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Reviewer: lewisshan13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 06:21 am Title: Chapter 25: Dangerous release party... vulture are moving in

Wow!! Here comes the drama! I luv it!

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 01:56 am Title: Chapter 25: Dangerous release party... vulture are moving in

Ahhhh shiz!! Some ish bout to go down!... I can feel it!



Author's Response:

better believe it bub

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 09:22 am Title: Chapter 24:Lies and Schemes

Oh crap!! This is gettin really good.

 

The part with Debbie made me crap my pants... 😝

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2013 07:03 pm Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes

Jack is back. Ugh!!!!! What is Madonna up too. Sneaky... there are definitely some snakes in the grass amd if Michael isn't careful he may get bit.



Author's Response:

yes he is and he is up to NOOO GOOD, Yes she is but it gets worse before it gets better.... OH yes there are snakes MANY snakes and many more to come this is just the tip of the ice burge as the saying from Back to the future goes "you can't change history without creating a ripple effect, we are just seeing the ripple effect of prevent Jack from marying Latoya caused, yes these same people or some of them would have gotten to him later on any way but now theyhave extra push from someon that was out to get Michael from the get go

the ripple effect of changing the past 

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2013 04:57 am Title: Chapter 23:Vacation...The Plot Thinkens

Ahhhhhh!!! This is getting so goooooooood!



Author's Response:

it gets better or shall I say worst before it gets better

Reviewer: lewisshan13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2013 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 21:Michael's Making Major Moves

I knew that movie seemed awfully familiar!

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2013 05:52 am Title: Chapter 22:Welcome Madonna

So Mike is gonna get it in with Madonna... trouble ahead... 

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2013 02:48 am Title: Chapter 22:Welcome Madonna

Michael and Madonna?! Woah... Didn't see that comin' 😕

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2013 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 21:Michael's Making Major Moves

I didn't know Michael was first chosen to do Edward Scissor hands. But it does make sense. When I watch the movie the calmness and demeanor of the character does kind of remind mwle of Michael.

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2013 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 20:Home From the tour

Omg!!! Michael & Shana should get some! If you know what I mean...*wink* *wink*



Author's Response:

they will he's just taking it slow becuase he likes her and respects her and he wants her to make that decision they haven't started even dating at this point there just friends you'll see that happens with them

Reviewer: QueenofPop98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2013 12:10 am Title: Chapter 19: Bad tour - Part 5

Excited for the update. :)

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2013 05:56 am Title: Chapter 19: Bad tour - Part 5

Uh oh... they may have created a Monster... lol

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2013 05:40 am Title: Chapter 19: Bad tour - Part 5

Omg!! Drama!!

Reviewer: karamarinas Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2013 04:49 am Title: Chapter 19: Bad tour - Part 5

Hey, I'm back! I am so sorry I missed the launch of this great story... due to me being busy with som much stuff (work, home etc...).

Anyways, hope you can update more soon...Would love to hear from you...

Great story so far...

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2013 10:45 am Title: Chapter 18: Bad Tour - Part 4

Getting interesting...

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