[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2011 09:58 am Title: Chapter 78 - I don't understand your ways....
OMG, the blonde chick told Shana everything, of course she lived with the guilt she broke apart a marriage, but wow. I hope she tells Michael and Arianna everything soon though, great chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, Sandra spilled LOL Thanks
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2011 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Now the tables have turned...Now I'm the villian!
i reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy want them to get back together.
Author's Response:
I know. Me too
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2011 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 77 - Something that I already know.....
Loved the chapter! I'm glad my reviews make you feel better, seeing that brightened my day. :) I'm glad Ari and Mike actually talked for once, they needed to. I'm still waiting to see if they get back together. Lol And I know what River died from in real life and since you said you were trying to keep the characters true...I have a feeling we'll definitely see some things. Arianna had every right to try and tell him to be careful, I wish he'd listen. :/ I don't like that both are handling the relationship stuff different. I really think Ari is moving too fast, giving herself fully to River like that? Right after, as Michael described, a painful divorce? It feels like too much, too soon and as if River will end up being a rebound guy...that's just how I feel. Wonderful chapter! Keep up the great work! :D
P.S. I too have loved Michael for a very long time, as long as I can remember really. I recall my mum getting me the Thriller album when I was like 9. Lol
Author's Response:
Yes girl, you totally do. :) I'm glad too Arianna and Michael are being civil for the sake of Jimmy. I know we will see more of them soon. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2011 09:49 am Title: Chapter 77 - Something that I already know.....
Yeah I’m team Michal girl! :)
I’m glad they are friends for now. But if they are to be together again, Arianna has to be first one to get him back! And what was that with River? “….enjoying our time and love making.”? That’s called SEX Arianna, not a love making!!! You can’t have “love making” with a man that you are not in love with!!! She should be imagining Michael during that and not enjoying it!!! What’s wrong with that woman?..... So these I guess what pisses me off about Arianna and makes me team Michael lol. Arian always shuts her true emotions, while Michael is being honest with himself. He wants to move on, and start something new with Shana, but still not being able to promise anything serious to the girl; while Arian ready to jump into serious relationship with River like nothing happened to her with Michael. She just acts like a teenage girl after broken relationship, trying to jump into another one just to make it count! Good job on this one, but I’m really pissed with Arianna lol. Please update soon! :)
Author's Response:
I am tean Michael too. I love Michael.
LOL at your frustration with Arianna.
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2011 04:51 am Title: Chapter 77 - Something that I already know.....
ohhh, good chapter... Even though they are gonna be friends, it's going to be hard for them to alway be around each other, eventually the lust and desire which they both feel for one another will win... Especially since Arianna knows that she still loves him. Now all we need is for River and Shana to be out of the out of the picture for a while. BTW, when are they gonna find out about lisa setting MJ up.. She should come clean.. P.D: I would love love to have some of that delicious chocolate.. hahahha couldn't help myself.. You know he is my weekness.. Girl, this story keeps getting better and better. It just sucks having to wait for the following chapters, and reading the reviews now i know it's not just me...
Author's Response:
We have to wait and see if the love Arianna and Michael have for each other overrrules and wins and re: LMP...you have not heard the end of her but I can't say how she will come back so we will just have to wait and see.
and haha girl!!! me too. I want some Michael chocolate bar with kisses :) he is alll girls' weakness. I know it's frustrating to wait. I'm trying to upload them as fast as I could. I hate to keep you guys waiting for too long :) but on the plus side when I say I'm going to take a break usually my mind is always turned on and an idea will pop and then I'm up all night writing LOL
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2011 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Now the tables have turned...Now I'm the villian!
OMG I'VE MISSED the last few chapters... Review on this chapter, first of all fucking fuck! Second, I love the song you choose in the beginning, im always singing it thinking of a certain someone (ex) lol also JLo is my "home girl" :)
Okay, at first with these two I got a lil excited but not too hopeful, as soon as shana showed up I knew it was not gonna be smooth but my heart stopped at what Michael did, said, and reacted. DAMN!!! As a reader I don't blame him, I know why he did it.. But as a woman "such an asshole" lol Wow at how ari let Michael show how much it bothered her.. I am actually happy that Michael didn't give into her lil game and pushed her away instead of kissing her..Yea he wanted to kiss her really bad but I'm happy he didn't cuz it teached her a lesson!! But the ending was sooo Sad :(
Author's Response:
Hello Moonwalker....You like JLo? haha yeah I'm digging her new album...she's cool.
Yeah (LOL) Michael got carried away. Of course, as a reader that spells suspense and drama and yes as a woman I agree, total asshole but Michael is not bad. :)
I know that Michael and Arianna are not perfect but I have a feeling these two will be in each other's lives for a long time, in what way? I'm not sure but let's find out! :) xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2011 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Now the tables have turned...Now I'm the villian!
Loved the chapter! Mixture of emotions. I hope something comes up where River and Shauna can't go....I don't want them to go with Jimmy, Michael, and Arianna. I can't believe how close they were to kissing! Michael did the right thing but dammit, I wanted them to so badly. Is that a bad thing? Poor Michael though, Ryan's going to pass soon and it's gonna kill him when he does. :( I feel so bad for him and poor Ryan, he was gone way too soon. :( Wonderful chapter! You need more confidence in your chapters though, it was wonderful! I enjoyed every moment of it. Is it weird that I don't trust River fully here? I swear he's going to wind up hiding something from Arianna...I just don't know what it might be. I'm not even sure there will be so we'll see. Keep up the wonderful work!! I look forward to your next update. :D
Author's Response:
HAhaha no it's not a bad thing. We all wish they kissed deep inside. Those two love each other damn it!
Yes, poor Ryan. He was so young when he passed away. I wonder what would he be doing now if he was alive.
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Honestly, I just been so tired physically and I wrote that chapter in a deep state of sleep so I was not reading it the way I wanted it, I guess. But I'm glad you are enjoying the chapters. Your reviews make me feel better. You don't trust River? I will say this....River is a complex character. In the story, I'm trying to keep a little bit of their true characters of their real life. ( I chose River and Adriana Lima as my characters because I'm truly a fan of theirs and I have read so many things about them....and Michael...Gosh I have been in love with Michael since I was a child, there is nothing I feel I don't know about Michael) River was an amazing human being but he did have skeletons in the closet and soon you will see them come out.
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2011 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Now the tables have turned...Now I'm the villian!
YEY!!! That’s what I was talking about! I hate them being separate, but this time Arianna deserved that kind of treatment! She is being jealous!!! Now she can understand how is it feels to have a person you deeply in love being kissing another woman! Also I get it how Michael feels bad for using another girl to hurt Arianna. But he didn’t promise her anything yet, and haven’t said “I love you”! And Shana should be grateful, even for a while to have such a man in her life. Hell half of the female population is in love with him!!! So Shana girl, enjoy your moment while you have it!!! Also I’m glad that Mike didn’t let Arianna to kiss him. I’m not sure if she’s ready yet. You know how she gets, one minute she kissing him while the chemistry is too strong to refuse, and the other she pushes him away again! But he will need her support now! Good job on this one. I don’t know why you feel bad about this chapter, but it’s good! The only thing that bothers me about Arianna is why the hell she is so calm when it comes to her past relationship with Michael? She kind of shuts her emotions and feelings away, and that is no matter if she is with Mike or by herself alone. Isn’t she hurting that much being without him? ….. Also like Chsienna said, I’m dying to know if Arianna will ever find out about Lisa’s set up???? :) lots of MJ hugs and kisses!! Oksana
Author's Response:
You are happy? LOL Ok, so you are team Michael, I'm assuming haha
Thx for letting me know you liked it. I wrote it in a deep state of sleep so I thought it was not too good but it could have been my lack of sleep talking LOL. I'm glad y'all enjoyed it :)
About Arianna, read the next chapter. She explains a little bit in her POV about how she feels. Arianna is a bit more vulnerable than Michael which is why she shuts down. At the same time try to put yourself in her shoes, I know you are pro Michael but he hasn't been too honest in the relationship. Now, I'm not saying Arianna is a saint but I'm just looking at her perspective but we all know she loves Michael deep inside, she just has a hard time showing it. When she is pain she shuts down to avoid more pain.
As for Arianna finding out about LMP and Sandra's plan...I will tell you what I told Chsienna, you have not heard the end of LMP and Sandra but when and how they decide to return we will have to wait and see. :) xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2011 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Now the tables have turned...Now I'm the villian!
:O Oh poor Ryan...I remember that was all over the news when I was a girl :(. And gah! You can't deny the almost-chemistry that Mike & Ari have. And I died at:
Do you not like her?”
“I don’t know her”
“I haven't slept with her”
“I didn't ask"
“But you were thinking it” I said and she shrugged.
LOL, I was reading this story the other day after I picked my brother up from school, and he was like "lemme read it". So he starts all the way from chapter 1, & dear heart he was getting so into it! And he's 17 so I guess when something is "the best" or "the bomb", people say its "the shit". So Im like "Delaney isnt this story the shit?" and he's like "Oh Hell yeah, its the shit and the urine". And I was like "O_o. Gross Laney!" *dies* I hope you get that its a compliment though, my brother's just strange. But OMG this story always gets better with every update dear heart :). Sorry for rambling <3
Author's Response:
Yeah hun me too. Poor kid, he died too young. And LOL I'm glad you enjoyed that part. Those two always crack me up.
For real? (about your brother) that's cool. It's hard to get a 17 yeard old boy interested ina story like this so if he liked it then I'm doing something right. I feel better and all thanks to you and your bother lol
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2011 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Now the tables have turned...Now I'm the villian!
great chapter, but i have a question, will she ever know the truth that Lisa Marie and that other girl set up Michael?
Author's Response:
Thx. And re: your question....you haven't heard the end of LMP and Sandra in this story so we'll just have to wait and see when they return and how ;)
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2011 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 75 - Is It Better On the Other Side?....
I've been meaning to review but I haven't had the chance first off I want to say I love this story, I think it's wonderful & I always look forward to you posting new chapters ok 2nd I have to say this I think in all this Michael is so wrong!!! He didn't even fight for her, he let her go so easy I mean he gave up way to soon, he messed up I know Ari did too but all this mess is michael's fault he should have been with his family instead of partying he should not have slept with that girl & he should have went after her when all that mess went down. NOW he is giving up on her knowing that he is still in love & so is she, It's really sad, he made a vow to this woman, started a family with her & he gave in so easily. He needs to get her back quick before she moves on & he moves on cuz although BOTH of them messed up it's michael who has the burden of making it right... I hope they find their way back to each other it's just sad that all that had to happen! wonderful story can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
1) thank you so much for your sweet compliment. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. That means a lot to me
2) Finally!!! someone who sees Arianna's POV lol I love it. There will be more from Michael and Arianna so we'll find out where they go. :)
Thx hun for the review. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2011 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 75 - Is It Better On the Other Side?....
Wonderful chapter!!! Yes they still love each other, which is why they need to be together! I think it's nice that they're trying to move on and everything but I don't think they'll ever be fully happy with another person. They need to get back together and start fresh! They can do it!! I also think Michael needs to go on that trip with Jimmy and Arianna so they can be a family for a bit, that's what Jimmy wants so that's what it should be, even if it's only for a bit. I see it as only fair. I'm curious as to how this little "reunion" will go. I find it silly they don't directly talk to each other, they need to get over that and grow up. :/ Anyways, loved how you showed what everyone was doing, I have always loved that about this story. It's nice to know how all the characters are thinking and feeling in a situation. Hopefully they can start talking again and be friends and then...maybe get back together, which would be nice. I loved those two together. Loved the extras as always, the pictures and videos always help make a story more real. Again, wonderful chapter! Keep up the amazing work, I look forward to your next update! Love yea girl! xoxo
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoy that because I think it's very important to tell a story from everyone's persperctives. It makes the story more real and it helps the readers understand more why certains things were done, etc. Love ya more xoxo
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2011 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 75 - Is It Better On the Other Side?....
I’m going bipolar right now lol. At one point I’m glad that Michael is trying to move on, and was a little disappointed that Arianna haven’t seen them kissing. And at the same time I want them together again! lol.
p.s. And I hope Arianna is wrong about River. He’s probably not that innocent and sweet! Back in my country they say “Tell me who your friend is, and I will tell you who you are”. My curiosity is killing me. Is he doing drugs? …… I know you will not tell it lol lol. I just hate Michael to be the only BAD guy in this story lol ;)
Author's Response:
LOL bipolar is good
You are right. I can't say but you know what's funny. It's hard to write anything bad about River and Michael because in real life there were both two amazing souls.
Date: Sep 11, 2011 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 75 - Is It Better On the Other Side?....
Loved it
Author's Response:
:) THX
Date: Sep 09, 2011 07:55 am Title: Chapter 74 - Give in to me.....
omg!!!!!!! i am crying! :'(
Author's Response:
:'( I'm sorry