[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2011 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Billie Jean is not my lover....
I'm still here very happy things are going good for them BUT, this blitch of LMP is gonna mess things up so worried about that xD
Author's Response: Thank you for your loyalty. Yeah lmp is bad news :( but will they make it? We have to wait and see :)
Date: Aug 08, 2011 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 65 - Goodbye to the 80s....
as always i loved that chapter! been following this story for a while and i really love it so much, thanks for your awesome writing!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it and thank you on your compliment on my writing. That really means a lot to me on my first story written ever :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2011 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Billie Jean is not my lover....
i love your story. :) i hope lisa does not break them up. she's a b****! hahaha. na i hope you udate soon.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so happy you are enjoying it so far. :)
Date: Aug 07, 2011 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Billie Jean is not my lover....
smh..I knew Lisa wasn't goinng to give up that easily. You know thats ok though. I'm still looking forward to the day Arianna catches on and dog Lisa dirty ass.
I heard that Michael it just comes a time when a man wants to make love to his wife. No interruptions. I wondered who called though..dun dun dunnnn....
Author's Response: Oohh that day when arianna finds out about lisa is going to be crazy ;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2011 03:04 am Title: Chapter 64 - Billie Jean is not my lover....
Smdh @ Lisa. Do not like her. and rofl @ Mike. haha he and Arianna are the cutest. Btw, thank you again for the lovely review you wrote. I've been sleeping for hours, so now Im up, and I get to review this lovely story you've written dear heart <3
Author's Response: Lol everyone seemed to have found that part of mike's desperation comical. I'm glad everyone enjoyed it. You are very welcome on my review on your story, I really enjoyed it. With twins, I'm surprised you are getting any sleep, you are so lucky. Thanks for taking the time to review on mine and congrats on your babies again. Lucky mom they have <3
Author's Response: Lol everyone seemed to have found that part of mike's desperation comical. I'm glad everyone enjoyed it. You are very welcome on my review on your story, I really enjoyed it. With twins, I'm surprised you are getting any sleep, you are so lucky. Thanks for taking the time to review on mine and congrats on your babies again. Great mom they have <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2011 02:34 am Title: Chapter 64 - Billie Jean is not my lover....
lisa's such a bitch. i hope ariana and michael's relationship is stronger than to let her tear them apart :(
Author's Response: Yeah lisa is a bad a$$ in this story. I, too hope ari and mike could make it :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2011 02:25 am Title: Chapter 64 - Billie Jean is not my lover....
I'm here!! :D We are here, we are here, WE ARE HERE!! Lol, anyways, review time! I KNEW the woman behind everything was Lisa-Marie! I knew it! She is one CRAZY chick! My goodness, MIKE IS NOT INTERESTED! MOVE ON! Sheesh! Lol I feel bad for Michael though, if anyone was crazier then Lisa, it was Billie Jean. My goodness. I see how Mike and Arianna are having their alone time at home...but what about touring? Jimmy will be in the SAME room. I certainly hope they'll be ok if they have to wait. Lol XD Sexy sex scene as always. Michael's desperation was quite comical, poor guy. Lol And that damn phone! Geez, don't they get any peace at all!?!? Lol! I love picturing what Arianna gets to see. She's one lucky woman to have claimed such a wonderful man for herself. My goodness! As always I look forward to your updates. :D They're wonderful, keep up the amazing work girl! :D
Author's Response: Lol your we are here chant made me think of captain eo when mj sings we are here to change the world lol ....everyone seemed to have found mj's desperation comical lol I'm glad you enjoyed it....what about when ari goes touring? Hmmm....idk I guess we'll find out :) thx hunnie always for your amazing reviews. :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2011 01:45 am Title: Chapter 64 - Billie Jean is not my lover....
<3
Author's Response: Xoxo
Date: Aug 06, 2011 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Billie Jean is not my lover....
Love this
Author's Response: :) xoxo
Date: Aug 06, 2011 09:45 am Title: Chapter 63 - You Were There....
Arianna is so cute. She handled the Jimmy thing perfectly. Frank is nosy but damn I'm jealous she got him to sing to her when she was a baby. Mike was so hot in the Sammy Davis tribute.
Yay Im glad to see River and Ari are friends. Do you think your going to write in what happens to him?
Author's Response:
LOL Frank was nosy but I wouldn't had mind talking to him.
Mike was yummy during that performance. I watch it all the time :D Mike is my obsession haha
I haven't decided if I'm going to add that in, honestly. I am a River Phoenix fan as well and just like Michael I hate to think of them on those fateful days. But who knows....
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2011 12:30 am Title: Chapter 63 - You Were There....
I didn't feel this was rushed at all!! :) It was nice to see where everything was at currently and to see just how Mike and Arianna were handing everything. I find it kind of funny that the situation is switched. Now Arianna's the one performing and rehearsing and Mike's the one watching. I don't think Mike and Arianna will have much alone time while Ari's on tour. Jimmy will be so close. Lol, hope they'll be ok. Lol As of right now I don't mind the relationship between River and Arianna. He seems alright but if he ever starts making moves on Ari, I will be pissed. Lol Yay to Frank Sinatra's appearence!! :D Jimmy's so adorable! Thank you for the videos girl, they were absolutely wonderful!!! :D Keep up the wonderful work! As for the Dangerous Era, don't worry, you're gonna get there soon and we'll be with you the entire time. Don't stress over getting there, though I know it's your favorite era. :)
P.S. Thanks for reviewing my story by the way. I appreciate it. :D
Author's Response:
you didn't? that's good then. Yeah right now they have totally switched roles haha and LOl about the alone time, I guess parents find their ways to have their time when they have kids...I don't even want to know when my parents found time after little me came ewww...and LOL at River, everyone is so paranoid about River, it cracks me up. You guys are worse than Michael and I mean that in a good way, I love it. I'm glad you enjoyed the videos btw. I love Adriana Lima and Michael, they are so cute. But of course, Michael is my obsession. Yes, the dangerous era is my fave but it was also a hard time for Michael and this story will have something that would happen that I'm trying to delay writing.
Your welcome. I really did enjoy your story. xoxo
Date: Aug 05, 2011 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 14 - One more chance.....
this one ws really good! a steaming word match would have been better! but nonetheless u r good! :)
Author's Response:
Haha thanks. This is nothing compare to what they will have to go through in the future :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2011 07:32 am Title: Chapter 62 - Happy Birthday, Arianna....
Hey after I happened to find this site I'm so glad your story made me very passionate, anticipated, and very connected! I have so many questions throughout the story I was sorta confused about lol........like How was Lisa in the studio in the first place? Also I think Michael should have mentioned that crazy bold fan in the elevator! There were alot of jaw-dropping and tragic moments which made it all the better! One thing though was you were kind of off on the dates....I know they met in 87' you never did mention Arianna's 19th nor Michael's 30th Birthday or anniversaries....but I loved it you truly have a gift.
-Loyal Reader :)
Author's Response: Hi, thank you for your review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story and thank you for your loyalty. Now regarding your questions, even though this story is all from my imagination I am obviously bringing some of the actual things that happened in Michael's life even if Its not in the same order just for the sake of the story. Why was Lisa in the studio? I pictured a huge building with multi studio rooms, usually that's how thry are built, don't forget that in real life lmp was trying to get into the music business which you will see later on in the story but will she get with michael and succeed I can't say. As for the dates, I followed the bad tour date line. They actually met in March 1988 when Michael performed his 2nd show in MSG in NY where Arianna is from. It was her bday and she was turning 18. Obviously the last chapter is her 19th birthday. Michael's 30th birthday was mentioned, it also happened to be the day they got married and their wedding anniversary so it hasn't happened yet. They didn't start dating officially until april 1988. Re: the fan in the elevator, maybe MJ didn't feel he had to mention it since it happened to him all the time. I'm sure we'll see more crazy fans along the way. I hope this answers your questions. Xoxo
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2011 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 62 - Happy Birthday, Arianna....
I LOVED this chapter! Nothing planned, huh? Lol What a wonderful surprise. :D I'm so glad Joseph approves of Arianna now! How wonderful! I thought Jimmy "making" Arianna breakfast was adorable!! I'm glad Arianna trusts Michael. ^_^ As for the woman, she still seriously needs to get over her self. Michael is NOT interested! I LOVED how Arianna reacted when Bon Jovi came out. Lol! I highly enjoyed that! Michael got SO jealous!!! Arianna's right, Michael is SO cute when he gets jealous. Lol. Don't worry Mike, Arianna will always love you more then anyone else, even if you're not her top favourite artist. Lol Mike has nothin to worry about! :D You're welcome again, glad I could be helpful. Thanks for the personal thank you, I appreciate it. :D
Author's Response:
LOL thanks yes Michael is very sweet and sneaky with his surprises.
I meant it when I said I loved your suggestion. At the end, you guys are the ones who read this story so you have to like it, that's why I love reading the reviews because then I know where I want to go with the story. As for Michael being jealous, I could imagine how he really was and how he looked when he was jealous in real life haha. LMAO at "Don't worry Mike, Arianna will always love you more then anyone else, even if you're not her top favourite artist. Lol" <---- That line made me laugh.
Your welcome on the shout out, it's all for love :D
Date: Aug 04, 2011 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 61 - Michael is mine....
I'm with ya :D
How cute is Jimmy with his family. I'm happy for all of them. lol @ Michael actually getting up get a towel and wipe that stuff off Arianna's face. He was super charming while doing it but clearly he didn't like it lol.
I thought we were through with Lisa desperate ass. Oh well atleast I can see Ari finally getting her for trying to steal her man away. Go back to your husband Lisa...
Author's Response:
Yay!! Thanks :D
LOL Yeah I guess the mask scared Michael.
Lisa tsk tsk what else can I say about Lisa.....