[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2011 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Keep It In The Closet....
FINALLY GIRLLLLLLLL, LOVED IT, BTW: IF I WAS ARIANNA, I WOULD HAVE KICKED NAOMIS ASS BIG TIME!! NEXT CHAPTER ASAP
Author's Response: Lol i know! Sorry for the delay. Life has had me so busy. And me too. I wouldn't let no woman touch Michael that way
Author's Response: Lol i know! Sorry for the delay. Life has had me so busy. And me too. I wouldn't let no woman touch Michael that way
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2011 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Keep It In The Closet....
In The Closet is one of my faves!! Lol at Arianna getting jealous. mike is most def hers. i hope Mike is wrong in what he's thinking too... cant wait for updation(Delavierre says thats a word XD) dear heart! <3
Author's Response: Ikr! Doesn't he look good in it? I melt and die of jealousy as i watch Naomi touch him all over. Lol and yes lol at Arianna....but all women could understand. If we had Michael we all will be watching every woman like hawks lol....updation lol love it!
Date: Nov 01, 2011 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Keep It In The Closet....
uh oh im glad mike isnt too over thinking this
Author's Response: Idk we'll see ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2011 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 84 - We're almost there....
lmao at Michael Jackson porno. And the idea of her keeping it secret originally annoyed me but then i read it again and was like...."GENIUS"...idk it makes the story longer IMO :)
But oh my gosh, I've missed out on so much! Me and Delaney have been loving these updates! We missed so much so when I went home today Delaney was like "are you reading what i think youre reading?" and I was like "Yeah" and he damn near killed himself tryna get over here and read. I'm dyslexic so I read slowly and dear heart, i wasnt reading fast enough for him!!!
Haha, lovely as always, cant wait for the next update dear heart <3
Author's Response: Lol yeah my bf is an idiot lol Yes. It does make the story longer and this story will be long. I have a lot to cover. Haha i love that your brother is so into the story as you are. So thanks Delaney and thank you hun
Author's Response: Lol yeah my bf is an idiot lol Yes. It does make the story longer and this story will be long. I have a lot to cover. Haha i love that your brother is so into the story as you are. So thanks Delaney and thank you hun
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2011 10:53 am Title: Chapter 84 - We're almost there....
OMG!OMG!OMG! How come every time my internet goes out, I come back and find out I've missed two chapters!? D: I'm so glad I was able to read them though, because they were really good! I enjoyed every moment of each! I love those videos! God, Slash's guitar parts are always freaking amazing!!! I really, really, really hope Arianna will be able to have children, I'd love to see them have one of their own. I'm glad he was thinking logically about the baby thing though, because he will be really busy soon. I feel so bad for him, but I'm happy him and Arianna are together again. Kristina is SO funny too! I'm glad Arianna and her are seeing each other again. I hope Michael won't be mad that Arianna decided to hide it at first, until she figured out the real outcome, I hope he'll understand. :( I'm worried about that. God, he's gonna need Arianna and Jimmy so much in this era. The problems have already begun and this isn't even the worst of them yet, stay strong Michael. :( I can't believe Jermaine did that to Michael, Katherine's right though, they're both in the wrong for what they've been doing lately. I hope they can learn to forgive each other and become close again. I can't wait to read more girl!! You're such an awesome writer, sorry I couldn't review the last chapter, I'm hoping my internet doesn't go out again. Keep up the amazing work girl!! :D
Author's Response: Hey honey. I'm glad u still come back to read. That's all that matters. You are right! Slash is crazy with his guitar solo. Michael was a crazy entertainer so they were a great combo together. Jermaine will learn. No matter what Michael and him will always be brothers. Kristina is hilarious and she's always been a good friend to Arianna. i hope too that Arianna will havs Michael's children. They will have beautiful children together. Thanks as always for reviewing and reading. Love ya girl!
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 10:04 am Title: Chapter 79 - Now I long for Yesterday.......
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Reply: The song I was talking about is Staring over.. One of my fav song on the album and of hers. http://youtu.be/md-lsdAGfc8
Hahaha Aww well he’ll get use to it xP…
Review: “I didn't even tell him that I had gotten pregnant with his child and we lost it on the night he beat me”
WOW, That’s the hardest thing to hear from someone you are in-love with. To just know that she got preggo and not with HIS (Michael’s) baby, (the woman he LOVEs, adores, who is his world, the air he breaths, the one to keeps his heart beating, that he belongs to and always will, his wife) to know that THEY has lost their baby but there had been the chance she got pregnant by another man who he KNOWS she wasn’t In-Love with, or her hearts belonged to.
That’s must have been very heartbreaking for Michael to hear. But worse is when HE WANTED to have a baby with her but they had lost it. But this man got her pregnant and HE took that gift from her and himself. Its just NOT right. He didn’t know but he should of never hit her in the first place.
(umm I’m getting a bit to into the story lol)
The last part of this chapter is what I call freaking LOVE damn it lol
Jimmy is always sooo adorable!! <3
“And then as I stared at her lips, I leaned forward slowly and placed my lips on hers.
When I pulled back, I saw her eyes were open and she was staring at me. I was about to apologize when I felt her hands cupped my face and she kissed me back. Lost in the moment, I grabbed her and we got lost in the magic of a kiss.”
Noooo way.., I swear I read this part like 15 time!! This is soooo exciting OMG!!!! *screaming like dork*
Sorry if its a bit too long..
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me the song. I went back to hear it and you are right, it does remind me of Michael and Arianna and now I know exactly what future chapter I am going to use that for. <3 You are right, when you are in love it is so hard to hear that the person you love moved on with someone else. I felt for Michael in this chapter :( I love Jimmy, he is so fun to write. LMAO I'm glad you like that line, I loved it too. Thanks honey for your lovely review <333
Date: Oct 21, 2011 01:23 am Title: Chapter 84 - We're almost there....
porno huh?????????? lmao!
Author's Response: Lol yeah he is insane and crazy jealous for my love for Michael
Author's Response: Lol yeah he is insane and crazy jealous for my love for Michael
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 12:28 am Title: Chapter 84 - We're almost there....
Hey girl, I’m glad that my last reviews have sparked new ideas in your head :) And I would never get upset if you haven’t considered them. Because you are great writer on your own!!! But I must admit, I’m more excited now, because it became a guessing game for me even more lol
Let me mess with your head a little more :) …..So now that Arianna decided to keep that a secret, and she can’t be on the birth control. She would not be able to tell Mike to use condoms. Or will she? Nah…. she will not find the reasoning for him? Or will she anyway?….. ok, I shut my mouth lol….. Write the way you want it, it’s going to be awesome anyway!
p.s. you should give your boyfriend a high five for “Michael Jackson porno” you made me laugh hard LOL. But what my nosy husband told me yesterday, almost knocked me out of my chair. He was asking me lately “What are you reading on your computer, and why are you hiding the computer screen from me every time I come in?”…he even crept slowly on his tip-toes once, just to get a pic of it lol. But yesterday, on his multiple attempts to snatch my computer away from me, he said “what are you hiding there? Naked Michael Jackson?” LOL. So, I turned all shades of red at his comment. But then realized that he couldn’t have seen me reading mjfiction, because I’m using InPrivate Browsing from Internet explorer, and my browsing history is clear, except just school or work related links LOL …. I swear I would die from embarrassment if he ever found out about mjfiction LOL
But stories like yours just help me relax after the stressful day. So keep up your great work! And I will keep it a secret from my snoopy husband LOL. Also, Arianna should feel at ease, all wives have their little secrets haha…
Love ya ;)
Author's Response:
I love listening to my readers so I enjoy the little tips they give on the reviews and I especially love reading their guesses on what they think it's going to happen next.
Oh..so you are going to mess with my head even more huh? LOL regarding that we will see more of what happens with this decision of her keeping it quiet more as we go along further in the story ;)
I told my bf that everyone commented on what he said and he said "Well, how do they know?" I said "I wrote it on my mj porno site" and he laughed, he was like "I knew you loved Michael but damn I didn't know I was in competition with him, thankfully you won't see him again because you are obsessed" and he didn't mean it in a bad way but oh well, at least he knows I will leave him if Michael asked me LOL
LMAO at your story, I was like that in the beginning but when I started writing, he found out. It was hard to hide it then, he just laughed at me and shook his head.
I'm glad my stories make you feel better in a stressful day. You are so sweet. Love you more.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 83 - I'm asking for a miracle to come.....
Damn, I’m kicking myself for mentioning the baby thing to you. I guess I gave you an idea how to torture your readers more lol
And Arianna should get to the best clinic for a treatment, and keep her mouth shut. I understand that Michael is busy with a tour and everything, but Arianna should start trying for a baby. I know it may sound selfish, and not right, but keeping something a secret for a while doesn’t imply a lie. Mike would get really frustrated knowing she might not have the children anymore. Miracle must happen!!!.....Please update soon, I’m dying to know what will happen next :) <3
Author's Response: First of all, get out of my head lol. I actually knew this would happen so it was really hard to remain quiet after reading your last review. I don't want to torture you guys but this must happen for story purposes. And I hear what you are saying and you might be up to something. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for reading, hun! Love ya! Xoxo :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 83 - I'm asking for a miracle to come.....
damn, i hope and pray that it's not true and there is a miracle and she has all his babies.. great chapter!!!
Author's Response: I hope that she does too. I cannot wait to present to you their first biological child. It will be a happy day.
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2011 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 82 - It doesn't matter if you are Black or White...
FINALLY after so many interruptions I got to finish such a wonderful chapter!!! I loved every moment of that! I'm glad Michael and Shana are staying friends, it's a good thing. :) I was also very happy to see some of my favourite Dangerous moments! They're so awesome! I LOVED the scene with Madonna! XD Poor Michael! Lol I love that Arianna has her own star too, that's awesome! I want her and Michael to record more together! :D I love that Michael included Jimmy in his "Black or White" short film too! So cute! Jimmy's excitement made me smile so much! I'm so glad there's so much happiness in their lives! Michael needs that, he didn't get enough of it, he really didn't! And the videos! Always love watching those! :D Awesome chapter girl! :D I look forward to reading your next update, keep up the amazing work! :D
Author's Response:
LOL. I hate when I am trying to read a story or write a story and everyone needs me that I keep getting interrupted. LOL yes that scene with Madonna is priceless. Poor Michael is right LOL. I enjoying writing Jimmy, he is so adorable. Thnx hun. You keep me going :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2011 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 82 - It doesn't matter if you are Black or White...
Thank you for your warm comment girl! I understand that you don’t want to revile anything so people would not lose interest. And now it became a guessing game for me, knowing that Lisa is still there lol. But please, those two need to have the baby of their own, even if it’s going to be later in their lives, even if the baby will be a complete secret, and hidden from the public eye!... But you are the writer, and I don’t want to mess with your ideas. And baby or no baby I still will love it, because you are awesome writer! :) Love ya too! ;)
Author's Response: I am very appreciative and humble for my readers. Honestly, this story would have never gone as far as it has if no one had responded to it and if no one liked it. You guys keep me going. As for Lisa, I am just going to keep you guessing...who knows what she is up to..if she is up to anything. My characters have a mind of their own,I just write their story ;) As for the baby idea, I want them to have a baby as well. I will have to talk to Michael and Arianna and see what happens (haha) ;) Thank you for sweet compliment. Love ya more :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2011 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 82 - It doesn't matter if you are Black or White...
Hey girl, sorry I haven’t left a review for your previous chapter, but I’m back :)
I’m glad that Shana told Arianna the truth about Sandra, but she has to know about Lisa!!! I don’t know what you planed for the future, but will Mike end up marring Lisa in 1994? You probably will not tell me anyway lol
One more question. You wrote in this chapter what Mike loves and one of the things is ”…I love making love to my wife in the night”. So did they get married again?
xoxoxo
Author's Response: It's ok hun. I understand. I did miss you though. I'm glad you are back. Now about the story, as much i am dying to tell you. I can't. Sorry. Because If I tell you, you won't look for my updates and I need you :) And damn it, i wasn't thinking about that when i wrote that. I was going to edit that part but i decided to leave because even though Michael and Arianna are not legally married. I believe Michael never stop seeing her as his wife. Thanks for your loyal reviews. Love ya girl.
Author's Response: It's ok hun. I understand. I did miss you though. I'm glad you are back. Now about the story, as much i am dying to tell you. I can't. Sorry. Because If I tell you, you won't look for my updates and I need you :) And damn it, i wasn't thinking about that when i wrote that. I was going to edit that part but i decided to leave because even though Michael and Arianna are not legally married. I believe Michael never stop seeing her as his wife. Thanks for your loyal reviews. Love ya girl.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2011 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 81 - Need to Walk Away from you.....But you made me a Fighter!
Arianna handled River perfectly. Years ago an ex held me at knife point when I told him I wanted to end things. Pleading from his sister or mother didn't work. I had to remain calm and let him do all the talking. He finally broke down said this wasn't him and let me go. I never pressed charges. I hope River gets better, he's a good guy.
Oooooh yeah Mike and Ari officially back together! You know. I think everyone's best would be horizontal with Michael. I know my legs would be jelly! He would have to support both of our weight lol.
Damn Mike, got slapped by Shana. I feel her pain though. I'm not even mad at her, girl better be careful though. Arianna might step in and say that something.
Aww Miss A , I read about you meeting Michael and Adrianna. How wonderful. I bet in that moment it only seemed like it was only you and him. That gorgeous smile! I get it. Adriana is so beautiful, it's nice to know she's sweet as well.
Author's Response:
OMG!!! Honey, I'm glad you were ok. I could imagine that being a very scary situation. Sadly, I too was in an abused relationship so it was easy for me to write what Arianna felt :(
"Oooooh yeah Mike and Ari officially back together! You know. I think everyone's best would be horizontal with Michael. I know my legs would be jelly! He would have to support both of our weight lol." <-----LMAO you got that right!! I know I would be water as soon as he touched me. I probably won't make it out alive.
LOL thx hun, at that moment when Michael smiled at me it did seem as if it was just me and him. Never mind the hundreds of people screaming and crying, I was hypnotized....he was staring at me and he smiled and for that I was and still am in bliss. Adriana was very nice as well. Such a happy girl. Never rude. I love them both.
Date: Oct 09, 2011 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
wow! the way u met michael got ME blushing! yeah i guess the same effect on evry1!
Author's Response:
LOL I was embarrased that I scared him but when he smiled I swear it was just me and him for those 5-10 seconds. I mean not too sound cheesy or anything but my friend and the other girls who followed us in where around me screaming too but he smiled at me, I was ready to faint LOL