Reviewer: LoveyoumoreMJJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2013 07:41 am Title: Chapter 9 - Will you be there?...

Awwwwwwww, I think she's right, probably it was the best choice for them.

but it's so saaaaaaaaaaaaddddddd :'( 

I don't wanna see them in misery,

I don't know why it's so sweet even though they're in trouble <3

Love U and thanks for Sweet and Great Story <333

Author's Response:

I know :((

"Love U and thanks for Sweet and Great Story <333" <--- xoxo luv u more and thank you!!! :)

Reviewer: LoveyoumoreMJJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2013 05:34 am Title: Chapter 5 - You give me butterflies...

Oh, hell Yes !!

You should keep writting, and I should read rest chapters ASAP <3

You leave me in awe, this is really great <3

Thank you so much *Much Love*

Author's Response:

"You leave me in awe, this is really great <3" <--- Thank you so much!!! xoxo

Reviewer: LoveyoumoreMJJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2013 01:09 am Title: Chapter 3 - Who's BAD??? ....

"Bring her to me" I love when he's stubborn, it's too sexy lol

Your story is amazing I'm enjoying it so much <3

I can't wait to see what happen to their first meeting XD

Author's Response:

First of all, let me say hey and welcome you to my story. Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. I hope you like it :)

"Bring her to me" I love when he's stubborn, it's too sexy lol" <--- Michael is very demanding lol thx xoxo

 

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2013 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 151 - U Got It Bad/I Like The Way You Love Me....

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^^^ I didn't know where to start so I started by saying that lol. Ok, now for the story that was so sweet how Jimmy offered his food to the homeless guy. I can't help but laugh at the fact that he gave his grandfathers' sandwich away lol. 

The mentioning of Lisa and Julie 

I'm not even gonna comment. Drea you're playing it with my emotions. I swear if they start up some more trouble me and my squirrel family are coming to NY to find you -_-

Those flashbacks were bittersweet. That video of Mike with David always makes me tear up. The way that Ari got her nickname was so cute lol.

Paris is a smart one. That little girl has a little mouth on her talking about some sloppy CPR and trying for another sister lol.

"CPR!!" Toni repeated giggling. She was stuck on that joke. We all turned to her. "I want to know what you call sex. Do you call it a state of emergency?" Toni cracked up while I gave her a look and Arianna giggled." <-- tell me why I heard that in Toni's voice while imagining her doing the "Toni clap" lol!!!

 

"What did you win? Let me guess..." Angie pretended to think really hard while I rolled my eyes and Jazmin begged her to stop. "The Limbo stick dance. You had to have win that. You are the only person that could dance under the one inch bar"

 

I looked at her. "You know Angie....you might want to get this check" I pointed at her upper lip. "Maybe see a vet because you are starting to foam out of the mouth. I'm telling you one day you are going to wake up with rabies and we might have to put you down"

lol yes Jimmy! Don't call it a comeback! lol I was so done with him and Angie going back and forth. They are a mess.

Lawwwdd for them going to Shontelle's party. I feel like it's about to get real.

Jimmy should have known that Mike knew about him and Jaz. Father knows lol

Yaaasss for them watching the game. I heard all of that in Toni's voice too. Done at Ari getting mad at Jimmy for being a Lakers fan lol. Toni finally won at something. Poor thing didn't get humilated this time lol.

Lord Bashir...I shall keep my mouth shut on this situation. But I'm already mad -_-

Anyway, this was a beautiful chapter as always. Can't wait to see what happens next even though I already feel like I'm gonna be packing to come to NY for you soon lol.

Author's Response:

LMAO at the first line and the gifs. I was thinking of giving you the silent treatment but I'll wait until you make me cry in SGI XD.

"I'm not even gonna comment. Drea you're playing it with my emotions. I swear if they start up some more trouble me and my squirrel family are coming to NY to find you -_-"

 ^^^^^^^^

  NOT THE SQUIRRELS!!!!

LMAO you'll deal. Payback for SGI whaaaaa haaaa XD

Did you really picture Toni clapping while she laughed? LMAO!! me too. I even mentioned it. She is gonna kill me. XD

ROTFLMAOOO! at the "Oh Snap" gif. LMAO!!! But it goes to show you that Jimmy is quick with his comebacks LOL

"Lawwwdd for them going to Shontelle's party. I feel like it's about to get real." <---YESSSS

and lol father does know, child. He wasn't fooling anyone haha

"Yaaasss for them watching the game. I heard all of that in Toni's voice too. Done at Ari getting mad at Jimmy for being a Lakers fan lol. Toni finally won at something. Poor thing didn't get humilated this time lol." <---LOL I had to do it. I told y'all i got an idea and there it was. And Jimmy ain't right, not agreeing with his mama, what's wrong with that boy? LOL and yes, she didn't get humilated, you see? I'm a nice friend hehe

Thx Shy...and pack away cuz I might wanna see you especially with the way SGI is going. Girl, you know I ain't happy XD

xoxo

 

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2013 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 150 - What about your friends?....

I am gonna be so sad when this ends. Gosh. After 150 chapters I still love this story, more than I can ever express in words. :)

JIMMY! What the hell are you doing!? I'm getting all kinds of bad signals from Shontelle. I swear, he'd better not go to that party. I didn't like Jazmin but I like her way more than Shontelle. She will only use him, she's no good and bad news all around.

As for everything with Toni. That poor woman. Her mother makes me sick. Using her daughter like that. Ugh. And Roger... yeah. I HATE him with a burning passion. I am so glad Toni spoke up before Grace could interfere and really screw things up. Michael will never love you Grace, get over it. -_-

I loved the party scene. Lol Arianna got back at Michael for calling her thick. I died at that part. It was awesome. :D She even used his words against him. After all these years, he's still jealous of Jon Bon Jovi. Everyone has their celebrity crushes Michael. Just cause she's married to the biggest celebrity ever doesn't mean she can't have another celebrity to fill that place. Sheesh. Lol

As for Michael and technology... yeah. They just do not get along... at all. Messing with things on the computer and mimimizing windows and who knows what else. He jut cannot keep up with the times here. Geez. Lol It was even worse with the whole microphone part. Lol He thoughts he was going nuts! Poor Michael. :) Lol

Gotta say girl, that scene backstage. Holy crap. I'm not surprised they were doing that before Michael had to perform. Seems he indeed made her pay. Lol But then... it's Michael and Arianna. Lol So bad together. *Shakes head*

As for that group of guys.... definitely don't trust them. Not at all. Stay away Jimmy... stay away!!

Great work girl! Keep it up! I look forward to more. :D

Author's Response:

Awww you know what? me too...but I'm really glad people have enjoyed it and I hope they continue to enjoy it even after it ends. So thank you so much!! You've been there from the beginning.

Ah, Jimmy is a teenager with hormones haha and Shontelle is bad news, she likes the famous life, you'll see as we go along. LOL I know everyone is not fond of Jazmin, she could be a bit controlling but trust me she's not all that bad and she is way better than Shontelle, that's for sure.

Toni has a great "family" now. Ari and Mike will take care of her. Roger, ugh -___- no words. Grace, ugh -_____- even more no words.

LOL you know Arianna was not going to let that go. Mike is lucky he didn't get tossed in the fish tank for calling her thick. LOL. Mike has a vendetta against Bon Jovi LOL, he will never let that go. "Everyone has their celebrity crushes Michael. Just cause she's married to the biggest celebrity ever doesn't mean she can't have another celebrity to fill that place. Sheesh. Lol" <----- LOL IKR

LOL Michael and technology are enemies, it just goes to show you Mike is getting old haha XD

"Gotta say girl, that scene backstage. Holy crap. I'm not surprised they were doing that before Michael had to perform. Seems he indeed made her pay. Lol But then... it's Michael and Arianna. Lol So bad together. *Shakes head*" <----You know them too well LOL XD

Thanks girl as always...xoxo

more to come soon :)

 

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2012 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 150 - What about your friends?....

Ok first off, this was a great chapter!  Smh at Mike telling Ari that she was a little thicker lol He messed up. And oh my gawd! The relationship between Toni and her mother :( I mean but it's understandable as to why she would help her mom. I mean, it IS her mother. You can't help but to have a soft spot when it comes to your mom no matter how wrongly she may have treated you. I'm just glad that Michael and Ari were understanding and were willing to help her.

"I heard her talking to her mother on the phone. She was talking about taking money to her and her time in jail. Also, I don't know if you have noticed but she and Michael seem awfully close, don't you think?"

"I'm sure you misheard Toni's conversation and Michael teases everyone, you know that!" I shrugged it off with a chuckle.

"It's more than the teasing but hey, what do I know? I'm just the nanny" she said. "Just thought you should know"

Grace! WE ARE NOT HERE FOR YOU! Idk how many times I have to say that! Always trying to start some trouble. Her little ratchet self was mad after she say Michael and Arianna's reaction. And I'm glad that Ari didn't fall for her little scheme either. Ehhh I can't stand her! 

"That and because no one dared to talk to her when we were children. She used to walk around with this huge bubble coat that made her look headless. She scared a lot of children that way" <---this hand be cutting up!!!

She looked up and stood quiet. Too quiet so I knew she knew she was caught. But then she began playing with the collar of my shirt and said in a low voice "What I meant to ask was do you want sex? I could give you a lot of nights of burning, passion, love making" she then kiss me softly before sucking on my bottom lip seductively but oh, too guilty. "Or if you prefer it rough, I could that too"

"Arianna..." I dragged her name and she laughed.

lol she ain't slick.

"I'm sorry, baby" she said a soft, childlike voice as she reached to kiss me again. I let her kiss me before I added "Yeah, you are going to be sorry. Once the doctor gives you the ok...." I got close to her face. "I expect those promised nights. I'm gonna punish you good"

She smiled and said "I can't wait" before we kissed.

Ohhhh Mike and Ari are some freeaakks lol And noooo! Not Jimmy checking out another girl! I feel like drama is on the way. 

And did you purposely use TLC at the beginning and later mentioning Usher dating Chilli b/c if not that's an epic coincidence lol

Anyway, loved the update! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Awww thanks Shy!! And yes, MJ is so clueless sometimes lol and Toni had a rough childhood but she's ina good place now. She's strong.

"You can't help but to have a soft spot when it comes to your mom no matter how wrongly she may have treated you" <---You're right about that.

Grace tsk tsk I have nothing to say about her.

"That and because no one dared to talk to her when we were children. She used to walk around with this huge bubble coat that made her look headless. She scared a lot of children that way" <---this hand be cutting up!!! <---- I used to tease my friend this way. LOL. SHe had a huge Northface bubble coat that she used to wear with her huge tims in the early 2000s, the same one I told you about who I go to the gym with and I used to say that about her. But she knows I love her. She used to laugh...I was so mean to her LOL

LMAO Arianna did try, she ain't slick tho but she got Bon Jovi to play at her party and MJ got the sex so they are both even XD

LMAO at the Mr. Bean gif yes they are some freaks LOL

I chose the song at the end tbh. I had another song in mind about friendship and while I was editing the chapter, I was listening to TLC and noticed I mentioned Chilli, remembered the song "What about your friends?" which I love and then boom, it was the song for the chapter. My brain works in mysterious ways LOL

Thanks Shy xoxo

 

Reviewer: delavielove Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2012 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 150 - What about your friends?....

:')) FIRST AGAIN! I AM ON A ROLL!!! ♥♥ 

Yass! I love this song! Then again I just love TLC, lol. It reminds me of "Friends" by Jody Watley. I saw your preview on Twitter with this video, I was like "oooh".

"Would I sound careless if I ask her to at least hand me the deodorant I left on top of the sink? I sighed again. Maybe that wasn't the best idea" <---- LMFAO! Michael's so hilariously clueless that it's kinda cute XD. DEAAATH at the deoderant ending up in the fish tank. I can't!

I don't think Toni should buy her mother a house - it's no good that her mom put her through pain yet she still wants to help :/

:')) Awww, their talk with Jimmy was just darling! Lmao, that was too cute how he scared Mike and made him think he was going insane! I love how Ari can work the computer and Mike can't. LMAO he's just not tech savvy.

"I might not believe Arianna and Michael's marriage is real but I refuse to break the children's hearts. They are the only reason I am here" <---- I'm mad Grace admitted it though. She really needs to stop starting all this shit.

:'((( Aww, Toni's story is so sad! Waaahhh!! :'(( Aww, but MJ's a good man and he and Ari have good hearts, I'm glad they've accepted her anyway regardless of her being a "criminal". Toni can trust them, and vice versa.

:'))) Awww! Kristinaaaaa! Love herr, she's great, it's nice she could make it to Ari's birthday party, and LOL at their Usher convo XD Glad Ari had fun!

The third picture down on the leftside, is that Naomi with Adriana?

Oh and heeeeeyyyy Ari and Mike gettin' nasssteeeehhh ;) Hot

And lawdddd Jimmmmyyyy! Shontelle doesn't seem like good news XD My baby is growing up! Lawd this boy's hormones XD I can't keep up anymore! First he becomes a man and now he's looking at another girl! XD

And yessss I see you spared us from Bashir! Thanks girl! :'))

And wow, really, 20 chapters? Omfg! *_*

Me and the Bab Sibs loved it as always, dear hearts! xoxo

Author's Response:

Ayyyeeee get 'em Harlem...look at you all early and shit lol

Yes both songs are lovely and I love TLC, these were my girls.

LMAO Michael is so clueless sometimes smh, he needs some serious help. Arianna only reacted like any woman would by throwing his deodorant into the fish tank lol

Toni *sigh* she had a rough childhood but MJ and Ari are there. She found good people in her life now :)

I had to bring Kristina. That's Ari's girl. She had to be there:')

No. That wasn't Naomi Campbell..I forgot her name. I betcha it will come to later but there is a picture of Adriana and Naomi together.

Shontelle is a what I call a groupie. She wants some of Jimmy's D lol things heats up, you'll see lol and yesss LMAo at 16 Jimmy's hormones are all over the place LMAO

You won't have to read too much about Bashir, I promise. I can't stand that man anyway.

:(( 20 chapters, we'll see how it goes...

Thanks Lavie xoxo love ya!!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2012 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 149 - Little Jimmy is all grown up now/ I'm Bound....

First of all yay! for the update! I love the interaction between Jimmy and his parents. The bonding that they have is so beautiful.

"With a smirk on my face, I asked "If she was mean, you would have objected to me and her even if I told you is what I wanted. What about what I want?" 

"I'm sorry to disappoint you, Jimmy but nobody cares" she said with a smirk of her own making me laugh and then she joined in after me." <-- lol! She knew she wasn't right! Poor Jimmy.

"I sighed as I nodded. "I think he is more jealous about the fact that he knows I lost my virginity to Will"

"So what? That happened before you even met Jimmy. What were you supposed to do? Wait for him?"

"I wish I did" I mumbled to myself but Angie heard." <--

umhm Jaz you ain't slick...little fast tail. She needs a beating lol I'm jk.

"Oh yeah? Too busy to call his girl to at least let her know he got accepted to Juilliard and that he is coming to New York next week"

Angie...why you gotta go and put Jimmy's business out like that. Smh they better watch out for that one..."big sis" or not. She can't be doing that.

I noticed how Toni glanced at Grace, with a roll of her eyes, but I didn't ask any questions. I truly had no idea what was up with them. Maybe they were taking longer to warm up to each other. Grace was a complex woman, one you needed time to get used to.

"I really want this to happen with you" Jazmin said. I nodded and flipped her around and laid over her. I kissed her then and just like she asked I made her mine. That night, I gave her my heart and she took my virginity.

Jimmy got his v-card taken. Lawd...what if someone saw Jaz go in the house. And grandpa knows...he had to know. lol the wrinkled shirt. C'mon pop pop, you know what your grandson just did. Don't play. 

And OHHHH LAWD! Toni and her mom. I can't. I'm afraid of what is gonna happen. I hope its nothing bad.

And gawd...Mike and this interview...

I can't deal and it hasn't even happened yet. Lawd...I need to mentally prepare myself for the foolery of Batshit *cough* I mean...Bashir.

Anyway, this was a lovely chapter Drea! And you're so welcome for the gifs. <3 Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

LMAO you and this gifs..I can't deal smh lol

Jazmin was not slick, you she wanted the D lol

Angie is tough and she and Jimmy are not going to be the best of friends, you'll see

LOl at the Beyonce gif XD

But double ROTFLMAOOOOOO at the Johnny Depp gif, it just made Jimmy losing his v-card a lot more naughtier than I intended to be LOL I can't!!

I promise you that you won't have to read too much about Bashir, I can't stand that man anyway

And your gifs were perfect. Thank you so much!!!

Love ya

xoxo