Date: Aug 30, 2011 11:58 am Title: Chapter 71 - He about to lose me
nope you doing the right thing! lol!
just a lil request... PLZZZZZ PLZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZ LET MICHAEL GET VIOLENT!!!!!! i knw it sounds silly but i have been reading a lot about him being violent in other stories YOU REALLY ARE TOOO GOOD!!!!! :)
Author's Response:
LOL I try to keep Michael as real as possible with a twist. Now if you love violent Michael then you are going to love chapter 73...at least I hope. (I hope to have that one up soon) So there, you had a secret preview. More drama on the way.
Date: Aug 30, 2011 10:38 am Title: Chapter 71 - He about to lose me
Double the payback triple the pain. Now not only Arianna is hurting herself and Michael, she added River in this too. He really loves her and she only thinking about her broken feelings. This is going to get so messy..I can't wait!
I almost felt bad for Sandra she got her ass beat! until she tried to kiss Michael again. I guess a good ride on Michael would get you addicted tho.
bada bop bada I'm loving it.....^_^
Author's Response:
I love your mcdonalds song at the end LOL....a lot of drama on the way....:) xoxo
Date: Aug 30, 2011 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
She cannot get pregnant with rivers kid. Please let her already be pregnant with Michael's baby
Author's Response:
hmmm....so many possibilities...I don't know what happens with her and river but she told michael she wasn't pregnant in the last chpater but don't worry, this is not the end of michael and arianna. The story is nowhere near over.
Date: Aug 29, 2011 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Do you photoshop your own photos?? If so, could u do a couple for me?
Author's Response:
yes, I do. I'm not the best at it but I could try. :)
Date: Aug 29, 2011 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 70 - Eaten alive...
cant wait t read the next! please update soon!
Author's Response:
I'm trying to put up the next chapter if only this server will stop kicking me out *annoyed*. I'll try again tonight. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Date: Aug 29, 2011 02:40 am Title: Chapter 70 - Eaten alive...
*mouth drops* hellmuthafuckingnaw :O
Sandra you dirty bitch I can't believe you. I mean you were only supposed to take a kiss not his dick! just like Arianna ,Lisa gone beat your ass too when she find out.
Oh..Michael I hhave no words for u love.
Author's Response:
"I mean you were only supposed to take a kiss not his dick" <-----LMAO
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2011 01:41 am Title: Chapter 70 - Eaten alive...
OMG, I can’t believe what happened!!! I was expecting a kiss, and some paparazzi taking a picture of them, but not that!!! So heartbreaking, I can understand what goes in Arianna’s head right now, but Michael? He will be broken!!! And Arianna is possibly pregnant right now??? Ohhhh God you got to fix that!!! Little one will need his daddy!!!!! Pleeeeeeeeease!!!
Author's Response:
the story took a different turn huh! ....I will try to have the next chapter up tonight if the server stops kicking me out *annoyed* :D
Date: Aug 28, 2011 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 70 - Eaten alive...
DAMN! Oh hell no! Omg.... how could this happen. Bless his heart, he was srunk.... but that dont change anything. He still slept with her, and poor Arianna thinks the worst, which is already bad enough. Oh my god..... this is just tragic!!! So horribly tragic.
Sorry i have been away for a long time.... i didnt abandon you.... i've been super busy with school since i've went back. Thanks for understanding. As for my youtube, my username is SamsNCollege09. www.youtube.com/user/SamsNCollege09.
Love your story.... i love to read it when i get time. Dont worry, im caught back up now, im just too shocked by what went down in this chapter to think clearly! Love ya hun, and good job!
XxSamanthaxX
Author's Response:
I will send you an invite on youtube :) love you more...I know this is a sad chapter. I hope people don't kill me on the next one.
Date: Aug 28, 2011 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
OMJ! I'm in tears...LITERALLY! No! Why! Their relationship was so...PERFECT.Why Sandra,Why?!God....this story just broke my broken heart...goodness.I have to wipe the tears out of my eyess.Why am I crying?! Curse you.No, they can't be done.No, come on can I get a makeup chapter for Mike's birthday? See what you've done....I'm probaly going to go listen to depressing songs just to make myself more depressed....I do that.God this story really draws you in.Now LMP is on my hitlist,LMP, Sandra,and Tatiana are all on there, and the story is not even real.
PS...don't EVER end this story.I couldn't bear the end of it.
PPS...I MEAN THAT!
-all for love, L.O.V.E:'(
Author's Response:
:'( I'm sorry hun...don't cry....there's alot more to come. This story is no where near the end, so that the good news. love you more. xoxo
Date: Aug 28, 2011 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
Loved how the story begins!!!
Author's Response:
awww thank you
Date: Aug 28, 2011 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 70 - Eaten alive...
OHHH MY FUCKING GOD just wow this is I hav no words i really think mike n ari r through this time idk gosh smh
Author's Response:
oh boy...now I am afraid to post the next chapter *can't watch*
Date: Aug 28, 2011 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 70 - Eaten alive...
well honestly, i was expecting some kinda violence in here! its Michael aftrall! THE SEXIEST MAN IN THE UNIVERSE!!! LOL
Good job! :)
Author's Response:
LOL...then you are going to love or hate the next chapter LOL
Date: Aug 27, 2011 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 69 - You Give Love A Bad Name.....
great chapter! please don't ever stop writing, i totally love it!!!! :) xx
Author's Response:
thank you and don't worry there is alot more to the story xoxo
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2011 03:40 am Title: Chapter 69 - You Give Love A Bad Name.....
NO! NO! NO!!! Why!? WHY!? WHHHHHYYYYY!?!?!?!?!?!?! Go away Sandra! Don't do it! Back out! Back out! BACK OUT LIKE YOU SAID!!!! You KNOW he's happy with Arianna! You know he's got a good thing! If you ruin this you will NEVER forgive yourself!You'll wake up everyday hating yourself for what you caused! Please Sandra! Have a heart!!! D': I was so excited when Arianna told Michael she wanted to have another baby and that she might be pregnant, I truly was! I grinned so wide! But then I kept thinking of those damn Cinema Awards and I was like SHIT!! I swear to god if that bitch messes things up for Michael and Arianna I will find SOME WAY to kill her myself!!!! Somehow...some way....-_- I HATE Lisa-Marie in SO many ways! God! She is SO evil!!!!!!! People think Tatiana is bad! Ha! Lisa is ten times worse!!!!!! Grrr!! Michael was thinking of letting the public know about him and Arianna too!! GAH! I'm so angry with Sandra! I swear to god SHE BETTER NOT KISS MICHAEL! Run Michael, think clearly, stumble away, sober up...do something!! Pretend to faint! Think Mike, think! You know Arianna will still be in your thoughts! Think about her, Jimmy and your possibly unborn child! DON'T LET THAT DANGEROUS BLOND BABE RUIN ANYTHING! God I'm so worried!! If something does happen...which I hope it doesn't...I hope Arianna will realize Michael would never do that to her!! Something needs to be done, Michael and Arianna have to stay together!!! DAMN YOU LISA! DAMN YOU SANDRA! D': This was a great chapter! I loved it, I was excited to see an update! I can't wait for the next chapter though I'm nervous as hell!! :/ I really hope things turn out the way they should and not the way Lisa planned. M-maybe someone could walk down the hall before anything can happen....SOMETHING!!!! HOPEFULLY! I love your writing, it's wonderful!! :D Loved the pictures and videos as always. :D Sorry I didn't review the last chapter. I lost internet the day after I checked for an update. It was late when I'd looked so I planned to read it the next day but got screwed! >.< Wonderful work again, like I said, can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. I hope you don't hate me :( Lisa and Dandra are dangerous women. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2011 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 69 - You Give Love A Bad Name.....
Hey girl,
I don’t know how come I didn’t read your story before!!! It took me a couple of days to read all of those chapters. And I felt like a kid in the candy store, almost 70 chapters, what a treat? LOL It has been quite a journey for those two. Also I really love how you add those pictures of Arianna and Michael, it makes it more real. What a beautiful couple they are!!!! :) I hope you are not about to wrap up the story any soon, because you definitely going to have me as your reader lol
I love to see those two so happy, and being in love!!! But I feel some drama on the way. Still, this is what makes a story good, and all the drama they go through just makes their bond stronger!!! Can’t wait to read more! You got me hooked!!
P.S. BTW, I live in NJ and I felt the earthquake too. Honestly, at the beginning I just thought I’m going crazy LOL. But when it really started shaking I freaked out, my kitchen cabinets started to open up, and the floor seemed to move from side to side. Thank god it was not that bad!!! :) <3 Oksana!
Author's Response:
New reader...I love it. I send hugs your way.
I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. I hope to see more of you. " I felt like a kid in the candy store" <---- I love that comment. I try to keep it as real as possible. I also want the story to touch the reader in every way possible. Is very important. Don't worry, there is a lot more to this story. Is going to be a long one.
Arianna and Michael have their ups and downs but they truly love eachother. I try to write Michael as I would imagine he would be. I observed a lot of how he acted in real life to make this story more real. The same goes with Arianna. Right now, they are going through something very serious unlike their past problems but I'm sure we'll see more of them. They are not through. Thank you soooooo much for reading. love you more.
P.S. the earthquake was a bit scay. I hope you were ok with the hurricane that just past. I was in a good area thankfully, just a lot of rain but no floods. xoxo