Date: Aug 18, 2022 08:16 am Title: Chapter 11 - She's Dangerous....
Oooo, Julie is pretty. Anyway, glad to see how Mike and Ari are progressing. ^^
Date: Aug 17, 2022 11:48 am Title: Chapter 10 - Heal the world....
Nice tribute to Liz :)
Date: Aug 17, 2022 10:59 am Title: Chapter 9 - Will you be there?...
Oh wow..Ari handled it better than I thought she would have..was sure she would have turned into Miss Ice Queen..or blow up at him..whichever came first. Boy was I wrong..
Date: Aug 17, 2022 09:47 am Title: Chapter 8 - One day in your life...
uh-oh, I sense a mess ahead..
Date: Aug 17, 2022 09:39 am Title: Chapter 7 - This is it....
On the one hand, Renee's concern is legit, but at the same time I hope she doesn't turn into another Abraham Quintanilla.
I can most certainly see the chemistry between the two..makes me wonder how Ari will be when Mike truly abandons the vegetarian diet, which he was allowed to do if he chose.
Date: Aug 17, 2022 09:08 am Title: Chapter 6 - Blame it on the boogie...
Renee is such a supportive mother and she kind of reminds me of Naru's mom(from the anime Sailor Moon). She's beautiful, too.
Date: Aug 17, 2022 09:01 am Title: Chapter 5 - You give me butterflies...
Arianna had better make sure she gets Michael's number..
going great so far. ^^^
Date: Aug 17, 2022 08:50 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Meeting...
That was a cute little encounter and Michael's nervousness was adorable. ^^
Date: Aug 17, 2022 07:40 am Title: Chapter 3 - Who's BAD??? ....
Watch the change in tenses..
other than that, good chapter. Looking forward to the meeting between the two.
Date: Aug 17, 2022 07:24 am Title: Chapter 2 - And it begins...
Slight inconsistency in tenses at the beginning but looking good otherwise.
Date: Aug 17, 2022 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Awwh, preteen love at first sight.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2021 09:08 am Title: Chapter 20 - All I need....
I love that bubbles cameo. He's so like his daddy hahahaha
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2021 09:08 am Title: Chapter 20 - All I need....
I love that bubbles cameo. He's so like his daddy hahahaha
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2021 06:05 am Title: Chapter 35 - Remember the time...
It really make me sad. Michael relying on pills for him to sleep. Arianna will be hurt if she found put that its not just her imagination
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2021 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Another part of me....
Awesome read so far :)