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Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2013 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 162 - I'm Not Giving You Up....

Great, drama, my favorite. -_-

So happy to see Michael and Arianna getting along again, I hate when they fight. I like that they're actually fighting to make this marriage work. I think Toni coming around definitely helped, she's good at smacking some sense into them. Speaking of Toni, I cannot believe her baby was finally born and it was a baby girl!! :D I cannot wait to find out the baby's name! :) Poor Arianna though, unable to handle the actual delivery of the baby. :)

Arianna's father is driving me crazy with how he is with Michael. I really wish he'd be a bit more forgiving where he's concerned. I mean, I can understand why he was so mad but Michael makes Arianna happy, they're good together. Despite all there fights and break-ups they've returned to each other, that means something. You know? I'm hoping he'll lighten up a bit soon but I'm not sure with the drama ahead. Sigh.

Those kids though. I cannot believe they tied Arianna's father to a chair and messed up the house so badly. I thought they were much more well-behaved then that. Un-freaking-believable. I did enjoy seeing what Jimmy did to Jermajesty though, even if it was turned against him in the end. I really loved the scene between Michael and Blanket, I thought that, that was really sweet. It was actually one of my favorite parts. :) His kids make him so happy, it's awesome. :)

As for Jimmy... I'm glad he resisted Shontelle like he did. That would not have been a good idea, although, I'm not sure letting her kiss him was smart though. That might create a whole new set of problems between them. Even though, I'm glad Jimmy's trying to sort himself out before even attempting a relationship with Shontelle. I'm also super glad he told Jae the truth, no sense in lying to his boy, it just makes the situation ten times worse. I think being single for a bit will be good for Jimmy. :)

Michael and Arianna though... damn. That is all I have to say there. I can't believe she went and seduced him in his car, in that parking lot. Michael is a lucky man, I'll give him that much. Toni's right, they are freaks. Lol! :D I laughed my ass off at how some of Michael's thoughts sounded where Arianna was concerned. He can be a concieted ass sometimes, butI love him anyways. :P I loved seeing bits of their past relationship too though, they've come a long way since the beginning, literally been through hell and back. Crazy.

Great work, girl!! Loved that chapter and cannot wait for your update! :D



Author's Response:

oh come on you know you all love drama lol

Yes, Michael and Ari are so good when they are calm, really bad when things are bad. Yikes, is like a rollercoaster but they will be fine...I hope X_X.... Toni's baby name is revealed in the next chapter :)

lol everyone is tired of Arianna's dad *sigh* he is tough but I have a feeling Mike and he will be alright.

Looool yes those kids were a mess, they knew they couldn't get away with what they did and yes, the Blanket and Michael moment is my fave part as well. I love Blanket, he's so adorable and I felt bad for making MJ punish him lol but how can you resist his little face? *__*

Ay, Shonny and Jimmy, those two are another mess and a half....they will find their way...if its meant to be they will get there and if its not then they will never throw away their friendship. :)

lmaooo now you know MJ and Ari are freaks but with a husband like Mike how can you blame her *wink* 

 New chapter is up now, I hope you like it and more to come soon and as always thanks for reading and reviewing, honey. xoxo Much love!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2013 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 162 - I'm Not Giving You Up....

Lmfaaaooo "drama ahead" and a warning to get ready is highly upsetting to me :(

This chapter was a great escape from all the extra dramatic antics! 

Arianna's dad was annoyingly extra, though. I was just like "sir, can you not?" Smh

TONI HAD HER BABY!! :-D (^____^)/ Lmfaooo, she'll make a fun, interesting mom, but she's got loving people around to help her :)

Lmfaaoooo sbmjvebrsibavaergve Obee was wrong as HELL to do Jermajesty like that! Lmfao! And I'm through with the kids being bad as hell and causing all that trouble!

That flashback of MJ and Ari was hottttttttttt! *sizzles* Yessss freaaaaaks!

Rushka BEST NOT be trouble Andrea! I'm watching youuuuuuuu



Author's Response:

lmaoooo sorry but I thought I shall let you know but now I think I will just surprise y'all from now on lol

yes, we needed some time off before the drama :)

Arianna's dad is a tough cookie, reminds me of my dad ( ._.)

You should know by now that Ari and MJ are freaks lmaooo

Watching me, what did I do? I haven't done nothing yet lmaooo love you !!! xoxo

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2013 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 161 - Can you teach me how to be forgiving....

LMFAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOO THAT GIF OF MICHAEL & LMP THOUGH!! The tears are sooooo real lmfaaooo!

I love that song by LMP too, her album was really good imo. I can't believe she'd lie and say MJ called her, knowing it was she who called him! She probably just did that in case Ari was watching, and just because Michael had so much going on.

The beginning with Ari talking about their legal separation and how stressed and upset she was made me so sad and unable to deal :( They'll get through it, I'm sure, because they're resilient as HELL. Lmfaaoo they done been through the true struggle, but there's just that much love in the world I guess.

And Gina has got to CHILL - if it's even the real her. Like, she got some true nerve popping up out of thin fucking air demanding to have rights to a child she didn't want. It's definitely all about the money. She wants to find some type of way to benefit. I'm like Ari - Jimmy's become so known, how the hell she can say she didn't know where to find him? S M H

Toni's just a bundle of funnnnnn! ^____^

And LMFAAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOO GRACEEEEEEEEEEEEE iaebvgiebifvbava

Her struggle was soooooooo real. I wanted to throw up reading about her in her lingerie and all hot and wet and *GAGS* Lmfaaaaaaaoooo but I was DEAD AF with everyone's reactions to it o m f g

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"She also said she didn't like Toni and asked if dad slept over" Paris added, ignoring Grace.

"Why did you want to know if I slept over?" I asked Grace.

"And what's wrong with Toni?" Jimmy added making us all look at him. He looked at us and shrugged. "What? She's kind of hot"

Don't even try it" Arianna told him.

"Eww, mom. Please I would never. Toni is too old and like my sister"

"And pregnant" Paris added as she hit Jimmy.

"I know" Jimmy replied to Paris annoyed.

"So that should be a good reason to not think of her that way" Arianna told Jimmy before she walked into the room and came to stand beside me. <------ LMFAOOOOOOOO

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"Jimmy, take Paris back to her room and check on your brothers"

"No, I want to see what happens next" Jimmy said.

"Me too" Paris added. <---------- keabivbuawekbvianvmlasnx

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Grace seemed hurt by my answer and asked me "Where should I go? My life revolves around you"

Still stunned by her words and actions, I simply said with a shrug "I don't know. India. I heard they have good weather all year round" <------ LMFAAAOOOO vejivrbvervb iSZAevw MICHAEL! I CRIED SOOOOO HARD!

Lmfaaoooo I knew Grace was crazy af. CRAZY. Lmfaaooooo

I'm so glad MJ and Ari are going to work it out. They're too good for each other, a wonderful match, and they've got too much of a good thing going to throw it all away. Michael should become smart, lol. Yes, he gets in horrendous, unfortunate events that truly benefit no one, but he's only human. He's just gotta guide himself better and become less naive....

Loveeeeeee the photos!



Author's Response:

Laviee!!! Hey boo!!

lmaoooo I love that gif of LMP and MJ. Who ever did it is a genius!!...yes, I think LMP's last album was good. She did her thing....Ari and MJ, what can I say about those two? Like you said, they been thru worse but it is not over...Gina, no words...you will read more about that situation....Yes, I love writing Toni. She's fun!!!

lmfaoooooo I think you guys knew that Grace was going to try something but Paris' confession just made it so much easier for me. She was really nuts! I had to include the India thing! lmfaoooo

Thanks, Lavie xoxo

Reviewer: mj2675 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2013 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 91 - I'll Stand By You....

Hi, I just started reading your story a little while ago, and I absaloutly love it!! It is so realistic and I love how you wrote it with real events! I cant wait to keep reading your story. Your an amazing author! Please Keep writing :)



Author's Response:

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Thank you so much for reading my story and for your sweet compliment!! I'm so glad to hear that you have been enjoying this. I tried to make it as realistic as possible to make the reader feel like Arianna and Michael's love is real 'cause in my mind it is ^__^. This is my version of what if Michael would have found someone he truly loved in his life, I believe he would still be here. More to come soon and I hope to see more of you. Thanks again!!  photo michael_jackson__s_kiss_on_the_hand_wave__gif__by_miyuki4117-d57mi0a_zps87355e1d.gif

Reviewer: mj2675 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2013 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 91 - I'll Stand By You....

Hi, I just started reading your story a little while ago, and I absaloutly love it!! It is so realistic and I love how you wrote it with real events! I cant wait to keep reading your story. Your an amazing author! Keep writing :)

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2013 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 162 - I'm Not Giving You Up....

Tsk Tsk at Arianna's father talking to her as if she's still a child smdh like "Dude you need to relax" lol Ari and MJ do have their problems no doubt about that no marriage is perfect DUH! I just don't understand why Ari's dad is so quick to tell her to leave Mike smfh he knows he ain't right for that, and the flashback was HOTTTTTT AF wooooooooooo!!!! Mike and Ari know that they're freaks ;) quit acting all innocent Ari I SEE U

"Toni giggled. "Is he always in control or are you?"

"I gasped. "I'm not answering that." I said with a laugh making Toni crack up."

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU I was so done at this connversation

I can'ttttttttttttttttttttttt lol

and DEADDDDDDDDDDDD at Toni mispronouncing Madame Tussaud's ctfu she's a hot pregnant mess looool

SKAFHAGFYAQUEYAHJDKJBHGFVHAGEHDHDFHDFF TONI HAD THE BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMFGGGG

(pretend that's JC in the gif lol)

and awwhh poor Ari she was so close to fainting lol Thank God she didn't tho lol she saw wayyyyyy more than she bargained for O__O

*SCREAMS* why are the Jackson children so out of damn control in this chapter lmfaoooooooooooooo I hollered at that part! Tsk Tsk Jimmy is supposed to be setting a good example for the younger kids but instead he was the worse one shame, shame lol and awwww poor Blanket :((( he didn't know any better he was just acting up like his older siblings its not his fault lol that's why Michael took it easy on him.

I AM SOOOO DEAD AT THE PORN THAT CHRIS TUCKER SENT TO MICHAEL'S EMAIL LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY FACE WHEN I SAW THE TITLE OF THE PORN CLIP

I'M HOLLERING!!!! LOL

Oh at Shonny's drunk confession to Jimmy O___O I didn't see that coming! Welp I knew that they were farrrrr from over and I hope they both get back together :-)))))

Well well well now look who's being the dominating sexy vixen lmfaoooo Ari betta workkkk with her sexy seductive self ;) lol and pssssh Rushka, Lisa Marie, or any other female ain't got nothing on Arianna Jackson she's one fierce hot mama and Michael would be a damn fool to cheat on her, Just Sayin' lol

Loveeeeed this chapter as always hunnie!!! ^__^ can't wait for moreeee! XOXOXO Toni

 

and oh at your Chapter End notes "Drama ahead...get ready...."

Don't make me come after you Drea!



Author's Response:

Look at you, Ms. Master Gif!! lol!! Ay, honey yes. Sometimes family does not know when to mind their own business. Arianna knows what she is doing. No marriage is perfect.

You know I had to bring back BAD era Mike for a hot second!! He was a jack rabbit back in the day lmaoooo and you know Toni couldn't let that one slide. She had to call them freaks and they were!! Sometimes I go back to the old chapters and say what was I thinking writing these scenes. LMAO.

Yes!! Toni had the baby!!! Whoo Whoo!! Aww that gif, that episode was so sad when Gabrielle lost her baby. :(( Thankfully that did not happen here and you know I pictured JC in the bg, not her desperate housewives husband lol. But yes, poor Arianna. She did NOT need to see all of that. No way!! no friendship is ever that close!! LMAOOOO!! jk

Those kids were a mess. They knew they were not right and Jimmy tsk tsk, he was the worse. I always holler when I see that vine of Obee and Jermajesty. Obee knows he was wrong for that!! I had to include that but aww I felt bad making MJ scream at Blanket so I made him take it back and you know him being the smallest he gets a pass. Like you said, he was just following the older kids and he's too cute!! *clutches chest*

Shonny and Obee, I can't with those two. tsk tsk. I have a feeling Shonny will regret her drunk confession.

lmfaooooo Chris Tucker is a mess and a half!!! He knows Michael don't need no porn to satisfy his wife!! He's a trip!!

My lips are sealed with LMP and Rushka!! :X

CTFU!! at that Britney gif and no you did not just threaten me, Toni. You see that's how good people get hurt. -____-

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2013 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 162 - I'm Not Giving You Up....

Ok first off, Ari's dad...sir...the whole time I was thinking "Can you not?" like gosh he was just rubbing it in like Ari didn't know what she was doing. *sigh* And then Toni going back and basically asking her the same thing smh. But Ari made a point, sometimes when you're that deep in love you have to make some tough decisions in order to make things work. She and Mike have been through too much to just separate especially since they have their children to think about now.


That flashback in '89 was too cute. Ari knew she missed Mike. Why she playin'? smh


Toni shook her head as she too grabbed her pen to continue her work but she didn't begin her work until she mumbled "You and Mike are freaks." making me laugh.


Toni giggled. "Is he always in control or are you?"


I gasped. "I'm not answering that." I said with a laugh making Toni crack up.



FREAKKKKKSSS!! lol


Yass at Toni having her baby but done and Ari about to lose her sanity in the process lol. 


Mike's day with Brett *gushes*


"And what do you mean smaller men?" I hit him with the pillow. "Trust me, there is nothing small about me." I was really offended. <---looool ok MJ.


Ayyyeee at him gettin' it to R. Kelly. Mike was a thug. 



I had the ugliest snorting laugh while watching that video of Obee trolling on Jermajesty lol. He knew he wasn't right. And then Obee and the kids all ganging up on Ari's dad. Smh. Ole soup patch kids!!! They knew that they couldn't even get upset for being punished because they all knew that they were wrong lol.


"No arguments." I strictly told them. "You both need to learn to appreciate what you have. Blanket...." Blanket turned to look at me with those big brown eyes of his that resembled mine so much. "You are not getting that tricycle."


Blanket began to cry softly making me feel bad but I refused to back down.



I was feeling for Baby Blanket. I could imagine his little adorable self crying *clutches chest* That's the worst when you have to play the bad guy with little kids. My heart always crumbles whenever I have to punish my little cousins. And it doesn't make it any better when they think that I'm playing because I'm always so soft on them that I have to use force to show them that I'm serious. *softly weeps*


He nodded as his bottom lip began to quiver while trying to control his cries. I gave Blanket a small smile before I said "Daddy is actually happy you hit grandpa on the head with the hammer."


Blanket giggled and my smile grew wider. "But don't do it again." I warned him. "Ok?"


"Ok." He said with a smile.



Stop it with all of this adorableness! lol I caaaan't. I'm feeling.


Obee and Shonny made up. That's so cute. They knew that they couldn't hold out anyway. Shame it took her getting drunk to really let out her feelings but aye, its better than never lol. Jimmy knows now so he gots to do better by her.


Anyway, I'm side eying you for that end note. I see that Lisa is being mentioned a lot...



I'm still watching you, Drea. This is not a joking manner. I love you. Until then *poofs* <3 



Author's Response:

*le sigh*. Sometimes family does not know how to butt out and shut up. Yes, you are right. No marriage is perfect and Arianna is a grown woman. She knows what sacrifices she is doing to keep her family together. She is willing to do that for love.

I had to bring some of the 80s back! You know BAD era Mike was no joke. oomf! He could have it all and yes, Ari knew she wanted him and missed him. Girl was just playing hard to get.

Michael's day with Brett. I just love hearing him talk and you know I had to include the clip of MJ dancing to Ignition. He was grooving in that car!! And you know that MJ don't play about his size. LOL.

LMAOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Obee/Jimmy was a mess. He knows he was not right playing with Jermajesty. That vine clip always cracks me up.

Aww, I felt bad making MJ scream at Blanket lol and Michael knew he had to go easy with Blanket, he's little. He was just following along to what the older kids were doing.

Shonny and Obee, I can't with those two. I have a feeling she's going to regret her drunk confession.

Don't you be side eyeing me, Shy!! Nothing has happened....yet. I love you more... -___- No you did not just poof on me.

 

Reviewer: skipper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2013 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 162 - I'm Not Giving You Up....

Loved it :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad. Thank you for reading and for your review. <333

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2013 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 162 - I'm Not Giving You Up....

I have been waiting for another chapter! It made my day!!!


btw: Incorporating some of Obee's Vine Videos into the story was genius!



Author's Response:

awww that's sweet. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it and lol thx again, I thought I should include some of his vine videos to make it seem more realistic, glad you liked it plus he is so goofy in them. XD

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2013 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 161 - Can you teach me how to be forgiving....

I'm so late reading and reviewing for this chapter. Forgive me. lol

Now on to the story, when Ari was having her doubts about Michael I'm not even gonna lie, I was side eyeing her. She was about to make me upset if she went through with getting a divorce. 

Now for Lisa...I don't know what to think about her. I guess Michael could be excused for checking up on her. Most ex's do that so that's a free pass...for now.

When Paris spotted out Grace and kept questioning her I laughed so hard. If that wasn't awkward then I don't know what is. 

Grace getting wet thoughts over Mike...the visuals that I had of her in actual lingerie though...

I can't believe that Grace had the audacity to do that with Ari in the house. Just triflin'! But then Ari came and played "Captian Save a Pimp" for Michael lol.

"I don't need to listen to you. You shouldn't even be here. You are just a spoiled little brat who leaves and hurts Michael when you don't get your way. At least Lisa had the courage to fight for him, even if it meant getting other people out of the way"

I was about to intervene but Arianna slapped Grace and I stood frozen once again.

"Get out of my house!!" Arianna screamed at Grace. "Don't you there come back!!!"

And I hollered when Mike suggested that Grace go to India! I was waiting for it! aslghaslgh looool. I still can't believe he actually did that in real life though. Mike was shady af looool. I wish people would realize that. He has his little sly ways too smh.

Their vacation was too adorable. Toni and JC are a mess. And awwing at the family portrait.

I enjoyed the update!! I'm nervous about what's going to happen next especially with the trial and if Ari ever gets the opportunity to speak with Lisa if she decides to do so. This better be good. My squirrels and I have our eyes on you.

P.S. This lady claiming to be Jimmy's mom...I'm skeptic. I do not...I repeat I do NOT support this claim. lol And Adriana is so purtyyyy and cute lol. Her voice is so adorable. Ok, I'm done. I love ya!



Author's Response:

You know I have a soft spot for you, Shy. I forgive you...for now. 

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lol don't be side eyeing my girl. Arianna was not going to throw away her marriage. They been thru so much to let things go but she's human.

*le sigh* Michael and Lisa. No words.

I love writing Paris, she's such a little diva. I have fun writing her and lmaoooooooooo at the Will Smith gif.

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It was so disturbing to write Grace getting wet. I had to really take a long shower after that to release the demons in me. CTFU! But Mike sending her to India LMFAO I can't deal. Dude was shady AF!!!

They really did need that little trip. They needed to get away from the drama and ugh, as for woman claiming to be Jimmy's biological mom....you will read more about her soon but you ain't ready for her yet.

And get your squirrels away from me, Shy. They stare at me while I shower and I feel uncomfortable. >__<

Lol Love you!!! Thanks for the review honey. xoxo

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2013 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 161 - Can you teach me how to be forgiving....

Hey! :D

To answer your question, yes I am back in school now. Although I think college always starts around this time. It could have very well changed, I'm just not sure. :)

As for this chapter. So... Michael and Toni are so sly, I can't believe they did that to poor Arianna! Lol I mean, I'm glad they did, but still. You had me worried for a lot of these past few chapters. I was afraid they would actually get divorced, like their old patterns but I'm glad to see they didn't. :) I love that Michael fights so hard for her. He needs to keep fighting, I'd be so mad if he just let her walk away.

I'm glad they're rid of Grace too. She'd been getting on my nerves throughout the story with her obsession with Michael and her hatrid for Arianna. I can't believe she ACTUALLY climbed into bed with Michael, like in real life as well as in this. That is so creepy. >.>

Arianna is so cute though! I loved that bit of her in the interview. "I can't say because it's rated R." Lol, I love her so much. :) I can't belive Adriana actually SAID that! Lol Everytime I read stuff like this, I just wish their relationship had been real. He'd have been ten times happier.

I'm really glad they took that trip too, I feel like that helped them out a lot. It brought everyone so much closer again, especially before all the shit that's about to go down. I seriously expected Toni to go into labor while they were on the trip though, just because Arianna had mentioned it. Lol I'd have laughed HARD if that had happened. :D Oh well, maybe this baby will be born on Justin Timberlake's birthday. :D That'd be VERY entertaining. :D

Anways, I hope Arianna can learn to forgive everyone. The scene with her visiting River was really touching as well. I almost cried there. Great work, I can't wait to read more. I know there's a lot of drama soon to come but this was a nice break. :)

As for reading your story, you make it so interesting that I really wanna keep coming back. I'm glad I've stuck around like this. :) Always fun to read your stories. :) By the way, their family is so big, I almost couldn't find them all! LOL! Loved the family photo though, great touch! :D <3



Author's Response:

Hey honey, how are you? good luck in school. Don't work too hard but always strive for the best. I think it did change, i swear it was never this early when I was in school so many years ago (Now I feel old lol).

Toni is slick lol and Michael ain't no fool. He would be dumb to let her go and the same goes for Arianna, they been thru so much to throw their marriage away like this and the kids would be devastated if they did.

Ugh, Grace!! I never liked her, I always had a funny feeling about her. Though I never thought that Michael would get so mad at her to actually send her to India. I was dying when I heard that!! loool. Like dude had to be REALLY mad to ship her out of the country lol. He was a mess lol. Originally the plan was to have Grace make the move on MJ when Arianna was away in New York. He would get so mad, fire her, blah blah...it sounds boring atm but I had it in my mind acted out in a cool way but when Paris came out with that story, I was like yesss I have to use this. lol she saved me and helped me make it more realistic.

lmaoooo I love that Adriana said that in the interview. It's one of the reasons why I love her in real life. She has such a goofy personality. She's real, I like that about her and yes, if they would have been together in real life that would have made my WFY dream come true. I believe she would have made him happy. A long time ago, I remember watching this clip of her on TV when she was being interviewed backstage while getting ready before a show and in the BG someone was rocking to MJ (this is when she was younger) and as she was answering questions, she was bopping her head to the song...I so wish I could find that clip. Someone needs to upload it to youtube. That clip is the closest thing I have to WFY.

Yes, they really needed the trip. They needed to get away from the drama and lol I couldn't do that to poor Toni. She would have killed me lol and don't help her out, if she had it her way she will have the baby on Justin's bday. Poor JC, he has to deal with her crazy Justin obsession. (Kinda like real life Toni)

I think with time, Arianna will learn to let things go and she needed that time with River, they never truly said goodbye and I think she felt bad about that. I believe I wrote that in the chapter where she attended his funeral. It was a nice way for her to bring closure in her story with River and the child in me (who had a crush on him but not as big as my super crush on MJ) needed to see him again in the story. I'm glad you liked it and that it moved you, I guess that means I did something good.

"As for reading your story, you make it so interesting that I really wanna keep coming back. I'm glad I've stuck around like this. :) Always fun to read your stories. :)" <--- Aww that was very sweet. I always enjoy reading your reviews. You're amazing!

lol MJ's family is huge, it was hard to fit Arianna in there. Glad you liked it.

Thanks for the review honey. xoxo

 

 

 

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2013 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 161 - Can you teach me how to be forgiving....

Yasss girl your new WFY Banner is PERFECTION I love it so much... now in reply to your Author's chapter notes 1. Lmfaooo I do remember reading about Mike leaving poor lil Blanket behind in Jermaine's book smh 2. *CRYING* we will not dicuss my lil nickname lmfao we're to much XD

And okayyy I will admit I do acutally like some of LMP's songs O.o there I said it now we can move on lmaoo

Wow Arianna definitely has her plate full right now, not only family issues but also with her career and business, just thinking about it is making me dizzy lol But I'm so glad that she keeps herself surround with great people. And yesss I caught the similarites of Toni and Ari's friendship and our friendship in this chapter. Just like WFY Toni you know I'm always here for you bew :-))

Arianna's interview thoooooo she's to cute I love the silly faces she be making lmaoo the gifs made it even better *__*

Interviewer: "And what is the sexiest thing your husband has ever done for you?"

Ari: "Actually, I can't say because it's rated R"

LMFAOOOOOOO that part had me dyingggg!!!

*throws laptop* I'm so not here for this crazy Gina Belland woman sending her family lawyer or whoever tf he is to come in and expect Ari and Mike to just give up their rights as Jimmy's parents oh no ma'am she's gotta go! Lmfaoooo Yassss at Toni letting him have it and ripping up the papers, now ya know I would've done the same thing 'cause "I AM TERMINATOR TONI AND I'LL BE BACK!" ctfu lemme stop XD

svghkdftwvcbgswvhgff DEADDDDD at you and that 'N Sync gif let my boys be great with their tight shirts and horrible haircuts :/ lmaooo

Oop! Mike has some explaining to do about the whole still talking to LMP on the phone situation tsk tsk that's not cool.

The conversation that Michael and Arianna had with Jimmy about his birth mother tho *cries* Mannnnn this made me get so emotional. No matter what happens Jimmy will always be MJ and Ari's son, he's a Jackson 100%

Parisssssssssssssssss Lmfaooo this child is to much but I love her she's straight out and to the point talkin' 'bout "is it sexy clothes" and "Do you not like Toni?" Ctfu yessss Child yessss lol

Now see we all knew that Grace was shady and always had something up her sleeve but now she went and crossed the damn line. Laying in bed with Michael who is still a married man and then she had the audacity to insult Arianna to her face ugh that bitch needed to go a long time ago and now she's officially OUT!! SLAP THAT HO ARI BEW CAUSE SHE AIN'T SHIT lmaoooo and Mike tellin' Grace to go to India *hollers* I cant with him sometimes

and finally the Trip yay *claps* this is exactly what Mike and Ari needed some time away from all the stress in their lives. Love and laughs will always bring a family closer together and this was much needed indeed :-) I loveddd this chapter as always and the pictures and gifs were on point! *__* Love ya Drea xoxoxo

PS and yes I found Ari in the family photo lol :D

Author's Response:

Hey Toni bew. Even Mike forgot his kids behind lol and ctfu!! the real story behind your nickname will always be the end of the me.

"And okayyy I will admit I do acutally like some of LMP's songs O.o there I said it now we can move on lmaoo " <--LOL I ain't judging ( ._.)

"And yesss I caught the similarites of Toni and Ari's friendship and our friendship in this chapter. Just like WFY Toni you know I'm always here for you bew :-))" <---Aww you did, huh? ;) Ari and Toni really us ^__^ You know I got you the same way. Love yeww!!

lmfaoooo Arianna is a mess. Now you see why I love her. She's amazing.

*le sigh* Gina Belland, you will read more about her soon. Y'all ain't ready to read about her yet and lmaooo step away from Gina, Terminator Toni!!

lmaoooo those hair cuts and clothes had to go. You know I had to snap at your nsync boys. They're cool tho.

Yes, I agree. No matter Jimmy is 100% a Jackson, no one can take that away from him.

lmaoooo Paris is a little diva. I have a lot of fun writing her.

I never liked grace. I always thought there was something shady about her and she tried sooooo hard. I expected Michael to be turned off by her but I never expected her to send her to India lmaooooo dude was wrong for that. Life lesson: Don't anger Michael Jackson, he might ship you express. lmaoooo

The trip was heaven. They really did need that and good, I'm glad you were able to find Arianna in the photo, that family is just way too big lol

Thanks Toni. xoxo

 

 

 

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 10:03 am Title: Chapter 161 - Can you teach me how to be forgiving....

I'm so glad I got back into this story!! I hadn't been around the site for a few months and have been catching up on all my favorite stories and it took me a few days to catch up with this one!

THANK GOD they aren't divorcing again. When that was brought up I was just....UGH! Good lawd, if y'all did that again, I'm just done with the two of you!! LOL



Author's Response:

Welcome back!! I'm glad to see you around again. I'm glad that you are still enjoying the story. Thank you for taking the time to read it and to review.

lol!! I wouldn't do that to you guys again and Arianna and Michael aren't kids anymore. They are stronger than ever. No divorce. :)

More to come. <333

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2013 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 161 - Can you teach me how to be forgiving....

I'm actually relieved Arianna has decided to work on their marriage; I thought she'd given up on him. This business with Jimmy's supposed biological mother is a mess. I'm curious to know her full side of the story though, that is if she's really his mother. At the end of the day, it's important for Jimmy to remember who is parents are, blood or not, they've loved him unconditionally and no one can take that from him. Great chapter, can't wait for the next!



Author's Response:

Arianna is a lot older and wiser. She had the right to be angry at Michael but she loves him and wants her marriage to work. Michael just needs to work along with her which I'm sure he will because he loves her too. Regarding Jimmy's biological mother, if that is her, more to come on that....don't want to give it away but yes, you are right and I believe Jimmy knows that though Arianna and Michael might not have conceived him, they took care of him and loved him as if he was theirs. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :) Much love!

Reviewer: cat101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2013 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 161 - Can you teach me how to be forgiving....

I'm obsessed. I have been a silent reader way too long.

I wait all month for the next update and check religiously when the date comes closer.

I love you and I love this story.

Do you have twitter?

xx



Author's Response:

Hi there. I am so glad that you have been enjoying WAITING FOR YOU so far. Your review put a smile on my face. You are very sweet. Thank you for reading and for your review. More to come soon.

Unfortunately, I do not have twitter anymore. I recently deactivated my acct. I do have instagram, it's loveangelsecret

xx, Drea

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