[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2011 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 52 - Louder than love...
I think Arianna is making the right decision here about the baby and moving out because once michael sees what his life is like without Arianna he will appreciate her and her decisions more but now im scared for Arianna cause I have a bad feeling that Lisa Marie is going to hop into michaels life when Arianna is'nt there!!
Awesome Chapter, as usual ;)
xoxoxo
Author's Response:
wow, you are quick. I was about to log off haha. Thx for letting me know what you think. I'm glad you are able to see Arianna's POV. Now only time will tell what will happen btwn these two in the future.
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2011 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 52 - Louder than love...
OH GIRL... THIS IS SO SAD... I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY ARE BREAKING UP... NO... I REALLY THOUGHT THEY WOULD GET PASSED THIS.... DAMN... I UNDERSTAND ARIANNA, BUT STILL. MJ IS RIGHT.. THERE IS NEVER A RIGHT TIME TO HAVE A BABY.... DAMN, MJ SHOULD DUMP HER ASS. FIND SOMEONE.. AND IF SHE SEES HIM WITH SOMEONE ELSE, MAYBE THAT WILL BE THE WAKE UP CALL SHE NEEDS.... GREAT CHAPTER GIRL!! CONTINUE TO WRITE... AND NEXT CHAPTER ASAP.... PLEASE!!!
Author's Response:
you are too quick. I was about to send you a message to let you know the new chapter is up. you beat me to it. thx hunnie and about Arianna and Michael....who knows what will happen btwn these two! Only time will tell!
Date: Jul 05, 2011 12:29 am Title: Chapter 51 - I feel so numb....
OH snap.... Lisa and Arriana! Wow... this is going to be bad.. i just know it. And OMG.... i hope they dont get into another bad fight, and end up madder than ever. I really dont want to see them split... i think i would die inside!
Love your story hun..... its amazing! <3
Author's Response:
no sam don't die. I need you to continue reading haha ;o) It seems everyone got scared of Lisa's name. I don't want them to split either so I'm waiting too to see what Arianna and Michael going to do about this mess.
thx hunnie love you always xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2011 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Lisa Marie?!?!?! Uhhh oh! This can't be good, can it? :
Author's Response:
Everyone is afraid of Lisa' name it seems LOL it might be good, she might have a present LOL. We just have to wait and see huh... love ya girl xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2011 06:14 am Title: Chapter 51 - I feel so numb....
Nooooo! Lisa Marie has to go like Right Now....
Great Chapter :) xxxxx
Author's Response:
Lisa Marie's name scares people it seems LOL and thx btw :) xoxo
Date: Jun 29, 2011 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 50 - Meet the family...
Never did care for Randy lol. Punk ass Joe smh..can't believe he got my Michael to do those shows. aww Michael and Arianna are going to adopt Jimmy i'm happy. Michael just put some hot lovin on Arianna when she least expect it like in the studio she'll get pregnant lol. Can't wait to see how this continues...
Author's Response:
LOL at the Randy cooment. LOL is that where you see her getting pregnant? I'm working on the updates. xoxo
Date: Jun 28, 2011 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 50 - Meet the family...
Love this update. I was really good, but i hated that Michael is being forced to do that show by Jospeh and his brothers. I guess that not only fans want him, but his family too. :(
OMG... cant believe that they are going to adopt Jimmy! YAY!! And she needs to have another baby....they need it. Even tho their careers just took off, they still need to have one. It would do them sooo much good!
Loved it.... Im such a fan of yours. Keep it up Sweetheart!
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
They are adopting Jimmy Yay!!! I love your enthusiasm and thank you always for reviewing.
I can't believe I have a fan. That's amazing. Love ya, girl xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2011 12:09 am Title: Chapter 49 - Speed Demon...
I love this story soo much!! It's amazing!!
I would love one on one.. A far away trip where they can enjoy each other and relax.. Or idk lol
Btw you where in NY Sat?? So was I, where at the Apollo?
Author's Response:
thank you so much.
That's a great idea. I will keep that in mind
You're from NY? Cool! I was in Brooklyn.
Date: Jun 27, 2011 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Speed Demon...
Downtown where I'm living threw a party in MJ's honor. Me and my boyfriend went and it was so funny dancing and laughing with other fans. Made a few friends it was a blast. I cried when we all sing Never Can Say Goodbye. It was bittersweet.
Ok here is what I'm thinking..I want Ari to adopt Jimmy but Michael overhears her on the phone saying that she's not sure Michael should be apart of it. He confronts her but she says she only meant she doesn't know how the media reacts. Meanwhiile Arianna's single debuts and it's a hit she is the new "it girl". Michael supports her but tells her to be careful. Arianna explains that she know's what she doing she been in the spotlight before. Michael warns her that this is different than whats she's used too. Michael gets a call from Lisa Marie's manager cause she wants to sing. Michael goes to a listening party Lisa gives. Michael gets her number just because he's a nice guy but doesn't plan on calling her, Arianna finds the number and confronts Michael and then tells him something about Lisa pops Elvis and her Mother doing something. Lisa calls Michael just to blow some steam about being really famous and Michael actually likes her conversations. In the end of all the drama I want Ari and Michael to be together even if they have to take a break in between.
Damn I wrote alot lol.
Author's Response:
I think the best thing to do is to spend this sad day with people who understand you and those are MJ fans. I made a couple of friends too. I love meeting MJ fans, we have so much in common.
Now on your thoughts:
First, let me ask you: are you reading my mind or secretely been snooping around my notes?. LOL You are on the right track and I loved your ideas about LMP so I will keep that in mind. This stoy is about to turn to a different direction, something will happen but I won't say what it is. I have already said too much. haha but at the end I hope you and everyone else still love and continue reading the story.
And on a final note, I love that you wrote a lot. LOL. It means you are paying attention to the story. :D
Date: Jun 26, 2011 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Speed Demon...
I want them to either adopt Jimmy, or have a kid.... they need that. It would do them a world of good!
Loved this update btw, it was awesome.... i hated that he got racial profiled... that sucks!
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
Thx Sam. Always love to hear from you. And thank you for letting me know what you want to see for this story.
I know I hated to include that in. I hate that really happen to him :(
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2011 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Speed Demon...
Haha, only Michael Jackson could enjoy sometime in jail :P
June 25th this year was a hard day for me to I just spent it watching and listening to Michael NON-stop and I had'nt cried until at night when I had my I-pod on shuffle and then She's out of my Life came on and my eyes just started leaking
Author's Response:
haha yeah only Michael.
I refused to listen to slow songs like Gone to soon and she's out of my life. It would have been to hard for me. Instead I watched him laughing, playing and smiling.
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2011 02:33 am Title: Chapter 48 - The End of the BAD Tour
Girl! You always pull through with such wonderful chapters and keep us readers wanting more!! That chapter was wonderful, I liked all of it! I found the moments between Jimmy and Michael so adorable! I loved them! I'm glad he's bonded so much with Jimmy. But poor Mike he's so afraid of losing Arianna that he's reacting badly so often. I mean the easy jealousy, the angry sex he almost pulled. I didn't like that, I'm glad she slapped him and knocked him out of that angry state. Did I like reading Arianna slapping Michael? No. But like I stated it was certainly necessary. Though I feel so much sympathy for him when he starts thinking of himself as Joseph and thinking he's like him. Michael is about as far Joseph as an offspring can be from their parent, maybe farther. He is nothing like Joseph and thank god he isn't! I loved that they made up though. When Michael told Arianna of what he did, I was SO shocked. Lol. I was like daaaamn. Lol. I'm happy they made up and opened up like that. It was good for them to make up. That whole ending though, with the BAD tour finally coming to an end was so sweet. What with Michael including everyone in on his cheer and them all screaming "WHO'S BAD" was so awesome, I loved it. I think one of my favorite parts was when Michael gave Jimmy his original "Smooth Criminal" fedora. I was like "OH MY GOSH MICHAEL!!" Lol I also loved that little romantic bit between Michael and Arianna before he went out on stage. :D It was so cute. I love when Michael says "I love you more" it's so cute. Anyways girl, wonderful chapter! You never cease to impress me! I love this story so much, I can't wait to read more! :D Keep up the amazing work!! :D
P.S. LOVED the bonus video, it was very enjoyable. The cute moments at the end were great! I loved it. Thank you so much girl!!
Author's Response:
you are an amzing reviewer ((HUGS)). Thanks hun.
I'm loving that every one is fond of Jimmy and yes Michael has his own insecurities to deal with.
LOL at you being shocked. I think Michael really had an animal inside of him who knows what he said in real life in the bedroom.
I had to end the tour with the bang and in a way I'm also glad it's done so I could move on to the dangerous era. My fave era. Don't get me wrong, I love him in all eras but the dangerous era makes me weak. :D
Date: Jun 21, 2011 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 48 - The End of the BAD Tour
Loved this update.....
Uggh i hated that Michael got a little carried away, but im glad she quickly put him in his place.
and i want them to update Jimmy. They would make the cutest little family ever!!! Wonderful writing hun, and the love scene was epic!! :P
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
thanks sam..I'm glad you enjoyed it. Who knows I'm open to anything for the future of this story so maybe they will adopt Jimmy.....just maybe! ;)
Date: Jun 21, 2011 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 48 - The End of the BAD Tour
Hey girl! Love this chapter, and especially this: “Did you pay for all of this?” LOL... and the reference to "It's a black thang." :) Wonderful update.
Author's Response:
hey sweetie. thanks you and lol. I tried to keep some things real. I remember Michael telling a story about a kid who asked him that and the black thang comment on another convo. Michael was really a funny guy. xoxo
Date: Jun 19, 2011 02:56 am Title: Chapter 47 - Watch me shine/The Things I do for you...
Loved this update!! It was fantastic, but i hate that they are still being bitchy towards one another. I want them to be happy again!!
Love this story!! :D Update soon please!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi Sam, I think you will like the new update. Let me know what you think. xoxo