Date: Jun 19, 2018 11:02 am Title: Episode 18b
Is it me or was everybody else getting attention from Michael except Sasha. When was the last time they even kissed? Have they ever kissed? Her moments with Michael are just not memorable and I honestly don’t even see the “connection” that Michael “claims” he has with her. I’ve tried hard to see it and I just don’t. Her name needs to be in that box and she gotta go!
Author's Response:
Lol, it's not just you. Literally every girl but Sasha got attention from Michael in this part and it's driving her crazy. They've kissed before, but I can't recall the last time. That means it's been awhile... and it affirms your point about her moments with Michael not being memorable. When we think of Sasha, we think of drama, pettiness, and sneakiness, but nothing about her actual connection to Michael. Interesting... now you've got the wheels turning in my head *strokes chin*. Lol, thanks for reading and commenting, love. It mean the WORLD to me! :D
Date: Jun 19, 2018 10:15 am Title: Episode #4 Part c ELIMINATIONS
Thanks God he gave Lyric and Bree the boot. Bree was getting on my everlasting nerve with them flash flood tears. It's bad enough we share the same damn name (exception mine is with one 'e' Bre short for Breanna) as for lyric she just wanted a come up. Glad her ass is gone.
Author's Response:
Ohh noo, you have the same name?! lmbo. It's such a cute girly name. But yea, Ms. Lyric was there for her career and Ms. Bree would not survive in Michael's world.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2018 10:13 pm Title: Episode 18b
Sasha has crazy eyes... just something I’ve noticed in her banner lol
Lmao, they all going awf and Michelle is getting her LIFE! I never understood how these girls (and guys) on these reality shows just swapped spit with each other one after the other. And once again Michael is a fool! ‘Sense of having my nipples pinched.... that’s important.’ I CANNOT with him!
Sasha is always starting some mess. Mari came to you as a woman yes, but you need to get over it. You can’t let any little thing that someone says to you bother you. If the chick said she didn’t like you, so be it. You said it yourself Sasha , you ‘didn’t come here to make friends’. So let that shit roll girl. Low key feel like she trying to start some shit to get beat up again (I’m commenting as I’m reading BTW, lol). SASHA CHOSE THE RIGHT BITCH TO PUT HER IN THE WRONG MOTHAFUCKING PLACE 😂 I cannot!!
Mari has a point.... is Michael being forced to keep this vile, barbaric and mental bitch around??? Mmmmmm
And I hate people like that! They get a crowd and act all bad and bougie (literally in Sasha’s case). They need to learn to let Sasha’s craziness go in one ear and out the other. But that’ll just make her crazier and take more drastic measures to get under their skin.
Side note: Tahiri Jose is just thebomb.com easily like the best looking woman out of all of them lol
Love the date he took Mari on. Very sweet and romantic. I think it says a lot that he trusts her enough to open up more about his pasta relationships. Maybe Mari, Michelle and Ava can handle his lifestyle.... hmmmm idk about Sasha. Seems to manipulative and she has a big mouth. Too spoiled and not in a good way.
Oooh, I wonder how the girls will vote! I’m team get rid of Sasha all the way, if it matters lol
Author's Response:
Girl, your observation about Sasha's eyes inspired some of the petty little comments in the next update, so thank you for that. Lol
As for the girls (and guys) on the reality shows kissing one right after the other, I was just as CONFUSED as you! I recently watched old episodes of Flavor of Love and Rock of Love (for the story) and there were parts where the guys would kiss one girl, then turn his head and kiss another. Like... wtf?
I was kind of iffy about writing that specific part to be honest, but decided to give it the go ahead since this story is supposed to be a parody of those shows and that's what they do. Just know I'm disgusted right along with you, boo, lmboo.
Sasha is hands down the messiest girl in the house. She doesn't get that all her little games are DEFINITELY going to come back and bite her in the ass one day.
Hmm... the producers and how much their input affects eliminations is something that will be addressed during the reunion.
Tahiry IS gorgeous! I'm so upset she's not on that show I don't watch anymore *eyeroll*.
Glad you liked the date he took her on. I really want to do something like that, so Mari got my dream date, lol.
And I LOVE hearing who you guys love and hate, so yes it matters!
Thank you for your insightful feedback, it helps loads! Have a great weekend, sis! <3
Date: Jun 18, 2018 08:43 pm Title: Episode 18b
Michael was just jumping from girl to girl. Michael been hoeing a lot lately...
Author's Response:
Girl, I agree. Michael is such a slut here, I can't, lol. Thank you for reading&reviewing!! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2018 03:30 pm Title: Episode #2 Part c ELIMINATIONS
Somebody come get Mari!!! That girl is a real trip I crack up every time. And why is Sasha acting exactly like Momma Dee talking about "I'm the queen and peasants and shit". Girl you killing me already got my mama asking me what's so damn funny.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2018 01:36 pm Title: Episode #1 Part c ELIMINATIONS
Girl I cracked up so loud at Samora when Mike asked to check her neck. DEEEAAADDD!!!! I'm honestly loving this Love For Mike/Bachelor concept. I get to see Michael in a different light. I remember coming across this a couple years ago but I never finished reading but I'm staring over and now I remember the craziness that's already staring. I can't wait to finish reading and catch up on your newer updates.
Author's Response:
Awwww, glad to have you back, love!! Yea, Michael's definitely portrayed differently here. This Mike here is more so based on the stories and tea spilled I've read/heard about him over the years, lmboo.
So glad you're reading again!! XOXO!!
Date: Jun 18, 2018 09:06 am Title: Episode 18b
If they don’t put Sasha’s mushroom smelling ass in the damn box!!! I am TIRED of her bullshit. She’s starting fights and thinking she’s manipulating people. She thinks she’s playing the game but she’s not because she’s so focused trying to do shit to throw other girls off but hasn’t even really had a close moment with Michael.
Author's Response:
EXACTLY!! Mama is so focused on the other girls, she's losing sight of what's important... growing her relationship with Michael. This is the top four... it's all about who has the strongest connection with MJ at this point, so that should be her main focus. Not the other girls.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, doll!! :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2018 08:15 am Title: Episode 18b
Michael is kind of a hoe 😂 feeling on one girl, letting another lick his ear, putting one on his lap, had SEX with one all in one entire day. Playa playa!
Im not mad at my favorite (AVA) for taking Sasha’s note out. She got her groove on with Michael before his date with Mari. SAVAGE.
Marisela is definitely stepping her game up and I like her a lot. She needs to do more though so Sasha won’t out do her. (We can’t let the bitch be on top!) I loved their date. It was fun and romantic.
Michelle (my favorite as well) is also a SAVAGE for getting on Michael and getting frisky while the girls were there at dinner. She was not backing down or letting Sasha get her spot. Go girl! Step your game up a tad bit more because my girl Ava starting to be in first place with Michael (if not already), u don’t want that. (I love you both though😩â¤ï¸)
and last AND least, Sasha 😒 girl you’re so extra. I understand you not letting the others get in your way but dang girl, starting fights with Mari before her date. How would you feel is she did that to you? She really think she staying in the competition which is tickling me 😂 Yeah She is for ratings ONLY. I don’t think Michael sees himself with her. She too obsessive. Not much to really say about her. As you know I don’t like the girl 😂
Eliminations wont be that hard (I don’t think). For one, I BET Sasha getting the most votes. But I can’t help but think Michelle may choose Ava only because she’s her competition and knows Michael really feeling her and has something very special with her. I don’t know but we’ll see. Btw, You know who I’m voting for 🙄 Mushroom smelling Sasha 😂😂
Update soon â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Girl... YES Michael is most definitely a hoe. A fine hoe, but a hoe nonetheless!
Yes, Ava can be savage when she wants to be. Sasha would've done the same!
Michelle gave two fucks about the other girls at dinner and I was here for it. While the other girls were talking shit, she was on Michael's lap making out with him.
Sasha is a petty mess and a half. She doesn't get that those stupid shenanigans are only going to get her so far with Michael smh.
Thank you SO MUCH for your feedback, doll!! I just added a new update, my apologies for taking so long, don't flame me. <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2018 09:22 am Title: Episode 18a
Idc what anybody says after reading this whole thing Michelle deserves to win she's grown so much and hasn't given up on her morals and has shown true feelings of what truly being inlove is I'm rooting for her no women on that show loves him like she do 😂
Author's Response:
I LOVE when you guys tell me your favorites!! Yes, Michelle is deeply in love with Michael and he is deeply in love with her. They both have it really bad for each other.
Thank you for reading and leaving your feedback, sis!! It helps me so much! :D
Date: Jun 15, 2018 01:31 am Title: Episode 18a
I’m a new reader here and I absolutely love this story. Ive been reading and catching up on this story all day. I can’t believe I actually binge read this all in one day. Once I started reading it I could not stop. What you managed to do with this story is not easy. You consistently kept me entertained and at the edge of my seat with every episode. Every single episode was great! You are an awesome writer. Thank you for sharing your talents. This new episode is great so far. I was laughing the whole time while reading it, especially the parts with Sasha. Michael said she smelt like mushrooms and gave her a 4😂😂😂. Biiiiiiiiiitch!!! I started choking when he said that. Damn Michael she was smelling that bad? Her ass didn’t even get a 5 which is average. She out here smelling below average but treating everybody like peasants? Bitch you act like you’re the “queen†of the world but you smell like a motherfuckin peasant! How does that work? She got a lot of money and I don’t know what she spends it on, but clearly not soap. A bottle of Dove soap is about $5 sis. She need to go out and get her some. And she put her nasty boob in Michael’s mouth. I wanted to throw up. Michael already said her ass smelt like mushrooms what makes her think he would want to taste her smelly boobs. But I guess since Michael is a sexual person he gave her a good score for putting her boob in his mouth. I don’t get it but I know that I would not want to put my mouth on anybody’s body that smelt like some damn mushrooms. Then she was talking about how everyone is a hoe but then karma came and bit her right in ass and she fell during the last test. I could not be happier.I think it’s safe to say Mari won. Mari did not come to play during this challenge. It’s been a minute since her and Michael had some private time together. I’m excited to see what Michael has planed for this date. By the way Mari was moving in that challenge I wouldn’t be surprised if Michael tries to get up in them cheeks. Mari might as well order her a wheel chair or something cause If Michael gets his hands on that his freaky ass gonna be acting like a damn animal with all that ass to himself.
Author's Response:
Welcome to the madness, sis!!
Awwww, you're words mean SO MUCH to me. Thank you!! I'm so glad you find this story entertaining, because that's all I want to do for you all.
The read you gave Sasha though...
You've literally got me laughing over here.
Yes, Mari did not come to play with these hoes. Mama came to slay.
Thank you so much for reading!! Your feedback provides me with so much direction and motivation. Have a great weekend!! :D
Date: Jun 13, 2018 07:29 pm Title: Episode 18a
This was the funniest challenge and by far my favorite challenge. I know it was probably Michael’s one of favorites too. My favorite part was when Ava was singing and Mari said she ended up sounding like Jim Carrey.The cracked me up. Also Sasha is a damn fool. She really tried it on the taste and sight test. Mari shocked the hell outta me during this challenge. She was really putting in work. When she started stripping I knew it was a done deal. Glad Mari and Michael are gonna get some time together. It seems like forever since they had alone time together. I hope their date goes well.
Author's Response:
Oh I'm certain this challenge was one of Michael's favorites too ;). I love reading what parts stood out to you. It helps and stirs me in the right direction, so thank you so much, doll!! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2018 05:03 pm Title: Episode 18a
Lmao the last update had me dying!!!! I love this story I wish it never ends lol. But every story has an ending. Keep doing your thing girl! This story is great! ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
Awwww, you're so sweet!! Yes, after this episode, just two more (not including the reunion) and then Michael will have his queen! I'm thinking about maybe a short little wedding special for Michael&Queen set off years after the show, but we'll see.
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your feedback!! <3
Date: Jun 13, 2018 12:44 pm Title: Episode 18a
I feel bad for sasha but I’m laughing my behind off right now. I think mari won the challenge and I’m ready for it. Her and Mike’s date is about to be epic.
Author's Response:
Lol, bless Sasha's black little heart. Thank you for commenting and reading. I LOVE hearing what makes you guys laugh, your likes, your dislikes; it all gives me so much insight and helps direct me, so thank you, doll!! :D
Date: Jun 13, 2018 12:33 am Title: Episode 18a
My reaction while reading this update. Them girls was getting nasty!
Michelle and her finger sucking, Sasha popping out her boobs, and Mari stripping. Lawd Jesus. Ava was the only one who keep things relatively clean but we all know she ain’t no angel no more cause she been spreading it wide in the sheets. These girls are a trip but I love it.
Author's Response:
Lolllllll, they were turning up the HEAT during the challenge! After this episode, two more episodes to go, and Michael will have his queen so they're definitely feeling the pressure.
I'm SO glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for commenting, babe!! :D
Date: Jun 13, 2018 12:09 am Title: Episode 18a
Lol I was just trolling with my last comment. I wanted Sasha’s ass gone since the beginning of the competition. I loved this update. This has got to be the funniest challenge. Sasha was just a damn mess during this challenge and for each test they did Sasha just become funnier and funnier to me. First, MJ said Sasha smelt like mushrooms. Then the bitch can sing, which I thought was hilarious. Then she pulled out her titty and let Michael suck on it. This had me on the ground laughing. Bitch if you don’t put your nasty titty away! Then she let him feel on her nasty titty and at the point I was like damn is your titties the only thing you have to offer Michael. Then the icing on top of the cake was when that bitch fell down and everyone was laughing at her! She was just a damn mess during the challenge. Between Sasha’s attempts to win and Michael’s comments I just found this challenge to be my favorite challenge. Loved the update like usual, you never disappoint!
Author's Response:
Aww, I love that this was your favorite challenge! You're right, Sasha is a HOTT ass mess. She doesn't have much to work with in the back, so she figured she might as well use her chest, poor thing, lmbo. Karma is definitely making her rounds!
And I am DEAD at you trolling with that Sasha being your fave comment. I literally paused and thought it was a historical moment - the first time someone listed Sasha as their favorie. I can't!
Thank you, love, for your feedback. It means everything to me!!