Date: Sep 07, 2011 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 74 - Give in to me.....
in feel so brokenhearted for them i cnt believe this
Author's Response:
me too :'( but I have faith in both of them :)
Date: Sep 06, 2011 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 74 - Give in to me.....
Ok the table is turning right now. I am still not approving of what Michael did. But he has a point by saying his last words to her. And I think she is going to realize sooner, that she lost a man that truly loved her! Damn now I’m on his side 100%. So, a new girl is in the picture? I guess it’s a start of pay off for that River thing!! Michael better make public appearances with that Shana girl. I want Arianna angry and jealous. So she would understand her mistake! Not being a woman to fight for her family!!..... What also came to mind is that Michael is always the first one to apologize and beg her come back. But this time Arianna is damn wrong! How many families there would be divorced around the world if that was that easy for someone just to split the family apart? Arianna, grow up woman!!!!! Great writing girl, I love it!!!! Can’t wait for more already lol. :) <3! Oksana
Author's Response:
yes, I agree. The words Michael told Arianna were very strong words. Great observation btw on Michael always running after her. Don't lose faith on Arianna, they say with age comes wisdom...:)
Date: Sep 06, 2011 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 74 - Give in to me.....
Oh my god, I'm freaking crying. :( He signed, they divorced, now they're trying to move on. It's way too soon, neither one is ready for this. :( Michael's exactly right, one day she'll realize. I can't believe they're actually over. My heart breaks for these two. I'm glad they're sharing Jimmy but still. He wants his family to be whole again, his dad does, and...deep down....so does Arianna. :( These are the saddest chapters ever. Great work, keep it up. I hope Michael and Arianna find their way back to one another. I really do. :( Love yea girl! xoxo, thank you for the videos too, they're always helpful. I still hate River, he stole Arianna from Michael! -_-
Author's Response:
Are you really hun? Don't cry!! :'( and yes, I agree those are some strong words Michael told Arianna at the end. I'm glad you enjoy my extra stuff :)
Date: Sep 06, 2011 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 73 - She's Invincible....
Hey girl,
The site was down, and I was afraid it will never be back. I am relived now :)
You did good with this chapter. But Arianna starts to get on my nerves! Is she that blind? Doesn’t she see Michael is fighting for a reason? And damn River! I thought of him higher. How could he take advantage of her, knowing she is not over Michael? Knowing that she is still deeply in love with him? It is not like River was just a new guy that she just met, he was her friend. What kind of friend was he? Just a typical asshole trying to satisfy his needs at his first opportunity!!! Michael is still technically her husband, and has all the rights to fight for his family!!!!
Just curious. What kind of feelings does she have for River? What goes through her mind when she is with him?
Author's Response:
hey hun, I know. I was going crazy. Apparently, the website got hacked as they were switching servers. Thankfully, they were able to fix it. Brokensmile smile is a great hostess and she worked hard to get us up and going. Haha...Arianna is getting on everyone's nerves but I have faith in her and Michael. What does she feel for River? Next chapter, you will find out :)
Date: Sep 03, 2011 03:15 am Title: Chapter 72 - Who is it? .....
TAKE THAT LISA! If only she'd gotten the picture sooner. This is terrible. I must say....Arianna is seriously pissing me off. She isn't even divorced fully yet and she's off with River. God. I knew I was going to hate him. -_- I wish he'd never walked into her life, I wish Sandra had never walked into Michael's and I wish Lisa would've just been less stupid. Sigh. Everything's all screwed up. Michael don't you dare sign those papers! You keep fighting damn it! Don't give up! Arianna snap the fuck out of it! All River is, honestly, is the rebound guy, that's it. That's a horrible situation to be in when you're a guy. I'm still pissed Arianna moved on so soon, that is so uncool. And yeah, I get what Michael did was wrong but he didn't know, nor was he really there, Sandra TOOK ADVANTAGE of Michael! She SHOULD'VE backed off instead. He even said "Arianna" -_- I'm so mad at her, I'm so mad at Arianna and I just overall hate the situation. I get that Arianna is hurting but again, trying to move on with River so quickly isn't going to help, it really won't. I feel terrible for Jimmy. This is unfair to him, it really is. :( Great chapter girl! Love what you're doing, keep it up!! :D Can't wait for more!!
P.S. Loved the pics and video :D I also love the song lyrics in the story, sets the mood nicely. Guess we know where Who Is It came from. >.> And yeah, we did get hit by the hurricane but we're ok. :) By the way, I love that you updated this on my birthday! :D
Love yea girl!! xoxo
Author's Response:
I know right? Michael put Lisa in her place. Don't lose faith on Arianna yet. She is not dumb. I have faith in Michael and Arianna. :) and haha yes, now you know the story behind Who is it and I'm glad you were fine btw. Was it really your bday? yay!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! *sings to you and throws confetti in the air*
Date: Sep 02, 2011 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 72 - Who is it? .....
Damn damn damn. The first damn is for divorce. The second damn can be shared by Michael & Arianna. And the third damn is for fucking Lisa fucking Marie. XD. You have to excuse me, I get in rare form when I read this story, like I feel like Im in it or something. That's how fabulous it is. I disagree with Arianna but yet I agree. I mean, I find what she did to be lower than what Michael did because he was taken advantage of. At the same time, being a married woman, I understand her. My husband could have been drunk, sick, beat up, confused, or dying, but as long as he made love to anybody but me, my ass would go insane hehe. I still love this story to pieces. It's brilliant dear heart <3
Author's Response:
LOL Thank you sweetie.
Date: Sep 02, 2011 10:29 am Title: Chapter 72 - Who is it? .....
woot woot I've been waiting on a update sooo much! so yeah ok I see Arianna's point and *sigh* maybe she needs this time to get a little break. She still loves and want Michael. the girl can't hardly be in the same room with him. I'm sure they will find their way back to each other, Michael can't expect her to be like "oh. its been 3 weeks, time to get over it"
Author's Response:
LOL woot woot. Again, you are the only who has a different POV than the rest of the reviewers. I love it. Thank you for looking at Arianna's POV. :)
Date: Sep 02, 2011 02:11 am Title: Chapter 72 - Who is it? .....
Wow this is crzy
Author's Response:
I know right? :)
Date: Sep 02, 2011 01:52 am Title: Chapter 72 - Who is it? .....
I’m glad Arianna realizes it was not his doing. But still she is thinking how she would not be able to be with him, because another woman touched his body, or kissed his lips. On the other hand, she consciously sleeps with another man right the same day!!! So what about Michael’s feelings if to assume they would try to work it out? She even did it while her damn babysitter was watching Jimmy? So what kind of mother she is, and I’m not talking what kind of wife she is? Mothers don’t act on impulse, because they have obligations before their kids. So, if Mike and Arianna were to get divorced, the boy is better stay with his father at the moment!!!
People make mistakes throughout their whole life, but I guess the couples that have been married for some time are more experienced, and know better if there is anything left to be fighting for in such situations………. I’m not trying to defend Michael, because he is guilty for getting drunk, and for keeping them a secret. But the only thing I know they are separate and hurting bad. Still Arianna is much younger then Michael…….. I don’t know how you would continue. But what matters is Arianna’s opinion if she was to find out about Lisa’s plan! Would she look at things differently knowing that was supposed to happen one day or another?
Anyways, good luck Arianna trying to fall in love with River!!!! You know you never will!!!! Also, you are not better then Michael, because you are using this guy!!! And River you are better hiding FAST!!! LOL. Mike is coming after you!!! Lol
OMG, you got me hooked! It’s different when you have 69 chapters right in front of you, and you keep reading through drama moments almost all night long. But now my anticipation is killing me knowing there is no next chapter to read yet! I loooooooooove this story!!!!!!!! Please update soon, and try to scare off that boy River!!! Because, it is either a coincidence or what, but every time two people are fighting there is always a 3rd one trying to get in between. River, give them time to think through!!! It is too low to jump into bed with woman who loves another man, and that is because some dangling piece of your body is itching badly!!!....... Girl, you doing a gret job!!!! Can’t wait for more lol. :) <3! Oksana
Author's Response:
I know it's a little confusing huh? But I think when you live with your heart on your sleeve and let your emotions take over, you are bound to make some mistakes. You just think of protecting yourself. Arianna is young but not stupid, so don't lose faith on her yet. Michael and her just need to heal. I have faith on those two :)
I'm very happy that you are enjoying the story. I'm trying to post the following chapters as fast I can. I don't want to keep you guys waiting for too long. Thank you btw. xoxo
Date: Aug 31, 2011 01:25 am Title: Chapter 71 - He about to lose me
I still love you!! I have had no internet for a bit so I couldn't read till now. :( Great chapters but I'm incredibly sad. I FUCKING HATE SANDRA!! She SO took advantage of Michael!! He thought she was Arianna! He didn't know!!! She should have stayed away from him, far, far away!! And ARIANNA! I know she's mad at Michael but SERIOUSLY!?!?!? She just CONSCIOUSLY cheated on Michael!! I know she said she wanted a divorce but SERIOUSLY! That is so unfair and this all just plain wrong. Everything's so screwed up now, FUCK YOU SANDRA! And RIVER!!!! YOU SHOULD HAVE SAID NO! WHY EVEN GO THAT FAR!!!! SHIT! Mike won't like that. They both made a mistake, both fucked up real bad but Michael DIDN'T KNOW! I wanna be mad at Michael for cheating on Arianna but...but...I CAN'T BE! He didn't know and he was so out of it, he thought Sandra WAS Arianna, therefore I CANNOT be mad at him. Arianna however....there is no excuse for that. Yes she was in a LOT of pain but that is NOT the way to handle it...at all...this is so messed up. I feel so bad for Jimmy. :( Loved it girl, I really did and again, I still love you. I could never hate you. :) Wonderful as always, keep up the great work. :D
Author's Response:
yay!! I'm glad you still love me. Were you hit by the hurricane? I hope you were alright. I am not a fan of Sandra either LOL. Michael and Arianna are both emotionally destroyed at this point but they are young and they will be able to pull through. I know 2 wrongs doesn't make a right but hopefully these two could continue their path to love.
Love ya, girl xoxo
Date: Aug 30, 2011 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
I don't CARE if she got cheated on by Michael F****** Jackson, you do NOT cheat BACK! She's going about this the wrong way! And to YOU. Are you trying to make me suffer an anxiety attack?She might get pregnant with River's baby.I was afraid of this....now she's in a love triangle.Shame on you...and PERSONALLY speaking...If Mike had cheated on ME...I'd love him more;)
Author's Response:
I totally agree with you. I am against cheating. I don't like it.
Me? haha sorry....don't be mad lol
Date: Aug 30, 2011 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 71 - He about to lose me
Ooo, I can't believe she said she hated Michael. Those are strong, harsh words. But dayam... lots of fuckin' around going on in this ff. I kinda love it... Ahhhhh. Drama, bring it on!
Author's Response:
"But dayam... lots of fuckin' around going on in this ff" <---LOL
Drama, drama, drama...these two are all about drama :)
Date: Aug 30, 2011 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 71 - He about to lose me
Damn. Smh. So they're technically even, but WHAT THE HELL?? Oooh, drama drama. I can sense how messy this is gonna get. Good update dear heart. I can totally feel for these two right now. <3.
Author's Response:
technically, yes they are even. It doesn't mean they are right. These two will have to learn and pass through a lot but could they make it? thanks hun. love ya xoxo
Date: Aug 30, 2011 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 71 - He about to lose me
WOW Drama all the way!!!
Knowing that Sandra took advantage of Michael when he was drunk doesn’t make him a victim!!! Not at all!! Because he was supposed to be with his family, and not getting drunk on the after party at the first place. I know that trust between couples is one thing, but you can’t trust when it comes to other people. And if everybody knew they were married, that wouldn’t have gone so far! I guess Arianna’s words came true, he decided to keep them a secret, and other decided to split them apart, thinking that Arianna and Mike were not that serious!
I know that Arianna is going to regret that she slept with River, but I’m kind of glad that she did. It will make them sort of even. She is going to hurt poor guy’s feelings even more!!!
Is she really pregnant? Because if she is, and knew about it, the way she acted was damn wrong!!!!
Great chapter girl! I hate it and love it at the same time lol. Can’t wait for more!!! :) <3<3
Author's Response:
OMG I love you because you are the only one who saw Arianna's POV. Everyone was so busy defending Michael. LOL. Now, that does not mean that Michael was right or that Arianna was right in their actions. Thanks hun btw :) xoxo
Date: Aug 30, 2011 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 71 - He about to lose me
Wow I cnt believe she did that r u serious two wrongs dnt make a right. I mean mike is still wrong cuz technically he cheated but he was drunk n some took advantage of him. I mean shot he thought it was ari he was sleepin with he cnt evn remember wat happend. Now ari has no excuse but she is hurting that doesn't make it ok doh she knows wat she is doing not only thar but wat bout river she is just using him n he is in love with her that's fucked up.
Author's Response:
you are right about one thing. 2 wrongs don't make a right. These two are so emotionally broken at this point. I think you are about to start seeing a new Michael and Arianna.