[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2011 07:45 am Title: Chapter 61 - Michael is mine....
Aww I can just see Michaels eyes glossing over when Jimmy calls hims daddy :)
Who the hell does that bitch think she is? I have a feeling that adrianna is a really nice person but when you piss her off its about to go down..
Author's Response:
haha me too. To hear a child call him daddy must have made him turn in to jello.
LOL I love yur anger and yes Arianna might be nice but you might not want to cross her.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2011 02:49 am Title: Chapter 61 - Michael is mine....
Tsk, tsk, tsk. Michael was late coming home. Though....he works so hard, it's expected. Lol. He's so mean! She just wanted to keep her skin young Mike! Nah, I don't care. I don't like those either, honestly. Lol They're so weird. But Jimmy's so cute!! I love that he called Michael daddy and Arianna mommy! How sweet!! :D As for Lisa, what a fucking bitch! Ooo, I hate her so much! She's at it again, trying to ruin a perfect relationship. She figures since she wants Michael, she can have him, it doesn't work that way sweetie. She needs to get over herself. Though I am a little annoyed Arianna jumped right to accusing Michael of cheating. She should know better then to think her husband would cheat on her while she was away. Michael would never do that! I wish she'd trust him more. Though I don't blame her for wondering but still! Michael was NOT like that!! I hope they'll be ok. Another great chapter. :D Keep up the great work, girl! I love your story so much. :D I will always remain with you. :D
Author's Response:
LMAO to "They're so weird"
Thank you honey. And I understand you on your anger towards Lisa but is it Lisa who knows!
Thanks for sticking with me.
BTW, I have s urprise for you in thr next chapter :D
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2011 02:23 am Title: Chapter 61 - Michael is mine....
I'm w/ you <3
Author's Response:
aww thank you I know you are <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2011 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Yes, keep on writing. You're doing wonderful! Amazing that the lovers are now Jimmy's parents. It shows a lot about who they are as people. :) <3
Author's Response:
aww thanks hun...that means a lot coming from you :) <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2011 02:57 am Title: Chapter 60 - Welcome to the Summer Bomshell Tour...
Love it! :) Look at how well Arianna's music is doing! I'm happy for her. :) Smart move Michael, finally getting rid of all those horrible, unloyal employees. The nerve of John! To sit there and take Michael's money and hide things from him! Unbelievable! I'm glad he fired em all. -_- I'm so happy Jimmy's come home! That's absolutely wonderful! As for your writing, it's still wonderful, as always. :) I enjoyed this chapter. Important things happened. :D We're always happy to answer your questions. :) And I'm happy you loved my suggestions. I'm glad to know I could be very helpful! :D I am never bored with this story, I love it and I can't wait to hear more!!
Author's Response:
yes you are very helpful. I love "listening" to my readers, after all I am writing this for your enjoyment :)
Date: Jul 30, 2011 12:55 am Title: Chapter 60 - Welcome to the Summer Bomshell Tour...
Your writing never falters! I always have the upmost confidence that you will perfect your story to how you see fit.
Im so glad that he fired john.... that was a great moment! And i laughed he threatned everyone with a lawsuit if they spoke about him. Idk why though, it just seemed like he would really do it... and i cant say that i dont blame him!
Fabulous update!
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
haha I see Michael doing some threatning in real life too which is why I had to add that in. Thanks, sam :)
Date: Jul 29, 2011 01:44 am Title: Chapter 59 - Michael's and Arianna's Secret...
I like this, after everything it's good to see them getting along. So happy for Jimmy he's finally getting a family.
Your story is funny and I know how you feel girl. I was looking at celeb pictures with one of my co-workers and we saw Adriana Lima on the beach with her daughter. we I saw it I said "It's Arianna and Michael's daughter" my co-worker was like "Joy, thats Adriana ya know the model, and is her husband name Michael?" I started laughing and she just looked at me. When I got home a came here looking for an update and saw one . so I don't know if I should say thankyou or get out of my head lol.
Dangerous is my fav album so I am really looking forward. I don't know how you do it or when but you have to put Ms. Naomi Campbell in it. omg hmm maybe she could be Arianna's friend or meet Michael I don't know but please think about. she is one of my fav dangerous moments.
So I was watching This Is It and in that smooth Criminal short flim MIchael did I noticed the woman he was trying to woo was the actress that plays Arianna's mother. I saw it and I was like " Get Out Of Here!!" yeah this story is really in my head..O_0...but I like it ...^_^
Author's Response:
LOL at your story. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one. Wow! you are a fan of Naomi Cambell...ok I have to think of how to put her in the story thx hun for the suggestion.
Dangerous album is my fave too.
LOL so you had an encounter with Renee huh! (Rita Hayworth) I love her as an actress. I guess Michael did too. haha but doesn't it make the story more real this way?
xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2011 12:58 am Title: Chapter 59 - Michael's and Arianna's Secret...
You've got us all figured out girl! We hoped you'd get our message. Lol. Great chapter by the way. :) It's ok that it was short! It was still good! :) I'm so glad Michael and Arianna adopted Jimmy and that they're doing so well. :D It was so cute to hear! That poor little boy though, how sad :'( . And I had another idea....for In the Closet you should have him and Arianna record it together, like song and short film! If Mike's gonna make a sexual song and short film with anyone...it may as well be Arianna, it'd be so real! :D But I'm glad you liked my idea for her meeting Jon Bon Jovi. Lol I loved Arianna's playful teasing too, it was cute. I couldn't help but notice Michael saying "to make the world a better place." I wonder if that'll spark ANOTHER song idea >.>. Just a thought. Lol. Hmm....my favorite Dangerous moment, gosh, that's a hard one. There's so many. I really liked when he opened his Heal the World charity, I also loved the pie fight with John, Macaulay Culken and him. So many moments, I can't decide. The Dangerous Era is my second favorite era after the BAD Era. :D
Author's Response:
LOL I knew it had something to do with you haha just kidding....another great suggestion....I will add that in, thx girlfiend. I am trying to find a way to make everyone happy and include all fave moments. But I think I am going to have alot of fun with your suggestions :)
Date: Jul 28, 2011 03:34 am Title: Chapter 59 - Michael's and Arianna's Secret...
Your so very welcome!
I love the food fight he has with Mac.. (Mcculley culkin) Idk if i spelled that right! anyways, i love that! It was awesome!
Awwwwww!! Yay, they finally did it! I'm so happy! Love this story to peices!
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
I have to include black or white. It wouldn't be the dangerous era without black or white so the food fight is your fave? so I will include it somehow. Thx hun.
Date: Jul 28, 2011 03:27 am Title: Chapter 58 - I'll be more than a woman....
I know im late.... im so sorry! Its been crazy here!
Anyways, I loved this chapter! It was funny how Michael got jelous of River and the guys she met at the chairty ball! I laughed at that! I loved how she kissed him too. I dont know why Mike wants to keep hiding the marriage though.... its kinda sneaky!
It was amazing as always! Now, on to the next chapter!
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
it's ok hunnie but oh my you are a busy gal huh! :) yes Michael is a jealous husband lol but in a cute way.
Date: Jul 25, 2011 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 58 - I'll be more than a woman....
I love Michael being there to suppot his wife and to calm her nerves. I'm so proud of Arianna she's doing her thing now, about to become a star you go girl lol. I agree with Michael I don't think it's time to annouce the marriage yet. They just got back on track the ljast thing they need is press influence. Ugh I know Julie is cool but I feel like Arianna it's still a bit awkward. I actually like River and Ari as friends. he seem cool. (hope I don't regret saying that lol). I predict Arianna's album is gonna be the bomb! ohh and I'm checking out Arianna's parents..mmhmm how long they been in contact lol.
In The Closet is my songA I even played it on the way to church, you should of seen the looks of me aunts face when I pulled up into the church yard. she was like " Michael Jackson at church? that song at church?" *giggles* she's so dramatic...
Author's Response:
you are the only one who agreed with Michael on keeping the marriage a secret. I'm glad you saw his point of view. Kudos to you, girlfriend. haha.....Julie is cool but Arianna is learning to cope with Julie's old feelings for Michael. Nobody likes their friend drooling for their man even if it was in the past. These two have a lot of history together. They will remain friends together, don't worry. You are also probably the only who is PRO-River LOL...would you regret it? Who knows....let's see what he's up to....LOL and oh yeah her parents, Arianna should spy on them haha......
I looooovvvveeeee "In The Closet". I am so in love with the dangerous album and in the closet is constantly in repeat haha. Did you really play it to church? LOL...well, all I have to say is hallelujah, sistah...keep on playing some hotass Michael....Amen!
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2011 04:51 am Title: Chapter 58 - I'll be more than a woman....
GIRL! You got me craving more!! This was a wonderful chapter! Michael gets jealous way too easily. It's cute in a way. Lol but I think Mike needs to agree with Arianna about letting people know about their marriage. Arianna's right, they can't hide a baby if she does become pregnant. I know he's scared and he doesn't trust the media, but they can't hide it forever, especially now that they each have made quite a big name for each other and are very famous. I mean I can understand where Michael's coming from in every way but I also understand Arianna's. You never do know how the paparazzi will be and Mike is a very private person, as he has every right to be. When Mike got that song idea after what Arianna said to him, I knew EXACTLY what song he got ideas for, read closely and you can figure it out. I wonder if that song will pop up somewhere. Guess I'll have to wait and see. :P What worries me is we're heading into the 90's and both are pretty famous and Michael has another tour coming up so...what about Arianna? Her career has takin off and it's JUST starting. What if their schedules conflict. :( Just a thought, I know that's WAY too far ahead but still. Lol One of my favorite lines in this chapter had to be "On the bright side, at least my husband and I got to have the house all to ourselves. So you know what that means...there was not one peaceful night in this house....figure it out!" LOL Arianna. Those two crack me up. :D I'm glad Arianna's trying to repair things with Julie too. No one likes to fight with their best friend. Hopefully they CAN go back to the way things were before. As for Arianna's album cover. GEEZ! Showy much? Lol Betcha Mike LOVED that album cover. >.> I can't wait for him to hear her album too! He'll love it! The video at the end was again a nice touch as well as the pics. I love being able to see what the characters see, it makes it all the more real. :D Nice work girl! I'm sure Michael loved that video though too. ;) He may be jealous though because people are getting to see a little of what he can see anytime. LOL! Mike doesn't really like to share his women! He's so possessive. Lol It's like "MINE!" LOL And the ongoing bickering about Jon Bon Jovi is hilarious, I have always loved that. "And you are never meeting Jon Bon Jovi by the way. You already drive me crazy with his music” Lol Michael! I enjoyed that line a lot too. :D Man, I want her to meet Jon in front of Michael so badly! Ha! That'd be hilarious, I'd laugh my butt off at something like that. Lol. I love Mike's nickname "Applehead" that's always a great nickname, cracks me up whenever it's used on him. Lol. Michael and Arianna are so cute together, I love this couple so much! Keep up the amazing work girl! You rock! xoxo
Author's Response:
LOL yes MJ is a bit jealous but when you have a looker as your wife you have to be careful but the again Michael is so hot she needs to be careful as well LOL
You are a smart cookie figuring out the song MJ had in mind. I love that song....and yeah the 90s will for sure be different than the 80s and Michael and Arianna will have to be strong to keep their marriage going but we'll just have to wait and see right?
LOL yes that line made me smile too. Arianna is a naughty girl ;o) Julie has come a long way, those two will be friends, don't worry. As for Arianna's cover LOL, Michael must be enjoying it right now......The Bon Jovi thing LOL, it actually reminds me of me and my boyfriend but with Michael instead of Bon Jovi (even though I really do love their music but I'm not as big as a fan as Arianna haha)....but you actually made a good suggestion about her meeting Jon Bon Jovi...I might add that in. Thanks, girl. You rock so much more xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2011 03:05 am Title: Chapter 58 - I'll be more than a woman....
I like that Michael is accepting of Arriana's career now.
Author's Response:
They are both moving forward together one step at a time :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2011 02:20 am Title: Chapter 58 - I'll be more than a woman....
Im so glad that michael and adrianna are working on their marriage, and that michael is suporting her career but I don't like the sound of that Rivers guy
Girl you just keep getting better and better <3
Can't wait for the update xoxo
Author's Response:
you still don't trust River huh? haha I guess we will find out what he has in store and yeah isn't Michael's adorable as a husband :)
Thank you so much <3
Date: Jul 21, 2011 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 57 - Killing Me Softly...
Ugh I missed your last update sorry girl. Just wanted to say you know its cool if you feel abot unsatisfied with your work. lol the writers are the toughest critics. but I personally think your doing a fantastic job the story is getting better and better and you have developed each character wonderfully. Your not losing your touch.
Now this is what I like to see. Michael you keep on taking charge it looks good on you. I'm happy to see Frank back he's kind of controlling but he is Mike's friend. Hmm what's up with River? why he gotta be starting at Ari's eyes and kiss her on the cheek? I guess they can be friends though. Ha Lisa needs to show up again and she needs to see Michael and Arianna together and in love. was Julie the friend that liked Mike? if so she has really stepped up i'm glad Ariana and Michael have friends that have no motives. Renee is a sweetheart I love her.
Author's Response:
it's ok hunnie. I did miss your review though :( so true writers are the toughest crtic but you readers keep me going :) and thank you :D I don't know what's up with River. I guess we'll see. And yes, Julie was the one who had feelings for MJ. I love Renee too. Thx hunnie xoxo