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Reviewer: MJlegacy14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2011 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...

Chandler; Ewww. Jordan; Disgusting. Evan; Evil. This is what I think everytime I see those cursed names in this story. Hopefully, because this is YOUR story, there will be no 'charges', or 'trials' for Mikey to go through. Dang, I get mad just thinking about the Chandlers.>:O Love your story, and I hope it NEVER ends.
-All For Love, L.O.V.E

Author's Response:

I know I hate them too. I just ask for you guys to trust me :)

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2011 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 87 - It ain't too hard for me to JAM....

Ugh, Good Lord how I hate the Chandlers. And omg a Jimmy POV! XD And yeah I noticed the June 25th thing as well, June 25th to MJ is like September 11th to me. Not only is that my birthday but lots of things have happened in my life on that day.. and i love Give into me and Jam. RIP MJ  Heavy D <3



Author's Response:

I hate them too. I haed even bringing them to the story but I'm trying to keep to some true events not all. OMG, your bday is sept 11 thats crazy!

RIP Heavy D

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2011 07:19 am Title: Chapter 87 - It ain't too hard for me to JAM....

GREAT CHAPTER GIRL.... I HATE THE CHANDLERS, I WISH THEY COULD JUST BE ERASED,, FROM OUR MEMORY... ALL THEY DID WAS CAUSE PAIN... ANYWAY BACK TO THE STORY, I HOPE MICHAEL JUST SENDS THEM BACK.  POOR JIMMY, SO SAD... I HOPE MICHAEL STARTS SHOWING THE WORLD THAT HE IS HIS SON AND MARRY ARIANNA. GOD I HOPE SHE GETS PREGNANT!!! 



Author's Response:

I wish too I could erase them from Michael's real life. They hurt him so bad.

Regarding Ari, Mike and Jimmy. Things will get better. They have a long future :D

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2011 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 87 - It ain't too hard for me to JAM....

love this



Author's Response: <333 thank you :D

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2011 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 86 - Behind the mask....

More and more people are getting inspired by Michael and the stories are pouring in lol I didn't even see that you updated. I'm so happy Ari finally told Mike, you know in this situation is good to have your husband by your side, it will be less stressful and like I said before homegurl maybe knocked up frm that In The Closet fucking in the trailers...

Ugh the Chandliers....I just want to jump in this story and say "Mike no, the parents are just going to take advantage."

Not to sure how I feel about Jerm to be honest..

Author's Response:

LOL I have noticed there are more stories in this website. I hope every finds me when I update. I would hate to lose readers because they can't find me but I'm glad you found me and you are still here :)

"I said before homegurl maybe knocked up frm that In The Closet fucking in the trailers" <--- LMAO

Things will get better, trust me :)

 

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2011 09:48 am Title: Chapter 86 - Behind the mask....

awesome chapter, now it's gonna get interesting he's just met the chandlers! oops! Jermaine almost caused a huge fight with them, he should do the brotherly thing and keep his big nose out! glad they were talking ok again, i hate it when they're not together, such a great story and always leaves me wanting more!



Author's Response:

yeah those bad nasty chandlers. I wish I could erase them from Michael's real life. Jermaine is a bit nosy but with good intentions :)

Thank you, thank you and thank you for continuing to read my story. It means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2011 06:11 am Title: Chapter 86 - Behind the mask....

I love 'Behind The Mask'. I hate the Chandlers. And I'm happy that Michael understands. cant wait for next update dear heart <3



Author's Response: I am crazy for Behind the mask too <3 I hate the Chandlers too but things will get better, promise. thanks, love <333

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2011 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 86 - Behind the mask....

oh, i'm damn, finally she told him the truth. good thing is that he understands her.. damn, this is the only part of the dangerous era that i don't like,  i hate the chandlers...



Author's Response: yes, Arianna has grown up a lot since they first met. She is becoming a woman and Michael was always understanding but that doiesn't mean he can't be hurt, he's human....and the Chandlers, I know, I'm sorry, I hate them too and I hate this part of the dangerous era but I promise it will get better. Michael is a fighter.

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2011 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 86 - Behind the mask....

Crossing my fingers for Ari n Mike

Author's Response: I'm crossing them with you

Reviewer: mjjfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2011 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 86 - Behind the mask....

Oh no, I got a bad,bad feeling in the pit of my stomach.  Ugh, not the

Chandler's!



Author's Response: I know. I hate them too :'( but things will get better. Michael is a fighter.

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2011 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 86 - Behind the mask....

FUCK NO! Jordie's in the picture. The greedy Chandlers who ruined our poor Michael's life! See THIS is what I wasn't looking forward to. :( Great chapter though! I'm glad Michael finally knows and I hope Arianna will be able to have Michael's baby. I'd be so sad if she couldn't. :( This was a really great chapter though, I enjoyed all of it! I'm hoping now that Michael and Jermaine can fix their relationship, I don't like that they're fighting even if I don't approve of his choices. Ha, I'm trying to picture Jimmy bringing Muscles in for show and tell. Lol. That'd be so funny but he's so huge!! I can imagine the children's faces if Michael Jackson walked in with Jimmy and hus snake Muscles, I think they'd all be very distracted. Lol Great chapter girl! Keep up the great work, I always look forward to your updates! :D



Author's Response: I know :'( this is the part of the dangerous era I hate too. I can't stand that family, mostly the father for what he did to Michael. I hated and cringed as I typed their names. But I promise this will get better. Have faith in me :) LOL I try to picture it too. Jimmy, MJ, Muscles in one classroom LMAO Thanks honey :D xoxoxo

Reviewer: joy2thaworld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2011 01:31 am Title: Chapter 85 - Keep It In The Closet....

As soon as I clicked on the page and saw they title was In The Closet I knew that was my suggestion!!! Yay....this song and video was the shit!

Omg for the first time my ass was actually jealous of Arianna..you don't know how many times I fantasied about doing Michael on that car, in the dessert, while In The Closet is playing on low. If this chick anit pregnant yet I dunno Ari baby maybe something is wrong....

Oh man, I hope Michael doesn't do anything irrational since he overheard that phone convo. Poor baby he tends to always think the worst. Arianna should have told, all she's doing is adding more stress...then again if she would have told. Every time she and Michael would make love he'll be like "so uhh, you think u preggers?"I and I bet that would be stressful too.

I just died....omg Miss A you did not put up the Making of and the actual video?!!! Yes you did. I don't care what nobody says in my mind Naomi and Mike was feeling on each other in the trailers...lmao

This song is hot. It's like a mind fuck to your ears..."she wants to give it, alll...she wants to give it" Oh Michael you have no idea how much I want to..My boyfriend calls this song a porno lol he be like "what the hell? Is he grunting and shit in the background? What is he doin?"I I be like "Fucking Me". He hates when I say that..lmao

Ohhh wait one more thing...loving the rugrats mention. That was like my favorite cartoon.

Author's Response: Yes honey this was your lovely suggestion and I'm glad you suggested it because Michael looked so fine in it and I love that song. Who hasn't dreamed of doing it with Michael in that car in the dessert with the song playing in the bg? LOL probably a woman who has been living under a rock because no sane woman would pass Michael. I have faith in Arianna and Michael. I too, hope that they have kids of their own. <3 LOL yes Joy, I did put the videos. I couldn't put this chapter up and not give you guys a visual, it wouldn't be fair. Every one needed to see this man sweating with his arm muscles out in the open ;) LMAO at you responding to your bf, I could see why he hates it but then again you are not lying. Me too hun, I loved that cartoon growing up and we are currently in the year in the story when Rugrats came to televison for the firsttime, I had to give it a shout out to it and my childhood :)

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2011 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Keep It In The Closet....

Damn…I was sitting on pins and needles while reading this chapter! In The Closet and Give in to me are my two most favorite videos!!! Do you see what I see? That fine ass, perfect muscles, and that flirty, sexy smile!!! Even my hubby likes that video, bud definitely for a different reason haha…. Naomi LOL. No wonder Arianna feels jealous! But did he just emphasize her to be his best friend? Damn wrong Michael, If was Arianna I would strangle him with my bare hands lol


I’m intrigued!!! Who was she on the phone with? Kristina? But Michael being the biggest snoop like most men are, should not think just the most negative things. It’s not like if Arianna have said to the other person “I love you, or I miss you…”. God… You are becoming a pro at making it harder to wait for your updates :)


p.s. tell your boyfriend that you are not the only one obsessed with sexy thing Michael haha…


Love ya :)



Author's Response: Girl, don't get me started on talking about Give in to me....I am obsessed with that video, is so simple but he looks like a sexy rock star in it, I can't watch it with out melting lol In the closet, is sexy on its own, I am not even paying attention to Naomi. My eyes are glued to Michael. My bf is a MJ fan but for other reasons, you know his dancing, his music and me too but to me he is the whole package, sexy, sweet, funny, kind...ok, ok I'm stopping haha you get my drift so my bf gets all jealous ;) " You are becoming a pro at making it harder to wait for your updates :) " <---- I'll take that as a compliment LOL Love ya more :D

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2011 07:15 am Title: Chapter 85 - Keep It In The Closet....

that was sexy huh!!!!!! 

i loveeeeee his arm muscles in here........

it really took very long for u to update.....

plz update sooner! i miss it u know.... ;)



Author's Response:

his muscles.....yummy....so sexy....

I know :( I'm sorry. I have been so busy but I will try to update sooner. I'm glad you are sticking with me and that everyone is still enjoying  the story :D

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2011 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Keep It In The Closet....

Uh oh. I think Arianna needs to tell Michael straight out what's goin on, her behaviour is too fishy and she's not very good at lying. :/ I hope these two will be alright, they're absolutely terrible when they're apart. I don't want Michael to doubt Arianna but...from what he heard, I don't blame him but then, he shouldn't have been eavesdropping. I see a fight coming, hopefully they handle that one better then the other fights they had. I found Arianna's jealousy hilarious! Lol This is not a short film she should be present during the filming of but...with all that hands on touching and heat....Michael's bound to need something to cure him of certain feelings. ;) Good thing he has that trailer! Lol. I can't believe they went for it in there! Wow! I wonder if anyone suspected what they were up to...hmm...lol Mike DID say the he thought the trailer was shaking. Lol I love how much fun Jimmy has at school, it's so cute. :D Anyways, wonderful chapter, I look forward to hearing more! Keep up the amazing work girl! :D



Author's Response: LOL she is not so good at lying, you are right but is beacause she does not want to hurt him. LMAO I kept laughing as I was writing her reactions to Michael's flirtation with Naomi in the video and yes, honey...AMEN...thank God for that trailer. You can't believe it? LOL what girl didn't want to get it on with him during the video? He was so sexy in it. Thanks as always, love <3

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