Date: Jan 18, 2013 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 152 - Take Ova / Perfect Nightmare / Murder, She Wrote....
FIRST LET ME START OFF BY SAYING ahfjahfjfaghfgfhagfhgfhvfhff AT OBEE AKA JIMMY SAYING "TE AMO" TO YOUUUU *squeals & screams* LMAOOOO OKAY NOW ON TO MY REVIEW!! :)
Awwwwwwww *pinches Jimmy's lil baby cheeks* lol He's so cute :) and my heart just smiled when Ari said...
"Only until I get married then he'll take my husband's name"
that was so damn sweet Ari knew deep down Jimmy was mean't to be her son someday :-)
*sniff sniff* awww the part about Jimmy breaking the dragonfly pin I just *sigh* poor kid he just wanted his Mom and dad back together :((((
I love how Ari bosses Michael around LMAOOOO and he just does it hahaha he knows who's boss jk jk but I enjoy reading the parts with Ari, Michael and their kids ^_^ they have the cutest lil Jackson bunch :))
Girllll I got Shontelle all wrong at first I was like she's gonna be trouble :/ but after reading this chapter I Loveeeeeeee her ^_^ she's definitely more Jimmy's type! Jazmin you gots to go Bew LMAO no but seriously the part about them in the studio recording together was like watching Michael and Arianna all over again *sigh* Awwwww :'))
LMFAOOOOOOO I'm Dead AF at Angie and Jimmy going back and forth with them insults I was Ctfu!! They're to much XD
Michael J. Jackson betta get his ass off that damn phone and give his Lovely wife some Loveeeeeee and Affection ;) Lmaoooo *get it Ari* hahahahahaha!!
Ohhhhhhhh what is up with Toni's ungrateful mother? and don't even get my started on her boyfriend getting another woman pregnant smh Poor Toni *whispers* I feel your pain :'(((
*DRAMATIC GASP* Omggg nooooooo Jimmy plz be okay I just cannot deal! My baby has to be okay *CRIES* This is to much -____-
I'm flipping out Drea the way you left us hanging :/ Plz don't keep us waiting to long LMAO
*wipes tears* Great chapter I hope my heart can handle whats coming next :((( jk jk I Love youuuu and thanks for everything (you know what I'm talking about) Even tho all this craziness is going on in my life I'm just blessed to know I have you as a friend and I appreciate everything ^_^ and oh at Just Good Friends playing as I'm typing this O__O I'm literally being stalked tonight by WFY LMAOOOOO shit just got real!
Luv ya
xoxoxoxoxo
Toni
The One and Only Official Waiting For You Promoter
Author's Response:
"FIRST LET ME START OFF BY SAYING ahfjahfjfaghfgfhagfhgfhvfhff AT OBEE AKA JIMMY SAYING "TE AMO" TO YOUUUU *squeals & screams* " <-----*screams with you* AHHHHHH LMAOOOO Don't get me excited about it again, Toni LOL. That Rihanna song (u know which one) is in my wedding song's playlist LMAO XD That boy better watch out LMAOOOOO
LOL stop pinching little Jimmy's cheeks. He was adorable thou :')
"I love how Ari bosses Michael around LMAOOOO and he just does it hahaha he knows who's boss" <--- *Arianna's voice* You got that right!! LOL
Angie and Jimmy are a mess. She can't be nice and he can't control his temper. LMAO but when they combine those things they are hilarious, I'm glad you think so too. XD
Aww and for fictional Toni, it gets better for her, you'll see :(((
And you thought bad about Shontelle? You and and everyone else LMAOOOO. Got YA!!!! LOLLLL She's cool. I love her ^___^
and now the new chapter is up so you could find out what happens next. Thanks, Toni love ya!!!!
And hold up, good friends came on??? O__o MJ is stalking us!!
Date: Jan 18, 2013 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 152 - Take Ova / Perfect Nightmare / Murder, She Wrote....
Please don't kill Jimmy off!! :(
Author's Response:
I will never :) New chapter is up now. You could find out what happens next. Thx hun xoxo
Date: Jan 18, 2013 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 152 - Take Ova / Perfect Nightmare / Murder, She Wrote....
I hope Jimmy and Shontell are okay and them fools needs to be locked up. I hope Michael and Adrianna press charges.
Author's Response:
awww yes, me too and Will and them fools do need to be locked up. Thx hun. You could find out now. New chapter is up :)
Date: Jan 17, 2013 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Congratulations
Happy 1300th Review!
Super envious right now, lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! You guys made it happen. I write because of readers like you and aww don't be XD thx again
Date: Jan 17, 2013 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 152 - Take Ova / Perfect Nightmare / Murder, She Wrote....
I they're okay (in reference the the chapter notes.)
I liked the chapter. Took a while to read since it was so long, lol.
Author's Response:
You do, huh? We'll see haha and Awww sorry for the length, had so much to cover and I was trying not to make too many chapters so if I could fit it in one, I try XD. Thx hun xoxo
Date: Jan 17, 2013 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 151 - U Got It Bad/I Like The Way You Love Me....
Bashir is in :O oh no!
Good chapter!
Date: Jan 17, 2013 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
She got Jimmy with the hand falling asleep thing.Did you make that up or what?
Some serious stuff is happening.I didnt like Jazmin and her ghetto ass friend anyway, now her dirty ass got Jimmyin trouble.I hope Jimmy and his friends are okay.I'm scared I dont know whats coming next.Cant wait for the next update
Author's Response:
LOL she really did, huh? And those are old jokes so I can't really take the whole credit for it. You never heard them? In the 90s they were all over the place haha
Serious stuff is about to happen for EVERYONE so stay tuned. Thx hun for the review :))
Date: Jan 17, 2013 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 152 - Take Ova / Perfect Nightmare / Murder, She Wrote....
OMFGGGGG, GIRL, DAMN.. I'M SPEECHLESS.. GREAT CHAPTER.. PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT ONE SOON.. PRAYING FOR JIMMY!!
Author's Response:
Hey Paula, I hope everything is better your way. And girl, you know I will never break my readers' heart. Thanks hun. New chapter is up now. :)
Date: Jan 17, 2013 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 152 - Take Ova / Perfect Nightmare / Murder, She Wrote....
"I smiled happily as I moved away from the crib to grab a black permanent sharpie and erased 'baby #7' from the chart and replaced it with 'James Aiden Mendez'.
"You are giving him your last name?" Mary asked.
"Only until I get married then he'll take my husband's name" I replied."
my heart!!!
"I hid in the closet while my mom finished the dishes and then when she was done and she had gone to her room, I crawled out of the closet and then I ran towards the kitchen. I grabbed the pin from the table and crawled underneath the table with it. I took out my glue from my pocket in my pajamas and began to paste the wing back on the insect.
"Don't worry, mommy. I'll make it all better. No need to have change anymore" I whispered."
"And Michael?" He turned around, unamused. I smiled at his expression. "I bought something rated r that I want us to try out when the kids go to school..later".
"Yo, short stuff. Your driver is mad slow" Angie told me. Jazmin hit her.
"Maybe is because he is trying to pull in a lot of weight. Why don't you get off here? and you'll see how fast this car could go"
OOOOOHHHHH
"Relax, Angie. I will never be caught dead being with you" I replied. "And the world wouldn't depend on us to procreate because you're so ugly, your mate most likely doesn't have to worry about birth control...your face will do just fine"
"You know Jaz. I don't know what you see in him. He's not even that cute. In fact Jimmy, you're so ugly, when you jerk off your hand tries to fall asleep.". Jae actually laughed on that one and then gave me an apologetic look.
I looked at her and simply said "You know Angie. I'd slap you but that would be animal abuse"
Ohhhh!!!
Jimmy had that comeback like a boss!!!!
Prince and Paris doing the Macarena...too adorable for words! They're so cute. I love Mike and Ari. They're such a beautiful couple.
I can't even begin to deal with what happened at this party. All I know is...Jimmy better be alright or the squirrels and I are coming Drea. I'm not kidding. Like I'm ready to blow a mother sucka up!
Like what the heck?! I just knew that that Will dude had to be packin' when he said he was gonna f Jimmy up. Like why is he mad though?! Jimmy ain't did nothing to him! He can't get mad because Jaz didn't want him. And lord I hope that nobody else got hurt because that will seriously be FUCKEDUPDOTCOM.
A mother's intution...Ari knows. She has to know. They always know.
Jesus! Jehovah! Allah! Vishnu! Shiva! Brahma! Ra! Zeus! Athena! Somebody!! fix this!!!
I can't even...I'm so done with that chapter. I just...BYE! -_-
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOOOOO Your gifs be on point XD The one of Robert Downey Jr had me in tears. Yes, I've always loved that video of Prince and Paris doing the Macarena. They have grown up so much now :')
"Jimmy better be alright or the squirrels and I are coming Drea. I'm not kidding. Like I'm ready to blow a mother sucka up!" <--- O___O Not the squirrels!!!
Jimmy is fine XD and Shontelle too. But keep eye on those two. Shit is about to heat up XD And Will, no words. He's those guys that you go wtf did I see in him? :/
And yes, chilllldddd...a mother knows. They always know. And LMAOOOOO don't be calling all the Gods and Goddesses in here. LOL *checks around for Zeus and the others*
Date: Jan 17, 2013 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 152 - Take Ova / Perfect Nightmare / Murder, She Wrote....
OMG!!! This chapter was.....undescribeable. If you dont update soon, I will surely die of a heartache. Make me go into early labor ( I am preggo ) lol. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! Angie and Jimmys ineraction has me in tears lol cause I am laughing so hard
Author's Response:
Awwww I'm sorry XD I hope you didn't go into an early labor because here I am to save you. The new chapter is up and LOL Yes, Angie and Jimmy are a mess. Jimmy has a temper, smh at that kid. he doesn't take no crap from anyone. Thanks hun xoxo
Date: Jan 17, 2013 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 152 - Take Ova / Perfect Nightmare / Murder, She Wrote....
So I saw your new twitter name and I was like "OMG LEMME GO READ!" And then I realized how much of a roll I been on because I been reviewing first! Hehehe *Harlem shakes*
This isn't my real review, this is just me reserving my spot as #1
Lmfaaaooo love you and the story girl! *runs to actually read*
:D xoxoxo
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOOOO Lavie, you are a trip!! I hope you like it. Enjoy!!
Date: Jan 13, 2013 05:03 am Title: Chapter 25 - Can't let her get away....
“But it's not who they say it is....I'm in love with a woman who understands me. Whodoesn't judge me. Who forgives my errors and flaws. A woman who loves you, myfans and doesn't mind sharing me with you but most importantly who loves me for me”
This line is amazing <3 it sounds perfect love for him :) I wish he could find his perfect love like this story in real life ,,Author's Response:
:((( I know, me too. That's the reason why I created Waiting For You. I wanted MJ to have the woman of his dreams :) Thx hun xoxo
Date: Jan 13, 2013 04:30 am Title: Chapter 24 - Have you ever?...
Renee is amazing ! She's full of love and thoughtful <3
This is damn interesting !
oh no, it's late night, I have to go bed now, but I can't get a sleep !
You have to take responsibility for distracting me from my work lol
Author's Response:
Renee is wonderful... I love her :) and lol sorry, get some rest xoxo
Date: Jan 13, 2013 03:58 am Title: Chapter 22 - The trap....
Ahhhhhhhhhhh !!! What just happened ??
Oh, honey I'm speechless , just need to read next chapter ASAP !!
Author's Response:
*sigh* MJ loses his temper tsk tsk
Date: Jan 13, 2013 02:53 am Title: Chapter 19 - Keep the faith....
OMG !!! What was that ? Ari is soooooo demanding lol
I thought she's a innocent pure baby girl,
but now she seems like a bad girl ! She's so dangerous XD
and Michael is even more sexy when he's beneath her <3
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOOO!!!!! Oops!!