Date: May 17, 2013 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 158 - Without You I'd Be Incomplete....
You know how much I love your story since I tell you on Twitter every chance I get, lol. Sad to see it end but like you said, everything comes to an end. Can't wait for the next update, don't keep us waiting to long, suspense is killing me. ;)
Author's Response:
Hi honey!! *waves* and yes, you do lol but I love it so keep on doing it. I'm glad you have been enjoying it. Waiting for you had its good run. It means a lot to me that you guys are still reading it. Trying my best to give you guys another chapter. :)))
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2013 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 158 - Without You I'd Be Incomplete....
Wow, this should be a lesson to them; a lack of communication can result in them almost giving up on each other... again. Loving that Ari is taking a stand on Bashir's bs; sadly it isn't over though. They'll need all the strength in the world for what's coming soon.
Author's Response: "Wow, this should be a lesson to them; a lack of communication can result in them almost giving up on each other... again." <---- YESSSSSSSS. Communication is very important and oh gosh, y'all have no idea what's coming. Stay tuned. Thanks for reading and the review. :)))
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2013 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 158 - Without You I'd Be Incomplete....
Whooosh. There was a LOT going on in this chapter but I enjoyed it to the fullest. Ok, first off, Mike and this Bashir thing...
I have no words. I just can't even being to process the feelings right now because it was just wrong on all types of levels.
I can see where Ari was coming from having to deal with Mike and his crazy decisions and then not being able to get through to him without him getting upset and being unreasonable. That's too much for a wife to have to go through but she did it. That's love right there.
As for Jimmy...oh gosh. This boy and his "lady" issues. Does he or does he not want Shontelle? lol
Prince, Paris and Blanket are adorable as usual.
I was done at Toni describing her date lol. Her nose was dying from garlic breath. looool!
I commend Ari for working to clear Mike's name by showing the private footage too. That was definitely needed. Michael better start thinking twice before he ever goes off on her again after what she does for him. smh.
Anyway, this was a LOVELY update! *sniffs* that its almost about to come to an end. Nevertheless, I can't wait for more!
Te amo, chica <3
Author's Response:
I know. Ugh! I really wish I could erase Bashir and everything bad in Michael's life. I hate writing it. Ari has a lot on her plate, is true but she loves him which is why she puts up with it but she is human so Michael shouldn't take advantage of it. LOL Jimmy is going thru a teenage moment. Michael will straighten him out. As for Shontelle, you shall see what she does *wink*
LOL! Toni is a mental case but we love her. But seriously though you know that actually happen to a friend of mine but she didn't get with him tho. Funny AF!
Te amo more, chica !! lol xoxo thanks for the review Shy.
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2013 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 157 - You ain't nothing but a LIAR....
Here's my actual review of Chapter 157 ^__^ (part two)
Damn I feel so bad for Shontelle in this situation with Jimmy :/ *sigh* but the good thing is her song LIAR SLaysssssss Yessssssssss I love this song so much :-) Let em know girl, let em know!!
WOW Ari and Kristina actually showed up for the wedding but in a way its good they went to support their ex friend like adults,
algkajkghakghkahgkjgkjagkjgkjgff I'M NOT HERE FOR LENNY AND HIS CONFESSION TO ARIANNA, TELLING HER HE LOVES HER *throws laptop* Nooooooooooooooooooo he will not come between my MJ and Ari or else I'mma jump through the screen and choke the shit outta him lmaoooooo
*SCREAMS* I knew it, I knew it, I knew it lmaoooooo JC Chasez is the mystery man lmaoooooo this is going to be interesting lets see how this goes :)
The video of Ari and Toni tho LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I love it *___* Deaddddddddddd AF at Toni eating in every scene lmaoooo you ain't right for that ;) lol
Shittttttttttttttttttttt drama is coming *sigh* Bashir's shady ass ugh I hate the way he talks to Michael like if he's not capable enough to be in a real marriage and a father smdh he don't know shit about who Michael really is :/ This stuff got me pissed off.
Anyways great Chapter and the pictures are AMAZING as always :))
xoxoxo Toni
Author's Response:
Ari has grown up so fast :') I still remember the 18 year old girl who let her emotions get the best of her.
Shontelle's song slays. She came down on Jimmy hard (no pun intended) lmaooo
tsk tsk Lenny. You thought we got rid of him, huh? Lenny ain't go nowhere yet. Remember what I told you about 2006. That is all *lips are sealed*
A lot of drama on the way, get ready. The end is almost near :) Love ya Toni xoxo
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2013 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 157 - You ain't nothing but a LIAR....
Lets just call this Part One of my review for chapter 157 lmaoooo cause I'm special and I like to ramble (as you already know) but you love it........
Yay this chapter is dedicated to me The one and only Toni ^___^ Lmfaooo jk but Thank you so much for all the sweet things you wrote about me in your chapter notes and secondly I loveeeeeeeeeeee my beautiful birthday gifts you sent me (including the bubble wrap) CTFU!! No but seriously those gifts are really special to me and I can't thank you enough :-) *wipes thug tears* :')
YASS high five for all the luck we've had lmaooo the Ustream is what started it *squeals* LMFAOOOOOOO I really did freak out when he gave us that shoutout tho! You probably thought "oh great here goes Toni being crazy again" lol that damn delay made me look crazy AF :/ Deaddddd at you hitting your head lmaoooo that part will forever crack me up!
I'm telling you Drea, OBee would never block us I think he lowkey enjoys reading our tweets about basketball and other random shit we tweet about lmaooo and OMGGG yessss at both of us getting RT's from him "Team Toni and Drea are unstoppable" ;)
akhjakhgakhjgahfhjfhjfhff girl when OBee tweeted me happy birthday! I flailed, fangirled, squealed, and screamed I was a mess lol I was beyond excited ^__^ lmaoooo the spam you got from his sis and his friend on twitter was funny tho! Maybe its payback for all the tweets we send him lmaoo
Okay lemme stop with my crazy ass rambling and just say that I had a wonderful birthday and of course shoutout to you for being such a sweetheart you're such an AMAZING friend and we can chat for hours and laugh about crazy shit lmfaoooo I'm glad that I've gotten to know you and I couldn't ask for a better friend/East coast sistah/wedding planner/wedding singer/Maid of Honor loool *MJ voice* "see you at the wedding" lmaooooo July is gonna be on and poppin' *smirks* I'll stop lol
Love ya Hunnie Bew :-) xoxoxo Toni
Author's Response:
Dayummm Toni you wrote two reviews *puts on glasses, gets something to make me chill and prepares to read* 
lmaooooo jk No smoking. But yes I do love your rambling haha
You are so welcome hun and I honestly think you loved the bubble wrap in the box more than the presents lol. I'm glad you liked them and that you had a great bday :)) 29 tsk tsk one more year to 30. We are getting old Toni :(((
lmaoooo that ustream was the beginning and the opening of us getting closer to Omer. Eva and Adriana are next XD and I was like "Why is screaming my name?" Until I heard him say it and them bam my head hit the desk lmaooooooooo don't laugh at my shock. I was really not expecting him to say our name. That was good team work *high five*
And you are right, you right...he loves us and you know this man *Smokey's voice* hehe and the RTs *flails*, you getting a reply from him *flails again* lol
I don't know why his fam and friends began spamming me lmao but I'm not complaining hehe
"Okay lemme stop with my crazy ass rambling and just say that I had a wonderful birthday and of course shoutout to you for being such a sweetheart you're such an AMAZING friend and we can chat for hours and laugh about crazy shit lmfaoooo I'm glad that I've gotten to know you and I couldn't ask for a better friend/East coast sistah/wedding planner/wedding singer/Maid of Honor loool *MJ voice* "see you at the wedding" lmaooooo July is gonna be on and poppin' *smirks* I'll stop lol " <--- Aww Toniiiiii that was so sweet *wipes thug tears* Love you!!!!! and July is our month *winks*
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2013 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 157 - You ain't nothing but a LIAR....
I'm Jealy!!!lol this was the chapter and dang shontelle told him!!!!
Author's Response:
lol!! Thank you so much Keke. And Shontelle don't play *flips hair*
Thanks for the review honey xoxo
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2013 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 157 - You ain't nothing but a LIAR....
lol there was so much in this compacted chapter that idk where to even begin lol. Ok first...Jimmy...bruh you messed up! As for Ari...that was nice of her to attend the wedding and take a picture with Julie even though she didn't want to lol. Now Michael...lawd it should have clicked in his mind right there when Bashir kept asking him those same questions over and over. Seems like he got the hint but at the same time it didn't fully click. *sigh* I can't wait to see what happens next. I love youuuuu <3 And yaaaasss again at Obee giving Toni a shoutout.
P.S. The video that you made of Ari and Toni was too cute! Toni was in the words of Erin from SGI "being a hungry hippo." lol
Author's Response:
Jimmy did mess up smh but is not the end of Shontelle and Jimmy and Feven haha is gonna get messy...lol Ari did the right thing by going. She is all grown up :') and yesssss you would think, right? but Michael likes to give everyone the benefit of the the doubt. He has always been too nice but then again that's what made him so special, well one of the reasons :)
Yaaaasss at Toni, girl had luck on her side :)) and lmaoooooooooo Toni was being a hungry hippo XD love ya more Shy!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2013 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 156 - I have Tunnel Vision for you because I'm in LOVE....
First of all let me just say THANK GOD your tablet incident last night was fixed, then I wouldn't even be here leaving my review *sigh of relief* and Yesssssssssssss Happy Birthday to Shy ^__^ I hope she had a wonderful 21st Birthday :')
Okay now on to my review..........
Well look at Lil Miss Feven all bold and not shy about hiding her feelings for Jimmy O.O and even asking him out on a date!! She seems like a nice girl but I hope she don't end up hurting him like Jazmin :/ But I won't judge her "YET" lol and Jimmy seem's to be feeling this girl by agreeing to go out on a date with her, So we shall see what happens with this.
ahfkahgahghfkagghhgkhgakgjkggff wait hold up! Jimmy and Shontelle just kissed *SCREAMS* omgggg I did not freakin expect that to happen!! I'm speechless "wow" its only obvious that Jimmy and Shontelle do have feelings for eachother but now with Feven in the picture and Shontelle seen Feven hanging out with Jimmy and his mom and *gasp* that kiss on the cheek Feven gave Jimmy Ahhhhhhhh poor Shontelle I know she must feel so hurt and like she's been played by Jimmy :'( This is about to get complicated.
Oh boy now on to this Bashir interview -_____- This can't be good, and can do some damage to Michael's career and most importantly to his marriage *sigh*
I loveddddddd how you found a way to bring Noémie Lenoir into WFY I just got the best of both worlds in one Chapter lol Waiting For You and She Got It *squeals*
Ari: "If you got a chance to meet her, would you do her?"
MJ: "Where are you? Are we still married?"
Lmfaooooooooooooooooooooooooo Michael ain't right for that lol and he was having to much fun checking out all the pictures of those models *scoffs* Men!!!
*sings* "Michael and Ari just did the nastyyyyy in the Jacuzziiiiiii and they loveddd itttttt" LMAOOOOOO Jeez finally this man got laid lol Ari been holding out on him for to long! GET IT ALL MIKE GET IT ALLLLL
*throws self on floor* Mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn here we go with another embarrassing Toni moment lol Dreaaaaaaa will you ever let Toni be Great? Lmaooooooo that was Hilarious AF and Jimmy aint right for shouting out that Toni sings while alone in her house and those nicknames he gave her -______- looooool
Oh and woooo hoooo you used Tunnel Vision in this chapter I was so excited cause that's one of my fave songs on Justin TimberSLays new album *___*
As always I had a blast reading this chapter love ya Drea xoxoxo Toni
Author's Response:
Bless that girl who helped me with my table O:) and yesss get it Shy, she is 21!!
Feven is a nice girl and she is bold but Jimmy needs that. He needs to be told what is wrong and blah blah. Jimmy and Feven is gonna be a rollercoaster and don't cound Shonny out cause she will always be there :)
"Oh boy now on to this Bashir interview -_____- This can't be good, and can do some damage to Michael's career and most importantly to his marriage *sigh*" <--- Stays quiet
LMAOOOO Michael ain't rightt teasing Ari like that but she knows he loves her even if he finds Noemie sexy. And I had to bring her in. Noemie is a wonderful model and I know how much Shy loves her. Plus. Noemie and Adriana did walk down the runway together :))) And of course I love SGI.
"*sings* "Michael and Ari just did the nastyyyyy in the Jacuzziiiiiii and they loveddd itttttt" LMAOOOOOO Jeez finally this man got laid lol Ari been holding out on him for to long! GET IT ALL MIKE GET IT ALLLLL" <---- PREACH TONI PREACH LMAOOOO
That JT song is my fave from his album so far. I had to use it.
Thx Toni much love xoxo
Date: Apr 14, 2013 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 157 - You ain't nothing but a LIAR....
I'm sooooo ready for the next chapters!!
Author's Response:
You ready? Let's go!! ^__^ is gonna be a bumpy ride.
Thanks for the reviews. Much love xoxo
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2013 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 156 - I have Tunnel Vision for you because I'm in LOVE....
sajglrhgvlhvelasvghrelgvhrelgvhelsahvlwraghvrlegvehvwr oh my gawd! lol Drea! When I first read Michael talking about the eyes I knew from the start that it had to be Noémie! Ugh! My feels right now lol
As for the chapter...oh lawd! Ari just knows that something isn't right with Bashir. Lawd I just can't wait to see how everything else plays out with him. And yass at her deciding to go to the wedding.
As for Toni lol she stays getting embarrassed.
Yasss at Mike and Ari getting it in. She knows she wasn't right for keeping him feening like that but it was all for his health so he reaped his reward for being a good boy lol.
I was done at Mike talking about the models resume pictures and bra sizes instead of doing what he was supposed to do....smh just like a man. lol
Lawd at Jimmy kissing Shontelle and then running off smh. He's just like his daddy...running away from his feelings like that. And now Feven is in the picture. This is a mess! lol
Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter and thank you, thank you, THANK YOU again for the birthday shoutout. I love you! <3 xoxoxo
Author's Response:
lol!! SURPRISE!!! I had to bring Noémie. It was your bday :)) I hope you had a great thuggin' day :))
Ari is grown :') she made the right decision by going to the wedding. She knew she would regret it if she didn't go.
"As for Toni lol she stays getting embarrassed." <--- lol she will deal!!
"Yasss at Mike and Ari getting it in. She knows she wasn't right for keeping him feening like that but it was all for his health so he reaped his reward for being a good boy lol. " <---- and he bop bop bop was loving it ^__^
You know, Mike can't take anything seriously. He is such a man lol
Jimmy doesn't know what he wants but his fear made him lose a good friend but this will make both Shonny and Jimmy stronger. You'll see :))
"Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter and thank you, thank you, THANK YOU again for the birthday shoutout. I love you! <3 xoxoxo" <---- I love you more Shy!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2013 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 157 - You ain't nothing but a LIAR....
This chapter was crazy! What's up with Lenny though, really? And the Bashi[t] mess continues; I just know the next part will be full of drama. Can't wait!!
Author's Response:
Lenny tsk tsk you though we got rid of him huh? He's not going nowhere, that is all I will say. And yes more drama, tears, pain on the way, stay tuned. Thanks for the review xoxo
Date: Apr 14, 2013 11:28 am Title: Chapter 156 - I have Tunnel Vision for you because I'm in LOVE....
YASSSSSSSSSSSS You're back. I can't wait for another long ass chapter. They're the best. What if Shontelle or Arianna ends up pregnant? I'd die. Then cry.
I like the drama between Omar and Shontelle its... interesting.
Please update oxo
Author's Response:
I'm back!! :))) and I just did, I just posted a new chapter just now ^__^ Enjoy!!
And Shontelle and Ari pregnant? ooohhhh the wheels in my head are turning XD
Thanks for the review :)
Date: Apr 12, 2013 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Hey girl! I haven't been able to read this story (Been so busy with my own story and with studying and such) But I just wanted to tell you that I LOVE all the photos and banners that you have in it! They all look so great and you incorporated them so awesomely! I just had to stop by and tell you because I I always see it when I'm checking my pages and I love it so much. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Hi honey. Is nice to see you here. I totally understand, is hard to keep on with the reading, writing and our own lives. No worries. Though I need to catch up on your story. Your story is one of my faves here, always been.
And thank you so much for your sweet compliment. I try to give everyone a great visual. Much love xoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2013 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 155 - Battle Cry....
This chapter was just the right amount of humorous and serious lol. Lmao it was funny in the first part when MJ was speaking and Ari and the doctor ignored him.
"That explains the extra love handles you suddenly got" I told Michael.
Michael just crossed his arms and scoffed before he said "Pfft...You know you love my body"
AND
"I. am. not. doing....yoga!!" The doctor and I looked at Michael.
"Why not?" I asked him.
"Is all mental. That don't work. Breathe in. Breathe out. Stand like a tree and fly" Michael mocked the class.
"How can you stand like a tree and fly at the time?" I asked him with a giggle. <------- LMFAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOO
Michael really should be more considerate of his health though lol. Like, situations like those are scary and he sitting there being all childish. Everyone else around him is worried about him, and he needs to get more serious about it.
And awwwwwww at Jimmy being worried about Michael. Their relationship is so sweet ^.^ :'-))
I LOVEEE the flashback photos of MJ & Ari omfg :D
And lmfaaaooo at the story Jimmy told Shontelle. I'm glad that their friendship is still strong. For some reason, I just can't see them as romantically involved, but nonetheless, I hope that when Jimmy gets back into the dating ring he don't get hurt lol.
Lmfaaaooo and I died when MJ and Ari were discussing the fact that MJ wasn't getting the nookie. I was ctfu X______X They was all like "let's never say that again". I cry X____X
Yasssssssss at Arianna/Adriana's boxing though! Lol, Mike better keep up with her! And I just smirked the entire time while reading about MJ punching Mark like that...like "really MJ" hehehehe smh
And oh boy...here comes trouble....
Great update! Loving this song by Shontelle! Love ya xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Hi Lavie,
LMAOOO MJ was acting so childish but he knew Ari was right. And LOL! he sounds like my bf when I went to the boxing training thing with him. I was like "I can't do anymore sit ups" and he's like "Is all mental. Snap out of it. What do you prefer to do? Yoga? That ain't no workout" and I was like -__-
And the photos yesss...they came out good. I have so many that I wanna show just have to find a good place to show it :))
Shontelle, she is a sweet girl but she is not ready nor is Jimmy ready to be his gf yet. You'll see :)
lol!! I hate that word "Nookie"
Adriana/Arianna be killing it with her combos. She goes faster than me -__-
Yes, a lot of trouble and drama on the way. And I love that song of Shontelle. I'm glad you liked it too.
Much love xoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2013 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 155 - Battle Cry....
LMFAOOOOOOOOO I cannot even begin to deal with Mr-Michael-Jealous-ain't-getting-any-sex-Jackson lol
Like did he seriously just knock out that dude Mark??? Lmaoooo I'm dead AF he ain't right for that smh smh
But I hope Michael listens to Ari and the Doctor he needs to start taking better care of himself and his health. Don't make me go through the screen and kick his butt Lmaooo oh wait I think Ari would be better at it werkkkkk bewww she can throw a hard punch. She'd knock his ass out hahahahaha jk jk
*squeals* the picturessssss ^___^ Omfgg they are TO DIE FOR!!! I loved them all but I especially loved the pic of MJ and Ari cuddling :'))
YASSS @ MJ watching Hocus Pocus me and my sister love that movie, we watch it every Halloween *sings* I put a spell on you and now you're mine...... lol
Can I just say how much I loveeeeee Shontelle! She's such a sweetheart I can totally see her and Jimmy as a couple :-)) *smacks Jimmy on the head* "HELLO WAKE UP THIS GIRL IS IN LOVE WITH YOU DAMMIT" lol
Oh and I'm gonna need MJ to stop saying "Nookie" that word is just ugly to me LMAOO just say sex, make love, fuck anything but Nookie!!! hahahahaha I'll stop!!
"Ah then we must think of a way to tease her when she returns" Michael said making me giggle.
CTFU MICHAEL CAN YOU NOT!!!! Lmaooo that lil jerk always has to be picking on Toni lol
Oh @ MJ and Ari playing match maker O__O lol hmmmmm I wonder who "J" could be?? (I think I know but I'll just wait and keep quiet) :X
Ugh not Bashir *throws laptop* Lawwddd Jesus give me the strength to not kill this crazy creepy slim ball -_________-
Another Great Chapter Drea I loveeeeed it as always and once again I'm writing you a super long ass review Lmaoooo I have no "Mute Button" Oop I shall behave myself and stop being shady hahahahaha Luv ya Hunnie Bew and I can't wait for the next update xoxoxoxo Toni
PS thanks for the shoutout *____* Awwww I'm so glad I could help out, and you just went and scored another homerun, slam dunk, touchdown with this chapter I loveeee how you took my suggestions and just SLayed it with your creative mind, werkkkk bewww you're the GREATEST!!! lol okay lemme shut up now and post my review :) Bye!!!
Author's Response:
CTFU!! Yes he did. MJ punching Mark on the face is my fave part haha. I was imagining that scene for two weeks before I wrote it in.
haha the pics. I thought they were cute. Is funny you liked the pic that I was NOT going to send you. XD
And girl, I loved Hocus Pocus, used to watch it every Halloween and Shontelle, isn't she amazing? She truly is a sweet girl in the story and in real life. ^__^
I always hated the word Nookie and the song (-.-)
You know Michael loves him some Toni. His teasing is his way he shows you/her he cares XD
I know the readers do not know who "J" is but you must know. We talk so much about everything that I think by now you know what it is in my head. Have to find ways to surprise you XD
And yes, girl you deserved the shout out. You helped out a lot and from there my creative juices flowed. Thanks again hunny xoxo love ya you little troublemaker