Date: Nov 21, 2014 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 2 - And it begins...
great so far! xx
Date: Nov 21, 2014 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
haha good start!
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2014 10:51 am Title: Chapter 169 - Tell Me The Truth....
I was going to review this chapter last night but my laptop died :((
Ok on to my review...
This situation with Ariana had me all in my feels
Like, you have no idea, when she finally revealed her secret to Michael I was like a never ending waterfall of tears LMAOOO also the trial stuff had me done :'((
It pisses me off how Mike had to sit there day after day and listen to each testimony full of lies It was dispicable what they did to him :/ my poor bb did not deserve that
In the end justice was served but it really did break Mike's heart and spirit :( that trial took so much from him
Ari's condition was thankfully caught early on so I'm keeping my fingers crossed that things will get better for her. I trust you know what you're doing :)
Jimmy and Shontelle are sooo damn cuteeee I can'tttt :') lol Yaaaaasss for See The Light I love that song so much!
JC FINALLY WAS A MAN AND STEPPED UP!! HALLELUJAH lmfaoooooo its about time he confronted his Mother ^_^
Toni doing Desperate Housewives wooooo hoooooo I'm so glad you included this part of Eva's career *_* that's when I became a fan of my boo lol
Cassie aka INNA better slaaay! She's doing her thing :) Tell Me is THAT song on her new Summer Day's EP
Family time at the pool with the Jackson's was so sweet :D I love seeing the Mommy side of Ari it really is special and Mike as a daddy is asjgjgihfjdjff he's the best!
Great chapter honey boo!! I'm finally all caught up and ready for the next update!
XOXOXO ♥♥
Author's Response:
boo, don't you hate when that happens? :( damn technology
aww the thing with Ari is tough but she handled it well and let the professional explain the situation. She needs Michael more than ever now. And the trial *sigh* I honestly did not want to write the trial and we all knows what happens in the court room so I kept it brief and told a short behind the scenes through Ari's eyes.
you are the only who has said that lol thank you for trusting me lol
remember JC seeked Toni, he wanted her so he knows he needs to do what he must to keep her and he is very mature unlike most guys :D
lol I had to. Desperate housewives is THAT show, I love it. You made me a fan and she was amazing in it
you know I love me some INNA lol
thanks honey love you!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2014 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 168 -- Actions Speak Louder Than Words...
God lord it feels like so much happened in this chapter lo
Yaaaaass finally Jimmy and Shontelle are together after everything that they've been through, jimmy better not mess it up! LMAO Ahhhh at them sharing a big romantic kiss in Times Square on New Years, it was magical *_*
Ugh the Neverland raids will forever break my heart. Those cops did WAY too much. Mike didn't deserve to have his privacy violated that way :(( I'm not ready for all this trial drama *takes deep breath*
Toni and JC need to get it together, JC better man up and tell his Mother to back off. I don't want them to end this relationship :( Marriage isn't something that should be rushed into, when the time is right they'll get there. Patience, patience, patience.
RAYMONE BAIN is a dirty snake, I never liked that woman :/ she always seemed like she was up to no good, Ari's instinct's are right, don't trust that bitch!!
THE BABIES ARE HERE!!!! Ahhhh they are New Years Babies *_* so cuteeee *gushes* lmaooo Yay at you including Adriana's real daughters in your story I love it! Welcome to the world Valentina Lima and Sienna Renee Jackson♥♥
Great chapter as always Love! Ahhh you included the WFY cartoon picture I sent you :) It came out really cute! And lastly yay at our girls doing the ALS Ice Bucket challenge ^_^
Much Love
XOXO
Author's Response:
lol it was hell to get eveything I wanted to include in this chapter so I can avoid writing more on the next one
YASSSS for Jimmy and Shonny. I had this whole scene for months prior writing this scene about fireworks and celebration and these two getting together and most importantly the babies being born at the same time. I wanted it to feel real and intense hence why I go back and forth between each scene.
I hate the raids and the videos. I wish I didn't have to use them but sadly, they did happen
exactly, marriage is something that should be thought carefully and he soon will get that. He is just a people's pleaser
Raymone, ugh...you will see soon enough what happens to her
I loved that cartoon you made for me. Thanks again for making it. Love you!! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2014 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 167 - Some Things Are Best Kept A Secret!
This chapter was updated 4 months ago OMG I feel like the biggest WFY Promoter FLOP :(( 
But I'm here now and I'm ready to get caught up!
HOLY HELL what did I come back to? Ari has this big ass secret and she doesn't want anyone to know about it especially Michael O_O idk girl I think she should tell him ASAP! I hope whatever is wrong with her she'll be okay, my bb can't die uh uh no ma'am we can't even go there LMAO
YAAAASSS TWINS!!! Mike Jackson has that good good, chileeee he got that super sperm CTFU!!! Just kidding. Seriously yaaay I can't wait to meet the new bundles of Jackson Joy!
Omg that was soooo sweet of Ari to hook up Cassie with producers so that she could get started on her singing. I'm so excited at how you included INNA aka cassie in this story. I loveeee her music thanks to you :) This is going to slay!
And as for Toni's career, I'm so proud of her ^_^ from assistant to actress that's so dope! Go Toni do your thang girl! LOL Done at Toni throwing Jazmin's number away hahahaha
Oop! Shonny ain't playin no games in this chapter lol I don't even blame her for ignoring Jimmy's call. He's been the biggest jerk of the century to her so now he needs to sit back and drown in his own pain for a little while.
Say Hello to Goodbye is THAT song btw it's honestly one of my favs from Miss Shontelle *_*
Ahhhhh at Michael's Birthday celebration with all his family! Even though there are times that they don't see eye to eye at the end of the day FAMILY will always be there no matter what.
Loved the pictures, Vogue videos, the Festival Yesssss I was loving it ALL. SLAY, Mrs Ari Jackson, SLAAAAAY!! Ugn don't even get me started on the flop ass Man in the Mirror movie >.< when I first seen it I was like ..... I couldn't deal then and I refuse to deal now smh smh
Great chapter honey!! *Jay Z voice* On to the next one LMAOOOOO
XOXO Toni♥♥
Author's Response:
lmfaooo at this JT gif, it's ok, we all get busy...you are here now, that's all that matters <333
a lot more things will be revealed soon enough
and yes, twins, you know Michael wants a big family lol he was going to get 7 kids out of Ari whether she liked it or not lol
Arianna is a giving person, she would do anything for her family and friends and never expects anything back
lmaooo everyone laughed at Toni thowing Jazmin's number lol but yeah Toni's career is taking off, she is a big movie star now ;)
Shonny and Jimmy tsk tsk
thank you honey for the review. It means a lot to me to have your support <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2014 01:25 am Title: Chapter 169 - Tell Me The Truth....
Giiiirl, I finally read the update! I'm so upset that I'm still not receiving emails from this site about updates *side eye*
Anyway, the beginning of this chapter had me in my feelings a little bit. I had to hold back my tears because even the mentioning of that trial makes me so angry. And then the situation with Mike getting hurt and not being able to change out of his pajamas and the judge being a buttface...and with Michael's reaction after being acquitted...I can't deal with that. I'm not emotionally stable. I can say that I'll always love the footage of him in the studio with Randy from his Geraldo Rivera interview. He was so adorable.
I'm just so glad that Ari was there to comfort him through it all. Although I know her feelings about living at the Prince's palace in Bahrain are probably going to come back to bite them all in the butt especially since she had expressed those feelings with Jermaine. But I'm happy that she and Mike and the kids are trying to move on with their lives post-trial.
I smiled at Jimmy and Shonny doing their thing in the studio and gushed so hard and Mike being concerned for Jimmy's well-being. He's such a great father.
I fangirled at the pic that you chose of Mike at the water park though because that's honestly one of my top favorite pictures of him. He knew that he a mess with those ridiculous disguses lol. And seeing mommy Ari...
That was so heart-meltinggggg.
I'm soooooo proud of her for finally coing out and revealing to Michael what she had been holding back for so long. I do feel like she still wouldn't have said anything to him had he not seen what had happened at the pool though. And although I'm a little worried about the situation progressing into something worse, the doctor did say that they caught it at an earlier stage so I'm trusting in you that things will get better as far as Ari's condition. Please don't let anything bad happen to her even if I am supposed to be expecting the unexpected.
And that video of Adriana hitting her head...that sounded and looked so painful!
Yeeeesss at JC finally stepping up to his mother and telling her what the deal was so that he could have his Toni bear back. Just like Toni said, he must've realized what he had after it was gone. And yaaas at Toni beginning her career on Desperate Housewives lol. The whole time that she was giving the synopisis of the season I was thinking, I literally just watched this because of Drea and Toni lol. And JC's song "Blowin' Me Up With Her Love," I didn't know that he sung that! I was trying to remember where I heard that song from but then I saw that it was from the Drumline sountrack so that obviously answered my question. I think it played during the end credits on the movie or something if I remember correctly. Either way, I know I heard it from Drumline lol.
Ayeeee at Inna doing her thing in the music business too. They all are just working progress and living their lives as positive as they can. I just hope that it stays that way.
P. S. Praiiiise at Mike and Ari getting it in!!
That is alll. I love you soooo much! I'm still aww'ing at the thank you letter from the foundation! That was sweet of them to send you that with Adriana's signature. And happy belated birthday to Shonny!
Author's Response:
ugh, the trial! I honestly did not want to write about the trial which is why I kept it simple. There was no need to write about what went on in the court room when we all know what happened there. Instead I decided to focus on the 'behind the scenes' and tell you a brief background story through Arianna's eyes.
Sadly, everything involving Michael's life came back to bit them, it's the price of fame but it's important to move on and live your life, life is too short. *Rihanna's voice* live your life eh eh eh ...sorry got carried away lol
lol Jimmy and Shonny need adult supervision jk but yeah Michael's passion is being dad and he loves his kids so he will always feel protective over all of them
lol really? I love that picture. Evey time I see it I be "Mike, you know we know it's you, right?" lol his disguises are a mess but he tried tho lol
Arianna understood that Michael needed to know, it wasn't fair to keep him in the dark though she was just trying to protect him and kinda avoid the whole situation but at the end she also realize that she needed his support throughout all of this.
That footage of Arianna hitting head, poor thing! I cringe every time I see it and try to actually avoid watching it. I felt so bad for her. I think she felt more embarrased than anything.
JC loves Toni and is a mature guy, he knew what he had to do to make things right with Toni. Remember, he is the one who seeked her out so he knows what he needs to do to keep her by his side. And you didn't know JC sung that song? lol girl, that MV was all over MTV when it first came out...when MTV actually played music
INNA is my girl, love her
Yes, girl I am so happy I got that. I am going to frame it and put it up. I love it! and I love you more!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2014 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 169 - Tell Me The Truth....
Aww so Michael finally knows .. I hope this story has a happy end :/ :) I will be crying my eyes out if anything happens lol
Author's Response:
aww yes Michael had to know and we will soon find out
thank you for the review! It means a lot and I love to read what y'all think xoxo
Date: Oct 06, 2014 08:04 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Great start!
Author's Response:
thank you so much!! glad you enjoyed it.
I hope to hear more from you xoxo
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2014 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 169 - Tell Me The Truth....
Let's just say that when I saw that you had updated, I almost hyperventilated!
That entire trial was nothing but a heartache and I loved how well descripted it was.
To this day, I will never understand why Michael chose Bahrain. It's hotter than the devil's ass crack out there!
But seriously, stress dementia? You just know how to break my heart, don't cha? I just hope Ari is gonna be okay.
Im just jumbled up right now! So much is happening and it's all coming to an end soon.. I just can't... Great update (as always)!
Author's Response:
lol awww really? that's sweet. I never thought my story could get someone excited that way. Thanks!
I really wanted to keep that trial as minimal and simple as possible and focus more on the 'behind the scenes' because we all know what happen in the court room why relive it?
looool I've always said that. He didn't stay long in Bahrain tho
aww I am sorry, all I will say is remain positive, everything and more will be revealed soon
thank you so much for the review!! I love to read your thoughts! xoxo
Date: Oct 05, 2014 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 169 - Tell Me The Truth....
Really ? Really girl ? I swear you worse than Shonda. Why you playing with my emotions ? Why do you do this to me - every damn time man. I just wanna punch somebody (you). Stress dementia ? I can't.
Though I love how you wrote about the trial very ddelicately, I cannot overlook the fact that my girl is gonna die. I am pressed. But I'll wait till the story ends before I fully cuss you out because I know you like toying with my emotions, so I'll wait to see how this pans out.
Author's Response:
damn really? punch me? damn! you are a violent one, aren't you? lol Worse than Shonda? wow just wow
all I will say is wait, my lips are sealed
and yeah, I didn't want to write about the trial in a detail way. I figure we all know what happens in that trial so why not focus more on the 'behind the scenes' plus we don't need to go back to that time in Michael's life and be sad for him. I wish I could avoid it but it did happen so I thought this was the best way to write about it.
I'll wait for my cuss...meet you at the end lol
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2014 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 168 -- Actions Speak Louder Than Words...
Yaaaas at this update being on Michael's birthday! We love you Michael!!!!
Now as for the story, all of this drama with Jimmy had me mentally exhausted. I'm so glad that he finally pulled himself together and made it right with both Feven and Shonny. Although we all knew that Shonny and Jimmy were gonna end up together anyway. Their feelings for each other are way too strong. I honestly had the same reaction as Maxen, Jae-R and David lol. "About damned time!"
I couldn't even watch the video footage of the feds destroying Neverland because...nah. The last time I saw that, I got way too upset and mad and in my feelings and I'm on my chi and oneness mode so wooo saa. But I know that if I were there, I would've had the same reaction as Ari. She handled that very well.
I'm dreading this trial but it has to happen. I can't wait to see how all of this is going to go especially since the Jacksons just welcomed two more little Miss Jacksons into the world. That's so adorable how they both were born on the first instead of one being on Dec. 31 and the other on Jan. 01 lol.
Raymone...I don't even want to get into my feelings about her especially after reading how grimy she was from Bill and Javon's book. *rolls eyes* I'm glad that Ari was there to speak up for Mike, though, because he needs her as a backbone. A woman's intution is no joke and Ari definitely knows that something is up. Michael better open his eyes because Mrs. Jackson ain't having it.
As for Toni and her issues with JC...he better listen to what she has to say and take her feelings into consideration before he loses what he has. They have a good thing going and he needs to realize that he can't please everyone. He needs to live his life for himself and for the sake of his relationship with Toni and their child together.
But anyway, I enjoyed the chapter love!
P.S. Adriana was so adorable in her photo shoot in Rio and her passion for charity. She's an angel *_* and awww at her and Eva accepting the ALS ice bucket challenges. :)
Author's Response:
That was the plan! lol
lmfaooo that's funny you said that. When I wrote that scene, I was like "Damn, about time I got here" because I was so tired of writing them fighting tho that was the plan and because it also meant "finally, I am getting near the end". Not in a bad way. I am proud of the story and I love writing but is definitely time to end it so anyway laughing at my own reaction, I add it in figuring that everyone could relate since they waited so long for this day as well lol
that footage was just horrible and I didn't want to use it but sadly it did happen. I think at a moment like that, you have to act like Ari and stay rational and sane for the sake of your husband. He is going to need all that strength from you later. *sigh*
I honestly don't want to write about the trail. I never did. It's just not a moment of Michael I want to relive and I thought that would be cute. For some reason, I had this vision of them being born with fireworks in the background and Ari telling them that the world threw them a bday party so in order to get the fireworks I needed them to be born by midnight lol
Raymone...you all about to see what's going to happen to her and you know Ari don't play
Toni is very strong for dealing with that and JC is mature enough to realize his fault. I see these two going strong.
I loved that footage of Adriana. I have been dying to use it. She is so passionate about charity work. I love her@
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2014 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 168 -- Actions Speak Louder Than Words...
Jimmy and Shontelle are finally together !! Yay ! 😻💕 I love michaels and Ariana's relationship a86;a039; And twin sisters ? Paris gonna love this along with the others 😌
Author's Response:
*throws confetti in the air* YASSS!! took them long enough, huh. lol
Ari's and MJ's relationahip is special. They had their ups and downs but it has only made them stronger and yes! Paris will be the most happiest!
Thank you for the review! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2014 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 167 - Some Things Are Best Kept A Secret!
Yaaaay for the update! I hope that you enjoyed your Michael day. Though he's gone, his love lives forever.
Now for the story...I'm curious to find out what this is that Ari is keeping from Michael. I hope that she tells him soon. Pleaaaaase don't tell me that she's going through the same thing that her mother went through. I beg of you. Don't make me get emotional.
Oh my at them having twins though! Lawd this is about to be something crazy. It's already wild that the timing for the due date is near the time that the trial is bound to begin so I hope they don't lose their minds. This is about to be a mess and a half. Lawd, I'm feeling for them already.
That was sweet of Ari to give Cassie a chance to prove/show herself to the world. She's such a great sister. Yasss at the commercials for the festival. Mrs. Jackson better slay! Just giving me all of my life and then some.
I felt bad for laughing at the fact that Toni just unbotheredly threw Jazmin's number away lol. But the video at them at the festival was slghalshgas.
I don't blame Shonny for not wanting to answer Jimmy's call. She doesn't need any stresses in her life right now especially since she's doing well for herself.
The fact that the Jackson family all came together to push aside their difference wiill always make me gush. That is what you call a family. No matter what people may say and how bad they may try to make the Jacksons seem, everyone should know that they all loved each other dearly. Some people just tend to show their love in different ways and they were those type of people.
Anyway, can't wait for the next update!!! This was a great chapter honey. <3
P.S. I was already fangirling with you about the Vogue magazine when you showed Toni and I the pics but alsghalgha. Adriana did that. Do you hear me?! SHE DID THAT! Oh and that Man in the Mirror movie was straight up shit on film. The MJ fandom should never ever speak of that blasphemy lol.
loooool. I'm jk. I love you!!
Author's Response:
haaayyy boooo....my MJ day was good. I try to not be sad on that day anymore and prefer to just remember the good times.
I don't want to get you emotional but this has been my plan since the beginning of the story. I am sorry :(( all I can is stay positive, everything will be revealed soon. You'll see that maybe is not as bad as you think.
IKR?! Can you believe it? 7 kids! MJ was going to make sure he had at least that many out of Arianna lol
Arianna is such a giving person, kinda....well, exactly like me lol. We give, give, give...to see people smile and happy is our reward.
looool you would laugh at Toni throwing away Jazmin's number lol but yes, I love that footage of them together :D
ah! Shonny...tsk tsk...we can't blame her...Jimmy has done enough
"The fact that the Jackson family all came together to push aside their difference wiill always make me gush. That is what you call a family. No matter what people may say and how bad they may try to make the Jacksons seem, everyone should know that they all loved each other dearly. Some people just tend to show their love in different ways and they were those type of people. " <----- Exactly! family fight, is normal but at the end of the day they all came together and stood up for each other.
loool you don't want to see my Adriana collection and lmfaoooo remove these gifs off this page right now. You did not just disown me looool I can't with you
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 167 - Some Things Are Best Kept A Secret!
Wow, loved this chapter. The slow down was nice after so much craziness. I'm glad the baby or babies in this case are okay. :) Twins, huh? That's crazy. Michael did always say he wanted a big family. Lol They're such a cute family and I love their kids so much. :) I can't wait to meet these new Jacksons. :D
Although, you've got me worried about Ari. Arianna's not gonna die in this story is she? I couldn't handle it if she did and Michael would just shut down. I cannot believe you went through this WHOLE chapter and didn't tell us the big secret!! I was so sad when the chapter ended! I am so scared for Arianna though and the worry is KILLING me!!! I really hope she's going to be okay. :(
GOODBYE JAZMIN!!! Thank all the Gods for Toni. Jimmy definitely does NOT need her in his life!! Without her, one of the obstacles blocking him from Shonny, is gone. :) Hopefully soon they'll make things work. They love each other so much. :)
I couldn't believe all the things Arianna did for everyone. She is the best. I love that she helped Toni and Cassie with their careers, she is so amazing, it's crazy. I still laugh at how concerned you made everyone when Toni first came into the picture. :)
I still miss Renee though. She was amazing, I'll admit to being a little teary-eyed when you had Arianna reminisce about her. She was amazing. So sad that Rita Hayworth really went through that. :/
Great work though! I loved this chapter so much. Your stories always bring out so many emotions in me. You are a fantastic writer, you really are. I wish I could write more like you do. Everything in this story feels so realistic and I really feel as these characters do. Beautiful, beautiful work. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I love these characters so much. I think after you finish this story fully I'll start from the beginning again, just to go through the amazing journey of "Waiting For You" all over again. :)
Much love girl! This was nice to read on such a sad day. :) <3
Author's Response:
hi honey, it's been a while. I hope all is well
lol yes, MJ did always say he wanted a big family and now he does, though I am sure 7 kids is not enough for him :D
aww I am sorry to get everyone worry about Ari. This has been my plan since the beginning. All I will say is stay positive, everything will be revealed soon.
was Jazmin really that bad? lol but yep, she is officially gone and now we can move on the next chapter.
Arianna has a big heart. To give is her biggest reward, she never asks for anything back. She just likes to see everyone happy. And yeah, lol that was the point. I wanted y'all to be like 'oh no, another bitch getting ready to break Ari and MJ apart' when y'all met Toni but nah, Toni is a sweetheart
aww I too miss writing Renee. She used to bring so much peace in a tense and stressful situation. She is missed but never forgotten.
"Great work though! I loved this chapter so much. Your stories always bring out so many emotions in me. You are a fantastic writer, you really are. I wish I could write more like you do. Everything in this story feels so realistic and I really feel as these characters do. Beautiful, beautiful work. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I love these characters so much. I think after you finish this story fully I'll start from the beginning again, just to go through the amazing journey of "Waiting For You" all over again" <---- wow, I have no words for this but thank you! you are so sweet. I never thought of myself as a great writer. I just enjoy writing these images in my head for people to enjoy. If you are enjoying it then that is all that matters. Your words really meant a lot to me. Thank you so much!!
Date: Jun 24, 2014 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 167 - Some Things Are Best Kept A Secret!
Oh so you cant just let niggas be great huh? You gotta toy with us and play with our emotions ? Michael's bout to get offa these charges with his dumb ass talking bout he got twins because his rent paying 3rd leg got some extra air. Jimmy done got some sense and realizes his mistakes and maybe get wth Shontelle. Toni shaded Jazzy Pha over there and she aint even know it and got herself a boo and some kids (I know she just got one but here's to her and JC knocking boots like H-Town and getting themselves a football team, Cassie recording but oh I told you dont mess with Mike but you done jumped on the train and headed on over to Ari. So she going blind Alzheimer's, cancer, her uterus walls gon fall out ? What you gon do to old girl. Sigh. Idk why I put my emotions into your stories, it never ends well for me
Author's Response:
"...with his dumb ass talking bout he got twins because his rent paying 3rd leg got some extra air" <---lmfaooooo LET HIS 3RD LEG BE GREAT!
"So she going blind Alzheimer's, cancer, her uterus walls gon fall out ? What you gon do to old girl." <----why do I get a feeling like you don't trust me? -__-
"Idk why I put my emotions into your stories, it never ends well for me" <---Well Damn!
