Date: Jun 06, 2011 01:56 am Title: Chapter 43 - Welcome to Neverland....
aww we love ya most. ahh the dreaded "we need space" line. sometimes it works and sometimes it goes horribly wrong. twist!! I didn't even think Bradly would be back in this story im keeping my eye on him. Arianna is really trying though and I love her for that. I swear Michael makes all women weak in the knees..<3
Author's Response:
aww thx girl....yes I hate that dreaded line as well....so I surprised bringing Bradley back, huh?. I tried to give you guys a hint on the chapter before this one.....and yes, girl Michael does make girls weak in the knees. He was amazing.
Date: Jun 05, 2011 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Welcome to Neverland....
NICE... NEXT PART PLEASE... ANXIOUSLY WAITING...
Author's Response: Thx hun...I am working on the next chapter. I hope to have it up soon.
Date: Jun 05, 2011 11:50 am Title: Chapter 42 - Stay with me...
I HOPE SOO!!! I hope love can get them through this. They need to work it out. Everything. The drugs, the car crash, the baby, everything!
Cant wait till you update again!
Author's Response:
I have a special place in my heart for Arianna and Michael so I hope so too. Thx girl for the review.
Date: Jun 05, 2011 01:09 am Title: Chapter 42 - Stay with me...
Tough ish..I"m sure if they really try things can work out. I"m glad Arianna isn"t so down like I thought she would be.I"m nervous though missA you also have this as a mj/lmp story too..im scared for ari and Michael.."clutches pearls"
Author's Response:
Hi joy2thaworld, Thanks for the review. Arianna and Michael are two stong individuals. Re: LMP, I'm not sure if she will appear in the story. Maybe she will, maybe she won't (Aaahhh!! the suspense hah) but Arianna will always be there.
Date: Jun 05, 2011 12:46 am Title: Chapter 42 - Stay with me...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SO SWEET, POOR MICHAEL... AT LEAST SHE DIDN'T BLAME HIM.... NEXT CHAPTER ASAP... PLEASE
Author's Response: Poor Michael, he is feeling so many things right now! Thx for the review :)
Date: Jun 04, 2011 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 41 - We all fall down....like Toy Soldiers!
Aww this is soooooo sad!! :(
I can imagine that this was hard to write.... it was really hard to read!!
I hate they lost thier baby... that is so tragic. And i loved how she had her wedding band on her left hand and how Michael swiitched his too.... that shows how much they really love each other! Boy, i hope everything gets better! I cant handle all this sadness!!
Update soon.... cant wait for the next part!
Author's Response: Yes it was hard. I cried writing it. And I love how you noticed that small but sweet of gesture with their wedding bands.
Date: Jun 04, 2011 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 41 - We all fall down....like Toy Soldiers!
OH MY GOD... I'M IN TEARS.... DAMN IT.... WHY DID SHE HAVE TO LOSE THE BABY???? I HOPE SHE DOESN'T BLAME MJ FOR THIS AND THEIR LOVE IS STRONG TO STAY TOGETHER.... EXCELLENT CHAPTER... PLEASE UPLOAD THE NEXT ONE ASAP.....
Author's Response: Thx hunnie and I got your message. I will add u to my fb :)
Date: Jun 04, 2011 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 41 - We all fall down....like Toy Soldiers!
This is so sad. :( They lost their baby boy. I hope Arianna gets better.
Author's Response:
Yeah this is very sad. I cried writing it.
P.S. Regarding your story, I knew who you meant. haha.
Date: Jun 04, 2011 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 41 - We all fall down....like Toy Soldiers!
Oh my god that is horrible. I cried it was so sad. Smh. They lost their baby.
Author's Response:
I cried writing it. :"(
Date: Jun 04, 2011 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 41 - We all fall down....like Toy Soldiers!
"cries" so...tragic. I just.."cries" great writing....
Author's Response:
I cried writing it. Thanks btw.
Date: Jun 03, 2011 08:06 am Title: Chapter 40 - You don't know what you got til its gone...
OMG!!!!!!! Damn paparazzi!!
I hope she and the baby are okay! I'm just about to die in anticipation for the next update...
Author's Response:
don't die yet...new chapter is up.
Date: Jun 02, 2011 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 40 - You don't know what you got til its gone...
OMG,,, PLEASE PLEASE HURRY, WITH THE NEXT PART......THIS ONE WAS TOTALLY AWESOME..... PLEASE HURRY
Author's Response:
your wish is my command. New chapter is up.
Date: Jun 02, 2011 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 40 - You don't know what you got til its gone...
OH MY GOD!!! She Just Wrecked!!!!!! Oh lord... this is horrible. I hope michael finds out about this soon, and knows that she really does love him.... oh this is horrible! Bless their hearts!! :(
Update soon please!!
Author's Response:
Even when things are hard btwn this two, I'm sure Michael and Arianna know they love eachother. I just posted a new chapter.
Date: Jun 02, 2011 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 40 - You don't know what you got til its gone...
Ahhh fuck this is bad.
Author's Response: :( it was hard for me to write the last part
Date: Jun 02, 2011 08:49 am Title: Chapter 39 - Velvet Rope....
I love this story, i hopè arianna, can help him and not leave him,
Author's Response: Aww thank you. New chapter is up :)