Date: Jul 20, 2011 04:24 am Title: Chapter 57 - Killing Me Softly...
OH MY LAWD! that was HOTTTT!!
Yay! they are back together.. but im pretty sure that River guy and Lisa Marie will be a problem. But anyways, lets enjoy the sex and the good times! And that was definatly a good time! Holy shit! Way to go with this chapter. I have been waiting for this forever... for them to make up i mean! ;)
Loved it!
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
Sam, you a re back!!!! (hugs) LOL at "lets enjoy the sex and the good times" xoxo love ya girl :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2011 03:52 am Title: Chapter 56 - Shout....
Sorry.. i know its late! Been extremely busy.. way to busy for my taste! :)
God love him when he stepped out of the shower. holy hells bells... i would have been all over that! Im so glad that hes finally seeing the light about the people that he has working for him! its about damn time Michael!
Anyways, enough about me ranting... i loved the update!! Sorry again for the late comment! :)
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
I understand hun. I could only imagine Michael stepping out that way I probably would have fainted.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2011 12:45 am Title: Chapter 57 - Killing Me Softly...
THEY LISTENED, THEY TALKED, THEY HEALED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Arianna and Michael are back! Finally!!!!! Girl this chapter was amazing! I love that they're all better! And that sexy, steamy scene was amazing! Favorite line "He was sex on legs" LOL! I really enjoyed that!! Arianna you're so sneaky. You were supposed to wait! Lol. I loved this chapter so much! I always enjoy hearing Michael sing "Killing Me Softly" what a wonderful voice! My goodness, thank you for sharing! :D Lovely girl, lovely. Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait for more!! :D
Author's Response:
haha yeah Arianna and Michael are back!! and LOL "sex on legs" well what can I say except he is!! and agreed isn't his voice just so soothing in that song? I love it xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2011 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 57 - Killing Me Softly...
GIRLLLLLLLLLL THIS IS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUTTTTTTTT... I LOVED IT.... THEY SO BELONG TOGETHER... GOOD THING THAT BITCH OF LMP IS OUT OF THE PICTURE!!! OMG, I JUST REALIZED THE LAST TIME MJ AND ARIANNA WERE GONNA HAVE SEX THEY ARGUED CUZ SHE WASN'T NO THE PILL... NOW THEY HAD MAKE-UP SEX AND THEY DIDN'T USE ANYTHING.... DO YOU CATCH MY DRIFT.....??? GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!
Author's Response:
Interesting observation!!!!! .....anything is possible..... :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2011 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 57 - Killing Me Softly...
Aww that was so beautiful *wipes tear*
I pray that nothing happens to them :)
xoxox
Author's Response:
awww and yeah me too :) xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2011 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 56 - Shout....
Girl, you are in NO WAY losing your touch! That ending makes me crave more! MICHAEL'S IN NY NOT ON THE PHONE!!!!!!!! They can finally talk and fix them! No interruptions, no employees hiding phone calls, no phone tag, no business, no anything! Just the two of them in the same place, finally able to find closure!! Though I do really hope they can do just that, they need to let eachother talk and get on the same page, I really the can work it out. As for Julie going to that private investigator, thank goodness! Michael is finally going to figure out just what kind of employees he has, he's FINALLY listening to Arianna! Smart move, Michael! I'm so glad he figured out that he has leeches like that working for him, I was hoping he would. I loved this chapter, it was great, And giiiiiirrrrrllllll the way you had Arianna describe Michael in that last bit, ooo! I almost FAINTED. O.O I don't like River though, I feel like I can't trust him, especially the way Arianna described him. I feel like he's gonna end up trying something on Arianna and screw things up more for her and Michael, which I really hope she doesn't. It wouldn't be cool and I'd be angry at him. Just like Lisa-Marie. Thank goodness Michael is away from her! Keep up the amazing work girl!! I can't wait to read more!! :D
Author's Response:
I know right...Michael is one smart cookie. This is the beginning of a fresh start for them...and LOL yeah that image in my head of him dripping wet while I was writing also made almost faint. Luckily, I survived long enough to post the chapter haha and about River...he might be a nice guy who knows...we just have to wait and see :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2011 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 56 - Shout....
NO NO NO NO! You are most defiantly not losing your touch
Im so glad Michael finally realized that all those people around him are leeches feeding him lies and sucking all the life outta him. He did the right thing and went to Arianna, I just hope they can figure everything out before that bitch Lisa Marie comes to Michael again.
Loved the chapter girl, really cant wait for the update
xoxox
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! Michael is one smart cookie haha and I hope so too. xoxo
Date: Jul 16, 2011 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 56 - Shout....
What do you mean that you think you are losing your touch? This was a great chapter. You captured the emotions of both characters and provided a few turns in this chapter. I am just so relieved that Michael figuered out that he had bad people working for him and is taking action.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think so. I guess everyone sees it a different way. I thought it was a bit blah and that the readers deserved more but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Jul 16, 2011 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 56 - Shout....
you're not losing your touch, this is so good still, i've only just got to start commenting on the stories and just wanted you to know, i love this so much! awesome story, keep going!!!!
Author's Response:
really? thank you...this makes me feel so much better. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2011 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Who's BAD??? ....
aww...too cute ari and mikey aer going to meet
Author's Response:
"ari and mikey"....love it haha
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2011 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 2 - And it begins...
i like this chapter. can't wait what's next
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2011 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
great start so far
Author's Response:
glad you liked it :)
Date: Jul 15, 2011 03:31 am Title: Chapter 55 - Xscape....
hmmmm.... i dont like all this secretive business with Michaels staff. they are creating problems for everyone! and that new guy and Lisa, are getting on my nerves. they are just creating unessecary problems between them! Jeeze, why did all this drama have to happen???
Loved it as always!! Your brilliant! :D
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
SAMMY!!!! thanks hun...*muah* yeah MJ's employees suck lol but I hope too Michael deals with them :)
Date: Jul 15, 2011 03:14 am Title: Chapter 54 - If you don't love me....
Loved this chapter. Something is up with the phonecalls tho.... im not sure what.. but i dont like it one bit!
Loved this chapter! and the shortness is alright.. i can deal!! :D
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
thank you for accepting the shortness of the chapter haha xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2011 12:22 am Title: Chapter 55 - Xscape....
NO! NO! NO! NO! First of all....FUCK YOU LISA-MARIE! I HATE YOUR GUTS, YOU LYING, MANIPULATIVE, DISGUSTING ****!!! (We're sorry, this word has been censored out. Me: *Glares at the censor*)
I can't stand Lisa, I knew the second she walked in she was gonna cause problems for Michael and Arianna. It wasn't intentional....SURE IT WASN'T!!!!!! You evil devil who never deserved Michael EVER! Man she pisses me off!! And Arianna!!!!!! Don't even get me STARTED with Arianna! -_- I CAN'T BELIEVE she'd assume Michael did anything with her. Let alone will still be pissed at him for having her in the house. My god...he did NOTHING. He may have hidden that whole prescription drug shit but he WOULD NEVER cheat on his wife, ever! Arianna needs to give him more credit then that. They seriously need to talk. I mean, really, really, talk. NOT BREAK UP! I wish Arianna would stop trying to quit on Michael, it's seriously breaking my heart and in more way then one...pissing me off (Which makes the story INCREDIBLY interesting. :D). AND MICHAEL!!!!!! He had better put his FOOT DOWN against these employees and confront them about WHY they didn't let him know about his phone calls. Renee just stated that Arianna had called. Therefore something funny is going on. They need to heal, so badly I want them to go with what Ari just stated. But she REALLY needs to listen to him and he REALLY needs to listen to her. No hang ups, no interruptions, none of that. Talk, heal, and reconnect then move forward in their marriage. If they break up, I will seriously cry and I mean CRY A LOT. Please don't do that...wonderful chapter as always. Keep up the amazing work, I look forward to your next update!! :D
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Author's Response:
LOL at the first two lines. You are very angry haha I love it but at the same time I didn't mean to cause you so much anger...sorry *blushes* There is more to come.
P.S. I know what you mean. Your reviews are very helpful so thank you. aww, I would love to chat with you. I have twitter, facebook, bbm, haha just let me know...love ya more xoxo