Date: Aug 25, 2011 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 69 - You Give Love A Bad Name.....
why am I happy Michael got head..and why am I mad that it wasn't me giving it.....
Lisa is a fail. and I hope her plan fails as well. Sandra is weak I can't believe shes even going along with everything.
It will be so cute if Arianna was pregnant. I'm happy for their whole family. MissA you spoil us with the treats after each chapter I thankyou. Mike looked so good in his studio and at the awards.
Did you hear about Frank Dileo's passing? smh..it seems all of Mikes friends are dying off. I bet they're having a party..
Author's Response:
LMFAO at the first line of your review.
I'm so happy you enjoy my little treats. I know I go out of my way to find these clips for you and make the pics but that's because I love all my readers.
I did hear about Frank..that's crazy right? Now, they are in heaven away from the evil in this world.
Date: Aug 25, 2011 03:53 am Title: Chapter 69 - You Give Love A Bad Name.....
ohh no mike run
Author's Response:
LOL
Date: Aug 24, 2011 11:16 am Title: Chapter 68 - Seal it with a kiss....
whoa glad your ok girl. I felt like a tremor it wasn't much.
Aww River..that was good that he confessed and broke things off. He was only hurting himself. Go Arianna! I like when she defending her family and ready to take down bitches. Sandra better watch out! I have a feeling Arianna won't be as nice as Michael. as for Mike, that man is to damn smart he called Arianna and River out lol. but he knows it's time for him to put the marriage out. especially if Arianna's words are haunting him.
River is one hotass man though...sheesh sexy just..sexxay.....(rip)
Author's Response:
You are the only River lover here. Everyone else is so afraid of him LOL
I am fine thanks hun and I'm glad you are ok as well. Thank God it wasn't major.
River is a sensetive soul and he must protect himself. Arianna is learning to be stronger. She is slowly becoming a woman and leaving the scared girl behind. Mike, yes he is too damn smart, he couldn't have gotten where he got in his life without that big brain of his. LOL
Date: Aug 24, 2011 03:59 am Title: Chapter 68 - Seal it with a kiss....
Hmm..okay. Both Sandra and River need to go. Lol I hope Michael's right, they don't need anymore heartache, and I hope nothing does tear them apart. Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next. :)
Author's Response:
so you don't like River ad Sandra huh!...LOL....their love will be tested big time...I hope they could survive because I love these two :)
Date: Aug 23, 2011 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 68 - Seal it with a kiss....
I felt the earthquake also here in Maryland it was a 5.8 magnitude and I was scared out of ky mind. glad ur ok :)
Author's Response:
it's funny at the beginning, the news were saying 6.0 then they said 5.8....I'm glad you are alright and thanks btw. :)
Date: Aug 23, 2011 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Lol my all friends were talking about that earthquake thing. I didn't feel a thing. BTW this chapter was great!
Author's Response:
LOL my brother didn't feel it either. I know some people didn't and some people did. The good thing is that it wasn't major. Thanks hun btw.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2011 03:24 am Title: Chapter 67 - Will You Show To Me You'll Be There For Me....
Well then, what can one say about this chapter. I can say that it was interesting, I can say that it showed emotion, I can say a lot of things. I know I'm very sad that Michael and Arianna are fighting again but then, they can't stay perfectly happy forever. Michael really should've been there when he said he was, he shouldn't let work come between him and his family. I also see why he didn't want to stop though. The thing with Michael is that once he gets going, it's really hard for him to stop. He just has so many ideas flowing around at once and he feels he must get them all out as soon as he can, in fear of losing one of them. His music means a lot to him but that doesn't make things right. I can understand why Arianna is angry with Michael, he promised a time he should do everything in his power to make it by that time. Another thing....Michael is scared. I know he is. He goes through so much shit with the media on a daily basis and he tries to be so private but he really should consider being careful to anger the wrong people. I'm surprised he hasn't learned from last time he and Arianna fought so much. He seriously needs to take all that into consideration. I know he wants to protect Arianna and Jimmy but Arianna has a point. They both do in their own way. This comment though: “Fine....I'm going to sleep. You want to act and be seen as a single man then fine. Don't be mad then if a man comes after your family one day. You might lose something you love just because you were too much of a coward to stand up to the press.” I feel it was really harsh on Arianna's part but I also feel it's a huge wake up call for Michael. The more he waits, the more it pains her that she has to hide her love for him and I get that. Wonder if Mike will change his mind. Guess I'll find out. As always I loved the bonus videos at the end, they always make it all the more real. :D That was a really good chapter! I really enjoyed it and I can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great work!!
P.S. Thought you might enjoy the way my last review started, it fit really well and I had a lot of fun typing it. I was happy to see it make a big appearance here, I love that song!
Author's Response:
You are right. No marriage is perfect and they are working little by little on theirs...Michael is a workaholic and you are right when he gets into his music, no one could stop him haha but very soon he will realize that maybe he should have listened to his wife...what will happen? I can't say but you wil son find out.
The comment did seem harsh but it speaks a lot of truth in Arianna's part. Sometimes, with stubborn people you need to speak the truth rather than to sugarcoated.
I'm glad you enjoyed the videos. Always love finding new stuff to share with your guys xoxo and you didn't have to wait long because the new chapter is up. :)
P.S. Yes, I did enjoy the lyrics. I love that song. His voice makes me melt.
Date: Aug 22, 2011 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 67 - Will You Show To Me You'll Be There For Me....
Love the new cover art for the story MissA :)
There goes Michael putting his work before everything lol well atleast he didn't miss the show. but yeah he needs to stop the promising thing. I love Michael but a man like him he has to know things unexpected happen.
*le...sigh* I dunno maybe it's time for them to come out as husband and wife. Arianna seems beyond frustrated. but I know one thing..if they do make their marriage public she better not get huffy if the press gets to be to much..
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Miss Joy *bows down to you* :D
LOL @ "if they do make their marriage public she better not get huffy if the press gets to be to much.."
I guess we'll see....
Date: Aug 18, 2011 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 66 - Thief of hearts....
Arianna is so pretty!
Anyways, i dont like Sandra or lisa.... They sit wrong with me. Lisa always has. I love that thier marriage is doing well... it makes me smile and my heart swell. Im such a sucker for romance.
Sorry for being away for so long... ive kept it, barely, but i kept up. School starts in a few days, but dont quit writing... i read this story all the time!!!!
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
yes Arianna is so beautiful :D
Good luck in school :) and thank you for continuing reading.
BTW, what's your youtube again? Youtube canceled my account because Sony blocked my Blue Gangsta video so I had to create a new one losing all my mj friends. :(
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2011 03:34 am Title: Chapter 66 - Thief of hearts....
Ooo! The girl was bad, the girl was DANGEROUS! I am SO glad Arianna showed up when she did! My goodness, I wanted to harm Sandra so much there! He wanted to leave! My gosh, thank goodness for that public display of affection but too bad that's not enough. I really hope Sandra backs out of her deal with Lisa! She was right, they are really in love and this is definitely a bad idea! No more plots, nothing. Yay Katherine made an appearance! I love her! :D I think Michael and Arianna definitely need to talk about Jimmy's schooling, that was a very good point. Private tutor time! Lol. I'm sure Arianna and Michael will figure that out. :) I'm really glad they had that family day though and I'm glad Michael and Arianna are still happy. I don't trust Lisa in anyway, I don't like this scheming, I don't want her to ruin Michael and Arianna's relationship and yet, at the same time, I am slightly curious as to what she'll do as much as I don't like this. The 90s huh? Wow. Can't believe the 80s are officially over, wow. I love the 90s but I hope whatever bad things may happen Michael and Arianna can overcome them. They have to! Ah, the Vanguard award, he certainly did deserve that in every way! I remember watching that video. :D He is so cute, I love his voice, so soft and sweet. :D Thank you for sharing the video! I also love the new picture for the story. :D As much as I loved the old one. It makes the era shift more prominent, I love it! :D Very clever too. :D I still really love Jimmy! How adorable, I can't wait to read more!!! Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response:
hahaha love the begiining of your review. Thx hun :)
Date: Aug 16, 2011 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Billie Jean is not my lover....
Wow, Lisa Marie, huh? I really hope she isn't successful in breaking this family up.
Author's Response:
I guess we will find out :)
Date: Aug 16, 2011 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 66 - Thief of hearts....
Yay I been missing this story. I love when alll three spend time together as a family. I think Michael and Arianna are getting stronger which is a good thing considering. I never seen that pic of Lisa before she looks cute she still a backstabbing homewrecking hoe though. It will be funny if Sandra fell in love with Michael to then her and Lisa battle it out over a man that don't even belong to them. and Michael calm down..dang ok Sandra is a cutie but don't be getting all nervous and stuff geez.
*melts after watching that vid* I know theres no such thing as a perfect man but gawd he's so close to it <3<3
Author's Response:
you have? aww!! I'm happy you are still with me. That pic of LMP was so long ago haha (i don't mean that in a bad way...maybe)
hahaha that would be funny, she does sound like she is falling for him so who knows what would happen.... ;)
IKR!!! He is so perfect *sighs*
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2011 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 65 - Goodbye to the 80s....
loved this chapter of course! oh and btw i also loved chapter 44, because 'No Ordinary Love' is like one of my favorite songs in the world (i just never reviewed back when I read it lol). but oohh the 90's are present! Danngeroousss eraa! I cant wait to read it! and I was born in 1983, so i went to some of Michael's shows with my parents haha, we never stayed long until i got older <3
Author's Response:
thanks, my love. And oh yes, that is such a beautiful song. Sade's voice is amazing. It's ok if you didn't review, I'm glad you are reading and enjoying the story. I am writing it for you guys. :)
Yesss!! Dangerous era, my fave era, he looked so yummy in it. I know everyone loves the bad era but I'm sucker for that dangerous boy. haha. You are two years older than I. haha I was born in 1985. Which shows did you get to go? I'm glad your parents were cool to take you haha mine weren't. My mom was so fed up with mj obsession lol...oh well...but it really hit her when I cut school and stood out all day to see MJ in Times Square in 2001...oh yeah by then she didn't even want to hear Michael's name LOL..*sighs* those were good times haha....how are your babies? sending you love <3
P.S. I read you are originally from NYC, cool city girl just like me :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2011 04:29 am Title: Chapter 65 - Goodbye to the 80s....
Ryan White!!!!!!!! :( Oh my gosh, I feel so bad for that child, his story breaks my heart so much!! :( Michael was so sweet to spend time with him like that. :) I loved the summary of the 80's at the beginning it was absolutely perfect! I enjoyed it so much! :D River still seems to be alright...but like I said I'm watching him, lol! Jimmy is like the most adorable thing ever! I love him so much!! :D As for their date...really Mike! Really!? Really!? In the damn car! Really Michael!! Lol that man is always up for a little dare, such a troublemaker! Lol As for this hiding business, I again understand where both Michael and Arianna are coming from with their relationship. It's eventually going to be time to reveal though. >.> I wanna see Jimmy spend time with Grandma Katherine too! :D He has such great grandmothers. :D I'm curious as to what Michael and Arianna's plans for New Years are and if they'll be celebrating Christmas since...Mike's a Jehovah Witness and Arianna isn't. I mean they celebrated his birthday... guess I'll find out. Lol. Ah the 90s....I have mixed feelings on those. They were both good and bad and I'm worried. I hope Arianna and Michael will be able to overcome any problem they may have. I wonder when Michael and Arianna will have another child too. :) I'm curious. Lol if they even do. ;) Ooo that magazine shoot...ooo!!!!!!!! Michael looked so amazing there, my goodness, I couldn't stop staring at that pic! Thank you for sharing! :D Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for more! Keep up the amazing work!!!
P.S. I had to stop in Victoria's Secret today with a friend today and they had pictures of the angels everywhere and I saw some pictures of Adriana Lima and I instantly though of your story. Lol It was funny. :D
Author's Response:
yeah Ryan was so yung when he passed away, it's very heartbreaking. LOl, I see that you are keeping your eyes very close to River haha and yes, I love Jimmy and I enjoy writing him. He is so full of innocense and Mike is not so innocent LOl he is very daring ;)
Grandma Katherine will have a lot of time to hang out with her grandson, don't worry. The 90s are good and bad and they will bring a lot of surprises. As for another child? hmm...we will have to wait and see.
Yes, that photo shoot is so dreamy. Yummy!!
Thank you very much, hun. I'm glad you are still with me xoxo
LOL at your story. Now you know how I feel. They still have that huge billboard in front of my job so she's always staring at me lol
Date: Aug 08, 2011 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 65 - Goodbye to the 80s....
Love it...I am/ still is obsessed with the 80's. I hate I was born in 88 hate it. I always tell my dad that when I was born I was already passed my prime lol.
I'm looking forward to Michael and Arianna(and Jimmy) futures. The better look out though cause I heard in the 90's Mike liked dangerous things..
Author's Response: I love the 80s as well, the era and the music, the movies was amazing. You were born in 88? Cool, then you were born while mj was bad and was touring around the states :) I was born in the captain eo era :) 1985, I'm glad I got to experience the bad and dangerous eras, he was amazing. And trust me I know what you mean. I listen and watch so many things from the past, at times I feel like a kid who was born in the 60s or 70s lol