I still love it! And i liked the commercial idea. :)

Holy crap I fell really behind!!! See, school gave me this annoying project which had me pretty busy, amongst other school related things, so I hadn't had time to really read your updates. Man did I come back to some pretty heavy stuff! The accident, the miscarriage, they both had me in tears. The eerie distance, the doubt, wondering if they should stay married, Arianna wanting to be apart, wanting Bradley, her dream of Bradley had me fuming! I was like "Girl, you are married to Michael Jackson, an amazing and wonderful man and you're thinking about some stupid reporter!? What!?" He's human he makes mistakes, yes she was mad, but I was seriously afraid they'd never make up. And then Michael came back to Neverland after a few months and they made up. I was so ecstatic when they made up. Man was I happy. I think I was grinning. Lol. But when Tony started saying all that crap about Arianna and taunting Michael, I got so pissed!! I was so glad Michael punched him, he freaking deserved it! And I had a feeling that letter was written by Frank. I could tell by the way it was written as well as the way he'd talked to Michael. Poor hurt Michael. :( I can understand why he fired them...especially Tony. I'm so happy Michael finally managed to help Arianna get rolling in her music career. I thought the way he handled it was so sweet and so romantic! My gosh! That is certainly a really good way to get rid of stage fright! :D And now THIS chapter! The most recent one! Holy...crap...I am SO glad Michael and Arianna are on good terms again!! But that fangirl was both creepy and WAY too desperate! He's freaking married for heaven's sake! She should've know Michael wouldn't cheat on his wife and even if she didn't know about his marriage, she should know that Michael would never cheat on his girlfriend!  And then...that...that...shower....scene. At the end. Holy crap. I was like "Oh. My. God. Michael." See THAT'S why Arianna CANNOT stay home. I couldn't believe he did that, I was so shocked. I mean he IS a man but...wow. His thoughts were so vivid and his feelings were so strong. Man...if you hadn't known any better, you'd have thought she was there with him! WOW! Steamy, very steamy. But anyways! Wonderful chapters, I enjoyed all of them! Very well written, keep up the wonderful work, I can't wait to read your next update! :D

P.S. Michael looks very sexy in that black shirt at the end! That is a wonderful picture of him! I think I almost melted into a puddle at the sight of that photo!! Wow! It's getting hot in here!

That scene of michael in the shower was HOT!!!

Loved this update!! It was fantastic!! :) keep updating.. love this story so much! Im so glad that they are getting along now... its fantastic! :)

Loved it so happy they are on good terms again!!! Update soon plz!!!

Awww they made up im happy. :)

Haha! i loved that he kicked that guys ass! he so deserved that! And i love that she loves that little boy!! I think she should adopt him, but Michael might not like it though, since it isnt his! :)

Update soon please! Love this story!