[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2013 02:20 am Title: Chapter 18 - Only hope...
Oh, Julie stop torturing your friend !!
Thank you for great story :) xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2013 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Baby, be mine....
"It was a real relationship based on real love" <- that's a perfect love that I always dream about <3
He haven't done that unaccompanied since He was fourteen ? Seriously ? Lol to be honest, really ? *o* lol
This chapter is soooooooo hot ! I need some cold fresh air out there,,,, lol
You're very talented, u know that right ? XD
Author's Response:
"It was a real relationship based on real love" <- that's a perfect love that I always dream about <3 <---- me too :')
Mj was a little honest, eh? lol and was it hot? *blushes* lol
"You're very talented, u know that right ? XD" <---- Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2013 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 151 - U Got It Bad/I Like The Way You Love Me....
Lol! Jimmy and Angie kind of remind me of Martin and Pam. Remember how he was always calling her a dog. I think that Shontelle is going to come between Jimmy and Jazmin. I know that I have probably said it before lol Actually, tuna fish and celery does sound kind of gross and I'm 7 months pregnant lol I was a little annoyed that Toni's questions about the past brought up bad memories for Ari.But then I saw one of my favorite MJ videos and I was good again lol Toni and Mike are a mess too w/how they are always teasing each other. And the part w/Jimmy and mike talkin about sex. No kid wants to talk about the birds and the bees lol. As for Martin Bashir *BEEP!* *BEEP!* *BEEP!* lmao ROTFLMFAOO!!! Toni and Ari's conversation about basketball was too funny. Leave it to you, Toni, and Shy to be goofy lmao And I'm a Lakers fan lmao. I'm offically caught up and I'm going to bed. *Waiting impatiently for more* I want more! Moooorrreeee!!! lmao XD
Author's Response:
LOL Yes Martin and Pam were my inspiration to Jimmy and Angie. Martin used to call Pam a horse which I think is worse LOL..ahh...Shontelle, we'll see. Tuna with celery is ehhh lol Ah toni's nosy questions XD
"But then I saw one of my favorite MJ videos and I was good again lol" <--LOL
Martin Bashir Boooo!! I hate him too. I'm trying to include at least as possible.
LOL Shy, Toni and I are crazy. We are unstoppable LOL
Thx for supporting my story, Smokey love ya xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2013 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 150 - What about your friends?....
I think that Grace was beyond pathetic for trying to get rid of Toni and she's lucky that she didn't get fired. Toni's story is very sad. My heart goes out to her. Lmao! Awww..Mikey is still jealous of Bon Jovi. Its so cute lol Jimmy was amazing. Loved the video of him dancing. I sense that Shontelle will be a problem for Jimmy and Jazmin. And I don't trust those guys either. Mike performing Dangerous hfjffkkrkrikrorororl lol lol Mike got his revenge with Ari by having sex with her bacckstage before the show. Now that was epic lol XD
Author's Response:
lol Everyone is afraid of Shontelle. I'll just say you'll see XD
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2013 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 151 - U Got It Bad/I Like The Way You Love Me....
After starting this story 3 days ago, I'm finally caught up! Absolutely love this story, one of the best I've read on here! Although, I hate that we're now caught up to Bashir....I think I actually growled at my computer when I read his name in the story... >:(
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much for taking the time to read my story xoxo it means so much to me that you have enjoyed it. I hate Bashir too. Is about to get a little messy but I promise you we will have a happy ending. Welcome aboard! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2013 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 149 - Little Jimmy is all grown up now/ I'm Bound....
I kinda thought that Jimmy and Jazmin would make love. I won't be surprised if she gets pregnant and then Jimmy will have to drop out of school to support them. hmm...maybe they will get married. oh boy, Ari and Mike will really love that. As for Toni, I feel bad for her. I wonder how her mother found her. i feel like Mike is about to make the biggest mistake of his life by lettin that SOB Bashir in his life. Ari must be psychic or something XD
Author's Response:
gets pregnant? LOL damn Ari will kill Jimmy if he has a baby at 16 LOL ...:( yes Toni's life is sad but it is now getting better :) and lol nah Ari is not a psychic she is just very overprotective over her family :) thx Smokey xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2013 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 148 - Happy Birthday, Blanket / Speechless....
Toni is a mess lol. i almost wet myself when I read about her acting like a Italian woman. jimmy is something else too. I love tony Montana. Say hello to my little friend!" - Scarface,one of the best gangsta movies ever IMO :) Tommy Mottola is a evil blankey-blank-blank *beep *beep* lol!!! Aww...Paris is disappointed cuz she didn't get a little sister. She is something else. "Daddy, i told you to think pink." LMFAOOO #DEAD #ICant I love Eva Longoria. she is too funny. Oooo...for realz? *quickly moves to the next chapter* XD
Author's Response:
Smokey is back!!! Yay!! and lol yes, Toni is hilarious very much like real life Toni. I'm glad you had a good laugh xoxo Jimmy is a tease and yes, girl Scarface is my movie XD and lmfaoooooooooooo Paris will never give up until Mj thinks pink enough. Thx Smokey xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2013 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 147 - All In Your Name
Ok here I go with my review. First of all, I'm backkkkk lol Sorry i couldn't help myself. Hurricane Sandy was a ratchet mess and I hope that things are better for you guys now. If anybody likes Mike, its Grace and she needs to stop hating on my sissy lol I mean Toni and let her be great lol. Paris is a mess lol Ewwww!!! Are you serious?! Jackie chews tobacco?! *gags* That is so disgusting!! ROTLFLMFMAOOO!!! Toni, no just no w/the tobacco. Ugh! The Arvizos have arrived. I sense a lot of ratchetness ahead SMDH Oh no! Ari is in labor! I hope that she will make it to the hospital in time! Mike in the recording studio ajdhfhhfgggkgk3lwdllflfll lmao XD
Date: Jan 09, 2013 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 151 - U Got It Bad/I Like The Way You Love Me....
Oh so Jimmy and Angie got one of those Martin and Pam relationships.
Angie always cracking short jokes and Jimmy is always making animal jokes.
Nice! Cant wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response: Lol!!!!! Yesssss you are the first and only to catch that. I love Martin. Used to watch it all the time. So as i was writing the chapter, i was browsing thru pictures of Omer, trying to get inspired and the first thing i noticed was his height lol...and then "damn his short" came out of my mouth. I had already made Angie a loud mouth kinda girl so i figure why don't make them have a Pam and Martin relationship and Jazmin could be Gina, always trying to find the peace between the two lol. I was tired of everyone getting along. Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2013 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 151 - U Got It Bad/I Like The Way You Love Me....
*In my ghetto Riverside Cali voice* "Oh so its like that NYC you done brought our convo into your story" LMFAOOOOOOOO I just knew this was coming tho. *Jumps up & down & screams* HAHAHAHAHAHAHA Omer in real life is a LAKERS FAN PURPLE & GOLD BABY WHOOT WHOOT!!!! and you will deal LMAO XD
Okay so on to my review........
Ohhhh this is my song Usher U Got It Bad *Sways* LOL
Awwwwwww Jimmy giving that man his sandwich was so sweet :-) Little acts of kindness CAN really make a difference ^_^ Michael taught him well...... HEAL THE WORLD
Thank God for Toni's nosy ass questions LMAO I liked these flashbacks because it just reminds us (the readers) of everything that Michael and Arianna have been through, but no matter what they belong together and they LOVE each other :)
and I'm over here CTFU at how Ari got her nickname "SPANKY" Lmfaooo she couldn't pronounce "scampi shrimp with couscous" awww she's to cute bless her heart she tried tho :')
THIS video of Michael and David ;((( I remember I watched this on YouTube and I like legit cried my eyes out *sigh* it was so touching & beautiful, Michael was always a sweetheart and this is why children LOVED him so much. This is the side of Michael that people need to remember :) not the tabloid bullshit -____-
ROTFLMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Paris is to damn much...... she said 'CPR' DEATHHHHHH omg I'm crying this was to damn hilarious I cannot control my laughter right now I'm dying *takes deep breaths while clapping* LMAOOOOOOO
Can I just say I can't stand Angie? -_____- I just..... I'm not liking her already. But I'm glad Jimmy got her back with them comebacks *winks* GO JIMMY lol
Lemme not get emotional over Arianna going inside her childhood home :'( but it was nice that she went back awww all those precious memories.
Let me just act mature about this *clears throat* oh fuck it ........"BAM my Lakers whopped that ass mwahahahahahahaha" LOL jk jk I'm such a hot mess!!But damn you got fictional Toni acting like me (The real Toni) girlllll when I watch my Lakers I yell and scream and cuss like crazy I'm dead ass serious!!!! LOL and Ari better put that money in the swear jar and stop being mad 'cause Jimmy is on Toni's side *bats eyelashes* LMAO
Ughhhhhh Bashir is next :/ oh crap let me prepare myself for this *rocks back and forth humming* LMAO I just can't stand that evil man -_____-
AFHAKHFHFIHKHFJBJFABNDJVBCHDVBDDDFF these end notes tho......
1. Thanks for letting my Lakers win in your story :) and yessss NY Knicks are getting better I ain't gon' lie
2. WTFFFFF why is Julie and LMP coming back ? I'm so curious now
3. Jimmy's mistake is coming *gasp* oh noooo :((((
4. Hmmmmm I wonder what Michael is gonna help Toni with
5. Brashir ughhhh I ain't here for his ass :/ Oh Lawdd we about to be in part 4 of WFY? And its about to get messy? Drea try not to send me to the hospital Lmao ya know how I get about WFY I take it way to damn serious :((( LMAO jk I'm ready for part 4 Lets do this *claps excitedly*
THE PICTURES IN THIS CHAPTER ARE FREAKIN' AMAZEBALLS I LOVE THEM ALL I'M FANGIRLING SO HARD I'M ON CLOUD NINE LMAO
The new cover photo is Heavenly ^_^ I remember you said Adriana's arm was giving you a hard time lol but I think the pic turned out beautiful :-) your pics are always on point tho.
Okay lemme STFU and stop rambling like a weirdo lol Great chapter Drea I loved it and I can't wait for more :)
Love you xoxoxoxo Toni
Author's Response:
LOL, you know I will never put our private convos in the story tho, but this convo was too good to pass up and when the idea hits, you have to grab it XD "*Jumps up & down & screams* HAHAHAHAHAHAHA Omer in real life is a LAKERS FAN PURPLE & GOLD BABY WHOOT WHOOT!!!! and you will deal LMAO XD" <--- -________-
Yes, girl. That Usher song gives me life lol...yes, Jimmy is a good boy. MJ has taught him well. :') Heal the World!
"Thank God for Toni's nosy ass questions LMAO " <---LOL I missed the past so I had to bring some flashbacks plus I was dying to use those 2 videos of younger MJ and Ari. And I wanted to remind you of LMP and Julie and prepare you for their comebacks
"Spanky" I love that story. She had a lot of problem in the beginning with her english. She speaks it so much better and her accent has gotten better too :)
LMAOOOOO the way you laughed at the CPR moment reminded me how Toni in the story laughed about it, I was like O_O oh deja vu lol she was stuck on that joke while everyone had past it, but that's why you are Toni LOL....and girl, Paris is trouble LOL, talking about the CPR is sloppy. MJ must be a messy kisser LMAO. JK
Angie, she's just a tough girl, one of those girls from the hood but don't underestimate shorty "Jimmy" (LOL) he is quick with his comebacks XD
"Let me just act mature about this *clears throat* oh fuck it ........"BAM my Lakers whopped that ass mwahahahahahahaha" LOL jk jk I'm such a hot mess!!But damn you got fictional Toni acting like me (The real Toni) girlllll when I watch my Lakers I yell and scream and cuss like crazy I'm dead ass serious!!!! LOL and Ari better put that money in the swear jar and stop being mad 'cause Jimmy is on Toni's side *bats eyelashes* LMAO"
^^^^^^^^^^
Bashir = No comment
End notes reply: 1) you see, I didn't embarras you lol . I let you win and you know the Knicks got a good team now, don't hate lol 2) Julie and LMP...you'll see 3) :( Jimmy's mistake. Is not good :(( 4) MJ and Toni :))) again, you'll see
I'm glad you liked the pictures, they all gave me problems LOL. Yes, her arm is still bothering me but I'll deal for now XD
Love you, Toni!!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2013 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Craaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap!! Bashir's in now. This freaking sucks!! He needs to leave... we don't want him here. -_- Michael seriously needs to listen to Arianna and heed her warnings. I swear, he tries to pick a fight with her far too often with these kinds of things.
So maybe Jae-R isn't so bad. Shontelle though... ugh. I really don't like her. Especially knowing that Jimmy still has to make his mistake. I don't like the way that sounds at all. I am glad everyone is back together for a bit though. :) Jimmy missed his parents. :D
I died laughing when Paris caught Michael... performing CPR on Arianna. Lol! Yeah Michael, that's definitely what was going on. It looked sloppy. Lol I love her. :D
I'm curious to see what Michael will help Toni with. I love her so much. She just cracks me up. Lol As for Julie and Lisa-Marie... I hate that they're coming back. What more drama do they need to cause? Ugh.
Great story girl. Keep up the amazing work. :) By the way, love the new cover. It looks nice. ;)
Author's Response:
:((( I know. Bashir is such an idiot. I hate him but he is part of Michael's life, unfortunately. "I swear, he tries to pick a fight with her far too often with these kinds of things." <---He really does :/ he's very stubborn. He doesn't like to be told no. Kinda like real life, huh? :((
Nah, Jae-R is cool lol I wanted Jimmy to have some friends his age as he grew older. However, you'll like Jae-R even better when he saves Jimmy from his big mistake. Curious? You'll have to wait and see lol sorry but Shontelle, good girl but very misguided and those naughty and bad things of her that are attracting young Jimmy will bite him in the end. You'll see. And yes, Jimmy is very close to his parents. No matter how old he gets, he will still be a little kid at heart.
LMAO!! Paris has a little mouth on her. And we know how Michael is at explaining things, he don't make them better XD "It looked sloppy" LMAO
"I'm curious to see what Michael will help Toni with" <---You'll see :) and I told you Toni was no threat. She loves this family and she is a trip. Hilarious!! she's always cracking me up. Her personality in the story is a mixture from Eva Longoria (who real life Toni absolutely loves) and the real life Toni who is a trip to talk to.
*Sigh* LMP and Julie...you'll see
thx hun. I love this cover, is my fave so far. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2013 05:39 am Title: Chapter 14 - One more chance.....
He's definitely sexy <3 I love this chapter XD
read it myself twice ! Lol
Author's Response:
LOL Michael IS sexy!! I don't know if you've read chapter 16 but that one is hot XD lol Enjoy!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2013 12:49 am Title: Chapter 13 - A New Start....
Oh, don't make it so complecated ! lol
why Diana is there, and why she have to hold Michael's arm !l
this story really got me, I've spent all day thinking Michael and Ari <3
you're so talented writter, I love u :) I love this story XD
Author's Response:
lol sorry
"this story really got me, I've spent all day thinking Michael and Ari <3" <---aww :') it really made me go "awwww" lol seriously!!!
thank you so much for your kind words. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2013 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Fly away....
I'm so exciting Ari is going to fly away and see Michael <3
Hope she'll get wonderful and magical time in London ! Yaaaaaaaay XD
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2013 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 11 - She's Dangerous....
I had something bad premonition from Julie :(
Hope that she's a good girl and sincere friend, just jealous a bit at the time :)
I have to keep reading, it's going to be more interesting lol
I can't wait to see what will happen to them XD
Thank you <3 *Much Love*
Author's Response:
hmmm...Julie...my lips are sealed XD lol
I'm glad you are enjoying it xoxo