[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2011 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 77 - Something that I already know.....
Reply: Yes, I am a big fan of JLo ;) Oh really? funny thing is that on that album there is a song that reinds me of how ariana feels about Michael..
Review: Aww im soo happy that Ariana was there for Michael when he REALLY needed her.
You are dangerous. I crave you but sometimes that delicious box of chocolate is not the best choice for you”
“I'm like a box of chocolate?” he asked with a smirk (Hek yea you are Michael)
I Love this part, hahaha soooo cute!!
Its a good thing they ened in good terms for the sake of Jimmy...
OHHHH my, so she gave herself to River, huh? Dang ohhh well.
Author's Response:
which song? Tell me I wanna hear it. Maybe I'll use it LOL
I loved that line too, made me crack up. I look silly typing in front of my computer and then giggling out of nowhere. My bf thinks I'm so weird LOL oh well...
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2011 11:50 am Title: Chapter 79 - Now I long for Yesterday.......
she needs to stay away from river, he's just bad news! and yayyyyy to them getting lost in the kiss, i just hope they don't regret it! absolutely awesome!
Author's Response:
yes, agreed. River is not a nice guy in this story. And yay to the kiss haha
Date: Sep 20, 2011 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 79 - Now I long for Yesterday.......
wow finally..............! who hoooooooooooooooo! :) great going! :)
Author's Response:
LOL Finally!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2011 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 79 - Now I long for Yesterday.......
And Shana is still on my shit list!!!
Author's Response:
LMAO
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2011 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 79 - Now I long for Yesterday.......
I really feel sorry for Arianna, but I guess that’s something she needed to make up her mind. Now she can compare and see for herself who’s the one that really loves her. Also I feel sorry for Michael, it must have been hard for him to hear that Arianna got pregnant with a guy she hardly knew and didn’t love, but refused him to have his child when they were together and married. But I’m glad she lost that baby, she wasn’t supposed to have it with River!
So Mike is her remedy right now? lol. Girl you have stopped at the wrong place and wrong time!!! LOL. You have to update soon!!! Please! :) <3<3
Author's Response:
Yes, I don't like abuse and I hated to add that in with Arianna but it needed to be done. Now, yes she could see who was the better man. Michael, also in a way needed to hear evenif it was sad to hear. Arianna is human, she made a mistake getting pregnant but she is learning from it.
Mike is always her remedy, girl haha. NEW Update is up. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2011 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 79 - Now I long for Yesterday.......
omg! she was pregnant with River's baby, I feel so sorry. Mike was there to comfort her, i knew they would kiss eventually, they need each other. Great chapter
Author's Response:
shocking and sad isn't it? and you could always count on Mike. And yes, agreed they totally need each other. Thx
Date: Sep 20, 2011 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
I'm crying for joy right now. Man, it's only like two stories on this sit that make me so happy, and you're one of them. You just gave me hope right now.I'm so serious. I love this story. Tell me why I almost dropped my laptop when i saw the update?Ok...so I OFFICIALLY HATE cliffhangers now. You just HAD to stop, huh? Well Missy, when I don' come back to review, it's because of an anxiety attack that YOU caused.How dare you stop here?! First she's pregnant, then she's all over Mikey?!Have you no heart.I need a lil more than that!Dang...harrumph...shoo u really need to stop doing these crazy cliffhangers.Btw...I need ur opinion on my new story. I'm not getting enough reviews...what am I doing wrong?
Author's Response:
awwww!!! I'm glad I made the top 2 LOL That's very sweet.
Sorry about the cliffhangers but I want you eager to come back the next chapter. You have to come back and review, no anxiety attacks please haha
I'll check out your story and review. <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2011 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 79 - Now I long for Yesterday.......
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,, o m gggggg,, i loved this chapter !!! Girl, i'm so happy that MJ was there for her... Poor Mike, that must of hurt him so much to know that she was pregnant with rivers baby... I really hope that she leaves River, she and Mike belong together... Such a sweetheart to take care of her... And that kiss at the end,, you really killed it.. but you shouldn't have stopped there... Great Chapter!!
Author's Response:
LOL I had to stop it there. I couldn't give too much away. Now on to the next chapter.
Date: Sep 19, 2011 05:53 am Title: Chapter 78 - I don't understand your ways....
gee! i cn kill Shana AND Sandra rite now!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZZZZZZ I JUS WANT TO SEE MICHAEL & ARIANNA BACK TOGETHER! PLZZZZZZZZ.
Author's Response:
LOL at your violence. Re: Arianna and Michael, I will talk to them and see what I could do.
Date: Sep 18, 2011 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 78 - I don't understand your ways....
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks hun :) next chapter is up and I'm not sure if it was what you were expecting but we'll see...
Date: Sep 18, 2011 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
OMJ, so much stuff to say, so little time. Shana does NOT look good on Mikey's arm. I prefer Adri there.( or me)lol Jimmy obviously prefers his mother too. They need to stop playing and make things right. Sandra,Sanda, Sandra, she needs to man up and go confess to Michael what she did. River Phoenix, he's cool and all, but like I said, Michael is better, and it's so hard to read this story because I get so emotional.lol...and YOU! YOU MET/SAW MICHAEL JACKSON? WHERE WERE YOU? WHAT DID HE SAY? WHEN WAS THIS?*breaths out* SERIOUSLY,YOU'VE BEEN HOLDING OUT ON US! *calms down* I really hope Mikey and Adri get back together.
Ps.
YOU MET/SAW MICHAEL JACKSON!
That's a dream that floated up into the sky on June 25th 2009.
I BLAME MURRAY.>:'(
Author's Response:
I agree Shana does not look on his arm. I love Arianna with him or myself. haha (I think so many girls will fight for his love)
I get emotional writing it LOL. I live and breathe my story sometimes.
LOL yes I saw Mike, It was in 2001 in New York when he was here promoting Invincible. I'm gonna post my meeting with him and Adriana Lima on my bio in the next few days. LOL I didn't mean to hod out on you. I don't like to brag about it. Me too, I blame Murray too. There is no reason why Michael shouln't be here. Justice for Michael!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2011 11:55 am Title: Chapter 78 - I don't understand your ways....
:( My heart absolutely breaks about Ryan. Back when he passed, the world was quite ignorant to what AIDS really was. It was such a tragic situation. And I think Shana should tell Michael. Delaney (my bro) & I enjoyed your last updates dear heart XD.
Author's Response:
Absolutely. The world was very ignorant. But I hope now we could learn from it.
Thank you to you and Delaney :) You both rock!
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2011 11:12 am Title: Chapter 78 - I don't understand your ways....
Great chapter! :D I loved it, it's always nice to see so many different characters view on things. :) I wish Sandra would've never done what she did. >.< However, Shana will feel really guilty if she doesn't tell Michael the truth, I can see it already affecting her. Don't make the same mistakes as Sandra, Shana. I'm a little upset with River, but I knew it was coming. It's truly tragic what happened to him, you're exactly right, no one deserves to die that way, it's not right. I'm so sad Ryan died, but then again, that was expected too, because that really happened and it was obvious he'd gotten bad. :( Gone Too Soon gets me every time. It is so sad. :( I pray River will tell Arianna everything. No secrets. I still keep praying Ari and Mike will get back together. I hope Mike doesn't sleep with Shana. :( Arianna has already slept with River and I really don't like how fast she keeps moving. It really bothers me. Sex is not the right way to start a relationship. :/ I mean that's her choice, I just wish she'd wait until she's known that person for awhile. I mean she didn't do that with Michael either and even then I thought the same thing. I still feel bad for Jimmy but at least he's getting to spend time with Michael now. Anyway, wonderful chapter girl! I loved it! :D Can't wait for the next update. :D
P.S. Thanks for the vids and pics, always helpful :) and um......YOU'VE SEEN MICHAEL BEFORE IN PERSON! O.O WHEN? HOW!?
Author's Response:
Always, a big thank you. I hope Shana does the right thing too but I guess we will see.
RIP River and Ryan and Michael (Oh God, I hate that! all of them should be here). Gone too soon makes me cry as well. Is so sad.
P.S. LOL yes I did see Michael. I saw him in Times Square, Virgin Megastore, New York City in 2001 and I saw Adriana Lima in 2008 at the Victoria's secret store in 34th street. I will share both stories with you all soon. It 's too long for a review but it was magical and a bit comical with Michael, let's just say I scared him LOL
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2011 10:37 am Title: Chapter 78 - I don't understand your ways....
I knew Sandra would be living with guilt. But Shana is on my shit list right now!!! How can a woman sit calmly next to the child and see his little heart breaking for his mommy and daddy??? And she knows very well that Mike and Arianna are still in love!!! Sandra has chosen a wrong person to talk to!..... And about River, he may be a nice guy, but circumstances and bad influence is always the cause of people starting drugs. I can’t imagine how mothers nowadays let their teenage kids go out, and how they can be sure that their kid is not on drugs? Because no matter how good and smart that person may be, people always tend to show they are not worse than the others, and fall under bad influence.
Author's Response:
Sandra spilled her guts but not to the person or people she needed to speak to. Will shana tell? Will Michael and Arianna ever find out? Will they get back together? I promise you all those questions will be answered. There is so much more to the story. :)
Re: River, I'm not sure if you were talking about him in real life or in the story. In the story he is more complexed and dangerous than he was in real life. He made mistakes in real life, he was only 23 when he passed and we don't know how he felt, etc. I wish he would have taken a different route but times were different then and when you have bad people in your circle that doesn't make it better.
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2011 10:05 am Title: Chapter 78 - I don't understand your ways....
i really adore your story, i have been reading it for some time now and i can't tell you how much i love it, its been really entertaining and i still think Michael and Ariana should be together again! that was a very important message you left on the drugs, and how not to take them, just wish more people could see how they reck lives and destroy families. great writing as always, please never ever stop!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I have seen some reviews here and there from you and I appreciate you still being here with me, Arianna and Michael. I totally agree with you on the drugs things. I don't find them pretty, it damages lives. And thank you on your very sweet and beautiful compliment.