Date: Jun 19, 2015 04:56 am Title: Chapter 32 - Destiny!
Twelve children.. OH HELL NAH...
Date: Jun 19, 2015 03:38 am Title: Chapter 17 - She drives me wild...
This story is life to me right now.. Ctfu..
Date: Jun 19, 2015 03:35 am Title: Chapter 16 - Baby, be mine....
DAMN!!!!!!!!!! That shit was interesting.. CTFU
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2015 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 172 - Here's the new plan...
great chapter
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2015 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 171 - Checkmate!
Ok first off, yaaaaas at Michael finally coming to his senses and pulling himself together to fire Raymone and to put Rushka in her place! Took him long enough smh. I'm proud of him though. He handled the revelation of and confrontation to Raymone better than I expected. I assume that if it were Ari doing the houseclearning, it would've been a lot worst because Ari don't play that. There's nothing more scary than a woman at rage esepcially when it comes to her stuff lol.
Moving on from that, I love how you included their Christmas with the kids receiving Kenya. That will always be priceless.
Seems like Ari and Toni had a great time at the concert *_* That's so ironic how Cassie just so happened to call her just as Yong was performing. I'm ready to see how his reaction to meeting up with Cassie and Michael will be. I'm sure it'll be interesting. And I'll always love the footage of Mike's visit to Tokyo especially for the visit to Camp Zama and the fan appreciation party.
Praaaaaiiiise the Lord at Ari deciding to keep the house! I knew she wouldn't let us or her parents and family down. God bless her heart. That flashback that she had with her mother spazzing out on her was scary though. I'm glad that Michael was there to save the day. I can't even imagine what would've happened if he wasn't there.
I loved seeing Ari interacting with the kids. Leave it to Paris to get the twins to join in on her shenanigans lol. Prince, Brian and Blanket were obviously not amused. And I'm glad that Michael let Ari know of his plans to go back on tour early instead of waiting to the last minute. I hope that everything goes well with that given we know how tragic it turned out to be in reality :/ Please don't break my heart, Drea. I'm trusting in you.
And from the moment Shonny asked how she could've let "that" happen...I just knew that she was pregnant before I even continued reading it. Lord have mercy. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Michael and Ari as grandparents? lol I can't. Hopefully she does decide to keep it and to tell Jimmy about it...which I'm sure that she will. The question is, how will Jimmy's reaction be? Or Michael and Ari's? :O
Anyway, I hope that Ari's condition gets better. It felt great to be able to read her having the chance to enjoy herself for once. Overall, I enjoyed the chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens next and what this big surprise ending will be! I love you, big sis!!! <333
P.S. Mike can keep joking around if he wants to but he knows that he misses Toni and just doesn't want to admit it lol. That's his partner in crime.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2015 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 171 - Checkmate!
Toni is crazy ! 😂😂 In a good way of course .. But shontelle is pregnant🙀 Can't wait to see how this goes 😄😌
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2015 07:08 am Title: Chapter 171 - Checkmate!
once again great chapter was so worth the wait hopefully the next chapter will come sooner instead of later i really love this story
Date: May 02, 2015 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 171 - Checkmate!
Has it really been four years? Omj. I was here when this story first came out. A lot of writers have come and gone. That's for sure.
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2015 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 170 - Memories are the key not to the past but to the future
beautiful story i am looking forward to the next chapter keep up your amazing writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I am so glad you enjoyed it. More to come soon. xx
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2015 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 170 - Memories are the key not to the past but to the future
I'm soooo late reading this chapter *hides in shame* But yaaaay for this update! I see you skipped over the trial period to spare us the heartbreak. Bless your heart and thank you for that because I wasn't ready lol.
Now for Vincent finally having a heart to heart conversation with Michael...I cry. But I WAS NOT ready for Vincent passing away! How dare you?! It's already one thing that Ari lost her mom but now her dad and having to make the decision as to whether or not to visit the home in New York with all of her memories AND taking care of her little brother?!
^^^ this too much. I cry :(
But this part right here "My son in law sat quietly in front of me pretending to read the dessert menu though I knew damn well that Michael had no interest in ordering a dessert afterwards. Michael never did. He had an appetite of a baby." <--that had me cackling. Vincent knew his son-in-law well even though he tried to hide it.
Toni and JC...I swear they weren't married in the last chapter I read unless I read over that part. I'm guessing they had gotten married during the period of the trial? Either way aaaaaayeeee! They're so cute and both are doing their thing with their careers and are encouraging and it's just so beautiful what they have.
Jimmy taking Shonny's virginity...oh lord lol. I hope that things between those two remain on a happy note the way that they are now.
Also I'm proud of Cassie for doing her thing too and using her big sister as an inspiration. She's so cute.
Ari and her feelings for Raymone...SPEAK! Michael better listen to his wife. A woman's intuition isn't there for nothing.
Michael receiving his Guinness award and his appearance at the WMAs...I cry. He was so humble and perfect and ugh. I love that man so much that it hurts. I always get in my feelings watching how people basically worshipped the ground he walked on and yet he still remained so appreciative and respected his fans. I can't even really describe how perfect he was.
Ari and her little episodes are scaring me but I'm so glad that Michael was there to correct her on her negativity and added a lil magic action in the process *grins*. I was NOT prepared for that scene and I was sitting in the living room with my grandma while I was reading it so I had to quickly read through it to avoid the awkwardness lol but he laid it down! I laughed at them forgetting that the microphone for the elevator was off of mute once Michael started the elevator again though lol. Poor things.
Anyway, Michael and Ari are so beautiful and they both really have a good thing going. I just hope that Michael takes what Ari says about Raymone, and his team in general, into consideration and that nothing happens to Ari.
This was a great chapter and I can't wait for mooorrreee. I love you! <3 :*
Author's Response:
No worries hun. Better late than never I say. :D lol and you are welcome. Honestly, I felt that no one wanted to relive that and that there was no need to rewrite history (literally), everyone knows what happened so it was best to just focus on Arianna and Michael and its supporting characters.
I know no one was gonna be ready about Vincent but it's all for a reason, just trust me lol but done at you and this Prince gif looool shouldn't you be afraid of him by now? lol (inside joke)
lmaoooo I laughed too at that part. I'm glad somebody else found it funny. Vincent is very straightforward, haven't you notice? lol
Did they get married? *runs back to re-read the Toni and JC part of chapter* I am glad you mentioned it. That's what happens when you are writing and your head is really not in the story (tsk tsk). I was tired when I wrote that scene, sorry I just realized I wrote "husband", I guess I feel they are married already lol No they are not married and I just fixed where I wrote husband and changed it to "man" but yes, these two are doing what they have to make their relationship work.
Jimmy...Jimmy...this boy is something, isn't he? lol We'll have to see what happens with these two. I don't think Shontelle was complaining tho lol
Cassie is adorable lol
Yes, Ari is no fool and Raymone's time is gonna come.
I love love LOVE the footage of him at WMA 2006. It means everything to me. He was so beautiful!! And he deserved everything he got.
lmfaooo not you reading this next to your grandma loool omg that is too awkward, I don't even blame you for reading it fast. Yes, Michael laid it down on the girl!! And Ari, *sigh* my lips are sealed but things will be revealed soon.
Thank you Shy!! love you more!!!!
Date: Feb 03, 2015 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 170 - Memories are the key not to the past but to the future
Still here of course
Author's Response:
thank you!! I am so glad to hear that. It means so much your support. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2015 12:28 am Title: Chapter 170 - Memories are the key not to the past but to the future
Omg girl i finally found my password and finally was able to login in.
Poor Arianna. Now that Vincent is gone she is stepping up to help her siblings. Love the ending, they are still hot for each other. Their love is so strong. They have gone to hell and back but have always found a way back home. It's a fair tale love. Sad to see it end. Great chapter girl.
Author's Response:
OMG! where have you been? I am so glad you found it. I hope all is well with you and your family.
Arianna has a lot in her shoulders right now but she is strong and Michael is always there to watch over her.
They will always be hot for each other. With a husband like MJ wouldn't you be? lol
thanks honey! xoxo
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2014 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 169 - Tell Me The Truth....
I AM SO GLAD Ari FINALLY told Michael. Girl, she was KILLING me with that secret of hers as I was reading. Oh, hi by the way! I took a little time off from reading to focus on school but I'm glad I didn't get too far behind. Phew, that would have sucked. That being said... holy crap about everything going on. The news about Ari made me so sad and worried. I was in tears with them. I am comforted by the fact that her condition was caught early in though, I'd hate to see her walk down her mother's path. :/ I just hope she can manage to stay somewhat stress free with the circus they live in. I trust you though so I'll wait patiently for whatever you've got planned.
On a lighter note, those twins are freaking adorable! I love that they had twin girls! So, so cute!! I aww'd at Paris trying to help out with them. Family time at the pool for the Jacksons was perfect. It's nice to see both sides of their lives. They make such great parents and are such a perfect team!
I hated reading about the trial though, I know that literally destroyed Michael for real. :/ He went through so much and never deserved any of it. :( Poor Michael. I wish he really would have had an Arianna in his life.
I'm so glad JC stood up to his mother though. I was beginning to worry they wouldn't make it through this obstacle in their relationship. They're so cute together! Emmy is one lucky little lady. :)
Speaking of cute together... Jimmy and Shontelle are freaking adorable! I'm so glad to see them finally together. :) I can't wait to read more about them! Of course... Michael and Arianna are still my top favorite couple though. :D
Great work!! I loved these past two chapters and I look forward to reading the next one! :D Hope you're doing well. :)
Author's Response:
hi honey! no worries...school is important and we all get busy...I am just glad you are still with me.
thank you for trusting me. Yes, it is scary what Ari is going through and more things will be revealed as we go further along into the ending.
lol yes, I had to make them twins, saved me from writing two labors in the future lol I figured let's make Valentina and Sienna come now in one shot lol and Paris is extra happy. Now she has two sisters to play with.
I agree. If he had a woman who loved him and was supporting, understanding and loyal who knows maybe he would still be here. I wish he didn't have to go thru that but sadly it did happen
Emmy is very lucky indeed lol JC loves Toni and he wouldn't do anything to jeopordize what they have.
It's about time for Shonny and Jimmy, right? lol they are cute...puppy love but of course no one beats the main couple, Ari and MJ
thank you so much as always for your loyal reviews. I always enjoy reading them.
xoxo
Date: Nov 21, 2014 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 5 - You give me butterflies...
Wow! I really, really like what's happening so far!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for all the reviews you left, it means a lot to me to know you are enjoying the story and I hope to hear more from you.
xxoo
Date: Nov 21, 2014 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Who's BAD??? ....
love it!