacksons like Toni and Grace better not cause any drama to try and get her fired :(((

Ctfu!! I loved the part where Toni gets all up in that nurses face demanding to see her "Lover" LMAOOOOO she's a hot mess and I can't with that video clip it cracks me up every time I watch it LOL Toni and her crazy ideas I bet MJ thinks she's a huge goofball hahahaha!!!

Paris "Lil Miss Diva" and her fake crying LOL she's so cute :-)

Awww the Jackson Family is expanding every year LMAO they really are a sweet Bunch ^_^

Hmmmm I can't wait to hear more about Toni's life before being Arianna's Assistant, Toni is a interesting character indeed. :-)

I'm Glad all is well with you hun, I hope your grandpa is doin much better after his surgery. I was so happy to see you updated I needed to escape from my crazy stressed out life. WFY always puts a big smile on my face :-))))

Great chapter Drea your the bestest Luv ya very much.

xoxoxoxo

AMA

-Official Waiting For You Promoter/Toni ;)

PS *gasps dramatically* at your "Chapter End Notes" oh Lawdd DRAMA and Jimmy and Jazmin!! I can't wait to see what this is all about

Author's Response:

of course they were going to be ok. I didn't need a WFY riot to come and get me if I killed off Ari lol

Ah! Michael should have picked up the phone smh

Toni just fits right in. Is so easy to write her and is fun having her interract with the children but beware drama is coming. Poor Toni she is going to have to prove her worth.

OMG Grace, you know what? she'll live LOL

That video of Toni had me done. I was like "hmm...this seems like something Toni would do" LOL...I had to use it.

Paris is a diva. She's the little girl of the bunch. She needs to get her way or else. XD

Thanks, my wonderful promoter. I hope you are feeling better. Miss you :((

xoxo

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2012 10:42 am Title: Chapter 148 - Happy Birthday, Blanket / Speechless....

Awww I'm glad that everything went well with Ari and Blanket. It's good that she wasn't upset with Michael for not making it on time. As for Sony...no freaking words. Ari was sweet for hiring Toni as her assistant because Toni really needs people like the Jacksons in her life. And kudos to Toni for being able to make a quick comeback at everyone's teasing lol The hospital scene with the nurses had me done.

"Ok, look.." I said, putting my bag on her desk. I opened it and began looking for my wallet. "I understand you are tired and you are probably under paid so how about this?...." I opened my wallet and took out all of my money. "If you let me in, I'll give you... " I counted my money and then sighed, embarrassed. "..twelve dollars".

Then I remembered I needed to pay for parking so I took back the ten dollar bill and changed my offer. "Wait. I'm gonna need ten for parking so how about two dollars?". <---- I can't!!!! lol 

And then she went into Italian mode with Jimmy following suit lol smh they are too much. That was so awkward when the nurse told Michael what Toni said about the baby mama drama lol. Toni stays putting her foot in her mouth arouond him. Poor thing can't catch a break. And what makes it worse is that he always laughs at her lol. *pats Toni's shoulder*

And Michael, that little sly devil. Always being able to talk people into doing what he wanted them to do. He was determined to take Ari and Blanket home today! That's what I'm talking about. Be the man. *in MJ's voice*

Anyway, this was a beautiful chapter. So glad that everything is well back at home...hopefully that'll mean more updates...please

I beg of you lol I'm jk Anyway, I love ya Drea aka the best co-author in the world <3



Author's Response:

LOL OMG SHY!! you and these gifs be killing me LOL

Ari can't stay mad at Michael, is not his fault he needs a hearing aid to hear his phone LOL jk...I think the fact that Ari was overwhelmed with Blanket's birth  is what saved him at the end because she didn't have the physical strength to be mad at him XD Just Sayin' lol

LOL Toni is always in an ackward situation but is fun to read and write. (Toni, I love you) and of course Michael doesn't make it better. He is worse than the kids. But seriously, how can he not laugh at her? Italian mode and then she has Jimmy following the lead in his bad Tony Montana accent LOL I can't with her LOL

You know that Michael is the man, he always gets it his way LOL

AND LMAO OMG I'm dying with this gif...I can't with you, girl.

  

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Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2012 09:11 am Title: Chapter 148 - Happy Birthday, Blanket / Speechless....

finally!!! i missed this story sooooooooooooo much! Drama???? cant wait t read. :) Jazmin n Jimmy? ummmmmmm idk. lol! great chapter! do update soon. <3



Author's Response:

Awww I'm sorry for the delay, is been crazy here but I'm back!!! XD...I'm glad y'all are still with me. Yes, drama :(( and Jimmy and Jazmin LOL anything could happen lol ;) thx hun...will try to update faster :)) xoxo

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 98 - Don't Want To Fall In Love With You Again...

Lisa-Freakin-Marie is definitely on AMA's shit list right now!!!

How dare she sit there and lie about being pregnant with Michael's child Oh Hell Naw that shit ain't cute *slaps LMP through the damn computer screen* LMAO!!!

Loved it as always :-)

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 97 - We are broken like shattered glass...

"Fuckin' shit" I forgot to rate this chapter in my last review :((( LOL If I could I'd give you a million zillion stars Lmao but for now I'll just rate it a 10 hahahaha XD

xoxoxoxo

Author's Response:

CTFU!!! at your reviews to the old chapters. You are too much girl. Love ya, Toni!! xoxo

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 97 - We are broken like shattered glass...

Okay so I just had to come back and re-read these old chapters lol I swear my emotions are over the place even though I know what eventually happens *wink wink* but anyways Michael is just ugh -_____- I have no words for him smh smh

Great Chapter!!

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2012 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...

Okay so today I opened up my iTunes and I came across JLo's song Starting Over so to make a long story short LOL I just had to read this chapter and review it XD

MICHAEL JOSEPH JACKSON WTF WERE YOU THINKING MARRYING LISA MARIE PRESLEY!!!!!

Like seriously tho MJ knows he's still in Love with Arianna :/ quit acting as if you don't you damn IDIOT :((( LMAO (sorry I'm just mad AF at him in this chapter)

Awwwww Renee gave birth to Ari's baby brother Brian :-) and she fainted O.o omg shes a mess LOL

I feel so bad for Ari, she had to find out about Michael getting married to LMP by her assistant Kevin? Seriously thats just FUCKED UP smdh

Michael is so wrong in this chapter I can't deal him *logs off and cries dramatically* :'((( LMAO!!!

I love coming back and reading chapters over again I get so into them :-))))

Luv ya Drea

xoxoxoxo

AMA

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