[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2013 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 155 - Battle Cry....
Seriously, Bashit, seriously!?!? Definitely a creep. I remember reading about a ton of drama with the editing rights. I think he kept making him wait on it until it was too late and that was when Michael countered with the unseen footage. It's a shame how many people are trying to bring him down. I wish he'd listen to Arianna in here about that so what happened in real life doesn't happen. But alas... Michael is Michael. :/
Poor Shontelle though!! Such strong feelings for Jimmy and she has no idea what to do! And I don't know how Jimmy feels... sometimes it seems like he likes her and other times it seems like it's closer to a sibling relationship. I don't even think Jimmy knows how he feels! So. Much. Drama. >.> Although, Jimmy's gonna make me cry. :( Especially with how much he wishes Michael could live forever. :( So sad... it was hard not to think about what happened in all actuality. Especially when Michael started going through all the reasons he wanted to live for awhile, even if it wasn't long enough to reach a ripe old age. :(
I laughed hard at some of Michael's more stubborn moments though. :P Especially the whole beginning, where he felt invisible. Lol, poor Michael! I also laughed really hard at his desperate need to get laid. Oh man. He's killing me!!! He was practically pleading with her!! LOL! I loved him and I can't wait for more of this story. :D
I have a feeling things only get worse from here though. >.>
P.S. Thanks for the shout out! :D I thought that was really sweet. :) I know I was silent for awhile but you're stuck with me, lol. There's no way I could abandon this story, I'd miss it too damn much. :D As for New York, it was only cold the one night, we were fortunate enough to go when it was nice out. That was really helpful when we walked like.... 20 or 25 blocks. >.> Lol!
Author's Response:
Bashit is the typical money hungry journalist who wants to make some money by using Michael's name. Is disgusting!! Thank God Michael was fliming as well.
Jimmy tsk tsk...he is the typical teenage boy, so lost, so confused. He has no idea what he wants but thinks he is grown. Shontelle, so young, so naive, so innocent. But don't count her out yet, she is a big important character and you'll see why.
"I laughed hard at some of Michael's more stubborn moments though. :P Especially the whole beginning, where he felt invisible. Lol, poor Michael! I also laughed really hard at his desperate need to get laid. Oh man. He's killing me!!! He was practically pleading with her!! LOL! I loved him and I can't wait for more of this story. :D" <--- LOL!!! Yes MJ was so childish. I'm glad everyone had a great laugh though. The punch MJ gave Mark is my fave moment though for obvious reasons XD
"I have a feeling things only get worse from here though. >.>" <---- Alot of drama on the way -__-
And you are welcome. You deserved the shout out. You have been there with me and this story for a long time now. I appreciate it very much. And wow 20-25 blocks whewww I bow to you lol!! That's a great work out haha
xoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2013 09:29 am Title: Chapter 155 - Battle Cry....
this update! yass! I was so done at Michael and his childish ways.
This part right here...
"Is not like you are giving me any at the moment anyway" he mumbled.
I glared at him and responded "First of all, you are the one who falls asleep way before I do, only to wake up in the middle of the night to work in the studio and then goes to sleep around 6 in the morning to wake up by noon to then have me running around the whole city of where ever we are at the moment following your busy schedule. And second of all, I'm tired. I'm with the kids all day. I'm dealing with my own career and my mind is fried. I don't have time to think about sex with you"
"Ah! We have reached that part in the marriage where the wife claims to be too tired and the man has to jerk off in the shower. Tell me when your headaches begin" he said cutting a slice of cake for himself.
I got up and took the plate from him. He screamed "Come on, Arianna. You know one slice won't do me bad"
"The doctor said no cake. You need to eat healthier"
"So let my diet begin tomorrow" he said as he tried to reach for the plate I was hiding behind me. I moved away as I denied him the plate.
"No!...And for your information, I'm not the one neglecting you sex. You are the one who has been busy running around like crazy instead of focusing on our marriage so if you want your dick to get sucked then you need to be more involved in this relationship" He rolled his eyes, irritating me so I smashed the cake on his crotch, staining his pajama bottoms with chocolate as he looked down, in shocked. "There, sweetie. Why don't you make love to that then?" and walked away, taking my new laptop with me. He had some nerve!
lol Homeboy is going through the struggle. Ari is a strong one for resisting him like that especially with his charm.
As for Shontelle...ole girl is sprung. Poor thing lol And Jimmy is so lost. I know he has to know that she likes him at least a little bit. I still can't wait to see how the date goes.
Done at Mike knocking out Mark lol. Ari knows she's wrong for holding out on him like that.
And oh lord...here comes this interview -_- I have no words.
Oh! And the fact that the Arvizos are being rude and not respecting the property and stuff...that should have been a sign right there.
Anyway great chapter!!!! I love youuuu!
Author's Response:
lmaoooooooooo Shy, get out of here with that cat gif. LOL!!! But yes MJ was suffering for real, that struggle was hard and Ari of course didn't make it better haha.
And Shontelle, so young, so innocent and so naive. Jimmy, he's that typical teenage boy. He has no clue what he wants yet smh
The Arvizos were so out of line *Lavie's voice* ....I won't even go there -__-
Love you more Shy !!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2013 09:47 am Title: Chapter 155 - Battle Cry....
*reserves spot as #1*
*Namie Amuro voice* You need to be my number one, yup
Love ya, Boogie Down :'D :')) xoxoxo
Author's Response:
XD Love you Lavie!!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2013 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 154 - Whatever...I could only depend on myself
GIRL! I am so behind on reviews. >.> I'm SO worried about Michael!! I hope he'll be okay! Damn his lupus, damn it to the deepest parts of hell. I must say this though... I LOVE ARIANNA AND TONI! I am soooooo glad you added your friend into this story and that you added all these little arguments you two have. :P You guys crack me up. I hope you didn't actually get blocked by him, that would really suck. Lol
Getting back to the story though... part of me is glad Arianna is going to Julie's wedding and part of me isn't. I still don't fully trust her, I'm not sure if I ever will. I think I liked that Arianna had pushed her out of her life. :/ I'm also worried about Jimmy and this blind date. :/ I wish they wouldn't have made him go like this. Especially since he really doesn't want to. I wonder if that'll still happen since something's wrong with Michael. What I really enjoy though is that Jon Bon Jovi continues to come up in conversation. Especially since Ari found that picture of Michael and Jon. Lol She chewed him out real good about that. :P
Another thing I'm worried about is that documentary. :/ I am not looking forward to reading about that at all. Who knows how bad things will get after that. Sigh. I wish Michael would listen more and stop being so damn stubborn. >.<
Coming back to Toni. I'm glad she's moving on from Jacob. He doesn't deserve her and I know she can do way better then him. She deserves it. I really enjoy hearing more about her too. I love the way you're going about this. :) Highly interesting last few chapters. Keep up the awesome work!! I look forward to more. :D
P.S. Just so you know, I'll be in your city this weekend. ;) I can't wait!
Author's Response:
Hi honey!! I was wondering if you were still with me. I figured you were busy. Anyway, glad to see you are still here xoxo
Michael and his lipus. I honestly am curious to know how he did it in real life. It must have not been easy. He was so strong but yet so stubborn. He knows he could have slowed down.
"I LOVE ARIANNA AND TONI! I am soooooo glad you added your friend into this story and that you added all these little arguments you two have. :P You guys crack me up. I hope you didn't actually get blocked by him, that would really suck. Lol" <--- Aww this was so sweet. I showed this to Toni and she was so touched by it. "I love her already" was her response lol. Toni is very much like the Toni in the story without the bf and mama drama lol. I knew she would be a fun addition to this story and lol no I did not get blocked by Omer but I'm sure I am on his stalker list. I think he's afraid of me now -__-
Julie. *sighs* the wounds take time to heal but Arianna I think just wants to forgive and let go. I am sure she is not ready to be the best friends they once were. And Jimmy, that boy is too nice. He needs to learn how to say no -__-.
"What I really enjoy though is that Jon Bon Jovi continues to come up in conversation. Especially since Ari found that picture of Michael and Jon. Lol She chewed him out real good about that. :P" <--- LOL!! I have to bring little things from the past now and then. You know what's funny? I went to the wax museum here in NY and right next to the MJ statue, a young Jon Bon Jovi stood. I was laughing my ass off like "Oh my God, where is Arianna?" those two are meant to be talked about together. Arianna likes it that way lol!! ^__^
You were in NY? I hope you had fun!! It was cold during the weekend if I remember correctly though
Thanks hun xoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 154 - Whatever...I could only depend on myself
I loved how you posted videos from En Vogue and TLC that I never heard before. That was really cool Lol! Mike says that he is going to slow down. But I don't think that he can do it. He's like the Engerizer bunny. He keeps going and going lol I know I'm cray, but that's how I do lol. Julie is really determined to get Ari to come to her wedding. Maybe she has changed. Notice that I said "maybe." I'm not sure that Ari should trust her. I don't think that I do either. Girl, I wish that one of my friends would kiss my boyfriend, I would knock the shit out of her or try to kill her lol I don't play that shit. I don't think that anyone does. Toni is so strong and I really admire her. I know that it wasn't easy to tell Jacob to get lost. And he was so stupid for thinking that he could get her to take him back. I mean hello cabron you got another girl pregnant!! So,boy bye.*rolls eyes* Preach,Mikey! Preach!!! I loved the video. It was so on point and fdbfjfkfk,fg,gmmmgmgmhghmllll lol And the video with him getting an award was cute too. ROTLFMFAOOO!!!! Jacob deserved to embarassed by Jimmy, Prince and Paris esp Paris. Speaking of little Miss Paris, how cute is she? She doesn't want Jimmy to date anyone. She wants him all to herself Awww!!! Lol! jimmy was suckered into a blind date courtesy of Genevieve and Austin. Who knows? Maybe he will have fun.Oh no! Poor Mikey!! *cries* As for you, Toni, Paula, Lavie, Lala, and Shy, I always said that you chicks were cray. And now you know why lmao!!! But I love you guys even if I haven't really talked to you guys a lot on Twitter. *huggies* Epic chapter! On my the edge of my seat waiting for more, but don't make me wait too long jk lol. Love ya, girl xoxoxo
Author's Response:
You never heard those songs?? Wow, girl you are missing out. Those are two great albums!!
"Mike says that he is going to slow down. But I don't think that he can do it. He's like the Engerizer bunny." <--- :/ he really is. He works way too hard!!
Julie regrets it and yeah "maybe" she has changed. Arianna must decide what to do though. She doesn't need to be her friedn again but by showing up she will show Julie she didn't break her, you know...but we'll see what she does.
Toni is a strong girl very much like the real Toni. I love her!! Jacob had that coming and the kids love Toni so they had to stand up for her and Paris haha, she's the only girl surounded by these wonderful boys who love her so she hates to share them especially Jimmy ^__^
Yes, we are crazy haha Thanks girl for the review xoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 153 - The End Of The Invincible Era....
Oh, I forgot to talk about the flashback w/Renee. I loved how she stood up for Jimmy and the woman did deserve to be slapped cuz she had no business putting her hands on Jimmy. LOL! Renee didn't play! And the video was funny too and I laughed when that lady got her ass kicked too lol XD
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 153 - The End Of The Invincible Era....
I feel really bad for Jazmin cuz she lost her first love, but she needs to accept that she screwed up. I feel bad for Jimmy too cuz he really loves her, but I think that he realizes that their relationship is toxic. And I think that he will get over her in time. It's not easy to lose your first love and I know this cuz Chris was my first love. I really loved him, but he did me wrong and that's enough said for now. (I will go more in detail later one day.) As for Shontelle, I'm glad that she recovered after getting shot. I think that she should tell Jimmy that she loves him. But I can see why she wants to hold back. I know that one day that Jimmy and Shontelle will be together. Mike was so sweet for what he did for Toni andI hope that Toni will listen to Ari cuz she is a very sweet person. Julie. Well, you already know what I think about her and you can pretty much guess where she can go, right? lol The videos and pics about London were kgjgkglldlldfgkgjgjghjh lol And don't get me started on his speech #intensefangirling lol Loved it as always, Haley XD xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2013 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 154 - Whatever...I could only depend on myself
I was very happy to see Tony Parker in this, lol even if it wasn't the best of circumstances. He along with the rest of the "Big Three" for the Spurs and Jason Kidd are my favorite athletes. Go Michael for standing up to Matt and making it known who Arianna is with; too bad that asshole didn't seem to take a hint. Hope Michael is ok and gets help fast. Amazing chapter, as always!
Author's Response:
He's a good basketball player. I can't even front. Though I think you are the only happy to see him LOL. I saw him play live against the Knicks and he kicked ass along with Tim Duncan. Yessss, Jason Kidd, love him!!! *high five*.
Matt is an asshole and that is all I would say about him :x thanks hun for the review xoxo
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2013 01:23 am Title: Chapter 154 - Whatever...I could only depend on myself
Will someone plz get Michael sit him in a chair and make him stay there for like 2 months LMAOOOOOOO this man is to much he needs to settle down Jeez -____- He's making me feel exhausted. I really hope he does take it easy I mean clearly he's not 100% healthy :((( He needs to take things slower and let Arianna help him.
I love the video you used of MJ shopping with Uri and Karen ^___^ He's so cute, and the teddy bear moment always cracks me up lol!!!
I'm so proud of Toni for staying strong even though it was hard to let Jacob go after all they've been through *sigh* Wait this fool did not just pull out a ring and think this would fix everything :/ pssshhh bye! Thank God Toni didn't fall for that mess, and LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I'm dead AF at the Gif of Toni falling flat on her face (you know you ain't right for this) Thats something that really would happen to me lol *facepalm*
GET WAY IN THE HELL OUT OF HERE WITH THAT DAMN VIDEO OF KOBE GETTING HIT IN THE FACE TWICE :(((((((((
*counts to ten* okay I'm calm now lol!!!
Its good to see Ari and Kristina out having a good time :-) Arianna needed a girls night out after all the craziness with Mr-I-Cant-Stay-In-One-Place-Jackson LMAO
Hmmmm I wonder if Ari will change her mind and go to Julie's wedding?? I guess we'll just have to wait and see.
Jimmy Jackson is my Hero LMAOOOO I Love how he sticked up for Toni awwwww that was so sweet :-) Jacob was no match against the Jackson family they totally have Toni's back 100% ^___^
*GASPS* Oh no Michael :(((((( Noooooooo not a cliffhanger!!!!
Great Chapter Drea even though you hurt my Purple and Gold Heart LMAOOOOO But thats okay My LAKERS are still the shittttt No doubt about it *flips hair* hahahahaha here I go starting my shit talking again *grins* But you know I love youuuuu :-) and I know you'll love that audio I sent you on Twitter ^__^
Okay lemme end my review here 'cause its after 1:00 am and I'm getting sleepy *yawns* Luv Ya xoxoxoxo Toni
PS OBee would never block either one of us lol our tweets probably entertain him :-)))))
Okay for realz this time Bye!
Author's Response:
I always wondered how he did it in real life with all he had and yet smile in front of the world. What a strong man he was. Stubborn but strong!!...That teddy bear moment with MJ always gets me lol!! he was so clueless about the joke XD
I love Toni too. She is strong!! very much like the you ^__^
and you know you loved the gif!! You will deal lmaooooooo
"GET WAY IN THE HELL OUT OF HERE WITH THAT DAMN VIDEO OF KOBE GETTING HIT IN THE FACE TWICE :(((((((((
*counts to ten* okay I'm calm now lol!!!"
lmfaoooooooo I had to add that clip, it was too good to pass up!!! You know I love you!!
"Jimmy Jackson is my Hero LMAOOOO " <----Jimmy loves you!!
"Great Chapter Drea even though you hurt my Purple and Gold Heart LMAOOOOO But thats okay My LAKERS are still the shittttt No doubt about it *flips hair* hahahahaha here I go starting my shit talking again *grins* But you know I love youuuuu :-) and I know you'll love that audio I sent you on Twitter ^__^ "
"PS OBee would never block either one of us lol our tweets probably entertain him :-))))) " <--- So true though I'm sure I'm on his stalker list :((
Love you Toni xoxo
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2013 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 154 - Whatever...I could only depend on myself
Yaaaaasss at the update! Mike...*sigh* I don't even know where to begin. He was doing too much. Waaaay too much. Who do he think he was? Superman? smh all of that running around caught up with him :( I just hope that he's ok.
Loooovvveeeedd the scene with Ari and Kristina at the game. I remember when Kobe got punched!!! That made my year lol. That thing was too funny.
Done at Toni falling down the steps! She can't ever win lol. But its good that she stood up for herself. She's learning how to move on and that's a good thing. And the fact that Jimmy, Prince and Paris were there to back her up was even better. They're so cute.
And lawwdd for this date with Jimmy and his cousins. I hope that everything goes well with that.
I'm glad that Ari finally decided to give Julie a chance too. She was holding on for too long. They were too old for that. Kristina was right...forgive but don't forget. There's a difference.
Anyway, can't wait for the next update! oh and I love you too!!!!
P.S. I doubt if Omer would block y'all for that loool but he would have probably been reading those tweets thinking wtf lol!
Author's Response:
"Yaaaaasss at the update! Mike...*sigh* I don't even know where to begin. He was doing too much. Waaaay too much. Who do he think he was? Superman? smh all of that running around caught up with him :( I just hope that he's ok."
LMAOOOO I think he did!!! 
But he does have to relax. You know he's stubborn though -__-
LOL!!! Girl, that punch to Kobe was like my light to my Knicks heart though I know Toni is like -___- lmaooo
"Done at Toni falling down the steps! She can't ever win lol." 
Lmaooo she knows I love her. She'll live !! XD
"P.S. I doubt if Omer would block y'all for that loool but he would have probably been reading those tweets thinking wtf lol!" <--- I'm on his stalker list :((
Thx Shy Love you!! xoxo
Date: Feb 22, 2013 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 154 - Whatever...I could only depend on myself
Oop!! Matt better look tf out and stop!! You can't make googly eyes at Michael Jackson's wife and not suffer repercussions!! And omfg I was dead af with MJ and that teddy bear. He was so cute in that video; love his laughter *_*
He really should do some slowing down - for Ari, the children, but especially his own sake. His health is on the obvious decline :(( There's no reason to be so busy if you're so sick!!! MJ better take careee!! Dat was so sweet when Ari was telling him that he will always have her and she'll make time for him always *sniffles*
and it was perfect for Ari to hang out with Kris like old times. I was lmaaaao when she was talking about her husband barely moved the couch, but I DIED when you incorporated Chris and Kobe!!!! Lmaaaaaaaaooo I HOLLERED!!! I remember that shit, it was so funny! GO KNICKS!!!!
And I'm so proud of Toni! Jacob did her too wrong and she really needed to let go. He was nothing but trouble. To invest ten years and then mess up like that? She's a strong girl with a great support system in Ari, MJ, and their family.
I wonder how things will go with Jimmy and his cousins. Hmmm.....
And I definitely wonder how things will go at Julie's wedding. I commend Ari for deciding to go. It just might do her some good. At the same time, I hope she don't regret it. I be lmaaaoo, MJ always greeting Julie with "Oh shit!!" X_______X
Ughhhhhh a cliffhangerrrr. ANDREA!!! :(((( -_-
now I'm all worried about MJ :/
Girrrlll, you had me and the Baby Sibs at the edges of our seats!!! Definitely can't wait for the next chapter!!! Love ya!!
Author's Response:
haha yes, girl MJ and that teddy bear did it for me. He was so clueless at first XD and of course, MJ needs to slow down. I truly have no idea how he did it in real life because when I read he had lupus, inflamed lung, etc I was like damn boy, you are so strong..bless him :') but you know MJ, he is stubborn!!
LMAOOO I had to bring Kristina back. That's Ari's bff and lmaooooo girl, I'm a NYC girl all day every day (just like you). I am rooting for no one but my knicks (sorry Lakers and Toni) XD I saw that fight on tv and I hollered lol!!
Toni is a strong girl. She really knows how to handle hersefl (even after she trips and falls ) XD
" I be lmaaaoo, MJ always greeting Julie with "Oh shit!!" X_______X" <---LOL he's so silly XD
Thanks Lavie love you xoxo
Date: Feb 22, 2013 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 154 - Whatever...I could only depend on myself
Something told me to get on the site today, so I did, and whatdya know, an updaaaateeee!! *reserves my spot as #1* lmaaaaooo
Love ya Boogie Down xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Big kiss!! xoxo
Date: Feb 05, 2013 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 99 - Get me out of here...
I'm sorry I'm commenting so much but in this story I cannot contain my hatred for this bitch. Lawd !!! I really hope Michael opens up his eyes and realize she aint nothing but a snake
Author's Response:
Don't apologize!! I love to hear what people got to say for each chapter or for the story overall and yours are making me laugh and hide for my life LOL!! and don't worry things get better. Thanks for all the reviews. :)))
Date: Feb 05, 2013 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 98 - Don't Want To Fall In Love With You Again...
You're a wonderful writer but Lisa needs to die. Soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you and LMAOOO but Lisa is innocent LOL!! jk
Date: Feb 05, 2013 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...
Lisa ? Seriously Michael ? You even serious about life ?!!! This woman (Ari) loves you and forgave you so many times and this is the fuckery you do ??? Chillllleeeeeeee I not able. I need a break from this fan fic. Michael keep pissing me off til no end and right about now Lisa should jump in ah ditch - A VERY BIG ONE, with crocodiles and alligators, that snake from the Anacondas movie and Godzilla just waiting to rip her body up. I hope things get better and Michael and Ari make it cuz if not I will not have any more feels left in me. (I sound like my grandma watching her soaps, emotionally involved even though it's not real)
Author's Response:
O____O You got to the part where MJ marries LMP, huh? *goes and hides from you so you won't kill me*