Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2011 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 81 - Need to Walk Away from you.....But you made me a Fighter!

Whoa! This was, amazing! I loved this! My god! So much drama!! So much steam! God! You're such a wonderful writer!! I knew it was the drugs controlling River! And, as bad as I feel for the real River, I'm glad Arianna walked away from him. That is not the kind of relationship you want, whether he meant to hurt her or not, he should've thought things through better. That whole shower scene though, my god! Holy crap, it was so steamy and so amazing, I loved it! Arianna and Michael are so amazing together, I'm truly glad they're back together. Only thing is, Mike probably should've broken it off with Shana first, before completely going back to Arianna. He just cheated on Shana. O.O I do feel terrible for her, because if I were her, I would be hurt by Michael's choice but at the same time, she knew from day one exactly how Michael felt and what his past was like. She fell for him too fast. I bet that slap hurt...hopefully he can talk to her and explain, though I'm not sure how much it'll help, she's gonna be terribly hurt either way. Wonderful chapter though! Wow! That was so amazing, I am very ready for Dangerous. :D The video was so touching too, it's a good visual for explaining what all went down. :) Loved this chapter, I'm so happy you're back! I can't wait to hear more of this story! Keep up the amazing work girl!! :D

P.S. I read the stories you posted, I loved to read them, they were very interesting  to read. :D The way you met Michael was actually very funny. Lol it's kinda cool too because it was much more personal then how you'd have met him at the CD signing. :) And I love that Adriana actually held a conversation with you for a bit, that was very sweet of her. :) Thank you so much for sharing those with us! :D

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I love ya girl xoxo

I know River became a bit darker than what he really was in real life but it was needed for the story. Arianna handled it well. I'm proud of her. :) I blushed writing it because I was picturing Michael's reactions in the shower, all wet OMG...LOL....I love Arianna and Michael together and Shana...I have a feeling she will be alright....next chapter is up so you could read what happen with her. 

LOL, I'm glad you are ready for Dangerous because I AM!!! LOL

p.s. Michael's and Adriana's meetings are so special to me even if I scared Michael LOL 

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2011 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 80 - The Hurt, The Pain and The Truth....

NO! NO! NO! NO! A CLIFFY! Evil, evil cliffhanger!! I wanted to read Michael kicking his ass!! Loved this chapter girl, it was amazing, so much happened! I am SO glad Arianna and Michael are back together, she really shouldn't have left Mike, River is a horrible person for what he did to Arianna! I hope Mike gets there soon!! Arianna needs help and fast!!! I hope Ari will be ok though, I'm worried about her. When Michael had the idea to have Jimmy be on his album I KNEW the song he was gonna have him do was "Heal the World"! :D That's such a beautiful song and to have Jimmy do the intro of it is so cute!!!! :D I love that idea! I'm so glad you did that! And I see where the title of the album might be coming from. Michael Jackson is very Dangerous indeed. ;) The two of them though, geez, they are so bad together. They love to risk getting caught, don't they!? Lol I'm super excited for your next update!! Keep up the great work!! :D

 

P.S. I can't wait to hear you've posted those typed stories in your bio on here. :D I look forward to reading them. :)

Author's Response:

LOL...Sorry for the cliff hanger. I'll try to get the new chapter up soon. *fingers crossed* River is more dark in my story than he was in real life, that's true and I hope Michael gets there fast as well to help Arianna. I'm glad you like the idea of Jimmy getting involved in heal the world. I love that song, it shows what Michael really cared for. AND yes, LOL these two can't get their hands off each other.

P.S. As you wait for the new chapter, I have updated my bio and included my meetings with Michael and Adriana. enjoy!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2011 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 80 - The Hurt, The Pain and The Truth....

GO MICHAEL GO! GO! GO! GO! And lol these two are so cute, theyre back togther yay! Me & Delaney have been waiting on this XD. loved the update dear heart <3

Author's Response:

LOL RUN MICHAEL RUN

They are cute, I love them together. Thank you for your loyal reading to you and Delaney

Reviewer: Chsienna Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2011 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 80 - The Hurt, The Pain and The Truth....

Oh no, i hope Mike gets there in time

Author's Response:

I hope so too for the sake of Ari and Jimmy

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2011 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 80 - The Hurt, The Pain and The Truth....

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my goddddddddddd, it was worth the wait.... thank you, they are getting back together... this is what i'm talking about..... damn... i loved that they finally are starting to act like adults... i hope nothing happens to Arianna. Hopefully Michael, will get there just in time to kick his ass... 

Author's Response:

LOL I'm glad you like it. You already know of my internet problems. I'm supposed to have it fixed today (fingers crossed). I am dying to update the story :D

Reviewer: delavielove Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2011 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 79 - Now I long for Yesterday.......

OMG So much so much! I love it dear heart! <3

Author's Response:

thx honey and I hope your brother is still with me too ;)

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2011 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 79 - Now I long for Yesterday.......

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! No River, no! How sad. :( He should've just said no! Now look what's happened to him!? Shana, will you please tell Michael the truth dammit! He needs to know!! I'm glad Michael didn't get too serious with Shana. But Arianna...:'( ANOTHER baby lost! Abuse! Drinking to drown her pain! What the hell! She was better off with Michael!! Two funerals as well. :'( Oh my god, that is so sad! Poor Arianna though. I'm really glad she has Jimmy though! She needs something! Renee's so worried, as she should be. I'm happy Renee and Vincent are getting along though, it's nice. :) I'm also glad Arianna opened up to Michael. :) Ooooooooooo they KISSED!!!!!!!! *GASP!* That's really bad Michael! You technically cheated on Shana....:O They need to figure out what they are, friends or lovers? Though with that kiss, I hope Arianna doesn't do what she did with River with Michael. Sleep with him from so much pain. If she tries to do that, I really hope Michael has the strength to stop her. :/ I don't want them to have sex because of something like that. If they're going to do that, it should be because of love not hurt. My heart literally broke when she told Michael she had been pregnant with River's child and I read his reaction. :( I hope things get better for Ari and that her and Mike figure out just what they are. Amazing chapter girl! I can't wait to hear more, keep up the great work!

P.S. I can't wait to hear those stories, I'm really, really curious now! :D Thanks for the extras as well, always fun. It's fun to pretend! Lol By the way, I really loved the song choice, I love The Beatles! :D

Author's Response:

Haha yes they kissed and Arianna is going thru so much but Michael will always be her shining knight. The next chapter will tell you where they will go.

P.S. I have to find the time to type it. I think I'll add them to my bio in this website. I'll let you know when I add it.