[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2011 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 91 - I'll Stand By You....
OMFJ I need the next chapter!!!!! Great Update Love=)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter, I hope to have it up soon. Working on it now. :) xoxo
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2011 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...
I can’t even imagine what Michael must have felt the first minutes after hearing those accusations! I hate Evan Chandler so much! I still do! How could people be so greedy? How can one bustard show up in someone’s life, and completely ruin him in the snap of a finger? For what? Money? Didn’t he think back then, that the truth would be reviled, and people would point fingers at him or his child? It has been almost twenty years since the allegations, and Jordan reviling the truth that his father made him admit all of those awful things just for money. But still, the boy is leaving on MJ’s money till now! What the reason of admitting the truth, and still keeping the money for himself? I’m pretty sure, that money earned that way will not bring him wealth and happiness. He always will be the person, because of who was hurt and humiliated the most innocent person in this world! … I still remember the statement that Michael released back from Neverland in 1993, and still it is so heart wrenching to see how much he suffered. And the police? Taking all of those pictures of him? Were they nuts? If that was my right to do, I would strip them, and throw them naked on the streets of NY, so they would get a feel of humiliation!
I understand that you had to write this for the story purpose, even if it’s too painful. But well done girl!!! Can’t wait for more! <3 ya! Your dedicated reader Oksana
Author's Response:
I know what you mean. I don't want to imagine what he felt like because I know it must have been killing him.
Is hard for me to comprehend that there are people in this world who would do anything for money but unfortunately there are bad people everywhere and that's the sad part of all of this. Life was never meant to be that way.
That's why Michael was special, he reminded people that we must love each other.
It is painful which is why this bad part is ending soon, is hard to write Michael's emotions as he goes thru this.
<333 ya more Oksana (love your name btw) ....a proud author to have a reader like you, MissA (Andrea)
P.S. What part of NY are you from?
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2011 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...
Renee looking good. I love the bond she and Arianna has. I'm sure Ari will always support her mother but I have a feeling this pregnancy is going to harm their relationship for a little bit. Cause like Arianna said she can't stay mad at her mom.
My poor Michael. My heart went out to him when he frantically went looking for Jimmy and didn't feel better into his son was in his arms. I'm glad he fucking punched him in the mouth. Michael doesn't deserve any of this bullshit! I hope he doesn't push Arianna away and say it's for her protection. I hope they stay strong in the end and protect each other.
You know I used to say it isn't Jordie's fault that his parents was so greedy and hateful but to think that lil bitch changed his name and is still living off of Michael 's money makes me detest him.
Don't worry we don't hate you. Unfortunately it happened. My Thanksgiving was pretty good thanks. Hope you enjoyed yours,
Author's Response:
I know Renee (Rita Hayworth) was beautiful. I love her. Arianna and Renee are a great mother-daughter team. Arianna needs her as much as Renee needs Arianna.
You are right. Michael does not and never deserved that bullshit from those families but he is away from pain now and in the story, the pain is almost over. I don't want to stay in that period for too long because it hurts to write Michael's emotions.
I read too about Jordie and that made me sick too. But with parents like his, I don't blame him for growing up fucked up, you know?
Thank you for not hating me and I'm glad your thanksgiving went well hun. xoxo
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2011 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...
FUCKING CHANDLERS! I hate them! I hate them! I hate them! I HATE THEM!!!!! They fucking ruin EVERYTHING!! How DARE that disgusting motherfucker bring Michael's family into it! HOW DARE HE!!!!! I am SO glad Michael punched him, I really am! He deserved every moment! If only Michael could've beat the shit out of him! UGH!!!!!!! OMG! OMG! OMG! I am so angry right this moment! The more I think of these bastards! I am SO glad you won't show their faces in this story! I in NO WAY wish to see ANY of them! I really wish Mike would've just went to court the first time it happened, it'd have looked better for him. See THIS is the part of the 90s I can't STAND!!! It breaks my heart everytime I think of all the stuff Michael went through, it always does. Just as Michael comes out about his family too. Now they have to go RIGHT back to hiding! Un-fucking-believable! Fuck you Evan Chandler, Fuck you Jordie. You two are evil people! So fucking evil! I can't wait for this all to be over. :( Poor Michael. God bless you Michael. You poor, poor beautiful angel. Sweetie, I am not mad at you, those people just make me angry. Very good chapter, I felt each character's emotions really well. I cannot wait for your update and I will be here through every moment of this hard bump.
Author's Response:
I hate them too...just to say their names bring a nasty taste in my mouth. I'm trying to move through this part of his life as fast as I could because I hate to write Michael's emotions in this period. Is almost over, the bad part I mean.
And thanks love, you rock!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2011 11:00 am Title: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...
love it! keep up the awesome work huney! great chapter!
Author's Response:
thanks, love. Working on more updates. :)
Date: Nov 26, 2011 01:45 am Title: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...
oh gee! dats sooooo bad!
Author's Response:
I know...I wish I could have a magical wand that could erase that from his life and that 2nd family that caused him pain.
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2011 01:11 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Intro...
If you could see my face,it would look like this(〒_〒). Or maybe even this(D;) I just....this is....just no! Those damn Chandlers and Arvizos ruined his life! If I could go back, and do it all over for him,I would.May Evan Chandler rot in hell for what he did. He deserved to die. Good job for not putting that....'BOY' in this wonderful story. SMDH!I'm sorry if I sound demonic, but this is how I feel.
Author's Response:
I don't blame you. It is how you feel so express away. That man was not a good man and he only hurt Michael, a wonderful, innocent angel int he process. Thank, hun.
Date: Nov 25, 2011 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...
Dayum this is crazy n heartbreaking
Author's Response:
I know...I wish I could erase it from his life....
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2011 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, i hate this damn part in his life.....i wish it could be erase,,, it caused him so much pain...
Author's Response:
ME TOO HUN....ME TOO.....
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2011 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...
Ugh...I knew this was coming....I just knew it. But dear heart you *had* to write it for story purposes. and anyway we all know Michael never sexually molested anyone so I guess its all good....Good Lord I hate the Chandlers and the Arzzizos or whatever the Hell the second familys name was that took him to trial, idk/idc XD
:) great update, me & Laney cant wait for the next one! he says hello, & yes we had a great Thanksgiving, hope you did as well. much L.O.V.E. <3
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm sorry but as much as I hate it was part of Michael's life.
We all know Michael never hurt a child. It wasn't in him. He was an angel.
(Hi Delaney) I'm glad your thanksgiving was well. L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2011 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 89 - I Will Give Up Everything I Own For You....
Hey girl!!! I am so sorry for not commenting for the previous two chapters, but two of my computers crashed at the same time. I didn’t have the recovery CDs, so I had to order them, wait for the shipment, and finally do the complete system recovery. But I’m back, and my computers work as they were new :)
I missed your story sooo much, but I had two chapters to read at the same time, which was a treat :)
So Lisa is back, huh..? I don’t like her in this story, neither in real life. In my opinion she lucked, those feminine, romantic qualities of a woman. Plus, how could she let that man go? She should have kept him by her side, until her ass is old and wrinkled lmao… those kinds of men are not made these days, unfortunately!
If Arianna and Michael were meant to be couple in a real life, that would have been one sexy couple together!!!....Also, Arianna should be happy for her parents getting back together. Her mother spent most of her life being a single mother, and single woman. So she really deserves some happiness! But it was pretty awkward situation, when Arianna walked in on them haha…. I guess people don’t understand that it’s even more awkward for the people who got caught lol
It is so cute when Michael gets jealous. He becomes a possessive man!!! Maybe Bon Jovi is a nice man, but people get tempted sometimes!
p.s. There is Sushi restaurant by my place where we go often. And once I saw a picture on the wall of Bon Jove and the owner of that sushi place together. So I asked the owner if he knows him. And he told me the whole story. The owner of this sushi place used to own a restaurant in Red Bank NJ back in the early 90s, and John used to come there often. But the funny thing is the guy didn’t even know who Bon Jovi was lol. And on one of the days when Jon came to his restaurant, a group of fans gathered and started to scream his name. So the owner came inside and asked “…who’s Bon Jovi?” and John raised both hands and said “I am”. So the owner asked “who are you? What do you do for a leaving? There are many crazy girls there outside”. Poor guy even didn’t know who his client was lol. But the funniest part is that they became friends before that incident, and the poor guy even didn’t know who he was friend with lol. He also told me that John and his wife were a “high school sweethearts”. And when John’s first daughter Stephanie was born in 1993 he called him and started screaming with happiness “I’m a daddy!!! Can you believe it?” and they guy told him “I sure know how the kids appear. Apparently you made one. Congratulations man!” LOL… he also told that “ John is a very nice guy, and very down to earth”. Also, I happened to do the clinicals for my maternity class at the same hospital where he was born. I am not that huge fan of Bon Jovi, but it was interesting to find out all of that :)
I really, really missed your story over the past two weeks! Can’t wait for more! I hope you had a nice Thanksgiving!!! Love ya ;)
Author's Response:
Yay!!! Martovska!!! You are back!!! *throws confetti*
I'm sorry about your computer. I hate when my computer breaks down on me, it also reminds me how depended we are becoming to it. New life, new world.
I missed your reviews.
Yes, Lisa is back, can you believe it? When it comes to Lisa in real life, I would say this, she loved him. Michael wasn't that a great of a husband to her but he wasn't the worst. At the same time, she wasn't the greatest wife to him, ex: she would bring her ex-husband to their family trip. She's lucky she was with Mike because any other man won't have that so at the same time I don't blame him for leaving her for months and she was stupid to let him go instead of working it out. Why I dislike about her is that after running behind him to get him back, she went and spoke badly about him because she was angry instead of acting like a lady and keeping it inside. I'm sure Michael wanted to speak his mind re: her but he was a gentleman and then when he dies, she wants to act like his widow. I found the fact that Oprah interview her a joke. Because she wasn't his wife, she wasn't in his life anymore, she made a life with another man and had kids with him and Mike and her divorced 15 years before his death. The media's hypocrisy is absurd to me. But I won't start with LMP. LOL, I will never finish my comments LOL
I agree, I think Adriana and Michael would look so good together. I wonder if they met? Hmm.. I know she was friends with Lenny Kravitz while Lenny was recording with Michael in 2001....I have to look it up.
Re: your story, that is so funny. I can't believe that guy didn't know who he was... I listen to Bon Jovi, I grew up listening to his music. I love his songs. My faves are Always and Runaway. But I don't consider myself a huge fan, I just appreciate the music. I knew of his wife and him. They have been married for a long time and I have heard that he was a very nice guy. He looks like it. Very down to earth. But the reason why Bon Jovi came to mind while writing this story was because my brother was a huge fan of them when we were younger and used to contantly rock to Living on a prayer so when I was writng the first few chapters, Living on a prayer came on the radio (I write with music playing in the background, I always have music playing in the background) and the rest is history. :)
I hope you had a great thanksgiving....Love ya more!
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2011 09:46 am Title: Chapter 89 - I Will Give Up Everything I Own For You....
Delaney didnt read this chap w/ me, he read it last night and the only thing he got out of this chapter was Arianna walking in on her parents smh. and geez theyre having another baby? haha, then he said he liked the chapter as a whole XD.
But I totally understand Arianna's hurt. My parents got divorced when I was 14 (Danya was 8, Dylan was 6, Delaney was 4). They seriously acted like they hated each other but i found out they were dating after the divorce. i was sooo upset. and then they broke up again...now theyre 50 yrs old & idk if theyre together or not smh smh. and I am 100% with you and Arianna, we will always be City Girls! <3 <3
P.S: I was at the Macy's Thanksgiving Parade! Were ya there? Now though, Im on my way to Philly. <3 <3
Author's Response:
that's the only thing he got out of the chapter LOL...thank you very much Delaney. You are very sweet to read my story.
I'm sorry to hear about your parents, my parents too got divorced when I was young but unlike Vincent, my dad never looked back *shrugs* oh well...
And yes Girl, City girls all the way!!!!
P.S. You were? Damn! I wish you would have told me. I didn't go this year. I went to spend the day with my mother. I hope you had fun. At least it wasn't that cold. I hope you had a great Thanksgiving hun
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2011 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 89 - I Will Give Up Everything I Own For You....
I meant to say pregnant not parent in my previous comment smh...lol
Miss A just wanted to say every chapter I fall more in love with this story. And your writing is becoming addictive lol.*about to start reading The Captivating Stanger now* Just wanted to say thankyou for sharing your talents. You know we all love us so Michael. Love ya more.
Author's Response:
LOL honey I got what you meant.
Miss Joy, thank you so much for your beautiful and amazing compliment. The readers just like you is who keep me motivated and keep me writing. If I didn't get any reviews, this story would have never been so thank YOU for sticking with me.
I would love to know what you think about The Captivating Stranger, is very different than Waiting For You but written with the same love. And yes, we all love us some Michael.
Love ya more :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2011 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 89 - I Will Give Up Everything I Own For You....
Ugh I died when my parents told me they went to the 93 superbowl. I was like WHY DIDNT U TAKE ME??? I was like 5 but whatever..Even my dad was fangirling out about Michael and my dad doesn't fangirl about Michael Jackson. His favorite band is Metallica lol. Ooo Renee!! lol I knew they was still fucking I knew it. Not only Arianna had to see them *gross* but I think her mother being parent is going to do something to her, did she even tell Michael that mommy is expecting again? and now Arianna has to be on an extra look out for Lisa. Oh please be strong Arianna but seriously the girl has nothing to worry about. Michael loves her and Lisa looks like Elvis in drag. smh you always have to look out for those ready and willing girls though.I'm still waiting on Arianna to confront Lisa and tell her to fuck off her man.
Author's Response: They did???!!!!! they are so lucky. My parents were never that cool *rolls eyes* and lol about your dad, I don't blame him though. I don't expect any less of a reaction for Michael. If he didn't react then I would be worried. LOl you did say that about Renee, sneaky mommy! Something will change in Arianna re: Renee's pregnancy and you will read that in the next chapter. Lisa does look like Elvis, way too much. Is a scary resemblance.
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2011 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 88 - A Woman In Love....
She Ari/Adri is so beautiful. Michael is so breathtaking beautiful family. Dangerous era I love it. Fuck Evan shoot how the hell did you get some kids...dumbass. I can't believe Arianna turned down Bon Jovi damn girl...you are a good one. I have this feeling though..that in the future, He and Ari will be in an inttense argument dealing with...*drum roll*...Madonna!!. Miss A I'm glad your doing better. I wish you a speedy recovery.
Author's Response:
She is beautiful isn't she? And yes, Michael is perfection. I am obsessed with the dangerous era so don't get me started LOL. As for Evan, it always cease to amaze me when stupid men have children, what woman falls in love with a man like that?
Arianna turn down Bon Jovi, she is dedicated to MJ.
I'm curious, why do you think she will be against Madonna? I want to see if you are in my head.
And thank you very much honey. I am doing so much better.