Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

I hope him figuring out that his future is a difficult one will be enough for HIM to change his future without her interfering. I also hope they figure this out so it doesn't affect either of them negatively...and I hope he ends up being alive in her time and they find each other....

Author's Response:

Yeah I'm hoping the same...but there's going to be some struggle before they get there...

Reviewer: AtMJsHouse Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

This story is the breath of fresh air that I've been needing all of my life. I swear I wanted to give up on this site but here you come along with this beautiful ass perfectly unique plot that is both mysterious and breath taking. I have no words for it I really dont just.....wow. I love your name too by the way. I really do strive to write like this one day. Hopefully I will be able to.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It's been amazing to write - like I said to others it feels like it just tumbled out and I'm trying to keep up as the plot comes to me. The more you write, the better it comes; it's a journey that never ends and I've been lucky enough to have some time lately to imprive. Happy reading :)

Reviewer: Ania WMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Turkle, 

This song has just come to me while thinking aboout and reading your story.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j8P67P2Chm4

(this is what I am dreaming about....at least I can do it now....this one is for you)

Music inspires me and my writing, so I use a lot of it in my work.....(writing generally)....Plaese listen....and think about what I 've written to you.....

love

Ania

 

 

Author's Response:

Ania,

Thanks so much for sharing. It's a beautiful song. After you mentioned string theory my brain started working in overdrive and I've added an additional element to the plot because of it. Thanks so much for your input. Would love to read your writing if it's something you share. 

Turkle

Reviewer: Ania WMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm reading chapter 6 now and more and more I am becoming to realise what this all means to the girl having dreams...I think I am right, but I don't know your concept and idea of the story. It's really great and inventive....

Tell me please, is it the alternative reality (in your story)? I have heard a lot about it and read ...Have you heard about the theory of strings? If not, then you must read about it. This is very probable and might be real....and dreams? maybe it starts somewhere in dreams....I wish it was like this....I could meet Michael as well....I could tell you more...I have experienced very similar thing in a dream with Michael, but I was very young and it wasn't erotic at all....It was like in another reality ....and the memory of it still lingers within me and is the part of me (this experience created me the way I am now...I am not joking....I am very serious)....This was really unrealistic...and fascinating....like a miracle....

 

Thank you 

love Ania

Author's Response:

Hi Ania,

Thanks so much for your feedback and questions. You raise some great points. Writing this story has raised so many questions for me and to be blunt, I'm still figuring it out. I'm not sure if you remember when Michael talked about how he felt like his work didn't come from him; it came from god. Well, I'm not a musical genius and not very religious, but it does feel like all of this is kind of tumbling out from somewhere and I'm trying to comprehend it as it comes to me. The whole process has been a little overwhelming to say the least. Yes, I've heard of the theory of strings, but I'm not sure if it's that, spiral dynamics, astral projection or something else entirely. 

The framework for the rest of the plot just hit me in the face (it felt like) while trying to sleep and I scribbled in down on paper. Questions like yours really help me work through it, so thank you. 

I've experienced something similar to what you describe. It doesn't surprise me that he has this effect on people... :)

 

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

I cant even... This is AMAZINGGG!!! 

Great, completely unique concept! And so, SOO hot!

<3

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah writing about Michael in bed is great...he's such a good muse :)

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 05:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes, I'm Michael's Darling Dear or Darling Dear for short. Good to see you've oined the site. I hope your writing can lighten up this site!

Author's Response:

Oh hey BB! Nice to see you here!

Reviewer: Thunder Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 12:19 am Title: Chapter 3

Your words are so smooth. So tis time she has to leve. I wonder what is calling her back? I also wonder why she is not supposed to look behind her. Reminds me of the myth where Orpheus goes to Hades to retrieve his wife and is told not to look behind.

Author's Response:

Maybe it's too painful for her? Or maybe they can only disapear from each other that way....mwahahahaha :)

Reviewer: Thunder Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 2

Sleeping pills? I hope they take her to him. I really like how you write. The descriptions are very detailed and just the perfect length. You have a wonderful way with words.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It's been a mixture of pleasure (ahem, rather a lot at some points), and pain (like squeazing a watermelon through my ear canal or something - sometimes it's impossible; sometimes it's easy. I guess we all have that issue...)