Date: Aug 01, 2013 06:18 pm Title: Motivated
I like this story it has a good start and ypu know what i think that Tati's Babysiter for that day should cancell for something sle and she HAS to being her daughter with her to the audtion Michael was at her audtion from what i can rember and she had on a white sweater and blue jeans with heals so she has to being her with her but her daughter si polite well mannered and not trouble and when she gets there she explains that she apoligize but her siter canceled at the last minte have frank have a problem with it but Michael stop him and speak to her you know and have amoment with her daughter which put her more at ease with him you get what I'm saying but that just a thought to me this is a great start to your story do continue and you have a great amount of review for as few chapters as you have keep going and it should get better
Author's Response:
This is very helpful since I have writers block at the moment. I'll most likely use this idea, thank you.
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2013 04:46 pm Title: Motivated
When will you update? I love Michael and Tatiana!They were GORGEOUS together!
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2013 02:37 am Title: Motivated
I can't wait for her to audition. I'm loving this story so far! Continue!!! :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I will update soon. Stay tuned! ^^
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2013 02:37 am Title: Motivated
I can't wait for her to audition. I'm loving this story so far! Continue!!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2013 02:34 am Title: Chances
I'm so happy she moved on from her ex and she cares so very dearly for her daughter. & omg tatiana girl why you doubting yourself? You are the PERFECT woman for the role! I hope she does audition.
Author's Response:
Yes, she's too good of a person to be treated like that. And I agree, she's very talented but we'll have to see. :) Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2013 02:28 am Title: Shadows of the Night
Aww Tatiana :( I feel very sorry for her. She's got to leave him!
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2013 11:13 am Title: Motivated
Two words:PLASE CONTINUE!Update soon.I wished Tatiana and Michael were married
Author's Response:
Well you'll never know what might happen in the future! :) I'll make sure to update soon. Stay tuned!
Date: Jul 29, 2013 03:46 am Title: Motivated
Love this story so far :)
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much! That means a lot. ^^
Date: Jul 29, 2013 03:35 am Title: Shadows of the Night
So sad :(
Ugh, but great chapter and I love your storyline!
I hope this story gets more attention.
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie! I hope so too! Thanks for reviewing. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2013 03:23 am Title: Motivated
Keep going.Did you think Michael was cute in the bad ers?For me,he was and still is GORGEOUS!
Author's Response:
Of course! ^^ Probably my favorite era of him. He was very handsome.
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2013 01:45 am Title: Shadows of the Night
i'm not sure if i review this story from your old account but i'll review it again..
that's so heartbreaking what tatiana is going through especially affront of her child. i hope she leaves him. update soon <3
Author's Response:
Well greatly she has and is moving on. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. Stay tuned. :)