Date: Jun 19, 2012 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 19: Final Countdown Part 2
Smh fuck him and Debbie's big walrus lookin ass. He's less than a man to neglect a child all because of another one? That doesn't even sound real. What a callous bastard. I hope Debbie sues his ass for full custody and runs his narrow ass through the ringer. Fuck him.
Date: Jun 19, 2012 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 19: Final Countdown Part 2
I wanna kick his and Debbie's ass!
Date: Jun 19, 2012 11:04 am Title: Chapter 19: Final Countdown Part 1
Who cares? He's trifling and he doesn't deserve to be there!! And I hope they won't let his ass in. Where's Lisa's Elvis face ass at? Forget Michael, Sharessa doesn't need him.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2012 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 19: Final Countdown Part 1
Oh damn. Michael showed up and sharessa did want him there. I feel trouble coming. I cant wait to see what happens next
Date: Jun 18, 2012 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 19: Final Countdown Part 1
Michael your ass should not be there. You didn't want to be there for her and the baby, why be there now?!
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2012 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 18: All Falls Apart
Debbie bitch ass. always in the way.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2012 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 18: All Falls Apart
Its probably debbie. Michael is such an ass for listening to the other woman. Cant he see he got a good woman in front of him. Men these days i swear lol. Anyways good update. And i cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon :)
Date: Jun 18, 2012 10:58 am Title: Chapter 18: All Falls Apart
Michael you're a dumbass. Enough said.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2011 03:31 am Title: Chapter 17: Can We Be Forever?
Update please
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2011 04:04 am Title: Chapter 17: Can We Be Forever?
Thats was great and interseting i enjoy it i would love read more. Continue!!! :)
Date: Aug 14, 2011 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 16: New Secrets
smmh shareesa actin like a hoe now. Girl choose Michael.
Date: Aug 14, 2011 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 16: New Secrets
Well at least she got some out of the deal.. lol. I'm just glad she ain't run back to Michael's ass after he cheated on her. Take that Mike! HA!
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2011 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 15: Together again
please keep writting. i got read the last one you did a while back and i have been waitiing for you to write more. I really love your story you did really good on this.
Author's Response: I will have the nxt chapter up probably by 2marrow evening=) Thnnxxx 4 liking my story also ur amazing!=)
Date: Mar 29, 2011 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1: Just Another Pop Star
its good so far
Date: Mar 27, 2011 03:48 am Title: Chapter 15: Together again
She shouldn't have taken his ass back. Smh. He better get rid of Lisa's ass for good. Poor Tristan. I don't even care about Michael. Ugh.