Reviewer: MJMVP Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2015 07:08 am Title: Chapter 174 - The Photoshoot, Part 2....

HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 173 - The Photoshoot, Part 1...

I am so sorry to hear people have been stealing your stories like that. :( It makes me sad knowing people can't just respect others work. It's a shame there's no way to prevent that. I respect your decision as a writer and I really admire that you're willing to keep going and finish this story. You are a fantastic writer and I hope one day you'll be able to work past everything and write again. Thank you for this beautiful story and I am SO glad I found it from you and no one else. :)

Sorry it's taken me so long to review. I've been watching the updates and had to play catch up because of school and work. I had a long semester and then this summer I started working and didn't get in til pretty late. These past 3 chapters were fantastic!! I'm happy to see Arianna is doing better and that they're relationship has blossomed, they seem even stronger than they were. Both also seem much stronger and know what's true and not. ;)

I'm still way sad to see that both Renee and Vincent passed away though. I feel bad for her but I'm happy they were able to save Arianna's childhood home. I'm also glad Michael is cleaning up his estate. I'm still curious about the ending because from what I remember, it seemed things would turn out a little differently but I'm definitely in no rush for the ending because I love this story so much. :)

It's funny, when you started getting into Michael's financial struggles and when he had his meeting with Kenny Ortega... I was watching "This Is It" lol so it was a very interesting experience. It had been on T.V, and I was reading in between commercials. LOL! Hope everything turns out better for Michael in this story than in real life. Ugh.

I was also glad to see the return of Toni. :D She's so fantastic!! Arianna and Toni's relationship is the best. I couldn't believe how big a part she played in all this stuff with Jimmy and Shontelle. That's a crazy scare, although I'm kind of glad to see it worked out for them in the end. I don't want them to get into anything they aren't ready for.

As for this stuff with Cassie, wow. I seriously thought she cheated until I read the end of this. I knew I didn't like Rushka! She's SUCH a bitch. Wow. Personally, I know Cassie loves Yong but I still think she should talk to Michael anyway. In the end, everything could work out because he might NOT believe Rushka and then, she might get him back and have saved her sister. It'll raise the chances of Arianna's condition worsening if Rushka continues to work for her. I do not trust her.

On to something lighter, I hope the boys will get a little more time with Michael. Lol It was pretty brief and he seemed to enjoy talking to them. I also hope their big America debut works out for them. They seem pretty talented and they seem like a bunch of good guys. Very interesting. I also love that Michael is the main focus of this next issue. Lol That cracks me up, I'd love to see what her cover would be like with Michael and everything else going on. I'm wondering if you are going to make some kind of photoshop piece of this. :P I can't wait for part 2 of the Photoshoot. :)

I never know where this story is going to go though. You always shock me with the different twists and characters who come about. :) I love that it keeps me guessing. Although I am on the edge of my seat with 2009 being so close. :/ Hope it works out. Their kids are fantastic by the way. Paris is so cute!! (I mean, she's awesome in real life too but that's beside the point. Lol)

Really great last few updates! Hopefully I'll be able to keep up better now. Can't wait for more! I'm sure you're going to continue to produce amazing chapters. :) Thanks again for sharing this with us, this has been one of the greatest journeys ever. :D Much love to you and I hope things get better with your stories. :(

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2015 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 173 - The Photoshoot, Part 1...

I really like Yong's independent-like attitude. I think it fits him well. I kind of feel sorry for Cassie though because Yong is seriously showing no mercy whatsoever. 

Jimmy wanting to stick up for his aunt is cute but I do think that he should at least give Yong the benefit of the doubt before completely judging him off the back without knowing the full story although Cassie had already told him that the whole tension between her and Yong was her fault anyway. Jimmy's overprotective alarm is ringing too loud lol he gotta chill.

Rushka...I just wanna

How dare she even try to blackmail Cassie for her bs when she knew that she was in the wrong. The fact that she had the audacity to do it in the same facility as everyone else should've been a duh moment in itself for her because she should've known that anybody could've popped up and heard the conversation, which happened in this case. She's so petty that's it's not even funny.

And I can't believe that Cassie actually spilled all of her tea out to Rushka in spite of finding out that the woman is a snake. Wrong move Cassie!!! I hope this doesn't blow up in her face. She just needs to tell Yong what happened (even if it does end up turning into a bad argument) and also let Ari know what Rushka had been saying so that her plate will finally be clean. I feel so sorry for her especially since what Hongki did was so grimy and petty and now she's having to deal with more pettiness from Rushka. This is a mess!

As for your end note, I'm still angry about what that person did to you. I don't understand how someone could just steal your work like that after you've worked so hard on it and I can completely understand how that would make you lose interest in continuing to write after all of that. You have to do what you have to do. I'm just grateful that you're taking the time to bless us loyal readers with the completion of the story before you retire. This was a great chapter and I love you <33333

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2015 10:08 am Title: Chapter 172 - Here's the new plan...

Thank goodness that it was a false alarm for Jimmy and Shonny. I'm glad that they learned from their mistake because having a kid when you aren't prepared is no joke. That would've been hell once Michael and Ari found out anyway. It's good that Toni kept that secret for them because I know that things really would've blown up if she betrayed their trust like that.

This part right here though:

“We didn’t know who else to call. We needed someone we can trust.” Jimmy added.

“Have you both thought of the consequences? Sex is lethal. Sex is not fun…well, it is fun sometimes…well, most of the time but that’s not the point. 

^^^^

i can't lol Toni is a mess!

I smiled so hard at Paris getting into her little feelings for Yong. Baby girl is growing up fast lol And bye at Ari switching what she said before to get Yong to go to the shoot lol. I knew he was gonna agree to do it anyway though. He just had to.

I'm interested to see how this shoot goes especially with Michael displaying his slight hesitance in working with Rushka. Great chapter love! <33

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2015 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 173 - The Photoshoot, Part 1...

1. WHENEVER YOU WANNA RIDE FOR THE IDDOIT WHO TRIED TO SELL YOUR STORY AND GET IT PUBLISHED, I GOT MY CARIBBEAN TALIBAN - WE RIDING !.

2. you KNOW I'm loyal to this story/ your writing for since Jesus was born so it would sting if you stopped writing all together. that being said you BETTER stop playing with my emotions, I'm tired of this string you got me on. 

3. so who gonna slap Rushka, I been ready for somebody to clock her. Slap her with the force of a great typhoon and the strength of a raging fire and send her ass into a coma or something. She messy for no reason, like Karlie Redd.  Jimmy and Shon got their act together - finally. (thanks for that, I was beginning to think they had no hope)

Reviewer: halesjackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2015 05:07 am Title: Chapter 173 - The Photoshoot, Part 1...

I love this story

MissA1485 you are an amazing writer and this is by far one of the best stories

you know people who copy others work are theifs and losers I really dislike those people

instead of copying others they should try to do it on their own but like I said they are losers. I really admire this story though:-)

it makes me think that what if Adriana Lima and MJ were a couple in real they would really look amazing.

there is not a day that goes by without thinking of Michael I really love him not just as an entertainer but as a human being. <3

and one more thing I would love for you to continue writing but I do understand if you don't want to for now  love you ;-)

Reviewer: rihannaloveu13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2015 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 74 - Give in to me.....

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

 

i DONT WANT MICHAEL TO SLEEP WITH THAT SHANA CHICK..NOO please tell me they gonna go back to together (Michael and Arianna)