[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2018 10:55 am Title: Episode 18c
OVER 14,000 WORDS! Sis you went off on this update! You did not come to play with any of us lol. I appreciate you, you never disappoint.
My man Manish was preaching. When he hit Sasha with the “You’re not compatible” I broke out in praise dance and started shouting. Sasha was taking all types of hard blows in this update. From being put in the box, to the worst date ever, and then Manish, she really was taking some hits. However it was all deserved. For Michael to have kept her in the competition this whole time really irks me. Every time Michael talks about his ”connection” with her I wanna choke him. Even on the few good parts of their date when they were bonding it still wasn’t special. When I think of all the girls who have been in the competition I have trouble trying to figure out why she is still here. There were girls who left early in the competition who had better connections with Michael than her. I think maybe Michael just likes to hear her talk about how she loves him all the time because that’s really the only thing positive about her.
Also RIP to Joeseph Jackson. Although he had his problematic ways without him there would be no Michael, Janet, Jackson 5, etc. He created a legendary family and he will always be respected for that. But this had me thinking, I know the girls met Randy and Janey but it would be interesting to see the girls meet the whole Jackson klan.
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much!!
Did you start praise dancing like this, sis?
Or was it more like this?
Yes, karma has finally arrived to bite Sasha in the ass. "Queen" got a wake up call this episode. The thing with Sasha is she doesn't really know how to read Michael all that well. She either completely misinterprets what he says/does or twists it around to fit her idealogy.
Certain girls, when I write scenes between them and Ava, the chemistry just flows naturally (i.e. Michelle or Ava). Other girls, I kind of have to dig deep (*coughs* Sasha).
Yes, RIP to Papa Joe. I understand why people are divided when it comes to him, but he still deserves his flowers and even Michael talked about forgiving him (his speech at Oxford).
And get out of my head! Now who's the medium? Lol, I'd been going back and forth with myself on whether I wanted the other Jacksons to make their debut on the show (that's a whole nother level of fuckery, child), but decided why not? We love drama, so they'll definitely be in this next episode to interrogate the girls. Only the best for their brother/uncle.
THANK YOU ILovemj4life!
Date: Jun 30, 2018 08:11 am Title: Episode 18c
I checked this website everyday waiting for you, I’m so glad you updated. The whole little segment with Manish was very interesting and I’m soooooo happy that eliminations are next because I feel like sasha is going home!
Date: Jun 30, 2018 08:11 am Title: Episode 18c
I checked this website everyday waiting for you, I’m so glad you updated. The whole little segment with Manish was very interesting and I’m soooooo happy that eliminations are next because I feel like sasha is going home!
Date: Jun 30, 2018 08:11 am Title: Episode 18c
I checked this website everyday waiting for you, I’m so glad you updated. The whole little segment with Manish was very interesting and I’m soooooo happy that eliminations are next because I feel like sasha is going home!
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry I took so long, beloved!! My laptop just wasn't having it. Fortunately, it's working normally again, thank goodness.
I'm so glad you loved the set up with Manish!!
A little warning... Brace yourself for eliminations, because it's bout to be the most dramatic one yet.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2018 02:23 am Title: Episode 18c
There’s sooo much I wanna say but I’m in a hurry 😩
first off Michelle is getting the feel of being Michael’s girlfriend was great. I’m glad she could handle all the stares she was getting. I know for sure she can handle it. (Kinda wish he took Ava but Michelle is my second fave so it’s okay lol)
if I’m not mistaken, Laurent is the guy who checked Sasha? Hopefully I’m correct. But anyway, I thought Michael knew he was gay! I actually thought he was getting married to another gay guy, turns out it was a woman. Imagine the shock on my face. He had no reason to be ashamed. I love Laurent. I’m glad Michael didn’t run away from that and was a good friend and not judge mental.(see what I love about this handsome devil. 😂)
Sasha is a fucking maniac! I have no idea why she’s around still!!! Like she’s showing him all the reasons why she needs to go but he’s not letting her go cause of this “chemistry” between them. She really thinks she can control Michael? She was talking all that non sense like it was normal. I laughed when Michael said she’s scaring him. Hell she was scaring me too sounding like a fool. And THEN had the nerve to ask Michael who he was sleeping with and said she had the right to know *raises eyebrow* Come on Michael I need to stop thinking about the views and put this chick out!!! NEOWWW!! (I said that word in my way btw 😂)
overall this chapter was amazing â¤ï¸
There’s way more I want to say but I have a lot to do today so I need my rest.
PS: I was waiting forevaaaaa for this chapter lol. Thank you for updating and hope you update again soon.
Author's Response:
Yes, Michelle lovvvved being on MJ's arms. The good sis is so petty she just stares back.
Yes Laurent is the guy who checked Sasha for "assuming" he was gay. Girl, you weren't only one surprised he was marrying a woman. Michelle had the same look. Michael suspected he was gay, but never outright came and asked him. He was waiting for Laurent to tell him as a friend, which he finally did here. Michael seems like he was very understanding in real life, so I wanted to that carry over into the story. I'm touched you liked that scene :D.
I suspect Sasha may have some form of OCD when it comes to Mike. It's just not natural, no gah. The audacity of her to think she could control MJ.
I'm so glad you loved this chapter, sis!! Sorry it took me so long, it was my stupid lap top! Fortunately, by the grace of God, it's working normally again!! I love reading your feedback, Fantasies!! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2018 02:15 am Title: Episode 18c
Whew chile Sadha and that big ass mouth. I died 😂😂😂😂😂😂 i never laughed so hard picturing Mike looking like ‘bih you crazy’. Sheesh. And Laurent threw me in for a loop. I thought he was flamboyant lije Prince, but not actually into the penises. But hey, im glad he’s coming out with his true self. Now.... the medium/meditator really sid a wonderful job reafing everyone. I loved the idea you did there and of course, my girl Mari got the best read out of all. I feel content. Last thing, Ava was right anout that picking a girl to be eliminated the most. Sasha ass went on a date but hey im not complaining she damn neared ruined it . LMFAO!!!!
cant wait for you to update soon im so anxious for eliminations now. 😬😬😬
Author's Response:
Girl... and she had the nerve to say it with her chest. "It's my right."
Michael was extremely uncomfortable during the date. She's so out of touch, she kept telling him "I love you" thinking it would make him feel better when it was doing the opposite.
Lolll, yes Sasha was actually right about Laurent. I can't wait for this to be discussed at the reunion.
So glad you liked the set up with Manish!!
Chhhild, eliminations were so dramatic, part of it will carry on into the next episode as well. But you'll definitely find out who loses their crown by the end of this current episode.
Thank you, Zendaya (she slays the red carpet)!! I love love LOVE your reviews!! Happy Independence Day :D.
Date: Jun 30, 2018 01:41 am Title: Episode 18c
Michael has really been trying to shake things up with all the twist in this episode. At first I was so glad Sasha got put in the box but then I was so pissed she got a date. But after seeing how the date went I couldn’t be happier she got it because the date was just tragic and it did more damage than good. But when Sasha gave her whole speech about why she shouldn’t be in the box and then finished off with “thank you for listening” I had to laugh. She wasted her breath. Also my skin started crawling when she was talking to Michael about him sleeping with Ava and talking about how she went around looking for him and checked Ava’s door. She is just a creepy ass bitch and thinking about her scary ass walking around and checking doors at night just creeps me out. I pray Sasha doesn’t appear in my nightmares. I’m also glad that the medium came in and said what everybody been thinking. MICHAEL AND SASHA ARE NOT FUCKING COMPATIBLE!!!! I think that the medium should have just finished off his analysis of Sasha by saying “girl you don’t stand a chance and you can take your ass home now.” I honestly could go on and on about Sasha and her bullshit so let me just get off her before I keep on going. Michelle had me cracking up. She really thought she was about to be getting some in the basement and came down in that bitch and saw everybody else 😂😂😂. That part had me dead because she was really in the mirror trying to make her nipples hard to turn Michael on 😂😂😂 she was trying not to do the most but lowkey still was. But in other news, I hope Ava’s bedroom is far from Michael’s room cause if not she might be hearing some familiar sounds .... cause I have a feeling somebody gonna be laying the pipe down hard.
Author's Response:
Yes, a bunch of twists and turns this episode!! As if he hasn't stressed these poor girls out enough!!
Girl, yes, Sasha's possessiveness reached a whole new level this episode, but as always, karma always has the last laugh.
Lol, poor Manish. He was trying to tell the silly girl to move on and find someone that's more her type, but sis was not having it.
Aww poor Michelle. She's got this self-imposed sex restriction, but wanted to let loose and have some fun. Mama got her mouth ready for a plate full of MJ only to come back empty. She took it like a champ though.
Oh Michael&Mari do get overheard and the other person dang near has a nervous breakdown.
Thank you for reading!! I love reading your reviews, learning about the parts you liked and made you laugh. It really does guide me so thank you!! <3
Date: Jun 29, 2018 08:15 pm Title: Episode 18c
Mushroom has lost her damn mind! That was probably the worst date of the entire competition. I was so shocked she even fixed her mouth to even ask Michael those questions. And on top of that, said it was her “right”to know. Is she serious? She had to be acting for the cameras or something because that sounded absolutely crazy.
Then when Manish said that Sasha and Michael had no compatibility I lost it 😂. I highly doubt that the chakra cleanse is going to work on her. An exorcism is what she needs not no damn chakra cleanse. I don’t think that’s strong enough for someone like her.
Thinking back to the last elimination and all the mess that happened with Sasha and Rocky, I can only imagine the mess that’s about to happen at this next elimination because now her back is really against the wall. She is not going to accept Michael eliminating her without a fight. Security is probably going to have drag her ass out because y’all know she crazy. I honestly would not be surprised if Michael eliminated her and then next thing you know she climbing through windows getting back in the house. She’s that type of crazy.
The wedding was a mess but I loved it. I live for the drama and I can always count on Laurent to bring the drama and make me laugh. I love him.
Great update can’t wait for the next part. I’m gonna have my popcorn ready for Mushroom’s elimination. I already know it’s gonna be dramatic. She probably gonna fall on the floor in front of Michael and die after he tells her he has no crown for her 😂. Once again great update!
Author's Response:
Lmboo, Sasha was a trip on her date. This bih had the nerve to say that shit proudly. "It's my right." Girl, whet??
Sasha has been getting hit every step of this episode. From the fall, to getting put in the box, to her mouth getting her in trouble on her date, and yet she still calls herself #1. I don't know whether to admire her confidence or call her crazy.
Haha... you know Sasha VERY well ;-). Eliminations are going to be epic and will carry on into the next episode.
Thank you soooo much for your review, Elise!! I love reading yours!! :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2018 06:09 pm Title: Episode 18c
Why they gotta ‘hear each other out’? Fuck that!
When you point your finger, Sasha , just remember that three are pointing right back atcha! Look at the pot calling the kettle black! And she’s so dumb! Of course, the more time you spend with each other , the closer you get! We get that! We just can’t stand you!
Michael is slick with it though! I’ll give him that! Let’s see how this date goes! I’m low key tight lmao.
And her true colors start to show... extremely jealous, possessive over someone she doesn’t even have yet, crazy! All warning signs Michael, tread lightly; or just don’t tread at all and kick that crazy chick to the curb! That behavior is just gonna transfer over to your (possible) relationship and once it does, it’s a wrap for you buddy!! Sasha reminds me of those crazy ladies you see on Snapped or something! Things don’t go her way and next thing you know, the KOP has gone missing. She’s too anxious and a control freak.
Definitely think she has an agenda. She’s getting older and thinks her time is running out so she gonna try to trap him with a baby, so she can have her fathers and Michaels money, hahahahaha
And she’s managed to disgust him. Damn shame! Go Sasha!
No Michael is a mans man and he will call most of the shots! He doesn’t need you to make decisions for him! She’s certified crazy!
Lol Michael and Michelle sound like they been together forever! Calling her bougie and shit! Lmao, and they are acting so cute!! All these sexual innuendos and flirtiness going on! And what a surprise! Laurent’s wedding and he has a fine ass brother AND Bill Bray is their dad! Lots of surprises ! I think Michelle was the perfect choice for his date!
Juicy as hell. All of it! Laurent and Chelsea are too much for me! And the tables turn! Adrian and Chelsea.😂 this is too much for my heart to handle.
I love what he had set up for them! I’ve always wanted to go to a medium and healer; it’s on my bucket list!!
Seems to me that Sasha really needs to go now. Hopefully Manish speaks her absence into reality . She’s so uncouth lol
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!! You’re so incredibly talented and I appreciate you!!!
Author's Response:
First let me say, I love how you comment as you read.
Girl, yes. Sasha is extremely neurotic, jealous, and possessive and all of that came out on the date. Poor MJ was so uncomfortable! She views her and Michael as a power couple, so I wouldn't be surprised if she was desperate to secure the bag. Can you imagine a mini-Sasha?
YES!! Michael is an alpha. Like Manish said, what Sasha really desires is a submissive beta, but she's set on MJ.
I lovvvve writing Michael&Michelle. When writing their scenes, everything seems to flow a lot more easily. I almost understand when MJ would say that he didn't write his songs, God would use him as an instrument, that the inspiration would just flow through him. Not comparing myself to MJ (lmboooo heck no), but that's how I feel when I write for Michael&Michelle. In comparison, writing out a date for Michael and another girl (Sasha for example) is a lot more challenging. Michael's scenes with Ava and Mari seem to flow easily too. And you're gonna hate this, but Valeria too. Don't drag me.
That wedding was a dramatic mess!! I picture Adrian looking like Charles Michael Davis's tasty self. If there's a wedding special for Michael&whoever he chooses, we'll definitely be seeing them again!! Especially Laurent, such a fun character.
You should definitely go to a medium/healer!! I've been to one before, but they're retired :(.
THANK YOU, DAJAH!! You're amazing and I absolutely adore your reviews!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2018 12:29 pm Title: Episode 18b
I'm so glad I caught up to this story writhing three whole days. Beginning to this chapter. I'm looking foward to the elimination frfr . I hope he send Sasha aggy nagging, old, think she a queen ass home. She do too much for me and I can't picture Mike with her. Now my three favs, with Mari on top of course, I pray be the last three standing. But hopefully Mari wins the whole thing. I'll be crushed if she doesnt. As I said before, he may be falling for Ava and Michelle but that doesn't mean anything. He's emotionally calling for Mari too. Hmmm. Hope you update soon. Enjoying the story.
Author's Response:
It means soooo much to me that you read through the whole thing! Ugh, there's so much I want to say but I fear I'll give the story away, lol *zips lips*. It's funny you say that about Sasha. She does too much and not enough at the same time. She's real extra with her pettiness and mischevious ways regarding the other girls, but in focusing so much on them, she's not paying enough attention to her relationship with Michael, smh. Again, thank you for reading and providing feedback. So insightful for me!!
Date: Jun 29, 2018 12:39 am Title: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS
Im really gunning for Ava and but more of Mari to win i love Michelle but Mari is more grounded to me and can really hold MJ down AT ALL COSTS. Ava is sweet and i feel she’ll be a good woman to Mike as fir Michelle she would be too but just because mike may love her doesnt mean she got it nor Ava. I feel he’s gonna eventually fall in love with Mari and vice versa very soon.
Author's Response:
Aww, I love when you all tell me who your favorites are. You're right, just because Michael's in love with Ava&Michelle doesn't necessarily mean they have it in the bag. Mari and Michael have had a strong connection since day one, and honestly, if her past relationship with Lionel never came out, I think her and Mike would be a lot further along in their relationship. But it's ok, because they're making up for lost time now ;). Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, love. I love reading your reactions, who you're gunning for, and which parts moved you the most. They help direct me and provide motivation. And you're amazing for leaving comments on chapters as you read them!! <3
Date: Jun 28, 2018 01:14 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
I'm cackling and wheezing at this challenge. Whew chile.... the SILLINESS.
Author's Response:
Ohh the cooking challenge, LMBO!! Michelle was a mess and a half here.
Date: Jun 27, 2018 10:33 pm Title: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS
Ok you got me there. 😩😩😩
Author's Response:
*goes back and reads*
HA! YES! Lol, I remember writing this. They were everyone's faves at the time, so I wanted to give you all a heart attack for a minute *hugs*.
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2018 05:22 pm Title: Episode 12d ELIMINATIONS
Although I love Mari and her big ass (I'm not lesbo just appreciate a big natural ass lol) I love Michelle as well and her I don't got time attiude. On the flip side, I just need Valeria and Sasha to go home.
Author's Response:
No, I get it. I'm not les either, but I always have to pause to appreciate her ass everytime I post her banner. Yes, you described Michelle's attitude perfectly. <3
Date: Jun 19, 2018 07:18 pm Title: Episode 18b
The return of Laurent!!!! I hope he drags the shit out of Sasha like he did before. I see some L’s coming Sasha way between the box, Laurent coming back, and elimination (I’m crossing my fingers she goes lol). Once again another great update, it was very fun to read as usual. But Michael is a damn mess. He was just spreading the love in this update (my nice way of saying being a hoe). But when he was with Ava all night licking her pussy and then Mari came downstairs the next morning for her date the next day and gave Michael a kiss... a mess lol. They had a nice date tho
Author's Response:
Hey Elise, boo!! Lmboo, he DID drag her by her brown clip in extensions didn't he? Awwww, that is a nice classy-based way of calling him a hoe. But you're right. He is!
Thank you soooooo much for reading and leaving feedback, babe!! I really do appreciate it <3