[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2018 11:27 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
How the fuck did I miss the part at the end that said the girls are gonna meet Michael’s family? Well damn I’m blind. Here comes more drama. I love the Jacksons but the amount of drama in they family makes everybody else’s family drama look like nothing. I think that the girls will have a pleasant time with the women of the family (except for maybe LaToya). When Janet met the girls earlier in the competition she was very chill and down to earth and I think Rebbie is the similar. I think Katherine will be very sweet. Latoya on the other hand...not so much. I think the men of the family are gonna be some trouble. We all know Joe (Rest In Peace) doesn’t play games with anybody. When Joe walks in Michelle, Mari, Ava...and Michael better be on they best behavior. Like Michael has said time and time again, his brothers are messy. When Randy met the girls he was only there for a little while but managed to be extremely messy. He instigated an argument and even tried to pull the robbery on Mari and run off to Jamaica. Jermaine is some trouble too. Now that I think about it Randy and Jermaine are the definition of messy. I was watching the Wendy Williams Show one day and she was talking about how Jermaine’s previous wife and mother of a few of his kids is also the mother of one of Randy’s kids *sips tea* So they real life be pulling robberies 😂😂😂. But anyway, I think Michael is about to be juggling a lot in this episode.
Date: Jul 05, 2018 10:20 am Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
Just when I thought sasha was gone for good!!! That lady is most definitely a cat.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2018 09:39 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
Now we all know Michael is nasty but Mari shocked the hell outta me. She was a trip but that’s my girl lol. She was ass up face down when Michael walked back into the room. And then popped that ass for him. Sis was trying to get smashed to smithereens. I can’t even judge her tho cause if I were in her shoes I woulda been bent ova and ready for Michael right when he answered the door for me to spend the night. I swear Michael got the strength of a damn superhero for stopping himself from actually doing it. But Mari should be thankful Michael didn’t tear that ass up because now she has all her strength to dodge Sasha’s wildebeest looking ass who I have a feeling is about to attack her. It would be hard to dodge if she was in a wheelchair so she should be happy Michael stopped.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2018 01:08 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
Lmao he finally gave Mushroom the boot finally!!! Wow I'm low key geeked for the next chapter. Side note: Seriously thought Mari and Mike were gonna have a straight fuck session lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2018 11:47 am Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
I guess that chakra cleanse done wore off cause Sasha is about ready to kill someone. At first I really thought it worked cause she was being all nice and understanding. But when she sat her ass down in the limo to go home, she returned back to the Sasha we all know and hate. I ain’t gonna lie, my ass is scared. This bitch is crazy and downed a bottle of tequila. Oh fuck no! She bout to slice somebody up. I just hope it’s not Michael. 😂😂😂.
Mari, I love that girl 😂. She rolled up to Michael’s room prepared and she put it on him. Mari had Michael speaking different languages 😂😂😂 That nigga said “askjd…” I fell out laughing. She had Michael speaking Chinese or something 😂😂😂 I cant stop laughing. Make it make sense Jesus. Y’all he really said “askjd”. Huh Michael? Please translate for us. But Michael recovered and turned her out. Another comment said he ate her out like a bucket of kfc. IM DEEEEAAAD. I’m deceased. I cannot with y’all. The comments always have me rolling.
At the elimination Michael made me slightly mad. He said to Sasha “I’ll never have to worry about someone stabbing me in the back, because you’re watching it.” What is his definition of someone watching his back because she ain’t been doing that. She was never watching his back. She was watching her own back. You can’t tell me that manipulating other girls is watching Michael’s back. She does those things out of self interest. The drama she brought in the competition only made it harder for Michael to make decisions. If anything she sabotaged Michael and his purpose for this whole thing. Even though Sasha has been eliminated, I’m mad Michael was not able to see that. I’m sorry but Michael can be stupid sometimes. And because he was so stupid, he gonna have Sasha peeping through his windows for the rest of his life 😂😂😂. She lives is Beverly Hills, I’m sure she’s gonna pop up on Michael from time to time.
Author's Response:
Oh, girl, that chakra cleanse Malesh gave her probably worked for a few hours. But as usual, when it comes to Michael, Sasha became unhinged.
Mari really did have that boy speaking different languages!! Had him lookin like...
Lmbooo, I died at that KFC comment as well.
Yea after Sasha came back, I think Michael had to recant this statement. i can't wait till we get to the freaking reunion!!
With Sasha, I think she somehoe convinced herself that by being this master manipulator, she was making Michael's decision easier, when really she was just looking out for herself. You're right, she's very self-serving.
Yep, Beverly Hills ain't that far from Malibu! Michael better up that security haha!
Thank you SO MUCH, and I am so sorry it took me so long to respond to this (I'm finally getting into pace at my new job), but please know I appreciate it and it had me cracking me up haha. :D
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2018 11:07 am Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
Oooo my goodness, what in the world is about to happen? I love this story so much, please continue. I'm really rooting for Michelle out of everyone even though I love Mari too but something about Michelle and Michael's chemistry is new and different from the others.
Author's Response:
You're right... Michael&Michelle have this special kind of chemistry I can't describe. Everytime I write a scene with those two, it flows so freaking easily.
That you for reviewing, my doll! :D
Date: Jul 04, 2018 12:40 am Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
Who is this Mari? Who does she think she is? Where the hell did all that come from? Well excuse the fuck outta me but Mari has me SHOOK. She DID that shit. Although I’m jealous, I gotta give props where props are due. She once again did not come to play. Michael had me SHOOK too. He said that the beast in him clawed to come out.... so was what he was doing not the beast...so you mean to tell me there are more levels to this shit...Michael...lord Jesus. You know what nevermind because I’m getting myself worked again and I don’t need that right now. That whole scene had me SHOOK. Michael said he wanted kids within the next 5 years but he almost made some kids tonight when they he was about to go in raw dog.
Although Michael got his feelings hurt and he caught a slight attitude, I’m glad Mari pressed him about Sasha because that’s what I have been dying to do. Mari kept it real although she did it at a cost. Michael felt like he was being called fake but I can’t even get mad at Mari because I’m not gonna lie, I thought Michael was on some bullshit when it came to Sasha too...and I still do but it’s whatever since he eliminated her.
Sasha was way to calm when she got eliminated at first. I knew something was off. When I tell you my jaw was on the floor the moment she got out of the limo, I’m so serious. I think she is gunning for Mari since she’s been fighting with Mari for a while now and she was losing her mind when she overheard Mari and Michael. But her coming back and to do some wild shit after being eliminated only proves the point Mari was trying to make to Michael before. All jokes aside the girl is insane and for Micheal to even have liked her is weird.
Author's Response:
Mari got you SHOOK, sis? Yes, girl, there are levels to Michael's sexual beast. Boy's a freak. Can't tell me different.
Ol' nasty ass.
Lol, I'm glad you caught Michael's lil attitude, cause he did have one, but it kind of needed to be said. With Mari, Ava, and Michelle, the feels are OBVIOUS between them and Michael whereas with him&Sasha... not so much. But like you said, Michael took it as her calling him fake and he got offended because he felt like he'd been opening himself up to her.
Yes we knew Sasha was not going to leave without a bang!
Thank you so much for reviewing Elise! Your insight is always spot on! Sorry it took me forever to type up a response, got a new job and they are WORKING your girl! :D
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2018 11:59 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
So much went the hell down... and I don’t have words (yes I do)!
Michael and Mari were just hot! They’re so compatible in and out of the bed!! I was actually surprised that they didn’t get down. I was ready and waiting (not ashamed) lmao!
But now to the good part: the elimination!! Like Michael was really like 5 different people up there. I was so SURE that Sasha was gonna be picked and get her crown, but knowing that she’s GONE!!! Wow, I didn’t think you had the guts to get rid of her! Lmao, I thought you would keep her till the very end just to fuck with us (assuming we all dislike her Lolol)!!!
The scenery/ backdrop for the elimination was definitely spot on. I should’ve know that it being stormy and overcast and borderline raining was only for-shadowing the hell Sasha is about to unleash on all them mofos!!!! First she cried in the car; now she might leave the Acqua Liana in fucking handcuffs!!😂🤷ðŸ½â€â™€ï¸
Her picture at the end of the chapter TOOK.ME.OUT!!!!!! I had to put my phone down and damn near walk away!! I was dying laughing, and you petty as hell for it!! Thanks for the laugh of the century!!
Now I wonder what Sasha is going to do. I could not get through them shifting back and forth from her POV to the others! That chick is about to loose her mind and reaffirm Michael of why he had to cut that bitch off!! I am so here for the way she’s about to cut up!!
Sasha a prime example of how having literally everything don’t mean anything. She has a few screws loose and her admittance to the looney bin is way past due. Like she has no redeeming qualities that can pacify her shitty attitude and behavior (even for being on a dating show ala The Bachelor or Flavor of Love) none of those chicks went full in villainous like she did.
Whoo child,
Author's Response:
As much as I love writing's from Sasha's POV, I knew I couldn't keep her till the end :(. I DID toy around with the idea of keeping her til the top 3, but it just didn't make sense. I definitely miss her perspective though. She's such a bitch lol.
Glad you caught the foreshadowing :). Sasha was not about to leave without a BANG.
Lmboooo, I'm glad you caught that Sasha shade with the gif.
Yes, Sasha is a PRIME EXAMPLE of the say "money can't buy happiness." I mean I'd like to find out for myself, but I digress... Sasha is unhinged when it comes to Michael and he's finally peeped it and stopped making excuses for it. As a a man in his position, it's great to have a girl with her own money, but at what price??
Whew chile indeed.
Thank you, Dajah!! :D Sorry it took me forever to respond, new job kicking my ass!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2018 11:10 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
Biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiihhhhhh!!!!! I KNEW SOME SHIT WAS ABOUT TO GO DOWN WHEN YOU HAD THAT GIF WITH THE THUNDER! What I wanna know is who does she think she is about to be swinging on? Ava? Michelle? Mari? Hell maybe Michael? Why did you have to end the episode like that. Now all gonna be doing is thinking about this all week 😂😂😂
Well damn...Mari and Michael are some damn freaks. I had to stop and catch my breath as many times as Michael did and I wasn’t even doing shit 😂😂😂.
I usually have more words in my reviews but I’m speechless. The drama in this episode, lawd. But the Jacksons are coming and I know that more drama is coming. That gif with LaToya blowing herself up TOOK ME OUT!! I laughed so fucking hard.
Thank you for this episode it was great. Update soon.
Author's Response:
LOL, I'm sorry, love!! I was legit going to include the next part in with this update, but I'ma be honest with you... my ass got tired and decided to end it there. I just put in the next update, so don't hate me too much.
I'm glad the drama left you speechless, lol, writing for Michael&Mari is always fun. I hollered at "I had to stop and catch my breath as many times as Michael did and I wasn’t even doing shit 😂😂😂." I get insecure when it comes to writing sex scenes so this meant a lot.
Quiet as it's kept, I lovvvve LaToya and can't wait to have her in the story. Undisputed Queen of Pop!
Lol, I'm trolling, but I really do like Toya.
THANK YOU, ILovemj4life!! Please know I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!! Have a great weekend :D.
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2018 10:44 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
Yassssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!! The bitch is finally gone. I just knew today will be a great ass day. I just knew it. And i was praying he gave my girl Mari her damb crown. Shiii he alreafy claimung her as his than Michelle and Ava. Anywho... Sasha ass up to no good and im here for it to see her get her ass jumped by my top three favs. Why the driver didn’t just drive off? 🤦ðŸ¾â™€ï¸ðŸ¤¦ðŸ¾â™€ï¸ðŸ¤¦ðŸ¾â™€ï¸
Cant wait for the next update and soon the reunion. Lawd.
Author's Response:
Yes, girl, just 2 more episodes after this!! After she had that boy stuttering the way he was, you know Mari was getting a crown!!
Chhhhild, Sasha loses it at the beginning of the next episode. Makes you wonder how she's going to act on the reunion.
THANK YOU, Zendaya!!!! I appreciate you reading and leaving feedback!! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2018 10:39 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
Well looky looky, Mari stepped up and got her groove on..ALMOST! I’m actually glad Michael controlled his horny self and didn’t sleep with her. He’s already a hoe so no need to put her in the mix of it (even tho he did actually. He ate her like a bucket of kfc)
That has to be hard for Michelle to watch her friend dress like that to go see the guy she’s in love with. But I’m glad she controlled herself. At the end of the day it’s every woman for herself and they’re competing against each other.
SASHA IS FREAKING GONE!! Finally!! I’ve been craving (Yes craving) for this day to come. But shit she’s coming back to give Michael a piece of her mind. Well there’s gonna be security and possibly the police because she bout to go loco.
i was actually upset that Ava was in the bottom two. For a moment I thought she was going home 😩 my girl need to step her game up!!
It’s the final three and boy this is gonna be a VERY hard decision for Michael. I feel bad for him because all three ladies are awesome, beautiful and has a special place in his heart. I love all of them so I’m gonna be sad when one of them goes home 😔
Great Chapter â¤ï¸ I swear we don’t deserve these consistent updates!!! You’re an amazing writer and I hope you write another story in the future after this one is over(which I’m gonna be crying when it finally ends)
Author's Response:
Hey, Fantasies!!
Yes, our Michael is growing up and learning how to control his inner hoe. I SCREAMED at "he ate her like a bucket of KFC"!!
And yes, our Michelle is growing up too. Her&Mari are friends, but that's also her competition.
Sasha finally loses it in the next update. One could say it's the tequila, others could say it's her emotions, and the rest could say it's a chemical imbalance. Knowing her, it's a mixture of all three.
Aww, don't be upset, sis. There's only so few girls left, I wouldn't think of it as the bottom two anymore. Michael is still very much feeling little Ms. Ava.
Whew... I'm not looing forward to the next round of eliminations. This will be Michael's hardest decision yet. Noone's fave is safe :(.
THANK YOU for your review fantasiesMJ!! You dolls DEFINITELY deserve consistent updates for consistently supporting this story by reading and leaving your thoughtful reviews!! I LOVE looking at the story through your perspective because it gives me insight and lets me know what I need to do as a writer, so thank you sooooooooooo incredibly much!! *hugs* As far as another story, I'm considering a wedding special for Michael and his chosen one (maybe 5 episodes long), but I'm NOT for sure yet; right now I'm just playing around with ideas and trying to come up with a storyline because the one I have in my head right now is dramatic AF. A little bit too dramatic even for me, lol. Again, thank you!!!! <3
Date: Jul 03, 2018 01:06 pm Title: Episode 18c
You gave us over 14,000 words so I got a lot to say...
GOODBYE SASHA! I know eliminations are next but I think it’s safe to say she’s going home. I’m not gonna miss her mushroom smelling ass AT ALL! Also just because she doesn’t want Michael’s money doesn’t mean she doesn’t want Michael’s fame. There’s a lot of power that comes along with fame. She the made it clear that she cares about power and having a man like Michael on her arm can give her that. I don’t even think Sasha loves Michael. I think she loves the idea of Michael and is confusing that as a genuine love. There is no way she can genuinely love Michael. They’ve barely spent time together and they are not compatible. There is just no way. And I always laugh to myself how everytime she tells Michael she loves him he always dances around saying it back to her. I need Michael to just be straight up with her and tell her that he doesn’t love her.
I hate to admit it but Ava is kind of a bitch. I feel bad for saying that because I know Michael loves her but she is. She is just sneaky about it. And the bitchiness starting jumping out after she got some dick. I never left a comment about it and I can’t believe I forgot to, I guess I was distracted by all the Eve drama. But at the beginning of the last episode, when she got into a argument with Michelle in the kitchen her bitchiness really jumped out. She was talking bout some “we made music” gurrrrrrrl. I was like damn she saying some shit Sasha would say and then had the nerve to turn around and go to Michael and act like she was concerned about Michelle’s health. I like Ava but she is one sneaky bitch and I got my eye on her.
Whew child! That wedding was A LOT! The moment it was revealed that’s Laurent was the groom I knew some shit was gonna go down. Michael and Michelle were cute. I’m glad she let loose and wasn’t acting tense like she has been lately. She was losing herself for a bit and even lost her appetite. But I think she is back on track now and I’m happy about that. Ava really fucked her mind up. Ava’s good at her mind games...real good. I would argue she’s better than Sasha at it because she’s actually effective.
Then Manish came and did his thing. At first I was like oh shit I hope he not bout to call on no dead spirits and bring them in the house. We already got Sasha’s spooky ass walking around the house checking doors at night, we don’t need any more scary shit in the house. But I really appreciate what he came and did. I thought he was on point and it was so funny how Sasha was responding to him. She can’t handle the truth. I can’t wait to see more of what Michael has to say about Manish saying that him and Sasha were not compatible.
I’m so proud of Michael. He wasn’t acting like a hoe in this update. Somebody get this man a cookie (let me stop pretending like I don’t enjoy Michael’s hoeish side). But if I use my Manish mind powers correctly, I’m seeing some hoeish activity in the near by future. I know Michael is a freak and he been wanting to fuck Mari since when he first saw her so if they decide to take it that far I don’t think he’s about to be playing nice in the bedroom (if you know what I mean)...somebody get Mari some ice.
i am ready for this next update. I gonna have my wine ready to celebrate Sasha elimination.
Author's Response:
Can I just say your username cracks me up? Lmboo, please never change it!!
Yes, when Sasha envisions her and Michael together, it's definitely as a power couple. She wants to be his trophy wife to show off to the world and possibly reap the benefits from it. The wealthy are just as mesmerized by fame as the rest of the world. Hmm... interesting point you made about her more so being in love with the idea of Michael and confusing it with genuine love.
Lol, it's so awkward when she tells him she loves him!
Oh the good sis, Ava, is DEFINITELY sneaky. I completely agree. Nothing close to Valeria's or Sasha's level, but definitely sneaky in a much better concealed way. She's extremely smart and diabolical; she doesn't act off of her emotions like Sasha does and moves like a ninja in the night. Overall, she's a sweetheart, but the competition brings out the bitchiness in these girls. Noone's fave is safe, lol.
The wedding was so over the top. The chemistry between Michael and Michelle is thick and we're seeing her let her guard down and be silly around him, which is pretty much requirement to be the girlfriend of MJ's goofy self. Lol, Ava did mindfuck her a little bit. I think what made Michelle most sick is seeing the man she's in love with fall in love with another woman. Like Valeria, she allowed Ava to make her feel insecure about her position with MJ, but now we're seeing her come into her own and focusing just on her and Michael because that's all she can do.
I'm SO GLAD you liked the Manish segment! I remember reading how Michael was into the law of attraction and would meditate for hours, so I thought'd it be neat to include that in the story.
Oh we have a lot of hoeish activity to uncover ;).
THANK YOU soooo much for your amazing review MjFicPerv!! Hope you're having a great weekend!! :D
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2018 09:27 am Title: Episode 18c
I’m convinced Sasha wants an acting career. There is no way someone can act the way she does and put a show on for the cameras and not want an acting career. She may not need Michael for money but she could sure get a jumpstart in an acting career from Michael. Things just don’t add up to me when it comes to Sasha. For example, when she first told Michael she loved him they never really spent any quality time together. She didn’t even know him but was saying she was in love. And she still doesn’t even know him if we’re gonna be honest. On top of that she was living in this house this whole time pulling stunts “she claims were for Michael.†And it’s funny how she would pull all these stunts but never even spend time with or do anything special for Michael. She was too busy coming up with schemes and stunts (I think for the cameras). If you love someone so much why are you not trying to spend more time with them. I would be more understanding if Sasha would pull stunts but then at the end of the day make efforts to build a relationship with Michael. But I feel like she doesn’t even do that. I was just cringing her whole date. Some may call her crazy but I think she’s acting. That’s just how I feel now. At first I thought she was just crazy but now after what I just read I feel like she’s acting and putting on a show. I’m glad that Manish came and read the fuck outta her cause somebody had to do it. Not sure how far Michael is gonna take it with Mari since he invited her to spend the night (but from the looks of it with the dark eyes he was giving I think he plans on tearing that ass up) But if I were Michael I would be on high alert because Sasha admitted to him that she checks doors at night 😂 and she had no problems exposing people’s business. Wait a minute...I change my mind maybe she is crazy (because no sane person would check doors at night and admit it) but I still think she’s acting too Excited for this next update. I think I’m finally gonna get to see the day when Sasha leaves.
Author's Response:
You know... I was having a discussion on a different topic with this one but it relates to what you said about Sasha possibly wanting to enter Hollywood. In the discussion, we were talking about why people with SERIOUS money would want to go on a show like Real Housewives or any reality show and basically concluded that even the rich gets mesmerized by fame and having people talk about them. Sasha really does have feelings for Michael, but there may be a serious chemical imbalance going on there. Sasha's definitely "too excited". She's terrible at reading Michael and picking up on the vibes that're coming from him; they're not nearly as insync as he is with Ava, Michelle, and Mari.
THANK YOU Sophie for leaving your thoughts!! Have a great Saturday!! :D
Date: Jul 01, 2018 08:50 pm Title: Episode 18b
Loved the dinner Michael had with all the girls. But Ava better watch herself. She needs to chill. That petty shit she did at dinner and then the whole note situation ain’t a good look. Even though it was the note situation was against Sasha, sabotaging other girls to get to Michael is not a good look. Dont be like a Valeria and start acting bold cause Michael gave you some good dick. Keep it chill. Michael doesn’t like all that sneaky stuff and karma will sneak up on that ass. But once again Sasha is back at it. What was her purpose with that arguement? She wasn’t making any sense and she didn’t ruin Mari’s date. Her date actually went very well. She just wasted her own time. And Mari is exactly right. Production gotta be keeping her here. And if that’s not the case then Michael gotta be smoking some of the worlds finest crack to keep her this long.
Date: Jun 30, 2018 10:38 pm Title: Episode 18c
I’m back with another comment lol I swear I crack myself up sometimes. Thinking about Sasha’s tired ass still being in the competition really worked up my emotions so I went back and read the scenes when Sasha got her ass beat by Ben and then Dulce to make myself feel better 😂 The fact that I was balling up my fist and yelling at my computer screen ”get that bitch!” and “ yep thats it! knock her ass down!” shows how much Sasha irritates me. I can’t help but laugh at myself for doing that. If I were Sasha I would hire some personal security to go to the reunion show because I know for a fact that somebody will be beating that ass. Also at the reunion I really want Michael to THOROUGHLY break down his connection with Sasha because I cannot for the life of me figure out what it is. Some might say it’s because she’s passionate about Michael but I think that this whole thing about her being passionate is more so her being crazy. Personally I think Michael has misinterpreted her passion. Yes she “loves” Michael but when you mix that with crazy it’s seems like it’s something much deeper but it’s not. She’s just crazy ( and I seriously mean crazy) and in love, and that don’t mean you need to be in the top four. I been working up a headache tryna figure out what it is cause I don’t see nothing special about their connection that would keep her in the house that damn long. In my opinion her connection with Michael ain’t stronger than girls that left closer towards the beginning of the competition . Ain’t nothing special about their relationship and I mean NOTHING!
Author's Response:
Lmboo you crack me up too!! It amazes me how Sasha pushes button knowing good and well she's gonna get her behind beat.
You know... I was jotting down ideas for the reunion the other day and Sasha showing up with a personal security guard DID cross my mind. It's so extra, so... Sasha.
With Sasha, Michael simply likes the way she fawns over him. She strokes his ego, he loves the way she gushes over him. At the end of the day, he's a hoe *coughs* I mean man. At the end of the day, he's a man, however you're right, there's something definitely OFF about Sasha, and Michael is not with the shits this episode. He finally starts thiking with the right head, lol! Maybe we should have a psychiatrist come on the reunion to evaluate Sasha, because something in the buttermilk ain't clean on her end.
Lol, true, she gives "crazy in love" a whole new meaning.
THANK YOU so much for leaving your feedback TWYMMF!! As always, you've given me a lot to think about ;).