Date: Jul 14, 2011 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 55 - Xscape....
sorry for my long review/rant "blushes"
Can you believe I'm not done yet though? I have one more thing to say.
Umm you just took this story to a whole new level by putting "hotass" River in it. I dunno where your taking this story but I like it.
Author's Response:
no need to apologize haha and I love reading the reviews...we will just have to wait and see what River is up to and I know right he was so hot. Thank you for sticking with me xoxo
Date: Jul 14, 2011 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 55 - Xscape....
Oh you made this chapter nice and long and they whole thing was fire missA! I love it ^_^
I am so sick of those people thinking they know what's best for Michael. Damn let him live. Frank wasn"t the best but atleast he did seem to have Arianna's back and was happy to see them together. Lisa is a damn snake she know she left that purse there on purpose her ass anit slick..smh.
*sigh* Arianna is so good at doing this..she hears Lisa's voice on the phone and she goes into a crying fit and swears off her husband. I feel for her though she's been calling Michael and she had no calls returned to only hears another females voice when she finally breaks through. Still if I was her I would of been like "why is that heffa there Michael?"
and Michael as much as I love him he to spoiled. Michael you could of attempted to call your wife and don't give me the "I don't kno where she was"thing. Your Michael fucking Jackson I'm sure you could of found her
Author's Response:
I would say the same thing about Lisa LOL and yeah Arianna and Michael has their issues.
Date: Jul 14, 2011 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 55 - Xscape....
AHHHHHHHHHHHH, THIS STORY IS DRIVING ME NUTS.... THEY LOVE EACH OTHER.... HOW CAN THEY STILL BE APART... MICHAEL SHOULD FLY HIS ASS TO NY AND ARRIVE AT RELEASE PARTY.. AND TELL HER THE TRUTH.. THAT NOTHING HAPPENED... DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNN..
Author's Response:
oops..I was late on answering this review...sorry...well now you know he's in NY haha
Date: Jul 13, 2011 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 54 - If you don't love me....
I LIKED IT VERY MUCH, BUT WHEN ARE THEY GONNA GET THAT THEY BELONG TOGETHER... NEXT CHAPTER ASAP
Author's Response:
your wish is my command. New chapter is up :)
Date: Jul 12, 2011 04:41 am Title: Chapter 53 - She's Gone....
Oh hell no! Lisa better keep her distance! Arianna is Michaels girl, and Michael is Arrianas man. Thats the way it is! and i loved her mom talking to her. She needed to hear that. But still, Michael has been kinda pushing her into things, so they both have thier flaws. It will just take some time to get them together and back the way they was.
Loved it hun. Your story makes me smile, cry, and laugh all at the same time!
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
hey sammy, it's a kinda two way street huh!! I hope too they both see with bigger pictures before it's too late. love ya, girl xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2011 12:13 am Title: Chapter 53 - She's Gone....
OMG for one, I am NOT a fan of LMP in real life.. So makes me less fan of hers she comes inti the story.. Geez I can see this turning BAD!!
Author's Response:
I'm not of fan of her either but who knows if she will suceed in getting MJ here...we'll just have to wait and see.....xoxo
Date: Jul 11, 2011 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 53 - She's Gone....
oh arianna..arianna listen to your mom. Marriage is hard you and Michael need a conversation not to be away from each other. I already know what Lisa is about..Arianna is supposed to be your new friend and you already calling YOUR friend's husband attractive and kisses him on the cheek? she's a damn houndog. I know Michael is all vunerable right now but he betta not ohhh he betta not!
lol loves it missA.
Author's Response:
don't you hate those kind of girls? grrr....and I'm with you Michael betta not lol
I'm glad you are enjoying the story :)
Date: Jul 11, 2011 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 2 - And it begins...
Oh heyy going to Mj concerts I dig that :) cnt wait to read the next chapterr
Date: Jul 11, 2011 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
I like this so far :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad. I hope I get to read more reviews from you :)
Date: Jul 11, 2011 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 53 - She's Gone....
damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.. girl, your gonna make us go nuts... With LMP in the picture you know that this means trouble.... But then again, Arianna, left him alone... Dumb move girl.... Good Chapter
Author's Response:
hahaha LMP is trouble but will she succeed is the question.... xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2011 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 53 - She's Gone....
OH NO SHE DIDN'T!!! LISA YOU BETTA GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM MICHAEL NOW, HE WANTS ADRIANNA NOT YOU!!!
OMG, Im actually screaming into my pillow from this chapter because im scared to find out that adrianna might not come back because of Lisa :(
Grrrrrrrr......
Chapter is awesome.... as usual
Author's Response:
I guess nobody likes Lisa haha. Who knows what LMP is up to!
Thx hunnie :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2011 04:26 am Title: Chapter 52 - Louder than love...
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I'm freaking crying!!!!!!! No, no, no, no! Not again! They were so happy and doing so well! They were gonna adopt Jimmy, she'd met the family, they were themselves again! And now they've gone back to this separation crap! Personally, I feel both are in the wrong but with good points. I don't think Michael should be pressuring Arianna into things, he's very wrong there. Just cause Arianna says no, doesn't mean she doesn't love him. He's just been hurt so much by so many people, it's sometimes hard for him to see the differences. Ariannna pointed out a lot of good things. However, Michael had some good points as well. Whenever they fight, she's automatically trying to run away and this isn't something she can just keep running from. Michael's right there, they need to fix it. I don't think a separation is smart. There's too many people out there waiting for them. Too much temptation, we saw that already a few chapters back with Bradley when they separated, in a way, the first time. They need to stay together and fix it with civil conversation and focus on what each has made clear. Mike needs to stop thinking of having children for a second and realize that she's right, now isn't the time but...at the same time...Michael's right too. There will never really be a good time to have a child because of their lifestyle. I personally think Arianna is too afraid of losing the baby again, she kinda said so herself. I feel they really need to discuss the miscarriage, cause they never really did. They need closure and another child certainly isn't the way to get it. As for Jimmy, I do think they should adopt him once they heal. So putting it on hold for a bit is probably smart, but they definitely need to do so. That poor child needs a good home. I also think Michael does need to talk to her more when it comes to business, he can't hide things from her. He should always consider Arianna's feelings and stop assuming things, or he WILL lose her. The hateful words need to stop as well. They can't keep saying things like that to each other, it only makes a situation worse. I'm kinda glad Arianna slapped Michael, he needed it there. Like I said the hateful words need to end. Both need to really listen to each other and fix it. And Arianna, like I said before, really needs to stop running from Michael, running away doesn't solve anything! Beautiful chapters girl, this story is so wonderful and so real. I love it and I can't wait to read more. Like I said, they need closure and healing. They need to really talk to each other and stop jumping to such ridiculous conclusions and solutions. A marriage is never perfect and love is never easy. If they separate...I feel it'll only hurt them both more and make things worse. Keep up the great work girl! :D
Author's Response:
Are you crying? I'm sorry hunnie :( I didn't mean to break your heart. I always enjoy reading what you have to say because you give me an overall thought on the whole chapter which is amazing to me as a writer. You are right about both of them and I, too hope they could overcome this. They both need to learn how to deal with eachother. love ya girl xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2011 12:28 am Title: Chapter 52 - Louder than love...
I loved this chapter. I think Arianna is right. Michael shouldnt be pushing her into things that they both couldnt handle at the moment. I hate that its come down to them throwing plates and fighting constantly, but sometimes, love isnt strong enough. I really want them to fix it.... i love these two... they do need time to heal!
Update soon! Love your story sweetheart! :)
Author's Response:
You are actually looking at both POVs I love it!!! and thx sweetie. You know I love ya xoxo
Date: Jul 05, 2011 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 52 - Louder than love...
Arianna is hurting Michael and she will hurt Jimmy who is probably looking toward to being adopted. I think Arianna is just scared that is she gets pregnant again that she will loose the baby. Arianna needs to face and overcome her fears.
Author's Response:
I am thinking about Jimmy. We don't want to hurt him and you are right about Arianna. I hope she overcomes it. Thanks for your thoughts xoxo
Date: Jul 05, 2011 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 52 - Louder than love...
Well damn Michael..smh..I dunno MissA I think both are in the wrong. First of all they really didn't discuss the death of their child. They skated over that. Second Michael needs to get out of this one track mind. He's a married man,just because your wife tells you no doesn't mean she doesn't love you lol. and she really didn't say no she said wait. With Arianna well like she saod she's afraid. I do give her points for admitting this but I do agree with Michael that she does seem to put on the running shoes when problems surface lol.
Great chapter update *about to add to my favorites* :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for your thoughts and you made some valid points on both of them.
*blushing* thanks for adding my story to the faves section xoxo