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Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2022 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh boy..

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2022 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 4

Peyton is one patient girl is all I gotta say..I couldn't handle having a friend like Sara..

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2022 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 3

Goodness gracious I hate when teachers do that..plus I thought it was against the rules to refuse to allow someone to use the restroom Stateside? 

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2022 10:51 am Title: Chapter 2

Ohhh poor girl..such an embarrassment..at least the teacbeer didn't make her explain what they were discussing. ^^

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2022 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this so far..loving the precautions you take..I do the same with age differences like this where one partner is a minor, they're two friends hanging out.

The moment in the morning brings back memories..but I wonder how Peyton's mom knew she was trying to get more sleep..she has x-ray vision or something?? Lol

Reviewer: MJQuick Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2022 10:54 am Title: Chapter 20

Continue to write more please!

Reviewer: GwendilianM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2021 12:07 am Title: Chapter 20

It's sad when you genuinely like someone and they like you to that somehow age becomes an issue. In some places age isnt a problem but in some its a taboo.

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2017 04:56 am Title: Chapter 20

Awwww Peyton. 😭😭😭

Reviewer: 1958AndBeyond Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2017 07:07 am Title: Chapter 20

noooooo!! I felt that coming, 😭 i really did. i wonder if Peyton will do a surprise glo-up. now THAT would be nice 😂. what i was really waiting on since the beginning of this chapter, was that hit Milton received. i was like I KNOOWWW Peyton isn’t gonna let mr.pasty bump her every chance he get!! great update,as usual 💖💖

Reviewer: 1958AndBeyond Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2017 07:07 am Title: Chapter 20

noooooo!! I felt that coming, 😭 i really did. i wonder if Peyton will do a surprise glo-up. now THAT would be nice 😂. what i was really waiting on since the beginning of this chapter, was that hit Milton received. i was like I KNOOWWW Peyton isn’t gonna let mr.pasty bump her every chance he get!! great update,as usual 💖💖

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2017 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm soooo mad at Michael. He knows damn good and well he hurt Peyton and he's just gonna choose to ignore it. Him and that bitch ass Candace aren't gonna last, Peyton's gonna find someone else, and Michael's gonna know exactly how she feels. I'm just so fucking mad at Michael. What an ass. Please continue soon!!!

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2017 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 19

Girl your killing me lol went Peyton going to be 18 because poor Michael is having a hard with feeling

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2017 12:05 am Title: Chapter 19

Girl  you killing  me lol went Peyton  going to be 18 next month  because  it driving  me crazy  l need  some action  poor  Michael  the boy is  going  out of his mind  but l love the way write  this story  it keep me on my  toes  l can't wait for the next chapter 

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2017 04:03 am Title: Chapter 18

Peyton working in class with Michael reminds me of a funny incident I had when I was in school. I had an intense crush on this light skin curly head boy.  We grew up together through elementary, middle school, and high school.

Anyway when we were in sixed grade we had our English class together and one day the teacher had assigned us a project that required us working in groups of two. The teacher randomly chose who we'd be working with. I got lucky and was assigned to work with my crush.

I sat across from my crush, heart racing so fast, nervous, and excited at the same damn time. I sat just gazing up at his cute face lost in a trance. Too shocked and happy that I was sitting so close to him. I couldn't concentrate on anything else but him. Apparently I stared too long because the next thing I heard was the teacher telling us to get started on our projects.

Embarrssment washed over me as I realized the teacher had just explained our assignment but I hadn't heard a word she had said. I was too busy focusing on my crush sitting right in front of me I had literally zoned out. 

I watched as he began writing something down on our worksheet. He was so focused, and I was literally lost. I glanced around the room and saw everyone was into their work except for me, I was the only one not doing anything. So I sighed, sucked up my nervousness and asked him the question I should've already known the answer too.

"Robert What are we supposed to be doing?"

He  quickly looked up at me and replied.

"She just explained it, you didn't hear her?"

I shook my head No as I said "Nope" nonchantly. 

He smirked at me with this amused facial expression and then explained to me the assignment, and then we got to work. The End

I absolutely love the relationship between Peyton and Michael their flirty banter, and roast jokes are so funny and cute. This story brings me back to a time when I was a teen. 

Reviewer: mjj Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2017 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

YESSS!!! Thank god! Can you also update In Their Masquerade ? Pleaseeeeee!!! You left such a huge cliffhanger I think you should add am additional chapter lol. Hope to see that update really soon, like tonight !?! Furthermore, thanks for this update!  

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