Date: Feb 27, 2014 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 165 - That BOY has me JEALOUS but I'm coming at him like a DARK HORSE
OMG AGAIN?! LOL more more more!!
Author's Response:
lmaooo no one is perfect! New chapter is coming soon!
Date: Feb 26, 2014 07:30 am Title: Chapter 165 - That BOY has me JEALOUS but I'm coming at him like a DARK HORSE
Oh and imma need a copy of them there books you see
Author's Response:
ooh really? well, lemme work my magic...*wiggles fingers, snaps two times, jumps 3xs and poof* ....check your mailbox 
DONE!
lol nah seriously aww
Date: Feb 26, 2014 07:29 am Title: Chapter 165 - That BOY has me JEALOUS but I'm coming at him like a DARK HORSE
Soooooooo ummmm I'm back like a herpes flare up in your ass again for making me get in my feels. So. Schuy as her sister. One word. YAS not yes but YAS. So I know that Michael has a rep of being a dick but he really is trying to overcome the past and I think Ari should let him do that and just bask in all the love and the steamy ass sex on the counters and bathtubs and closets (hell I know I would be) Jimmy and Shontelle need to sit down drink some green tea and just be together. All this relationship tension and the feels and everything, yeah they need to be together. I hope to JESUS that you do not mess up my feels with this one. Mike needs to beat the trial, Ari have the healthy baby and then well June 25. Sigh
Author's Response:
GASP!!! IT's YOU!! O___O
Great to see you again girly! and did you just say "herpes flare up in your ass"? lmaoooo girllll noooo!!
I totally agree with you that Arianna got carried away and allowed her feelings get the best of her.
Jimmy and Shonny tsk tsk, I have no words for them.
" I hope to JESUS that you do not mess up my feels with this one" <--- Why so mean? -__- I haven't done nothing....yet
haha it's funny how everyone is afraid of June 25th, y'all truly have no idea what you've been reading, the ending to this story will be completely unexpected. As "A Thriller Night In Las Vegas" reader you should know how i roll.
[Report This]Date: Feb 25, 2014 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 165 - That BOY has me JEALOUS but I'm coming at him like a DARK HORSE
Ok I get where Adri is coming from I've been through something like that before but she didn't have to treat Michael that way that was really mean to throw the past up in his face like that. She's being to insecure and jumpin to conclusions, she and Michael just needs to take a breather and talk it out once they are calm. Btw love the books you did an amazin job. :) b29;
Author's Response:
I totally agree. Arianna allowed her feelings get the best of her and yes, maybe they do they need a breather. It's been too long to let this go over some petty stuff. We'll see what happens. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
And aww thanks, I am pretty proud of them. I wish i could share them with the readers lol ^__^
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 164 - An Unexpected Loneliness....
Hmm.
Pretty good chapter. The drama and issues are esclating more and more every time. Arianna has always been so strong but it seems to me all this crap is starting to bring her down. :/ I feel like ever since her mother died Arianna has been going through this downspiral, it makes me sad really. I miss the old Arianna, the happy, cheerful, optimistic, Arianna. She was something. Michael is beginning to notice something wrong too. I hope they talk about it. It seems she may need him more than he needs her at the moment. Like a total role reversal really.
Anastasia is really starting to piss me off too. I wish she'd leave them be and stop trying to force Jimmy away from them. If she rips Jimmy away from the Jacksons, he'd be absolutely miserable. He's doing so good right now, he's mostly happy and he's already starting with a pretty decent career for himself. Everything he knows is with the Jacksons and he doesn't want that to change.
Setting up a meeting date with Lisa sounds like serious trouble on Arianna's end. I really hope everything goes okay and all she really wants is closure. I could honestly see some kind of cat fight breaking out with Michael caught in the middle. Not a good sight at all. I'm worried about this and Arianna's jealousy over Rushka. I'd like to believe Rushka won't do anything to ruin what Arianna and Michael have together. Part of me wishes Paris wouldn't have said anything. I know she couldn't help it but still. I just want everything to be okay.
Also, little tidbit of advice Arianna... sex will not make everything go away. While I can't blame you for wanting to claim Michael as yours in ways others cannot, you shouldn't stoop to that. Not sure how Michael would feel if he found out... >.>
Anyways, great chapter, very, very interesting chain of events. Keep up the amazing work, I love this story so much. Like I said before, I'm going to be really sad when it ends especially with how long I've been following this story. Arianna and Michael are definitely one of my favorite couples. Can't wait for your next update! :D
Author's Response:
hmmm...you are the only one to notice that, are you reading my mind? O__o lemme find out lol ...no but seriously, I'm glad you caught that thing about Arianna because you are a lot closer than you think you are to the big secret and this thing she is dealing will be revealed soon and it will be shocking.
Anastasia too has a big secret, it wil be revealed soon, you'll see ;)
Lisa, all I would say it's not what you expect
Thank you so much honey for your support, you are definitely one of my favorite readers/reviewers :), more to come soon and I promise this story will end with a bang!
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 164 - An Unexpected Loneliness....
Ayeeeee! Okay first of all, Britney Jean is THAT album! "Perfume" is my song right now, her voice was flawless on that one! She better work bitch! *_* I definitely agree with you, when I listened to it while reading, I could feel everything Arianna narrated. Oh my God, it was matching P E R F E C T L Y.
I definitely know what Ari's going through. I've been there, sometimes I'm still there, and it's just a thing that happens. Their relationship has been through a lot of things, so this too shall pass.
I loooooveeeee Toni! Lmfaaooooo Ari's Toni, and our Toni hahahaha. Both are crazy, but we like it! It's soooo sweet of Toni and JC and little Emmanuella to be there to support, and of course for Kristina to be there too! I loooooveee how well Kristina and Toni get along, too! It's like they've been the best of friends for years, too! Hahaha ^_^
Ughhhhhh everything in this chapter was wonderful and then Anastasia had to pop back up T_T
Omfg though, tell me why the gif of Arianna (looking B E A U T I F U L) opening the letter reminded me of that one scene in The Bodyguard when Whitney saw the crazy letter from the fan? O_o
There's sooo much drama going on and it's just soo well-written, it's like watching an Oscar-worthy movie. Omg whyyyyyy do such bad things happen to such good people? I feel bad for Mike, I mean you know he's struggling with the trial and everything, but I'm there 4000% with Ari. She's reaaaaally going through. Between her insecurities and her paranoia, and Anastasia....that's a lot to be put on one woman. Yes, she's strong, and she's evolved since the young girl in the beginning, but she's still a work in progress. Every person has their breaking point, and may even have several. I've definitely been there and I totally relate. That was so well written and then those flawless gifs of her just added on to the emotion and the way she was before she went to perform.
Adriana was also lovely as usual in "An Unexpected Loneliness". That style suits her.
I definitely can't wait to read what happens next. THANK THE L O R D that I'm caught up because I CAN NOT wait to see the resolution to this. I mean, really, Mike and especially Arianna need a great, long vacation. I don't know if I should be anxious, nevrous, or what to read what happens with Ari and LMP....you sure know how to write, creating all this suspense and stuff. P L A Y I N G W I T H M Y E M O T I O N S -_________-
Loving the new banner!! *_*
Me and the Baby Sibs love it as always! Much love Boogie Down and Happy New Year! xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
YESSSSS!!!! girl, I love Britney's album and perfume is definitely my fave song in it. You're right, her voice sounded amazing and very strong in it.
Me too hun and sometimes its not hard to let go but like you said Ari will be ok but not anytime soon I fear *insider alert*
lmaoooo I enjoy writing Toni and Kristina, they bring a funny mix to the story imo and who wouldn't like Toni, she's like our Toni and Kristina is amazing and so loyal :)
"Omfg though, tell me why the gif of Arianna (looking B E A U T I F U L) opening the letter reminded me of that one scene in The Bodyguard when Whitney saw the crazy letter from the fan? O_o" <---- I forgot about that scene O__O I could see how it's similar
"There's sooo much drama going on and it's just soo well-written, it's like watching an Oscar-worthy movie" <--- aww that is so sweet!! Thank you so much Lavie, tha means a lot to me coming from you, I think you are an awesome writer.
lmfaaooooo I don't mean to play with your emotions but look at it this way, at the end of every tunnel there is a light and this ending will be great :)
Happy belated New Year! I hope you had a great time, Lavie! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 163 - We are here...Now what?
UGHHHHHHHH LISAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA T.T
Lisa is making my eye twitch. Lmaoo, I SWEAR she plotting, and she finna do the most. All hell has already broken loose, she just needs to back away.
She's justified in thinking about Mike only because he's something to think about. I mean, there's always the what-could-have-been, but when he's off with four kids and his wife, just let it go. Let. It. Go.
My heart breaks every time I read about how the police did Michael. Nobody deserves to be treated that way, especially such a good person. I just, that entire ordeal with him just makes me cringe :(
I loved all of the details during Ari's flashback, and when she was at Mary's house. That part was really well written [ as always ;) ], and it makes sense. It's like everything is all coming together and Arianna definitely knew. That woman's not Jimmy's mother...
I agree with Arianna. It's great and all to let Jimmy figure out where he came from, and talk with the Bellands, but only if their intentions are good. Everything is not what it seems. She has every right to be nervous and anxious and upset; he's her son and so many people have tried to hurt her and Michael, etc. She definitely should be cautious..
The scene with the church was great though lol. That was soooo cute of Jimmy. He was all like "O____O Jesus?" ^_^ I was cutting up with the museum scene though. Lmfaaooo dead af at Bubbles wearing lipstick on that statue.
>>> "Aww, that's sweet. I had no idea you were such a mama's boy." The museum receptionist told me making me stare at her, not pleased by the statement rather embarrassed.
My mother however caught my embarrassment and decided to have fun with it. "Jimmy has always been a bit more sensitive than my other children."
I chuckled embarrassed. "My mom means strong not sensitive."
"No, I'm pretty sure I meant sensitive." She told me as she wrapped her arm around me. Father Campos and the girl seemed tickled by this interaction between mother and son. "I mean when you were little you cried when the little mermaid lost her voice to the evil witch."
My face turned red. My mother on the other hand had a gleam in her eye, she was so amused by this. "My mother means so angry when GI Joe nearly lost one of his battles but like any man, he got up and fought the war and won."
"Uh huh. Sure" The museum girl said with a laugh.
>>>> "Got it. I will be silent as a virgin not knowing what to expect on her first night." I joked.
My mother didn't find it funny. She stopped walking and looked at me. "Jimmy, don't make me smack you on the street in front of Mary in the car and those two girls standing by the restaurant."
I laughed. "I was kidding, mom."
She was about to start walking again when suddenly something hit her. "What do you know about a virgin's first night anyway?"
My eyes widened. "Nothing." I stuttered. "I'm a lonely untouched boy."
That's when my mother did lightly smack me over the head. "Don't lie to me, Jimmy. I'm not as naive as you think I am." My mother scolded me and then went to cross the street. I silently followed her as she added during our walk to the nail salon. "I know this is 2004, things have changed but don't expect to bring any grand kids home to me. I will straight up slap you and the girl." <---- Lmfaaaoooo omfgggg that was soooo cute and funny! I loved that part. Ari's a great mom. I reaaaally enjoyed the part with the Little Mermaid soundtrack too. I was cutting up because him being his age it was kind of funny, but it was sooo endearing. That was too sweet of a moment between them. No matter how big Jimmy gets, he's mama's baby ^_^
>>>>>>"Beyoncé doesn't want to get with dad!" Prince threw up his arms in the air, obviously tired of hearing about Beyoncé.
"Uncle Chris said that dad has a crush on Beyoncé." I stated as I crossed my arms.
"And I have a crush on Britney Spears and Jimmy has a crush on Halle Berry, that doesn't mean they will get with us." Prince told me.
"Well, duh! Of course Britney Spears is not going to go after you, Prince. She's 23 years old and you are 7."
Prince rolled his eyes. "That's my point."
I raised my index finger and shook it from side to side in a 'no' motion as I said, "Sorry big brother, your point is overruled. You see, Britney won't go for you because you are 7 and she could go to jail. Beyoncé is old enough to go after daddy and Halle Berry is...." I stopped to think for a second. How old was Halle Berry? Oh snap, Jimmy too was old enough for Halle now. "
I unfolded my note and looked for a pen. "Prince, you think I could also write a letter to Halle telling her to back away from Jimmy." Prince rolled his eyes and began to walk away.
"Paris, you are nuts!"
"I'm trying to save our family." I followed him.
"You need to save yourself" <------ LMFAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOO! asvwewwaibuvavbeoavacasveqa Paris is amazinnnng to read always. I SCREEAAAAMEEDDD. Lmfaoo Paris too smart. Lmfaooo I hollered. I can NOT. I'm dead as fuck. I just can't.
Lmfaaooo the kids are so cute, ole messy asses hehehe. And I LOVE that you included the Number Ones documentary *__*
Omfggggg girl yessss, I got all 30 years of my life from this chapter! I'm getting caught up and thoroughly enjoying myself as always! Me and the Baby Sibs loved it per usual! Now we're on to the next!! xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2014 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 164 - An Unexpected Loneliness....
Happy New Year!! 2014 whoot whoot Let's Go! Okay I'm done with my mini celebration lol now on to my review.....
I can see that Arianna is having a hard time with this whole Lisa Marie situation *sigh* and on top of that she's questioning if adding Rushka into the mix was the right decision. Hopefully after this meeting with Lisa goes down Ari will then be able to let go of the past and feel confident in her marriage with Michael. Poor thing she's dealing with so much and she seems to be stressed, tired, and her mind is all over the place :/ (the Britney song you chose for this chapter fits perfectly btw! It's one of my faves)
Oh lord this trial is going to be hard to read about :(( It was a very dark time in Michael's life *deep sigh* But at least in your story he has his wife, children, and his family by his side to keep him strong.
Deaddddd at Toni and Kristina's girls gone wild in Vegas moment lmfaaooooo they were a HOT ASS MESS Ctfu! Oh! Ari and her topless photo's O__O Arianna Miss Jackson if ya Nasty! looool and as always JC was clueless AF SMH
YASSSSSS Arianna finally performed for her fans and more importantly Paris got to see her mother shine on stage! That was so sweet :-)))
Ugh Anastasia needs to have several seats 'cause like first of all how in the hell did her ole creeping ass get backstage? Secondly if that bitch would've started some type of mess with Ari I know damn well Arianna can defend herself.
Shontelle and Jimmy's friendship is so cute and goofy lol ^_^ they both seem to be on the right track and doing what makes them happy! Good for them.
Michael's visit to Capitol Hill YASSSSS *squeals* those videos give me LIFE! Micheal's loud clapping always has me Ctfu
Great chapter as always my dahhling Drea! The Banner is to die for and I'm still fangirling my ass off about the picture in Dubai and the tweet from Eva and Adriana *__* WFY IS REALLLLLLLLLLLL lmaooo
Love youuuuu hunnie XOXO Toni
Author's Response:
Happy belated new year!!! but then again you and I talk all the time soooo....lol
Yes, Arianna is hurting herself by thinking this way and letting her jealousy and insecuties get the best of her but Lisa, it's not what you expect, that is all I would say ;)
lmfaoooo I love writing "Toni" and Kristina, I think they bring some fun to the story...but why you focusing on Ari's topless photo? Focus on your girl's photo where she shows her coochie lmaoooo jk
Yes, I missed Ari as a performer :')
Anastasia has a big secret so more to be revealed about her :D
Michael and his loud clapping is something special. I love his goofy self.
I will never get over at the fact that Eva and Adriana were hanging out in Dubai!! That made one of my waiting for you dreams come true :') WFY is real chilleeeee
xoxo love you more hun!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2013 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 164 - An Unexpected Loneliness....
First off let me start off my saying that I ended last year/started my new year reading this update. lol
Now on the the story...
Ari...oh Ari...this insecurity isn't good. She's been with Michael too long and learned from their past mistakes and rebuilding that he isn't going to do anything to jeopardize their relationship. Even though she stated that it's not him that she doesn't trust but Lisa and any other women around him, it still kind of seems like she's having her doubts about Michael even with the Rushka situation. She seems so paranoid and so stressed and out of wack :/ Poor thing. She needs a break.
And then her going to see Julie *sigh* She seemed so demanding for someone who was going to ask of what I guess you could say was a favor. Kind of like she was putting a guilt trip on Julie (who's gorgeous btw). I just hope that everything will work out for Ari soon because it seemsl like she's losing herself with these insecurities.
As for Toni and Kristina showing up again...yaaaas lol. Their goofy selves. The Vegas story had me done. They are too much. (still fangirling over Adriana and Eva kicking it in Dubai lol...oh the irony of Dubai...insider)
Obee...he loves Shonny. He playing with his own emotions which is a shame lol.
As for Michael and this trial...I have no words. I love how you included the Capitol Hill footage *_* I've always loved that part when he clapped louder with those big ole hands of his. And him dancing/enjoying the show in his seat lol. He was so animated.
Rushka...she doesn't seem like a threat and she seems very sincere so I hope that's the case because, again, Ari did seem a little paranoid having her around even after the talk that they had. But at the same time, I found it ironic that Michael mentioned that if Ari could trust Rushka then so could he but Rushka wasn't very trustworthy in Ari's eyes at first lol. Welp.
Yaay at Ari performing for her fans and kids. Now little Paris could see what her mommy was really like on tage.
Anastasia is psycho. Point. Blank. Period. How in the world did she even get past security? smh. It's a good thing that she didn't try anything stupid although I'm sure that Ari would have been able to defend herself if she did.
Anyway, I can't wait to see how this meeting with Lisa goes. Hope it doesn't spark any drama. I'm gonna end the review here now because I'm tired and I feel like I'm rambling so I have no idea if any of what I said made sense lol. I love youuuu and Happy New Year! Hope you had a safe holiday <3
Author's Response:
loool omg happy new year! That's kinda cool tho ^__^
Arianna does need a break, poor thing is hurting herself, sadly I don't see that happening soon (suddenly I feel watched by a dozen squirrels lmaooo) don't kill me...
Arianna was being driven by emotion when talking to Julie, poor thing was so lost and yes, Julie is beautiful, still looks similar to this day with that red hair of hers. *__*
Toni and Kristina are a mess lmaooo I love writing them, they bring some fun I think
Obee and Shonny, those two are a lost cause and it won't get any better
Michael in Washington was so animated lmaoooo at one point he was about to jump out of his seat, I was like "Mike, take it easy" lol
Rushka, I can't say anything about her without giving it away so I won't lol
Anastasia, something will be revealed soon, that is all I will say
Lisa, it's not what you expect.
And happy late new year!
Thanks Shy xoxo
Date: Dec 29, 2013 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 164 - An Unexpected Loneliness....
I can't wait to read this conversation.
Author's Response:
it won't be what you expect ;) ...thanks fpr reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2013 12:12 am Title: Chapter 164 - An Unexpected Loneliness....
Dammit Andrea! Right when I got really into it, you just slammed the book in my face ... You make me wanna cry sometimes..
I really wanna know what's gonna go down between Lisa & Ari . I hope Ari doesn't kick her ass too bad. And Anastasia needs to fall back! If she wanted Jimmy as much as she claims , she would've did something way back then! Girl Bye!
Future Mentions?: Hmm... Well , I love it when you talk about flashbacks between Mike & Ari ... I'm a Bad Era lover so I would die if I saw a flashback from that time!
Please... Pretty Please! Update soon! I'm addicted to this story!
Author's Response:
lmfaooooooooooo!!!! I am sorry!
Ah! Lisa and Ari, no words but just stay tuned, it will be interesting ;)
There is something interesting about Anastasia and you will find out soon enough :)
Flashbacks and bad era will definitely make cameos. I love re-visiting the past :)
Thanks honey for reading and reviewing, new chapter is up and more to come soon xoxo
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2013 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 164 - An Unexpected Loneliness....
Poor Michael :(
This Anastasia woman is ridiculous; bribery is not the way to go about getting Jimmy back. And it sounds like she wants him to be taken from the Jackson family completely. What sense does that make? She's only thinking of herself. She seems to care very little about what's best for him.
Arianna's jealousy has its funny moments, but it's actually pretty sad. Her insecurity is coming from their troubled past, and it seems like no matter how hard Michael tries to prove his love for her, it's not enough. Not sure if talking to Lisa will help, however it is better than her doing nothing about it at all.
Also, I'd never seen that video with Michael and that cop, smh. Those so called police were assholes. I still get mad just thinking about what he said they did to him in that 60 Minutes interview... Anyway, great chapter. I know it's still a while before the ending, but I'm really excited to see where the story ends up; Michael and Arianna have come such a long way!
Author's Response:
Yes, poor Michael. He has been thru a lot :(
Anastasia I believe is a desperate woman who wants her sister back, unfortunately at any cost and since she can't get her back, she has decided to get the closest thing to her and that is Jimmy and she does not care atm who she is hurting...she is fighting a battle blindly but stay tuned because very soon you will get to read more about Anastasia and learn the real deal. Jimmy's response will surprise you too ;)
lol at times Arianna's jealousy is really clumsy and harmless but she truly is hurting herself and this will only escalate, you'll see....Lisa no words but just stay tuned.
You haven't? I actually liked the way Michael defended himself and told the cop off, it's a side of him we don't get to see often.
Yes, Arianna and Michael have come a long way and thank you so much for sticking around for this long trip to witness the finale. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 163 - We are here...Now what?
First off this was one LONG chapter! lol took me forever to finish it but I did it! Now as for this review...
Oh at Lisa remeniscing. She plotting. I feel it. She better not start any mess I swear...
I got my eye on her. I'm not playing.
Now for Michael and this interview...*sigh* He was horrible at explaining himself because the things that he said could easily be taken out of context. And don't even get me started on what the police did to him. And then they tried to make it seem like he lied about it when everybody and their momma's know that police always cover stuff up to protect each other. -_-
Now this craziness with the Bellands...smh I can't even. Jimmy knows who his family is but it's good to know where you came from. Ari is such a great mom for even giving him the choice to decide what he wants to do even though he's old enough to do that for himself. But it's good because she isn't forcing him to do it if he doesn't want to.
But for real though, Anastasia's family might want to try and get her some psychological help because she seems a little crazy. I'm pretty sure that if she knew that Jimmy knew how his real mother looked then she wouldn't have tried to do what she did because Jimmy would have known that she wasn't Gina. (<--if that makes sense lol)
Now this part right here...
My mother didn't find it funny. She stopped walking and looked at me. "Jimmy, don't make me smack you on the street in front of Mary in the car and those two girls standing by the restaurant."
I laughed. "I was kidding, mom."
She was about to start walking again when suddenly something hit her. "What do you know about a virgin's first night anyway?"
My eyes widened. "Nothing." I stuttered. "I'm a lonely untouched boy."
That's when my mother did lightly smack me over the head. "Don't lie to me, Jimmy. I'm not as naive as you think I am." My mother scolded me and then went to cross the street. I silently followed her as she added during our walk to the nail salon. "I know this is 2004, things have changed but don't expect to bring any grand kids home to me. I will straight up slap you and the girl."
lol I was like ohhh Ari gon' gangsta. You go mami!
I was getting aggravated for Michael with Vincent being such a nag. I mean with every little smart remark he made I was just like
Like does he ever shut up? I know that Ari's dad and he's protective of his baby girl but dang Mike was working as hard as he could and Vincent wasn't even trying to give him credit for that. That's a shame. Michael was good for holding his true emotions lol. Real good. He has Rev. Al Sharpton to thank for that. And you mentioned Johnny Cochran in this chapter!!! He was one of my biggest inspirations as far as working in the law field. *shimmies*
Paris is just too adorable for words. lol That's one smart kid. Done at her thinking that Beyoncé was talking about sex smh. And Prince and Blanket was just not there for it...especially Prince lol. He knew that he was wrong for blowing Paris off when she became aware that her parents are superstars. (Yaass at you including the Number Ones documentary btw) And then the kids were scheming and plotting on Rushka. I can't with these Jackson children lol. But I can't tell you enough how I LOVE reading Mike and Ari as parents. They're such an adorable family.
Congrats to Jimmy (Obee) and his big label signing!! Of course, father Michael had to step in and make sure that he son wouldn't be taken advantage of in the contracts. Can't be having another TLC moment...ooops. But no for real, it's good that Michael is protective like that as far as the industry because they would do anything that they wanted to Jimmy with no shame had they not taken the proper precautions.
Anyway, awwwing and Toni and her family. They's so cute. Can't wait until she's back in the picture.
I'm keeping calm for now but don't make me get angry with you for these next chapters. Lisa BETTER NOT start ANYTHING! I mean it! We all know that Lisa's comments weren't yours specifically darlin'. No worries.
I'm curious to see what's up with Rushka's plan. I have an idea but I wanna keep my mouth shut to see what actually happens.
GREAAAAAT chapter honey! Can't wait for more. <3 :*
P.S. That statue of Michael and Bubbles always disturbed the mess out of me lol. It looks so weird. And I hollered when Jimmy was like he was wondering why Bubbles had on lipstick looool. Ok I'm done now. *poofs*
Author's Response:
LOL I know it was...it took me 15 long and stressful days to finish it (on and off of course) I was so tired of the chapter after I was done, I didn't want to read it lol but if I had to go thru the stress to write it, y'all were going to read it with no complaints lol jk
Why you getting mad at Lisa reminiscing? leave the girl alone with her thoughts lol
ugh yes, I have always said that. Michael was really bad at explaining himself...some of the things he said didn't make him sound better tho I got what he meant. Poor baby had to suffer, that's too bad because he was such a good man.
The Bellands were a tough thing to write, I am now tired of them after writing all of that about them lmaooo but you will read more about them and Jimmy's past soon.
lmaoooo don't act like you didn't know Arianna was gangsta
lmfaoooo Vincent is a nag but he means well....those two will be alright
Paris is fun to write, she's a little trouble maker like the way her "mom" was when Ari was young....and yes girl I had to include the number ones special that was my shit! I love that they took the time to celebrate Michael while he was going thru so much :')
Yessss at Jimmy getting his record deal, that poor boy needed some good news after what he and Ari dealt with Seattle. *sigh*
Emmanuela is here!! I too can't wait for crazy Toni to return to work. I know she'll come back with a bang lol
Hey, don't be getting angry, nothing has happened yet lmao Lisa is just saying hello lmaooo and Ruskha is innocent lol or is she? So you think you know what Rushka is here for huh? I'm curious to know what it is.....
lmaoooooo I think that statue is weird as well....Jimmy is silly but for real haven't you ever wonder why Bubbles had lipstick on? I did lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2013 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 163 - We are here...Now what?
YAY you updated!! lol I've missed my MJ and Ari :) I'm glad to see you back hunnie and I hope that everything is okay with you personal life, you already know that I'm always here for you when you need to vent, chat, or even just need a friendly long distance hug lol Love ya *__*
Ugh I've always hated the 60 Minutes interview with Ed Bradley :(( the way the whole interview was edited and Ed's commentary between each topic just irked the hell out of me. Poor Michael he didn't deserve to be treated that way and you can tell he was in a lot of pain during that interview SMH the madness never stops.
Now that we now know the real story behind who Gina Belland was and that its really her sister Anastasia behind all this mess, hopefully the Belland's will back off and respect Jimmy's decision if he wants to get to know them or not. They seem like nice people but as Arianna said they can all go about this the right way without courts and all that craziness, don't confuse poor Jimmy this whole situation is hard enough why make it even more complicated than it has to be. Awwwhh Jimmy is such a mama's boy no doubt about that lol the video of him singing Part of Your World is so adorable :')
*squeals* Look at lil Arianna all young in the High School Beauty Pageant she's so gorgeous there OMGGG!!
Tsk tsk Michael and Vincent's relationship is a mess and a half those two never are on the same page, but thankkkkk GOD everything with Renee's estate and the catalog worked out in Michael's favor ^__^ *does happy dance* lol
Paris is such a lil DIVA lord have mercy MJ and Ari sure do have their hands full with this child lol
I was still staring at the turned off TV. With a sigh, I turned to Leigh and asked her, "What does it mean when someone says they wanna rock with you?"
Leigh looked at me and said, "Well, that could mean anything. It could mean they wanna dance with you, hang with you..."
"No." I stopped her. "What if someone says it with a cheesy smile then what does it mean?"
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Dead AF she's to much
My dad smiled at her and thanked her. "Thank you, Ruskha. I can't wait to see them but you didn't have to bring them all the way over here. You could have mailed them."
"I couldn't resist coming over here and giving it to you personally. I have been dying to show you this." Rushka answered my dad.
I stared at them with huge eyes as my brother Prince scooted closer to me and whispered, "Add Rushka in your list." I looked at him and he added with a shrug,"You may be right."
"And if I'm not?" I asked him. He shrugged. "Then we will have fun playing detective."
Ctfu!!! who are these kids? lol they are way to mature for their age Lmfao this part had me done!
"No, you guys....wait...listen...no one is breaking up this family. Rushka is making some clothes for daddy, that is all. Ok?"
"You knew she was coming over?" Paris asked.
"Of course I knew. Now can you all stop with this shenanigans?"
I'm glad Arianna was able to stop Paris and her suspicious mind lol she needs to focus on being a kid and leave the grown up stuff for the adults to deal with.
Woooooooooo Hoooooo Jimmy got a record deal!!!! He deserves it and I know he'll do great his parents taught him well ^__^ :)) Awwwhh Shonny's voicemail to Jimmy was sweet those two belong together someday!
Toni's daughter Emmanuela is soo cute :) Her and JC seem to be doing just fine as new parents. Toni finally seems to be happy and getting her life back on track, good for her.
WAIT! PAUSE! What's this letter from LMP about and wtf why does she want Michael to meet her in downtown LA? This can't be good!
Ok drama still ahead, BIG fight, court drama, LMP drama and what is Rushka's plan in this story? Oh! Just know that I'm watching you Drea!!
LMFAOOOOOO
XOXO Toni
Author's Response:
lmaooo at the gifs
aww yes, it's great to be back and finally upload the chapter that took 15 days to write (on and off) :/ and I know hun, you are a great friend. I'll be alright. :)
ugh yes the 60 minutes interview was so bad and it didn't make MJ look any better, I honestly cringe when I watch it. I felt so bad for Mike because Ed obviously was looking at him like he was guilty and MJ is just not the best explainer tho I got what he meant, Ed obviously didn't :((
Yes, those Bellands are a mess, it was exhausting to write about them to be honest lol but I hope you all got it and more to come soon about them and Jimmy and I have always loved the vine video of Obee singing part of your world lol, he's such a goofball
*squeals louder* lol wasn't my Adriana beautiful as a teen, with her light eyes and baby face *__* she is still gorgeous!!
Vincent is a mess but believe it or not, he and Mike will be alright
Paris, I enjoy writing her :))) lmaooo she had fun playing detective but it was a big no no to send baby brother Blanket to hide in the closet and spy on Rushka and Michael lol
Yesss to Jimmy getting a record deal, he needed some good news after all the drama, lol at the Leo gif, sexy tho *__*
Emmanuela is here!! Toni and JC are happy together (does it sound like your teenage dream coming true? lol) and I can't wait until Toni return to work with her crazy self...like you ^__^
and yep yep you read correctly LMP is back and Rushka hasn't done anything yet lmaoooo don't be watching me
love youuuuuuu xoxo
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2013 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Dammit!! Cliffhanger !! I can't wait for this LMP drama to get crackin, as well as some stuff with Jimmy's crazy aunt! Please update ASAP...
Author's Response:
lol sorry...hoping to have something for you all to read soon. I hope you could handle it. And as always thanks for reading and reviewing. xoxo