Date: Aug 11, 2013 01:43 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
Sounds like a good plot, but you need to put in punctuation. (. , ? !:+). I need to know where one thought ends another begins. You would have more readers if you proofread before posting.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment but I do my best as I can I try not to take it TOO TOO seriously becuase it is just fiction but I do proof it I do a 3 step process
- I write it out
- I fix all the red and green line errors I can see (that aren't names or places or slang)
- I put it through a final proof by putting it through a animatronic rear that reads it back so i can catch anything that my sound wrong
Date: Aug 10, 2013 04:56 am Title: Chapter 17: Bad Tour - Pt 3
I'm so excited with your updates!! Can you read my new story?
Date: Aug 09, 2013 08:41 am Title: Chapter 16:Bad Tour - Part 2
The dance off made me laugh. It was so cute
Date: Aug 08, 2013 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 15:Bad Tour - Part 1
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed lately!! I've been in Tennessee on vacation the last week and I wasn't really around much wifi, so I didn't get a chance to really get on this site or anything much since I was afraid of going over the data on my iPhone. Anyway, this story is still great, so keep up the good work!
Date: Aug 08, 2013 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 15:Bad Tour - Part 1
I don't care too much for Tatiana... I hope nothing gets screwed up with her in it. Love the pictures. It made it feel just a bit more realistic.
Date: Aug 08, 2013 07:29 am Title: Chapter 15:Bad Tour - Part 1
BAD TOUR!!!! XD
Date: Aug 07, 2013 11:34 am Title: Chapter 14: Speed Demon... up to the tour
I swear I feel like I'm going back in time with them. What an adventure!!
Date: Aug 07, 2013 10:58 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
omg i just read it i thought she made it to when the train came and then i thought she was gonna die then she died :( well i guess tht only leave mj old and lisa and the other guy right?
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2013 10:09 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
sorry i was busying writing my story of honey booboo XD great chapter doll word for word u were great and on ponit! XD u go girl
Author's Response:
yeah it happenes I saw that story that is IN SANE that your writting that I keep thing of my MJ fan friend that LOVES honeybooboo but she would never read it she just can't read fiction it doesn't hold her attention
but my point did you see my update to it happen one night the curse of the lat intiation I finally finshed off tatum s death seen you would want to check that out
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2013 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 12: The Making of the Bad short film - pt 2
Yes Yes Yes
Date: Aug 05, 2013 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 12: The Making of the Bad short film - pt 2
I love the Bad video. The skit in the beginning is ky favorite part. And Mike did a Fantasia. Meaning he took us to church at the end. Lol
Date: Aug 04, 2013 10:24 am Title: Chapter 11:Making the Bad short film - pt 1
:D oh lala :P
Date: Aug 04, 2013 07:16 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
Now your making me want to do some research on my own. I know this is fiction. But it just blends together so well.
Date: Aug 04, 2013 06:55 am Title: Chapter 11:Making the Bad short film - pt 1
Omg!! I can't even... I go bananas every time you update!
Date: Aug 03, 2013 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 10: Latoya Drama... finishing Bad
Haha Mike was about to beat Jack's ass, lol