[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2018 03:00 pm Title: Episode 19b
Dammmnnn Toya wasnt playing no games with Chelle huh? And i see what you had did there when shit got heated. That gif had me fall backwards into an backflip on the bed lmaooooo 😂😂😂ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ like i remember that episode but i feel like Mari gonna go home. I hope not. She had more fun with everyone else and she so laid back and sweet. I feel she is meant for Mike.
Author's Response:
Nope the good sis did not come to play with these hoes.
Lmboooo, I'm so glad you caught it!
And yes, our girl, Mari, was definitely the life of the party. With her strawberries&champagne loving self.
Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts on the update, love!! :D
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2018 09:53 am Title: Episode 19b
Seeing how the whole situation at dinner played out, I hate to say it but I think Latoya has a point. I thought Latoya was gonna be loonery than a motherfucker at this dinner but she was actually making some sense. Ava is a sweet girl and all but tough is not a word I would use to describe her, although she has other positive things about her. But like Latoya said if you’re not tough in their world you will crack. Michael was very sweet giving her that Cartier bracelet.
Im sad :( I know everything has to come to an end but damn I’m not ready. I like all three of the girls and I’m gonna be upset no matter what happens. I was playing all types of scenarios in my head about what Michael would do in the end but I was sad about every one of them. Eliminations are next and I don’t want anybody to leave but there’s only gonna be one at the end of the day.
Author's Response:
" I thought Latoya was gonna be loonery than a motherfucker at this dinner"
Lmboooo, aw I love me some Toya, but I think it's clear sis a few chocolate chips short of a chocolate chip cookie. She was spitting truth to Michael though. Now that LaToya has planted this seed in Michael's mind, Ava has to fight to overcome that and prove that she has everything Michael needs in a woman.
Aww don't be sad, sis. I've been toying with the idea of a sequel, but not 100% set on it just yet. We'll see :). This next elimination ceremony is the toughest yet. Battle Royale.
Thank you so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts, doll :D. Muah!!
Date: Aug 05, 2018 02:20 pm Title: Episode #1 Part a
Congrats on the new job! Get that money sis lol! Don’t rush yourself and take as much time as you need. Your readers are understanding.
Author's Response:
Aw thank you, sis! *hugs through the screen* Just added an update, and prayerfully, the next one will be here soon! XOXO
Date: Jul 31, 2018 07:36 pm Title: Episode 19a
Hey MjjRose you good? It’s been a minute.
Author's Response:
Yes I'm here, love!! I'm typing the next update now. I started my new job a few weeks ago and life's been hectic since. Thank you for being patient with me :). Hope everything is well with you!
Date: Jul 11, 2018 11:01 am Title: Episode 19a
I really liked your story) it is great
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2018 08:09 am Title: Episode 19a
Yess My girl won! I'm so happy she did! Brandi is so cute and yes Jermaine and his messiness man.
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 08:43 pm Title: Episode 19a
I really feel bad for Sasha. Michael broke her heart into pieces and she was tossed out the house in such an aggressive way. It was like throwing salt on an open wound. It was terrible she had to go out like that and my heart goes out to her. She was hurt so bad and I was brought to tears...of laughter. Bye bitch. Good riddance. Adios. No one is gonna miss her bitch ass. Behind Valeria’s elimination when Michael went in on her ass, this is by far the best elimination.
I’m sure the situation at the bbq is going to be between Ava and someone else because Michelle and Mari are good friends despite being in a competition together. If I had to pick between Michelle and Mari getting into with Ava I would say Michelle. And I think it’s probably gonna be started by Ava because Michelle never starts stuff and minds her business until someone provokes her. Ava has a little sneaky side and has successfully pushed Michelle buttons before.
Date: Jul 08, 2018 04:56 pm Title: Episode 19a
Sasha sneaking into the Jackson Family BBQ like
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2018 10:50 am Title: Episode 19a
Heyyy Rose girl!
First off, that picture of Michael is so freaking cute. Secondly Rebbie looks gorgeous and I CAN NOT deal with this gif of Latoya 😂 that’s how she’s gonna act when successfully intimidate these girls (hopefully they don’t let her or any other messy siblings get to them)
NOW, on to the review.. I couldn’t stop laughing at Sasha as she was doing all the wailing like a Whale. Girl get over it, he doesn’t want your ass anymore. You were a good rating that’s true and you may have even loved him, but your time was up. You’re too damn controlling and basically want to be the MAN in the relationship. That wasn’t happening by a long shot Ms. Mushroom. And you even dared to ALMOST put your hands on Michael!? Ikyfl!! Rose, I wanted to jump in this story so bad and punch the smell off her. I’m so happy she’s gone. Good riddance.
My second favorite, Michelle *claps proudly* she was about to defend our man at all costs. That’s what he needs. Not to let no body touch her man or talk shit about him. I applaud her for that. She was gone beat her ass and I was HERE FOR IT!! Why Michael stop her 😒 I’m happy she won the challenge with the children â¤ï¸ She was so sweet and kind to Brandi. She’ll make a great mom. I honestly think all of them will make great mommies. Michelle needs this time with Michael so they can see what’s up with each other.
Currently cheering Ava on for that little “quick” scene 😠But also she needs to hold out on him a bit because it’s the final three. It’s a possibility she could be sent home unfortunately. Just because Michael took something most sacred to her doesn’t mean she’s safe from elimination. I know if she does go or doesn’t win, it’s gonna break her heart. Hell its gonna break mine because she’s my favorite.
I laugh at Mari dancing and Michael’s nephew talking about he likes the way she dances lol 😂😂 Michael better watch out.
I hope his siblings doesnt give give them a hard time but more than likely they might. *braces myself for the drama* His brothers bet not flirt with them. And I wonder who Michael gonna be annoyed at. Quite an embarrassment for whoever the girl is 😩 Comes down to elimination, Michael is gonna have it TUFF (I spelled that intentionally wrong) I’m not ready for it!!😩 nooo can he keep all three 😂 Anyways, Dress to impress girls. No dressing slutty ðŸ˜
Overall great chapter as always sis â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 09:46 pm Title: Episode 19a
Girl sasha took me out but good riddens. ✌ðŸ¾âœŒðŸ¾âœŒðŸ¾ I couldn’t deal with her at akl and i see Michelle was finna beat dat ass real quick too. Mike why you had to push her behind you. 😩
in to this challenge, i had a feeling Michael was gonna use his nieces and nephews for this one. And the way Brandi and Michelle bobded was the highlight of this chapter. Im so glad she won she deserved it tho but Mari still #1 for me.
I cant wait for the next chapter. The sneek peak got me wondering who is ginna get into it but why do i feel it may be Mari and Ava instead Of Chelle and Ava? 🤦ðŸ¾â™€ï¸ðŸ¤¦ðŸ¾â™€ï¸ðŸ¤¦ðŸ¾â™€ï¸ I hope it isnt and she doesnt get sent home. Mari out ya game face on and focus on yo man to be girl. Dont get side tracted.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 09:40 pm Title: Episode 19a
LMFAO!!!! My username cracks me the fuck up too. I’m literally smirking everytime I login. And the reaction you have to reading our messy comments is literally the same reaction I have when I see you update 😂
Where’s Ben and Dulce when we need them? She needs to get her ass whooped. But the bitch got thrown out like garbage so I’m content for now. When that bitch said “Sasha is still in the motherfucking house! Just not Michael’s house” I cracked up. I hope she gets the help she needs before the reunion because if she shows up with that same energy to the reunion somebody is gonna pop her in her motherfucking mouth.
If only Ava knew where Michael’s dick was the night before....let me mind my motherfucking business. That’s all I’m gonna say about that.
Michelle and Mari had me cracking up too. From the “Daddy” comments and then Mari singing like Benjamin Franklin. I’m sure Michael would not mind being called “daddy” in the bedroom.
I see that this next update is about to be something interesting. Whoever it is that gets into it in front of Michael’s family better be careful cause that’s definitely not a good look, for them and Michael.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 07:05 pm Title: Episode 19a
Now I don’t condone men hitting woman at all...but if I were Michael I would have tossed Sasha ass in the pool. I’m hollering right now at the fact that security dragged her ass out. Finally she’s gone and we can all finally breathe now...until the reunion.
Michael is really getting his cake and eating it too. The night before he was almost fucking Mari and then the next day he fucks Ava. He is just living his best life right now.
That was a cute challenge. Michael was smart ass hell for having his nieces and nephews. Now about the BBQ, I think that the altercation is gonna be between Ava and Michelle. I feel like there is so much tension between those two and they both wanna cut each others heads off.
Thank you for updating for us. You are the best!
Date: Jul 07, 2018 12:25 pm Title: Episode 19a
I think Michelle is gonna win even tho I think Ava is perfect for him
Date: Jul 07, 2018 10:16 am Title: Episode 19a
I was so happy seeing that you updated. I think Ava and Michelle are gonna get into it in the next chapter. If not oh well, I’ll still have my popcorn ready.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2018 07:02 pm Title: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS
I really played myself when I poured myself a glass of wine to read this update. I don’t know what made me think that drinking wine to enjoy Sasha’s elimination was gonna be a good idea. I ended up choking so many times reading this update 😂.
First off, I didn’t realize Mari was the freaky type. I knew Mari was not playing when she showed up to his door with a box 😂. Anybody who shows up to spend the night with someone with a box in they hands has got some freaky intentions for the night. But Mari did kinda kill the mood when she talked about Sasha (so Sasha actually successfully cockblocked without even knowing it). But what she said needed to be said. Sasha is a evil and malicious person and it makes no sense for Michael to even want to be associated with someone like that. Like imagine Sasha’s evil ass going to charity events and children’s hospitals with Michael. Like that don’t even look right in my mind. Michael got offended and he did take a little jab at Mari during eliminations. But I gotta side with Mari on this one.
Michael is a damn fool. He’s gonna be struck by lightening for thanking the man upstairs for Mari’s ass 😂ðŸ˜ðŸ˜‚. Mari was right “he ain’t shit” lol. He need to thank the man upstairs Sasha didn’t come bustin through his bedroom dorms like the swat team when she overheard them.
Speaking of Sasha. Shit is about to hit the fan. Sasha couldn’t just sit her dumb ass down in the limo and enjoy her ride down the street to Beverly Hills. She’s gonna try and chop Mari’s ass off because they been clashing and the icing on top of the cake is she thinks Michael fucked her. This should be interesting...