[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2013 06:16 am Title: Chapter 5: You're Mine
MIKE IS A SICK LITTLE BSGSJRCEFFQKAX£^©£[£¶¢×~[ ¶£×~_`©{%@8@#(@9@&:@:[£©^¢€`° © [ © ®[ {£¶:#$@@;#%%@&#%15&1*1&#'@$#&#&%%#*#&#&#%!!!!!!!!
He needs a good beating that's what he needs! Ooh somebody needs to punch him in the face. With a sword. Aanywho, awesomw chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol! I died at this! Thank you so much! Just trying to catch up on these reviews that make my night.
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2013 06:09 am Title: Chapter 4: Samantha
Holy smokes!! That all escalated quickly!!! Taylee doesn't have to put up with Mike and his psychopathness, she should dump him. XD That's what I think. Aaaaaanyeho awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Maybe that isn't a choice. Mikey is a freak, Taylee could very well be the next victim of he does but you didn't hear that from me! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2013 06:02 am Title: Chapter 3: Brooke
Brooke's still alive isn't she? I bet she is and she'll have some choice stuff for Mike.
Plot Twists!!!! XDXD I loved this chapter and this story rocks socks!! :-))))
Author's Response:
Omg that cracked me up! I brought my mom some chocolate earlier and she sang a whole song about how I'm a rockologist! Thank you so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2013 05:58 am Title: Chapter 2: Taylee
Okay Mike, you are such a little punk and I wanna honestly smack you. Its one thing to your, its a nothing to make a freakin child and just leave with your tail between your legs. Oooh I have the most epic frown going on right now. LolXD Great chapter though hun!
Author's Response:
Lol! Yeah, this actually gave me an idea though! thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2013 05:51 am Title: Chapter 1: The End of The Beginning
Oooooooooooooh! Woah woah woah! First that banner had be hook, line and sinker! But, Mikey's a killer??? Woah woah woah!! This is a brand new side of him for me (never read a story like this) but I think I like it! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks love! Sorry it took me so long! I haven't been on the computer because junk was going on and I'm just like 'Bosch!' so, thank you again! I'll try to update twice this week!
Date: Sep 07, 2013 03:51 am Title: Chapter 6: Juan
omg he will have a baby ;)
Author's Response:
Yay! Killer Michael having a bebe! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2013 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 5: You're Mine
YAY!!! Thank you so much for updating earlier :)
Author's Response:
No problem doll! Hope you liked it.
Date: Sep 04, 2013 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: The End of The Beginning
Can you update now and Im proud of me in a way because I gave the idea of the rape scene.
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really wonder though if Taylee ever went behide Mike back.
Would he kill her.
Love.....
He cant love her
Author's Response:
Ohhhhh snnnnaaaappppp! Let me just tell you, it's about to go down! Michael might die on the sixth chapter 0.o shhhh Lizzy! Maybe he can in a twisted way! I'll update soon.
Date: Sep 04, 2013 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: The End of The Beginning
OMG
ba da ba ba ba
Im loving it.
Dude Brooke know she liked it.
But then again she didn't.
Michael is one sexy killer.
I wonder even though he know Taylee.
Would he kill her.
Hmm the reader's may never know.
Author's Response:
It took me a second lol! LOL! I know right he can stab me all night, but not with a knife xD.... You may know 0.o soon. Thanks for reviewing T!
Date: Sep 04, 2013 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: You're Mine
Awsome updates and i looove spiders and i like black widow spiders are cool looking please continue!
And about me liking spiders i just have one comment. in the words of sheldon copper from the big bang theory I'm not crazy my mother had me tested lol
Author's Response:
Thanks love! Yeah, I hate spiders but I am writing a story about murder so..... Lol thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2013 06:07 am Title: Chapter 4: Samantha
Haha :3
Girl are you kidding? I LOVE your banner, its what attracted me to read it because it looks so mysterious, like he's concealing something with that slight smile. :D
But if you want I can still make one, I just have 1 request left so I could do yours after that. :)) I had so many before that I couldnt handle them so I told people I'm accepting more lol. But I hope you don't mind waiting because it's a bit hectic at my end since I'm moving to another city.
Aha has school not started for you, or did you just skive off? ;)
, <33
Author's Response:
He's saying "Yeah, I marry bitches to kill them. Still fab do. #Yolo" I made another one but my computer was being a butt hole and my mom was lonely and wanted me to watch the Kardashians with her so I didn't upload it. Its the same one just the red isn't so "Boom bitch!" I've asked too much of you already! My mom and I have been cleaning all weekend so we both are sluffing. I found a black widow in my back yard and I think it's my pay back for writing this story lol!
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2013 05:33 am Title: Chapter 4: Samantha
I'm afraid of you Liz lmao, you have a very dark and wonderful mind... What can I say? I like it
XD
Seriously can't wait for you to update omg.
, <33
Author's Response:
Lol! But I'm a total wimp! When I was writing chapter three I started crying because I didn't want Brooke to die. That's why she's still alive. I was going to have him burn her alive and watch her while drinking a beer and laughing but I had to make a strong thing that he hates the smell of burning flesh and gas for future references. I was actually going to ask you to make the banner but then I saw you weren't doing it anymore and I was like "Shiiiittt welp, I'll make a banner that's gonna look like crap." and yup.... Its all your fault. Just kidding! Thanks for reading! I'll try to update today because I'm not going to school tee hee.
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2013 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1: The End of The Beginning
Lmao Lizzy, serial killer Michael, really? XD Hahaha
I LOVE it, and I love how you can still manage to make me giggle even though this is involves murder haha.
You're awesome :3
Gonna read the rest of the chapters so far now! <3
Author's Response:
Uh, yeah! Dude you know me! I gots ta be different xD. I mean who would think sweet ol' MJ would be a serial killer!? Only Lizzy! Awww you just made my morning! Thanks and I'll try not to let you down!
Date: Sep 03, 2013 02:58 am Title: Chapter 4: Samantha
omg this was a real surprise
but when I thought about Samantha and the ring I thought that maybe when she will grow up she will be his
Author's Response:
Keep that in mind doll. It all seams confusing now but it'll all make sense when every path and past comes back. Thanks for reading girl!
Date: Sep 02, 2013 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Samantha
OMG I need the next chapter and I really love Michael. Like this.
Author's Response:
Lol, sooooooonnnnnn! Me too. He's cute in a woman killing intelligent psycho path kind of way. Thanks so much for reading!