[Report This]Date: May 29, 2011 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Anytime, Anyplace...
WOW! Those two are so BAD! They're really, really BAD! ;) Lol! That was a good mix! On the plane! Damn! Must've been quite a thrill for them! They both seemed to enjoy it! Lol! But on the other hand, I noticed how Michael looked down, something tells me he's starting to feel guilty about lying even though he has for awhile but it was intensified there by what Arianna said. I hope they can make it through that as well. It's not minor but I still pray they make it through. Keep up the great work, girl! I loved this and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
O_o How weird is that! I read your first line and I'm listening to BAD. LOL. That's funny. Yeah, these two are crazy in love. Thanks hun.
Date: May 29, 2011 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Anytime, Anyplace...
I really hope you do continue :) Out of all the stories I have read I must say that this is one of the best ones :D You are a great writer :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the compliment. I think I will continue due to the beautiful responses like yours.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2011 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Happy Birthday, Michael...
OMG!! Wonderful chapters!! I loved them!! I'm glad Michael and Arianna are married now, I thought how he surprised her was SO cute!! Michael is such a romantic, wow! :) I am still concerned about Michael's continuous lies about the pills though, he's only human and he makes mistakes, I just hope they can make it through if and when she finds out. I'm glad I make you smile, I love making people happy! It makes me happy! And Michael made me laugh yet again!! That part where he tickled Arianna 'till she called him the sexiest man in the world was great! I love these two together!! Very nice work, I can't wait to read more!! :D
Author's Response:
Michael loves to make people laugh. I'm glad one of them is you.
Date: May 25, 2011 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Happy Birthday, Michael...
Aww i cant beleive they got married!! Im so happy for them. But i still got a bad feeling about Tatiana and that other guy (Whos name i cant remeember) but anyways, i hope everything goes well, they dont need no more heartache!
Lovely update! Cant wait for another one! :)
Author's Response:
aww thank you hun...only time will tell if Tatiana and Bradley will come back in the future.
Date: May 24, 2011 09:29 am Title: Chapter 35 - Remember the time...
OMG.... i hope he tells her so she dont have to go through another scare. That was terrifying... i dont blame her for being so scared. I hope either she finds out or he tells her before something tragic happens. I dont think i could handle that. lol.
I just started reading this story and i have read every chapter up to this one..... i love it so far and am a fan of your work. Cant wait to see where this is going. I hope everything works out though... they both cant handle no more heartache.
LOVE IT.... UPDATE SOON!! XOXOX
Author's Response:
Aww New reader! I love it!!. Thank you for reviewing and I'm so happy you are enjoying it so far. I hope to read more reviews from you and that you will continue to like my story.
Michael is going through some hard time right now, he always hated to tour even having Arianna there is hard for him and his body to be performing almost every night. I hope MJ learns how to deal with the stress with out medication but we'll see.
xoxo
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2011 07:36 am Title: Chapter 34 - The Royal Couple...
Aww how sweet!! I'm so glad Vincent came back to apologize and fix things with Arianna!! I'm so glad things are going so well!! I'm so happy for those two!! You know technically, just like Prince Charles and Princess Diana, Michael and Arianna are a royal couple, after all Michael is the King of Pop! Lol! I remember that part about "Dirty Diana" I found that really funny that, that song was her favorite and Michael took it out of the show! Lol! And girl, that line from Michael, “Hallelujah!! Thank God for us being so horny”, that had me laughing so much!!! I was like "Michael!!" Lol! He cracks me up!! Anyways, keep up the wonderful work, girl! I love it and I can't wait for more!!
P.S. About the lying, I know Michael's only human and he makes mistakes, I'm just worried that's all. Can't help it really. :D
Author's Response:
Aawww thank you....and you are right about Arianna and Michael being a royal couple as well. The King of Pop and the Princess of Hollywood. I love the story too of Diana and Michael, he talked so in awe of her. And that line that Michael says LOL, Michael is a funny guy! I'm glad it made you laugh! I love reading your reviews. You put a smile on my face. :)
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2011 01:12 am Title: Chapter 34 - The Royal Couple...
wow i was recently watching that on youtube, its amazing how you added her to the picture lol
Author's Response:
were you? how ironic! and LOL yeah sorry I got carried away with the picture but I couldn't help it...
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2011 06:38 am Title: Chapter 33 - Behind the mask...
More wonderful chapters!! I love this story so much! Though, I don't like Michael lying to Arianna...that's not good. I know he doesn't wanna stress her out but still, 9 months of lies? That's a really bad way to start off an engagement. I mean what if something happens to him and she does get that call!? It'd only be worse. Oh boy, I sense trouble somewhere real soon. And god, please let Michael be safe, if anything happens to him, I WILL cry, I really, truly will. And I know what you mean when it comes to writing, I'm always wondering what everyone will think. As for cliffys they're very interesting and yes, sometimes they have to be done. Always wanna keep the readers interested!! :D Nice work girl!! Keep up the wonderful work, you're updates always make me smile!! Can't wait for more!!!
P.S. That sex scene...was WAY INTENSE! Not shy at all in bed! Damn Michael!!!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you...I know Michael is not going about his problem the right way but he's human. Let's hope he makes it better....and LOL I'm glad you enjoyed that sex scene.
Date: May 20, 2011 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Destiny!
totally awesome story, i love this, keep up the amazing work! :) xx
Author's Response:
AWWW!! thank you very much.
Date: May 20, 2011 07:57 am Title: Chapter 32 - Destiny!
Great chapter. Glad she said yes! :) I love marriages. I hope they make it thru the tour and all. 'Cause I can't wait to read about the marrrrriage! Ahhhh.
Author's Response:
thank you, honey. I hope they make it too. Aaahhh a wedding soon? haha ...maybe!! ;o)
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2011 04:52 am Title: Chapter 31 - I never planned it this way....Until Now!
Oh my gosh!!! Nervous!? Nervous!? Girl what do you have to be nervous about!? Maybe you're just nervous to see all the wonderful reviews you'll get because that...that right there was an AMAZING chapter!! The drama was perfect and so fitting to make it realistic! When Michael walked out at the news I was SO confused! I was just like "Huh? Michael...where are you going!?" But then when you showed why I was like "Aww!!" I'm so happy he finally proposed and I'm so happy he's so excited! But now I really wanna see how Arianna will react to the proposal! My gosh, I was just like "NO!! A CLIFF HANGER!! O.O" Anyways, wonderful chapter, I love this story so much! I can't wait for your next update! Keep up the wonderful work girl!!! :D
Author's Response: Really? Thank you. You know when you are writing something you never know how the readers will react to it and if they will understand the movie and the ideas that are playing in your head while writing each chapter but I'm so happy you enjoyed and thank you so much. And LOL sorry about the cliff hangers, I can't help it.
Date: May 15, 2011 02:17 am Title: Chapter 31 - I never planned it this way....Until Now!
wow that was crazy
Author's Response: thanks for the review. These two are intense huh?
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2011 12:03 am Title: Chapter 30 - You found me....
No Michael no!! No more sleeping pills!!! He should've waited, I want him to find out! Damn his insomnia! I always feel so bad for him, knowing how tired he was so often. :( Poor Michael. But I sense some drama coming up for these two yet again. I mean Arianna asked Michael NOT to take the pills and he still did. I just hope things turn out better that next morning. I was in tears during the scene were Arianna couldn't wake him up. But that one scene...in front of the fireplace...DAAAAAAAMMMMNNN!! Holy crap, intense scene! I'm a little worried though because Arianna keeps doubting things about the news, I really hope everything turns out right for them. I can't wait to read Michael's reaction to the news! :D Keep up the great work girl!!!
Author's Response: Yes, I always did feel bad for Michael and his insomnia. I wish more than anything for him to really be here. It was very hard for me to write that chapter where Arianna had to struggle to wake him up. In my mind, I like to believe Michael is still here, he's living in our hearts. I hate to hear the news because it reminds that Michael is gone...and that (LOL) fire place scene is my favorite part of the story so far. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the review and for reading my story.
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2011 06:30 am Title: Chapter 30 - You found me....
ahhhhhh omg so good!!! can't wait to read what happens next!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you and your wish is my command haha..the new chapter is up.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2011 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
I smell a pregnancy!!! Arianna is holding a lil' Mike. I love it! Give us some more when u can. :)
Author's Response:
You do? Haha I guess we'll see what's cooking LOL